Reviews by hellishrose
Broken Rules by AJ Goin Rated: M [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Gibbs has had enough of the bickering and choses a way to deal with it.

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Categories: NCIS
Characters: Anthony DiNozzo/Ziva David
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5846 Read Count: 1425
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2013 Updated: 06 Jun 2013
Reviewer: hellishrose Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I actually joined yo read your stories. I found them on FF but you had noted that they were edited. So here I am and so far AWESOME. Love the premise!

Reviewer: hellishrose Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What an emotioal chapter. It felt so raw and exposed but I;m glad they finally started talking and I'm glad it not deflected by humor but it is a true comversation. Your dialogue feels very natural! Amazing job

Reviewer: hellishrose Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well written! So many writers try and so many times it comes out awkard but not here. It was steamy yet beautiful and real.

Reviewer: hellishrose Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love the re-writing of rule 12! Increadible story- I loved it. Thanks! Can't wait to read more from you. 

Rule Breaking by AJ Goin Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Tony and Ziva blow Rule 12 out of the water. Prequel to "Broken Rules" but meant to be read second.


Categories: NCIS
Characters: Anthony DiNozzo/Ziva David
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1232 Read Count: 324
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2013 Updated: 06 Jun 2013
Reviewer: hellishrose Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So amazing but just a tad but sad as you combine it with the first few chapters of the other story. Their coupling beautiful and then she is gone. Your writing is increadible and I can't wait to see what other NCIS stories you come up with. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all of your kind words! My muse has been begging me to write this prequel since I finished the original story, and there was just no way to do it within the guidelines of FF.net and have it be what he wanted. We don't write smutt very often, but I am going to make an effort to start copying all of my stories over to here. It's a bit easier to post on FF.net though. I will continue to post all of the stories that I can over there, but I want to have this available for when my story just needs to take a more adult themed turn. If you ever have any requests or prompts you would like me to write, please send them my way!

Much Love,

AJ