Reviews by pengirl25
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625408
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: pengirl25 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I actually found your story while searching for another. The comments on a forum were so polarized, I had to see for myself. Not gonna lie, the first few chapters were sometimes very difficult to get through, but I decided to keep going. I'm so glad idid! I love how you developed the two main characters, and some of the others, and your totally OOC Charlie and Carlisle. WOW!! I'm sure you've had tons of praise for this fic, and I really don't have any new words, except to say you are very talented and I look forward to reading more of your work.



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with it thru the beginning and your kind words. I blame the beginning on learning curve (this was my first time writing) and allowing someone to influence the "ew" chapters. I'm glad you liked the direction I took the story and the end. I hope you'll check out my other stories (nothing is like the beginning of this). I've also published two original novels as well (not p2p, I promise). Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection (sequel in the works now) which are both available thru twcs publishing.

Mic