Reviews by PetralouiseSahriSahri
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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great job with this story your showing Bella's heart an strength in such a real way 



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I picture Sebastian as a maincoon a real people cat great for kids



Author's Response:

If you'd like to see him, there's a picture in my group, Shadow Fics, on Facebook.  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love that you write back to your readers I hope that you always get to do that



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for your comment on this.  So many people read and don't review--I kind of feel like I owe those that talk to me and that I should talk back!  I hope to continue to response to all reviews, but this story already had over a thousand reviews between the 3 sites where I'm posting.  If I'm posting twice a week, it might get to the point where I have to only respond to some.  I'm going to keep trying for them all, though!  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Oh my gosh there so sweet I love this chapter



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you so much! I'm so glad!  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So sweet and sad 



Author's Response:

Aww...I know.  Edward is cute when he's high, but the reason for it is never far from your mind, is it?  But in some ways today was a good day--at least he was happy!  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Love that Jasper has shown up can't wait to read Edwards reaction I hope Jasper just gets straight to the point 



Author's Response:

I know!  Isn't it exciting?  What does Jasper know, and how close is he with Edward?  But Edward is not likely to be happy about this, and Jasper is pretty pissed.  Monday's chapter will be tense and exciting!  :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Great chapter you Have me stumped on your flim reference which is bugging me



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The reference is Gandalf from Fellowship of the Ring.  LOTR was my first fandom, so it kind of comes naturally to quote from it.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 8 part 4

My my Jasper is full of all kinds of ideas love it. I like where Edward has the same ideas he's just a bit hesitant in asking.

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 8 part 5

Yippy there so close

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 5 (Part 1)

I love that you get back to your readers 



Author's Response:

I love that people take time to read my stories and take their precious time to review :)   Thank you <3

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 5 (Part 4)

Again great job

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 5 (Part 3)

You have me now hooked to read midnight caller I've read several of your story's an have loved them all. Still hoping you'll finish the one of Edward an Bella being kidnapped that was the first I've read. Another great chapter of milk money.



Author's Response:

newest chapter of Involuntary Rapture is being edited and might go out as early as tomorrow! I hope so!  It's nearly done :)  

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

How can you keep doing this to us? Just when you think here it is Nothing Your such a tease but is what keeps me bugging for more well done well done indeed



Author's Response:

It's a gift... lol... I do have to say that as much as I love cliffies in drabbles and even fan fic chapters, I don't end books on cliffies. I hate when authors do that. All of my books are complete, even the two that have two books in the series. 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 4 (part 4)

To short of a chapter but I love it all the same as always can't wait to read more

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Date: 06 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 5 (part 2)

Loving it were so close can't wait please post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start looking forward to reading more



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 8 Part 1

Nice vary smooth use the press to get her to stay

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Date: 28 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 3 (part 4)

Falling in love with this story such a great twist please post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 3 (part 5)

Another great chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

you are such tease



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

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Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 4 (part 2)

Loved the pub interaction but can't wait for Bella to hold Charlie

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Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 4 (part 3)

Such a tease the story is great I love it .. an it's vary true breast milk is liquid gold

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Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Oh boy Jasper on a roll

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Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 5 (part 7)

I love how Bella makes her entrance

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Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 5 (part 8)

Jasper is cracking me up 

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Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 5 (Part 9)

Hate her 

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Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 5 (Part 10)

The worst saying ever " we need to talk"

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)

What a way too start the day love the pic of Alice. Wish the chapters were longer but ill take what I can get as long as you keep posting



Author's Response:

I can keep it up for 2 more weeks... then I'll need to go every other day... sorry... it's just work is getting busier and busier. I'm trying to write as much as I can, but I work full time and have 3 kids. I'm trying to work on a book I hope to publish in April... I do love writing this though!!!

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 6 (Part 3)

I love Alice an her nonstop 

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Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 6 (Part 4)

As always Emmet's a hoot gotta love the guy

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Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Way to put your foot in your mouth

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Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3

Bumblebee hmmmm I like it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 7 part 5

Great

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Date: 02 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 8 Part 2

Sweet

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

Sure he won't act on it so he saids

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Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

Oh poor poor Edward 

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

I love the friendship between Edward an Jasper 

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Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

A way to melt a girls heart seeing a hot man play with your little one

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Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

Missed you glad you're back

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 10 Part 3

As sweet 

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My favorite word was f@ck. It always had been; always would be. I took my coffee black - French-pressed - and my wine dry and red. I took Jake with a shot of whiskey; Edward with a mimosa. I was stuck between a mix of worlds - theirs and a hazy one I could never see clearly - and it was all a gigantic mind-f@ck.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17225 Read Count: 11079
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2015 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five: The In-between

So that's how we meet Jacob nice

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Memory-shaped Cumulonimbi

Can't wait to see how Edward and Jacob will fit into the story

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Fucking Stories and Stuff

😍

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Falling Apart and Together

Like how we got to meet Edward just wish you wrote more of there interaction at the gala and back at his place 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Both Ends of the Candle

Snap 

Summary:

When Edward takes a temp job as a fantasy engineer, he has no idea what he's in for. Talkin' dirty to ladies three nights a week doesn't seem too hard. But when Bella calls, Edward is the one that begins fantasizing.

