Reviews by Josephinesmith
Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Fabulous, just fabulous.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Did you rewrite it's book in the last day? I have read it several times on TWCS and don't recall the word clitoris in the story.



Author's Response:

No I haven't done any rewrites. The story is different on TWCS than on FanFiction, if you have read it there. I could never use that word on the FF site.  But aI have not done any rewrites on Full Circle.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 152

Wow. He sure isn't acting like himself. He is usually so focused on Ana and sex. Here he is talking about another woman while still inside Ana. This company upheaval has really rattled him.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Say it isn't so. Please, please don't end this one. 

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

I love this book. I think he is having difficulty with her working. He did't want her to work when they were first married, she quit after Teddy was born. I think it is her working that he can't handle. Just my opinion.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I think the title is referring to adopting Tommy, the son of a drug addict like Christian.

it wouldn't be believable if Christian had another sub like Amy. He almost lost Ana and was almost outed. I just can't see it.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonder what Christian would do about school events, teacher conferences and school open houses.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Please write soon. The suspense is killing me.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

You are an excellent writer. Funny,realistic with great grammar and syntax.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

I love all 3 books. Chapter 106 is one of your best. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Write a lot and often.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Do you have a picture of the magic shoes?

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

How can I wait a week to find out about Mia?

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 123

Please don't let this story end. I love it and look forward to it every week. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Your writing is the best of any of the fanfiction fifty shades of grey stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

i am a bit concerned. please don't abandon this story.

 

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

What a great chapter. Especially when Teddy asks about the condom. I loved this chapter as I have all the previous.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

I hope you are well and just busy. I hope you aren't struggling or having any difficulties.

Take care. Thank you for great stories.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 26 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Hi. You have brought these characters to life. What is happening with Virginia, Ray and Myra with the pregnancy?

Thank you so much for your great story.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Such a great chapter.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

They shouldn't adopt her. An infertile couple without children should get her.

I love this story. Please keep writing.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Such a beautiful chapter. Please don't apologize. I'm just so glad you are writing this story.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

Amazing chapter. Love the storyline about the business trip. Can't wait to read all about it.

Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

So glad you are better. Hope it wasn't something serious.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Josephinesmith Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning - Chapter 1

Great story. Can you update frequently? Thanks