Reviews by Aisucold
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625404
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I like this story, though i find I don't understand how someone who was raise relatively normal for the last 10 years, would put up with something like this.

Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I hope they dont rape her. I know they wont have vaginal and anal intercourse with her but I'm scared the other lessons will be oral

Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Sigh, I dont know if i want to continue reading.

Usually, for me to be able to read something like this, I need a strong protaginist who fights back against scum, like her family. Or at least has a plan to eventually get out of it. She is just to weak and accepting.

I can just imagine what happens later in the story.

With all the assets she has, I'm almost sure they'll be taken, and she'll be stuck in corrupt little forks

Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I wish she was smart enough to run sooner

Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

counting down the moments until she leaves

Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

wow, i didnt think you would actually allow him to rape her like that. I really hope everything that is happening to her has a reason, not just senseless rape with no consequences

Reviewer: Aisucold Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

well I officially dislke this edward along with all the other characters. sigh.

have to keep reading to know what happens next



Author's Response:

Thanks forgiving this a shot. I know the beginning is hard to read. I promise Bella and all the women get a happy ending.