Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Frying pan to the face!! Or something equally awesome. James I think has completely lost his mind. Gone absolutely daffy with power and his sadistic tendencies. Oh what an evil, evil man.
Great job ladies! I wonder who gets the credit of taking him down and who gets to free Bella and Victoria. Edward?
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
ARGHHHH..... so unfair!!!!
So many stories with cliffies this week!!!! WHY OH WHY do you writers do this to us readers? And all in one week :(
But geez, thank GOD he is out.... now - who hit him???
Please let it be Edward!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
who did this??? pleeeeeeeeeeeease tell me he is going to die!!! He will never give up, he must die!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
i hope the kill him
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Omg, this is too much on my sanity! Whew!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
I hope they kill him... at least make sure he doesn't get free this time
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Yes, yes, yes!!!! OMg!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
Nice and informative w/ the Aro convo....however, everything was fine until the last line from Edward....I'm in tears now.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
Oh God, oh God, oh God! I knew this was going to happen......I can't breathe.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Bam! Take that you sick motherfucker! Should have kicked in in the balls too. I'm sure that would feel SOOOO good with that cockcage on. He He He!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
OMG!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
They're all leaving them to the wolves! They have Victoria there and as soon as he finds out she's gone he's going to track her right to them at the cabin! OMG, I can't take it!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
gah, that is the second cliffy i read today...my poor heart can't take this! you girls and mic are totally cliff me off, lol
can't wait for the next installment!
-roxy
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Oh I like your style - I bloody hope they get out before he comes to... great stuff x
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
good job! This is exactly what james deserves!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 58: Edward DAY 21
NO, DON'T TAKE HER TO YOUR HOUSE, OMG, she's got a gps in her! OMG......(biting my nails)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
Yes, yes, yes! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I love how little it took for him to break. I am literraly jumping in my chair!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
I hope this is the end of James.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Damn!..Right there! That's where we end?! That's just naughty..:(
But major progess..Wonder who knocked the fucker out?!
Exhilarating chap for me..
Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Woo-hoo. They found the girls. Oh what to do with James now. I hope they learned their lesson about how they handled things last time. Although it would be nice to see James be the bottom in prison. I can't wait.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
And we love you too....!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
YOU ARE EVIL!!!!! lol
loved the update...please continue
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Are you kidding me ? Such a teaser... a cruel one !
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Now that's the fade to black that I can enjoy! Let's hope he's gonna get some now!!
Thanks lovelies.
x x
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Yay! Bye-Bye, James! Go Bella team! lol
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
YEEEEEEEES :)
I don't care who did it I just want it to hurt BADLY
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Oh that is an evil cliffie! Don't leave us dangling for too long.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
i love it when he gets a good beat down. sadly that was not nearly as satisfying as having him being held captive in the dungeons. hmmm that worries me that i have no prob with that yet not enough to do anything with out it. please say he's gonna get his.... again?
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
OMG I am so happy to see this update. I am bouncing in my seat because someone knocked James out. That guy is one sick twisted guy. I hope it was the others coming to get Victoria and Bella back. I wonder what they will do now with Heidi and James. Great job and I cant wait for more.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Evil. Evil. Women. The question is who got the honors for knocking the bastard out? Was it Bella/Victoria or did the Scooby gang arrive on-scene???
Can't wait to find out. Thanks for the update, ladies! :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
I like this chapter-end! I hope Edward and the rest will find the girls soon.
Best spring-wishes
Bussy
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! You cannot be serious!!!! You REALLY do like us to beg, don't you???
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Jeez I must be masochistic this story is killing me, but I love it.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
squeeel! Yay....Cant wait for the update:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Awesome Chapter!!!!!!
I feel like you have left us hanging over the Grand Canyon. Please don't leave us hanging long.
Ii would be really awesome if it was Bella who knocked James out. Then tied him up so he could not get away or hurt them. That would give Bella a confidence booster. If not I hope it is the guys. Can't wait to find out.
