Reviews by saphire18
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

5 years after NM Jasper is back in the south. Due to his 2nd in command, things come about that will change the vampire world forever. Good or bad he doesn't care and only two things are certain; he won't be alone and she will be perfect... no matter the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125512 Read Count: 75233
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2013 Updated: 20 Jun 2013
Reviewer: saphire18 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I really enjoyed this story. You put a whole different twist on ot that had me hooked from the very first chapter. Keep up the good work! ^.^

Summary:

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"We must be willing to pay a price for freedom."

-H. L. Mencken


Set during/after Ch. 12 Eclipse. Newborns are terrorizing Seattle. The vampires of the Olympic Peninsula are worried that the Volturi will become involved, so they call their closest friends and allies. But when the Denali clan shun Carlisle's request due to Laurent's death, an old friend unexpectedly answers his plea. Will his presence shake up their rock solid foundation?

*~Bella & Garrett~*


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Garrett
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61489 Read Count: 7511
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 23 Mar 2014
Reviewer: saphire18 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Coersion

Okay, I admit that I was expecting some kind of takedown from Garrett, but this works, too, I guess LOL

Reviewer: saphire18 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-The Other Piece of my Heart

Like you have given me a review many times over, I shall give you in return. There's really not a lot of Garrett/Bella out there in the FF world and this has to be one of my favorites so far. You're staying in character, even though it's a bit OOC, and I absolutely love to see stories like that. I can't wait to keep reading and see what else Bella has to say.

Burning Oblivion by jlove34 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

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AU-NM-With Edward gone & the wolves thwarting her every turn, Victoria created her newborn army earlier, rather then later in the saga. After the threat and its creator were expunged, the Guard were mandated to pay the Olympic Coven a little visit and were shocked by their absence, but quickly discovered the Cullens' very human secret. Older Alec/Jane

 

*~Alec/Bella~*

 

Lemons & Language (for Zorradesombra)

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alec
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10075 Read Count: 1487
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Jul 2015
Reviewer: saphire18 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: 1 First Sight

I love your story so far. The words you use are a breathe of fresh air from most of the fanfiction us read. I can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to review. It's very kind of you. I take quite a lot of time planning out each chapter (usually in the neighborhood of ten hours) because I like to paint a comprehensive picture for the reader.  Like a mini movie. When I'm personally reading fanfiction, I'm  curious what's happening in the background, outside of the dialogue. What are other characters doing? I don't write in third person om. because, frankly, it's not my strong suit, but I'd love to try someday. Have a good day. I'm off to read what you've uploaded, now! :)