Their rediscovery of one another was so sweet, and I was happy for Edward that Cherie finally warmed up to him. That scene of him sitting on the floor watching her sleep - so heartwarming. Great chapter!

Hello Jen! This is the first time I'm reviewing one of your stories. I've just finished reading both FDKK and Behind the Images on FF.net. I'm sorry I haven't reviewd either one yet. Since reading them, you've become one of my favorite authors! If you were ever to publish some original work, they'd definitely find a place on my bookshelves.

I'm already enjoying the start of this one. As a teenager I used to lose myself in B. Cartland stories, and this one transported me back to those fun filled moments. I don't mind the liberties you've taken with timelines and/or behaviours for that particular era. I look forward to following you on this journey.

::Michelle::

Aha, it would seem there is more than meets the eye with the love story from abroad for those two. I can't wait to see this unfold.Those poor women back in the days, especially with all those contraptions under their dresses and can you imagine having a flock of women helping you dress?! I can't imagine what people smellt like back then.

Getting closer :) Another great chapter and I love the sibling relationship between Jacob and Bella. It just feels right.

Sigh. That was perfect. Sad to think in those days, something that sacred had to be "proven". I'm loving this story <3

Sorry to hear about everything that's happened to you. I hope your ankle gets better soon. As for the writer's block, you did a wonderful job with this chapter. It's still as charming and exciting as ever. Try not to stress too much about getting updates out. I'm sure everyone understands that you need to recouperate. Take care of yourself in the mean time =)

This was so good! I seriously love your writing skills and the plots you think up.

OMG! OMG! Okay first things first - that was insanely hot! But the best part was the plot. The whole time I was thinking that Bella was moving a bit fast, and I was willing her to wait, drag it out, make Edward really burn for her. When they were done I couldn't fathom how those two might possibly turn this into something longer or even launch a relationship. Then you dipped the cartoon anvil on me. I NEVER saw that coming that they were already together. Normally when other authors attempt one of these types of deception I can always see it coming but nit this time which speaks boldly of your talent. I see you've already been persuaded to continue with this story and I'm ecstatic! Can't wait to read the rest!

Author's Response:

:) I'm glad I could fool you!  It was pretty well hidden but clues were there.  Few people caught it and I love that!  Thank you so much for the compliment.  The response to the one/shot was amazing so I had to keep going, plus I get to write about football which makes me extremely happy!  I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and I hope you like the rest!

I'm loving Bella's inner perv. She may have insecurities, but at least she isn't pathetic - I'm glad you're making her a bit bolder. Reading how they talked out their little misunderstanding was laced with hilariousness! I think I spit my coffee up when she told him that she was good in bed and then cursed her lack of verbal filter. I'm really looking forward to chapter 5!

This chapter was awesome! Alice really cracked me up with her antics during the game and then mixing up all the football lingo. Blitzens and Rumbles, ROFL!

Is it even possible to keep a straight face to see guys in jerseys that have the word Trojan written on them? ;)

Something tells me that Bella's ovaries are voicing their opinions quite a bit. The entire dinner date was made of pure win! Bella was hilarious and damn did Edward make just me feel warm and tingly all over? I want some of that chocolate lava cake stat!

Can't wait for the next update and I hope there'll be more of Bella's ovaries doing the talking, LOL!

LOL! Bella is in the wrong line of work. She should be on Broadway since she has a thing for theatrics and overreacting. I love her foot-in-mouth disease. If she keeps referring to other women beingmore beautifulthan her then I'll have to grab Ed's shoulderpads and whack her over the head. if she thinks that is all that matters to him then she must think he's really shallow. I wonder if he'd tackle her for thinking things like that. LMAO @ Alice for the Sea Lions!
I may have to hunt you both down on Twitter :)

Author's Response:

Please do hunt us down!  He's being his sweet, charming self and making the occasional girl blush and I'm...well, crazy as ever!  haha We'd both like to chat with you though!

Nole, seriously, you're going to send me to an early grave! Emmett, the dildo, the ridiculous conversation ... that was some seriously funny sh*t! Do you just think this stuff up, or do you have friends who are actually this crazy? My sides hurt from laughing so hard ... this was brilliant!

Ayup, just the reaction I expected out of Bella. For one so intelligent, and a bit more mature than in New Moon, she'd have learned by now to not jump to conclusions and just listen. No harm ever came from just listening. Either way, it went much like I thought it would, if this were a RL story. I'm still feeling the heartstrings being tugged, so this was a great short chapter ;)

Btw, thank you for your response, and suppose being influenced by girlfriends isn't anything new. You live, you learn. That was probably my first lesson in jealousy and deception.

:Michelle:

LOL, ignorance must be bliss in her case then. I know, and I'm not knocking you or the story by any means. I was just thinking out loud. This is fiction after all. You're welcome, and thank you in return for responding.

Love it!! You got a nice steady flow of excitment and energy flowing here. Nice to see Bella isn't a wallflower type of girl. Can't wait for the next chapter!