Reviews by Wallace
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625248
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

My heart is beating fast thinking of all the bad things that might happen to Bella.  Really emotional chapter for me. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

fun start to this story

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Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward seems to have stick up him bumm.

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, that was an unexpected disturbance.  Look forward to more CAM. :)

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Okay? What is happening?  I look forward to more information.  I am enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks for writing this story.  Congrat on the book. I look forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: Wallace Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Really...Paul?  Why? :) 



Author's Response:

Why? Simple, Jacob is too obvious and wouldn't work. He's been standing in the room with her the whole evening. No one is going to believe he wouldn't say something sooner if she was his imprint. Don't assume anything. Remember what you know about imprinting and what Alice has explained so far.

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You have a darkness to your writing.  It is your subtle signature.  Thank you for writing and sharing this story.



Author's Response:

I like angsty stories best. Thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373245
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I signed up for TWCS in order to read your unedited story.  I look forward to more chapters. :)



Author's Response:

Glad you joined us.  There's not anywhere near as much traffic here, but at least we don't have the bully stuff going on and we're not breaking any rules if we write the fun stuff :)  Thanks for the review and for hopping over!

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Well done!

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Love this version better. :)

Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

Oh the intrigue!

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

Well done.  I really want Jacob to get his ass kicked after this chapter. 

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Wallace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great job with Emmett/