Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
i second everything that you sain in a/n. . with jealousy lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow. Have fun on spring break. Can't wait to see what you dream up next. Meg
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 9
he is dead set nuts! and she is stooooopid for letting him carry on the way he does..............no one in their right mind would put up with this crap, regardless of how young she is...........
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
good chapter. I thought they already were in love, or are they just not admitting it to each other or acknowledging it themselves.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wondering about edward. Interesting turn at the very end. Meg
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
that was a shitty thing to do to bella what a jerk i hope bella goes to her dance....
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful as always!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
i like the start.. cant wait to see where you take it. meg
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I kind of like his possessivness, but I would be pissed to if I were her and how he disrespected her in front of tanya! Cant blame her there! Great chapter! Cant wait for more
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ohhh. you will be missed.. but please don't let Edward lose his possesiveness completely..
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
He needs his ass kicked for alowing that skank to sit in her set. great chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it very much can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks.....
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Tanya huh? Bitch....
i can't say i am surprised that Edward acted like twat in front of her... it's just his thing...
Nicely done!
Are you going on holidays? Where to if I may ask? Anyway have a nice stay!
M
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was amazing :) I loved that Bella got to see how Edward reacts to her. I really hope Edward can figure out a way to go to the dance with Bella. Once again, amazing/great job :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think I need a shower too! Holy fuck! WOW! hmmmm that was HAWT!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
i love love LOVE possessiveward!! i cant wait so see what kinda shit they get in to, cant wait for the new chapter!!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
To be fair, i totally agree with what you have got in the chapter end notes. She is one lucky B! lol.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
damn edward is hot ehrn he is demanding and domiant...
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter. Although her brother may have no moral right to complain about his baby sister with edward I bet he will anyway. Look forward to more. Love your story.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
I loved it. I want more. kat
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
I don't like Dominate, Possessive Edward.....I love him! lol Kat
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
It feels like you're walking a really fine line... sure rough sex is hot, but it feels like at any moment his controling behavior could turn into more... you know what I'm getting at?
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
You damn right shes a lucky bitch!! I want some of that Edward!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
That was great!! I loved the shock. kat
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
your right bella is a lucky bitch
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Pretty Hot Lemon. I was worried for a moment that he was going to force her. Even though he wasn't taking no for an answer, it was obvious that she wanted it too.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter, you're right she is a luck biotch. Hey I would really like to know what he would do if he woke up the next morning and Bella wasn't in the room. Maybe she went out to surprise him with breakfast. He is so jealous and told her not to leave him side at all. How pissed would he be. I mean so far she has liked this controlling side of him but I think it's a lot more intense then she realizes. Does he scare her this weekend?
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
yum possesive edward
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh shit i bet he is going to tell emmet the truth
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is feisty!!! Loves it!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh she is going to get a spanking
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
edward is so fucking hot
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2
ohh possesive edward
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh hell yeah! Love it!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
lol they all wasnt their cherry popped
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
Damn that was hot! Great job and i so cant wait to see how the rest of their weekend will go. I have a feeling a lot of hot sex is still to come.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Keep him possesive and a bit mean - it's unique. Everyone has their Edward change with love. Be different!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Mr Cullen! Mr Cullen!!I know I know!!! ***raises her hand like a school girl***
The next wet dream come true is a librarian!!! ***winks wickedly***
Great fantasy!
M
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh hell dont change him, much better as a possessive, demanding agressive Edward, hmmmmmm
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Haha, that is the classic moment when you wish for the earth to open up for you and swallow you whole ;)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
One word, HOT, hmmmmmmm a hot aggressive dominant Edward, loved the lemon
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
great job
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
This story is awesome!! I love possessive Edward... ;) keep going like that!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok I fucking need a very cold shower.. I have done that catholic school uniform fantasy a few times., and let me tell you it never gets old.. please continue.. this is one of my favorite stories ever.... And I love possesive Edward.. so fucking hot..
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Go school girl go. I would be good not to have notty dreams tonight LOL
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Emmett thinks he is the luckest guy in the world. will he find out that his sister didit so she could be with Edward??????
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
so despite me needing a change of underwear and possibly another shower amazing chapter cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter!!! Update soon please!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow that sucks ass. so hard. i would hate that and edward is sort of half creeper half sexi dom. it is a weird mix
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
I agree, It's going to be an amazing two days. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Oh indeed it will. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
yes she is a lucky bitch i loved it very HOT!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think I need a shower too...a shower with Edward, hehe. Bella is SO lucky to have Edward all to herself for 2 days ;) LUCKY DUCK! Cannot wait for more of this weekend :)
Author's Response:
Yes a shower with Edward would be devine indeed! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
Does she really get him to herself?
