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Hi I'm Superfan known on other sites as Closet Fan. I am 30ish and my favorite pastimes are writing and reading. I love Classic Lit mostly Jane Austen,E.M Forester, and Shakespeare and am a huge Stephenie Meyer fan.I am hugh music lover Classical and movie soundtrack and am aspiring would be writer.
'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must.
Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story.
Doctorward is there too, just like the first story.
It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children.
Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one.
Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore
Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467466
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Testing Testing
Whoa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been supicious that this little development would occur with them and I admit to being the alittle excited by this, I just hope its a sure deal and not a false alarm, I love the idea of Bella with another baby......so I hope its all good.I anticipate some drama considering her age and all, but this will be a good plot twist, can't wait to see the whole outcome. Not sure what the plans are for the sex of this little one.......but I think they need a girl tp balance out all those boys. Should be interesting to see how Michael handles this too...since he won't be the baby anymore. Exciting times in the Cullen house, I'll be curious to see all this play out.Good chapter. Have a neice just Alex's age and so that drama here sounds all to famililar. And I love the Sex in the City reference hilarious and also the Dawsons Creek line equally funny. Those are 2 of my all time favorite shows. Love the pop culture tribute there.Again Great CHapter.
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Mr. LoverMan
Your Back!!!!! When I saw all the updates on my email I did a happy dance!!! I am obssessed with this fic and couldn't wait for all the new developments. I love all of Bella and Edward's little , not so descreet rendevous and how casual their kids are about the whole thing.And the boys good gracious.............you gotta love em even when they are being down right scandelous and naughty..........its just the kind of guilty pleasure fun I can't resist. This is so well done and crafted, I love all the distinct characterizations and layers to all the relationships, family dynamics and the way the kids are , as I said all these little mini-versions of their parents. They are fatelly flawed in a good way and though they have all these imperfections and insecurites their Cullens and when I think of the canon Cullens I know these boys are beautiful , how can they not be they are Bella and Edward's kids. Those older boys especially-mini Edward and minn-Carlilse.HELLO..............YUM. LOVE ALL THE RECENT CHAPTERS. And the twist with the Emily-Al -Gabe triangle.....genius. I love too how you've worked the whole Jake situation back in there too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Fabulous!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Road to redemption
Its ashame it has taken me so long to review this story, because I totally love it!!!! I read " The Story of Us " straight through over a weekend when I was sick and was totally obsessively hooked. It aws fantastic and I love how you have characterizeed your version of Bella and Edward. So at the end I just had to peek at the epilogue and sequel and I am hooked on this too. i have never seen such a unique fic, with Bella and Edward older and parent of this little brood , but it is great. Love the balance of humor, romance and angst and I love how Edward's boys are all like little mini-Edwards to an extent. Absolutely love this fic, this is the stuff that makes me love AH fics. I favor traditional vampire/human pairings and canon, but you gotta love this!!!! Love it!!!