Reviews by brandyb34
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

"You feel me?"  Loved it!!!



Author's Response:

That is used alot in the Black Dagger Brotherhood series, which BTW completely owns my ass. LOVE IT!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153117
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

I love this story!!! Keep up the good work.  I sang a lil song when I saw you had updated  :)



Author's Response:

That's great. I always wanted to make people sing.....lol

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

Today is my Birthday! You updated on my Birthday! Happy Birthday to me !!! Thank  you.



Author's Response:

Happy Birthday! I had a feeling it was your birthday and wanted to give you a present.... LOL

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Out In The Open

i'm really ready to start seeing this whole thing develope btween all of them...come on give us sum lovin'  LOL     Great story, keep it up.

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

It was just right.  I feel like it's getting to the good stuff...I'm just really curious about how the dynamics of this whole relationship work.  Just the everyday stuff and of course the sexy times, too.   Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I'm sure things are at home are very different then what we are use to. Now that the history is done there will be more "family" time.

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

I'm soo glad you're back with this story!  It is one of my very favorites!  Keep it up!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Amazing!!



Author's Response:

You're gonna make us blush! :D

Thank-you!!!

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

CONTINUE ANYWAY !!!! 

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

I really like this story, and I think you're an excellent writer.  Keep it up!  :)



Author's Response:

THANK YOU! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

Take me now or lose me forever....what freaking movie is that from?  It's going to drive me crazy ....pls tell me!!  Great chapppy, too!

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

can i call you eddie? not if you want me to answer.   Pretty woman, right?

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

If you're a bird, then I'm a bird.    The Notebook.    Great Chapter!

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

it's the Ghandi quote from Remember Me.  I love that Bella cried because she wanted Edward...had the same experience in one of my pregnanies.  I just hated to be away from him...it's hard to explain and lil embarassing.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

Your foot is as big as your wrist to your elbow.....Pretty Woman!

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

GREEN EYES

Summary:

Bella became convinced that she's destined for single life after she broke up with her first boyfriend, Edward Cullen, back in high school. Determined to be the President of her parent's company, she's prepared to do anything to have the job. However, what would she do if her parents only want her to do a simple thing; to get married to the son of their friends whose name just happens to be Edward Cullen?  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61689 Read Count: 41155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2010 Updated: 30 Aug 2010
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Reason Fifteen

OH HELL NO!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: In the Wake of Delusion

Okay i like this story a lot and I think you did a great job with it...but i think it would be really awesome if Edward ended up being Mace.   That would be so fucked up and mind blowing.  It's your story do what you want. You have told a really good story, though...be proud.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

I'm so in love with this story.  I really am.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

i really like this story, and I just love Jack!!! Can't wait till he gets to see his dad again!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

OMG  i cant wait till they meet...please update soon!!!   I'm just going to be a crazy mess until I know...  LOVE this story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

I love it...i really, really love it!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!


<3  Shel

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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.    

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255057
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I cant help but love a dominating Edward.  Can't wait for the next chpater!

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148711
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love it!!



Author's Response:

Hello there! I am so gald you are liking the story so far. I have 39 chapters of this chapter posted over on FFN so I hope to update here pretty regularly to get you all caught up. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a review. Hope to hear from you again soon!

les16~~

Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it!!!  Keep the chapters coming...can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Hello there~

So glad you liked this chapter! Things will definitely start moving along now. I have 39 chapters of this story over on FFN so there is lots more to come and I hope to update over here regularly to get caught up. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a review, I love hearing from you!

les16~~

Centerfield by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A sweet moment shared between a married couple.

My entry in TwiNetwork's First Iron Pen Challenge.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 724 Read Count: 1600
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Mar 2011
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Centerfield

I think you did amazing!! I went to read the rules after I read this and I have to say WOW!! To come up with that on the flyt...very talented!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: brandyb34 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

WOW!!!!   This just made my night....I hope you plan on updating soon...or I may just implode!!  I don't think I could love this story more!