 

Reality Imagined


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10384 Read Count: 3820
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Way to be a tease post soon



Author's Response:

Sorry to tease. Chapter 2 is up now!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Soooo hooked post again soon I want to see how long he can go before he has to meet Bella

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So glad to see that u posted can't wait for more

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love it can't wait to see how dinner goes please post soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

Banner by the talented Christag Banners.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 109780
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it Bella pretending to be Mrs Cullen was classic

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So great to have to chapters of your story can't wait to see where the weekend takes them please post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved getting Edwards point of view on Bella an that he wants to be called daddy. I like that you have everyone working to get Bella an Edward alone an more then a few minutes. So glad you posted so soon I'm hooked 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

 Love it love it I check throughout the day seeing if you posted an when I see that you have I have to hurry an read cause I just can't wait😊

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The lead up was great as always can't wait for more

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

🌷🌹🌼💠😊

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such a great chapter so into the daddy kink 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hate that it's going to be over I'm not ready but if it has to be I hope u write another daddy kink story. Because I loved this one

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Again I have loved every chapter of this story will miss reading it thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner By: Christag Banners

Summary: Can the library assistant catch the eye of the new kindergarten teacher? How will he react when he finds out she's only eighteen? Will he keep his distance, or stop letting the twenty year age difference hold him back?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14796 Read Count: 7180
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2015 Updated: 13 Feb 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Again another great story that I love by you 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan, newly divorced (again) finds that life has changed since she was younger. A/H B+E   Contest entry for: The May to December Romance Contest

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26369 Read Count: 13394
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2015 Updated: 27 Jul 2016
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Live is Good

I hope you continue this story there's so much you could do with it



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yes, there are a lot of different places I could take this.  Truth be told, I'm just the typist.  The characters tell the story to me. *smiles*.  I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.

See you next chapter.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Edward's Point of View

Please post soon 



Author's Response:

The general plan for posting is every other week that is if i can keep the chapters coming.  Romance is not exactly my strong suite.  I'm more the supernatural and occult writer with a touch of SiFi thrown in for good measure.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and let me invite you to come join the Facebook group for this story under the name of the story.  There are pictures in the files of the characters - as I see them - and other items that appear in the chapters and story set up.

Thank you again.  See you next chapter?

Hard hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 A Day at the Zoo

Wonder how he's going to feel when he meets Edward



Author's Response:

That's the question isn't it.  Conner likes his mama the way she is - his.  

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!  Means a great deal to me.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94271
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shit Hot

I love this story but what about all your other stories are you reposting those as well as finishing those? I hope so your such a great writer



Author's Response:

 My Edwards have been very quiet and I have to work hard to get them to talk to me again. I apologize wholeheartedly for this. I had no idea that losing Jeff would leave me so broken when I promised to finish my stories...all I can ask is that you give me time to work on them one at a time. ADAG was so close to being done that I just want to finish at least this story because my beta and I put in so much time working on it.

I am not going to make any more promises. If I can pull my characters out of hiding I will at least try.

Trust me this was a very huge step for me to take today. Its just a start....and better than nothing....Thank you!

Andrea

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

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Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601605
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes a shower is vary needed this girl is in need of relief awesome chapter great picture as always

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Taking Control

Oh my goodness the pics were so freaking hot I love that's she's so innocent. Can hardly wait for the next chapter I hope he's into the dirty talk 



Author's Response:

I would say that is a good chance.....

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like what you have so far look forward to reading more



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I hope I can continue making it interesting.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Was So excited to see your post the whole chapter was great I hate now I have to wait to read more you have me hooked would love to read more from you age play along with BDSM an mafia I think the three together would be a great read



Author's Response:

I will keep that in mind...right now I am writing two stories and I better not start another until one of the others is done.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my gosh if I wasn't hooked before you've gone an made it worse can't wait 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Sweet sweet sweet an sexy



Author's Response:

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh my goodness how will this play out can't wait as always great chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh boy can't wait for your next chapter

Summary:

Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48018
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Jun 2018
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is going to be a great read can't wait for chapter three

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella's got some work to do

Summary:

Bella Swan is a very successful businesswoman, a self made millionaire, and a wonderful 'mother' and best friend, but she is closed off to the world around her...and for good reason! With Bree unable to talk, things in her life are more than complicated...Will the charming and sweet Edward Cullen be the one to turn all of that around? Can he do what no-one before has managed?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4655 Read Count: 428
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2015 Updated: 29 Mar 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start looking forward to reading more