I just wanted to thank you guys for everything you have done here. GREAT AMAZING JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Great chapter!! Very intense and now I'm on the edge of my seat!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
O HELL YES I HOPE IT WAS THEM AND THE GET TO HAVE A LITTLE FUN WITH HIM BEFORE TEH CALVERY GETS THERE
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
I hope this means that Edward and the rest have found them, rescued the girls, and knocked James out!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11
I hope she realizes very soon that if you're not thinking of someone for a few days then you're not missing them.....geeze, she's clueless.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
I am so glad someone knocked that fucker out!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Holy shit what just happened?????? the banging was that some one or a fluke... no cuz it happened twice so i am hoping that means that Edward found them.. I don't know but I am so glad they got away and knocked his ass out... i just feel sorry for Heidi if Bella and Victoria did just manage to escape on their own because she is passed out and they can't carry her and they sure can't wait around for her to wake up incase James wakes up.......alright i'm gonna stop guessing and just wait for the next post...... really good chapter.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Awesome! I have a question though... All this time James is nacked?? I mean how the cock cage is on but he wears clothes??
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
hahaha! i love your evil laugh!
i just had a thought -- it would be so funny if they knocked him out with a toilet plunger. i mean, he IS a shithead! haha! i crack myself up. sorry.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 74: James
Ok. Cock cage still on. Check. Laurent dead. Check. Heidi selfishly bargaining for only herself. Check. James clocked by something. What? Can't wait to find out.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Awesome!! Don't eat, don't sleep, only breath when necessary; and just write, write write!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
oh next chapter lol please please update soon xx
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Mwahahahahahahahaha! Cocky bastard did himself in! He was so sure of his control over them, his over inflated ego didn't consider they may just fight back!
I'm dying to know what they whacked him with! A large object....not the toilet brush then. Obviously something heavy enough.....maybe the toilet seat cover? Hmmm, yes I obsess over the small details!
I hope the boys make it there before he comes too. And I hope the girls lay a few kicks into the cock cage while they are waiting! Mwahahahahahaha!
I just hope they don't untie Heidi, she could easily turn on them to protect herself.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
worth the wait, hope jake and edward found them and untied them..
Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
ROFL loved that ending
james went out with a bang :P
awesome chapter
loved it
UDPATE SOOON!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Ahhhhh!!!! That's it?!?! Then you better update ASAP! Please!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Ooh, you ended it on a cliffie!!! :) Thanks for the chapter! Hope RL lets up a bit ;)
ttfn
Ardanwen
Date: 25 Mar 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Thank God someone is there to help these girls out and James hasn't hurt them!! I can't wait to see him suffer sumpremely before he goes to jail forever.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
AHHHH you can't leave us like this! Did the girls escape on their own? Did Edward help them? What are they going to do with James now (he deserves the worst) and what will happen to Heidi?
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Thank God I hope they hit him a couple more times!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
OMG! So either Edward and everyone else came just in time to save the girls or Bella knocked James out. Either way...I think James is going to be sorry for all he has done. Great chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Loved the chapter, =) as always,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
YES YES FUCK YES KILL THAT FUCKER NOW DONT EVEN THINK ABOUT IT.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
OMFG! WHAT HAPPENED?! Was it edward? Did the guys get there and create a diversion so james would leave them to investigate the bang or did the girls escape by themselves? I find the latter unlikely, i dont think they would be stupid enough to run away from james at that moment...where would they run too they dont even know where they are? lol Come on edward, jacob, emmette and jasper! I'm counting on you guys to save the day lmao Thanks for the update!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
o thats so evil! your a GREAT writer please update soon!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
oh my good god that mad bastard (not sure if i'm allowed to type the stronger words i want to call him so bastard it is ) is a sick ****** you get the idea he's begining to lose the plot and make mistakes no phone he dosen't care so who punched him out? bella and vicky did he not tie them too well and they are fighting? aro people got there quicker are they involved in the rescue? edward and gang are there? more please and i hope that cage never comes off
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
It's funny because BWAWAHAHAHAHWAHAHA... was exactly my sentiment. That Fucker. The world will be right again once the Shit Stain is dead.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Whew, I think they are safe ish for now. I was a little worried about Heidi but then didn't care cause she helped that sick F*ck to begin with!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Thank God!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Yes! So we don't know who got James, but someone did. Hopefully that means Bella, Victoria, and Heidi are safe now.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
I really, really hope he's dead.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
That was just mean!!!!
BUT I LOVE IT!!! This story is awesome!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Torture....you make us wait this long then you leave us in such a cliffy....you are cruel, cruel I tell ya!!!! Come on, these nails are expensive for me to keep biting them as I have been doing....LOLOLOL....can't wait for the rest.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO you are evil by leaving us there!! EVIL I SAY!!! :) Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
YEAH!!! HOT DAMN ABOUT TIME!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Thank you for the update. I love James POV. Oh and the fact he still is wearing the cock cage. hehe;)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
mwa hahahahahahaha *laughs maniacly*
that bastard got some of his own medicine!!!