Author's Response:
Hmmm, I shall retain my right to not answer that one :P Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think I need a shower as well. Holy cow! Where is that blood preasure machine at? lol There should be an age limit warning! lol Ok, kidding asaide....VERY cool chapter. Can't wait for the next one already! Have a great week....and again, great job. You are such a wonderful writer. I felt like I was right there...errr...not RIGHT there...but dang close! lol
Mary
Date: 04 Mar 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, they seem to be enjoying their weekend..... I can't wait to see how it continues.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
YAY!!! I really wanna see the Em pov! And a Rpov please!!!
Crazy chapter I loved it!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
PLEASE PLEASE do the Em POV. I really LOVE this story! I can not wait to read more!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is so great we follow your other story your fabulous author love this one.......
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
I loved this chapter! The sexual tension is so tight! As much as I want an Emmett POV, I REALLY want Edward and Bella to get to Seattle already! hehe, I am a naughty girl who likes a possesive HOT Edward and cannot wait for him to show that side in the bedroom ;) Great job!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
I cant tell you how much i love this story. I am dying to see what happens next with both Edward/Bella and Emmett/Rosalie. And of course with cant forget about Alice and Mr Whitlock. Great good and amazing story.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh, I am so loving possessive Edward. Though, I am glad that he's starting to get a sense of humor where Bella is concerned and starting to lighten up a bit. Though, I think half the stuff she says and does to him is to get him started, even if she does it on purpose. hehe
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Man, possesive Edward is fucking hot :)
Love the story so far
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well I can't wait to see how Emmett respond with Rose there.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
No I don't want a Emmit POV, I would rether have a Rose POV. Also I like that Bella is a good girl that does her school work and gets the grades but it seems like ever since she started being bad on the side. She turned into a push over and a bit slutish. I like a dom Edward but make Bella stong too not so much a weak lil girl
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bwahahahhahahahahaha!!!
I can just picture Emmett's grin!!!
I'm glad Bella put Edward in his place. A woman can have friends; and possession is good until it's stifiling.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm... Emmett's POV. Sure why not. I am anxious to know what else you will have happen though.
~Jessi C.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Okay this Edward could be kind of annoying after a while, but still hmm... an entire weekend... what he couldn't do is more of the question.
~Jessi C.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love hot possessive caveman Edward!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad Edward isn't going to change. Then what would be separating him from the average run of the mil Edward had shows up thousands of times in stories everywhere?
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Okay this new Edward you have created here is kind of freaking me out. In all honestly he sounds like a dom, but who am I to judge. All in due time. He does talk that way though. I knew Emmett had to come into thew picture somewhere. I like how you have made him Bella's brother. Okay I love this whole plot line so far. You are definitely getting me to come back for more. I can't wait to read on! The ending here had me laughing.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
WHAT! I did not see this coming!!! I am so glad there is another chapter waiting for me because I think I would die if there wasn't!!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Feb 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this Edward. *___* Can I f*ck him in the dark alley? >3333
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
So last review I said I wanted Bella to stand up for herself more and she delivers.
I'm glad Edward seemed to back off a bit after, maybe he's not such an asshole after all.
Another great chapter
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Okay, so Edward is taking posessiveness to a scary level.
I can see why Bella would find it a turn on, but she's young and shouldnt lose herself just to be with Edward.
Im gald she stood up for herself a little there.
Your writing this caveward really well.
Great chapter
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay Edward here is kind of creeping me out. It has me worried about Bella. I can't wait to read on and see what else is going to happen. I like that you didn't have the usual Cullen's paired up for them right away. Mixed it up a bit.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
loved it i can't wait till the next update an empov would be awesome!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. Ah, being young and ever so naive. I can't wait to read more.
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
great chatper. poor emmett he never had a chance.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
LOL i dont want Emmett point of view I want more lemons for all as well as Edward and Bella. More dominating Edward and more stubborn Bella lol. And yeah ok I know I said I didnt want an Emmett point of view, but I wouldnt mind it as long as its a long chapter followed by a Edward point of view or something please lol. I love this story.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
I fucking love Edward in this story.. He is so hot.. thank you. Please update as soon as you can.. ;)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
HOLY FUCKITY BATMAN!
That wasnt a twist i was expecting!
Nice!
Author's Response:
LOL, Now I would love to hear the twist you were expecting ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love the fact shes a rebel now...well sort of a rebel
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow. that's hot.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
So more or less they have Em's approval of their relationship. Since we all see that Edward is going to be very possisive in this story, it makes me wonder if Bella will be too. LOL Is that something we will see in the future? Great chapter.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
But, there comes a time in your life though where you just become plain tired of being the ‘good girl’. I don’t feel like I have lived my teenage experience.
This is so true.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
eeeeeep
cant wait for the seattle trip!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
WOW
LOve it!
Can't wait till the next one please hurry up