Date: 19 Mar 2019 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
Amazing!
Date: 18 Mar 2019 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am a snot sobbing mess!
Date: 18 Mar 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nope wasn't expecting that.You got me on that one.Gotta read some more.
Date: 18 Mar 2019 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nope wasn't expecting that.You got me on that one.Gotta read some more.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
Ahhh, seems Jasper sees the man Edward is now and has changed his tune... he is Nothing like his father...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bet he wasn't expecting that...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 24
I wonder what it is going to take for Edward to win Jay over???
It would seem that Carlisle may already be smitten with our fair Esme...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh Charlie~ no child should have to go through losing their parent so young... my heart aches for this little man...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
After the way he was brought up, it must have been such a pleasant change to feel like he does...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
In the past it has always been Royce King, so that is who I assumed it was.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
You have such a gift for making me cry... lol and yeah, Charlie breaks me too~ love your stories ~ even when they make me cry...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
I hope she let Bella in on her plans...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 14
Whoa ~ another twist, did not see that coming... she senses his care for Charlie~!
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love that you named the youngster Charlie...
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nope... sure wasn't~ Nice twist~
Date: 10 Dec 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
this is sooo good!! Thank you Betty :)
Date: 13 Feb 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 30
Though this story held some tears within, I still really loved it all! Charlie's note choked me up the most, of course because who wouldn't echo his prayer for a cure?
Date: 04 Feb 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great story. You had me in tears.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
sweet ending. You made me cry at the end. Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
Go Edward!!! Glad Jasper seems to be coming around.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
Poor little Charlie. Wow E crashed a funeral?!?!?!
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
hmm can understand Jaspers rage at E's sperm donor (he ain't a dad), but he shouldn't take it out on Edward by proxy
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor little Charlie.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yea Big Ed isn't going to make things easy.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
hmmm sounds like Jay is going to continue to be a wanker.
Date: 28 Jan 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
That note Charlie wrote was heart wrenching! I had a bit of an ugly cry face.
Date: 28 Jan 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
Sad but beautiful... Loved it!!!
Thanks so much for sharing.
Loved Charlie!!
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
Sweet,sweet story that has left me balling my eyes out.
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
Lord have mercy. What a tear jerker. I love it!
Date: 26 Jan 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
Holy carp, I am crying now. Again.
Date: 26 Jan 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
:) Loved this story
Date: 25 Jan 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 30
Big tears OMG love this story. What happened to the evil father and the no carrying mother?
Date: 25 Jan 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh, that is so sad "sobs" I I loved it, it was so beautiful but very heart broken about Emmett.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 29
Such a sad, heartbreaking story, but I am so happy that Edward Sr. was handled & Jasper came to his senses. & YAY, Edward will be living w/ Bella & Charlie, well I hope anyway. i am loving this story & can't wait for another update.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edward has got Jasper to understand that Edward is the good guy. I am so happy Edward took out the trash.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 29
Not to advocate senseless violence, but boy, did I love Edward puching hell out of his rotten father! Sure impressed Jasper, too!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
Omg! I think a confrontation is about to happen!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
Only a few chaps left.... :(
Date: 23 Jan 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bold Bella! Get it!
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh dear, now the crap is about to start! Daddy Masen will not care for any of this involving his cnhildren. Like he cared about them to begin with! It's all about control with that man! Can't wait to see how it goes!
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
Edward needs to drag that man back out the door. Poor little charlie he does not need any crap from Edwards father.
Date: 22 Jan 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 28
I realize I will have to stand in line, but I seriuosuly want to smack Ed, Sr. Seriously...
Date: 22 Jan 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 28
This can't be good
Date: 22 Jan 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 27
You just keep dribbling little bits of background information to us, kind of like a trail of breadcrumbs! I had to smile when Bella got a bit miffed when Edward said her kiss was nice! He really ought to hunt for better adjectives!
Date: 21 Jan 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
Jasper is realy a good guy just so much pain.
Date: 21 Jan 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 26
They need each other love it
Date: 20 Jan 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
Atta girl!