I can't wait until they do very very bad things to him in jail *fumes*
my god! that boy makes my blod boil!!
BUT I still love you guys, you never disapoint, in content, I mean hehehehe
just kiddin' bbs
much love!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
OOOOOHHHHH Can't wait for that sadistic fucker to get HIS ass beat down! Can we have Bella beat him senseless??? PLEASE????? After everything James put her through I think she deserves to wail on him, preferably with the cane!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
James is a real sick fuck. I hope he gets more than a head bashing.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
I have to say it again, James is completely disturbed. His fascination with torture and putting others down is astounding. But it can't last for ever, especially now that he has began to make mistakes. He lost the phone, realized and didn't pay too much attention to it. He killed Laurent in front of someone else, someone he has no clue as to whom she is and if she could do something. He gets the girls out of the car and wants to enjoy himself. There's someone else in the house now and it's probable it's someone who is there to get Bella and Victoria to safety and why not? Take care of James.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
God, he makes your skin crawl in EVERY chapter....ha, you had me with the picture. Cannot wait for justice.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
YES! So I assume Edward already made it there and created the distraction. Awesome. Dying for the next post...
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
oh really how dare you bwawawhahahahahwhaha at us. :)
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON...I CAN'T STAND THIS WAITING. this is like going to the theater and the power goes out or something. aaaaahhhhh.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
I hope it was Edward that knocked his ass out. LOL Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
omg i was so sacred please tell me that he is knocked out and that they get away and call edward to come get them pleae i really want bella back with edward they belong together and i am scared for her pleae let me know when next chapther is up denisesexton@verizon.net
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
ohhh....as much as i hate him...he still hasnt had enough torture for what he's done...
~Tiffany
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
WHAT! HA! I knew they could do it! YAY! OhMyGosh! I can't wait to see what all happened and is going to happen!
~Jessi Cullen
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
WOW, cliff hanger.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
OH YEA!!!! Beat the F~ing Shit out of him!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
S.O. & Foot
Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! A cliff hanger!!! I hate them!!! I understand why writers use them. But, I hate them!!!!!
I'll get that damn cock cage off of James!!! With a hacksaw and I'll take more than just the cock cage too!!! Man your two muses are sure making James out to be a VERY bad man!!!!!
Soooooooooooooooo loving this story and I've started my prayers so that the next chapter comes as soon as possible!!!!! I'm sure I'm not alone in needing to know what happens in the next chapter!!!! (Cory starts pacing around the computer room!!!)
Cory
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
this was so intense and your dangling us with your FREAKING CLIFFIES!!!!
Angel
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
NO FAIR! LOL
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Excellent. And he still has the cock cage on - I hope he fell in such a way that he landed on it. Fucking HARD.
So, please don't leave us hanging for too long? I can't wait to see him feel MORE PAIN!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
ohhhhhhhhhhhh can't wait to read more
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
My god. James started off as an arrogant prick, and the bastard hasn't changed a bit! He is still the self-absorbed tool, who still has the cock cage on...hahahahaha...dumbass...
Curious to know what is going on? The loud bangs? Bella and Victoria's escape? Something tells me that it wasn't unassisted! We will see though...
Thankyou for the update. I anxiously anticipate your next installment...
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
hahaha take that James. so who was it?? Edward?? great chapter, update soon!!!
Kristi
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Beating James' ass with a blunt object should go a long way toward helping the girls feel more in control of their lives. WOOT! Awesome update!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Oh shit you are cruel! I hope you don't leave us hanging there for too long!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
i hate that you left it like that. i hope you update soon. i cant wait for the next chapter.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
Loved it! Can't wait for the next installment.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
OMG James is one sick fucker. Heidi should have never teased James. You would have though Laurent would have warned heidi about james. but then again laurent thought he had everything taken care of. now he is dead and james is in charge for now. Man i cna't wait to see what happens to james when he realizes who knocked him out and what they are going to do with him. i realize jacob is a cop but will he let the gang have a little fun with james before he takes him in.
love it all
Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 74: James
I don't want to seem mean, but Heidi deserves all the shit she got. She is the one responsible for Bella's ordeal. And ladies, don't type too quick, take a deep breath...