Date: 20 Jan 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well, well, well! Guess Edward may n ot be alone in his feelings! Rose seems to have started something growing between Bella and Edward by asking them to raise her son.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
So now he knows she needs him
Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
The dad is going to go ballistic.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 25
I got wrapped up in the drama of Rosalie's death and forgot about Edward and Esme's awful father! The focus is all on Charlie and Bella now and I'm eager to see what happens next! That little bit where Jasper said their mom wouldn't care to hear about Rose was pretty damn sad!
Date: 19 Jan 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
Poor little Charlie, I feel real bad for him. Thank heaven he has Bella, and now Edward, too. I'll bet they'll try to have a little Christmas for him.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Emmett! I look forward to Bella & Edward falling in love all bc of Charlie.
Date: 18 Jan 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
He wants that and he feels it he just don't know it
Date: 18 Jan 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
They've all lost Rose
Date: 10 Jan 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
aww poor little kid. So glad Bella and E are there for him. I agree, keep charlie away from his family....except for Esme of course.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
So sad & every mom's worst nightmare!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG this is killing me but I love it my heart is hurting for them.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
So sad and beautiful.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Can't blame Edward one bit for having to hold back the sobs! I know exactly how he felt, and the tears are still clouding my sight as I tap out this review! That was such a sweet final gift from Rose to her baby! I love this story, even when it makes me cry!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Poor thing! Makes me so sad!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
That is such a sweet picture you illustrated there!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
thank you for the update..hope your feeling better....I wonder how Esme & Carlise are doing ..lol...Edward's father is not going to be happy
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
thank you for the update..I hope you feel better soon...........I wonder why Rosalie pick Edward also? Cgharlie really has taken a liking to Edward..can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
I can just picture it, the three of them, eating Fruit Loops, watching cartoons, being together!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 22
He is getting a good thing
Date: 08 Jan 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22
aww for he and charlie bonding
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't think Royce is Charlie's father. I think Charlie is Edward's half brother
Date: 07 Jan 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
hmmm if Charlie hadn't wandered into the store I wonder what Rose would have done. Just Bella I guess.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 21
I hope you are feeling better soon wish you well. Rose knows what she was doing
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you so much for the effort, I hope you are feeling a bit better. This is a very heart-felt story, I can tell. Looking forward to seeing more when you can get it out to us! Take care and have a great new year!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
I guess she has put her finger on the problem quite nicely. Looks like Edward is about to make some hard decisions.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonder why some people get hung up on that part? I think it's nice that Bella seems willing to give Edward the benefit of the doubt. Her brother and Emmett aren't nearly as forgiving.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Picturing that child singing to his dying mother,made the tears flow, just no stopping them! I see now why Rose asked Edward to help raise her son, she saw a good man in his actions, not just his words.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
I was pretty sure when he didn't remember who she was, that he hadn't fathered Charlie.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
Everybody hang on tight, this is going to be awful sad, I can tell!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter. Hope you feel better soon.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
No one in that family is going to believe Rose asked Edward to raise Charlie! This could get ugly!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, that just popped up out of the blue! She must see that Edward cares for the boy. Wonder if she can talk him into it?
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Got a funny feeling when Rose asked Edward to come talk to her. Jasper wasn't very friendly, guess he doesn't like the name Masen.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's such an awful feeling, to want to do something to help, and there's just nothing! Been there, done that.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
That poor little boy is going to lose his momma! I hate to see that, though it's a part of life. Children need their moms! (okay, both parents, you know what I mean)
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 10
It was a bit surprising to hear Rose admit Edward was her high school crush. Emmett didn't seem too happy about it either. Wonder what relationship Bella is to Rose?
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
No, I sure wasn't expecting it to be Rosalie. No matter who, though, it's awful that Charlie's mom seems to be so ill!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well, now we know, and I was afraid of something like this!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh dear! Now we'll find out why his mom doesn't dance anymore!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm liking thet bastard of a father loess and less!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
So, their father is not only an adulterer, but an abuser as well! Nice guy!
Date: 07 Jan 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
Momma used to dance, hmm. That sounded a bit ominous, as if she can't dance anymore. She taught her son well, that nothing in life is free and you must work hard to have anything of value.