Reviews by PetralouiseSahriSahri
Summary:

Lady Isabella Swan finds herself in an impossible situation after the death of her father, Charles. With the estate in desperate need of repair, will an arrangement made with the wealthy Edward Cullen provide a solution to Isabella's money worries or create more anguish and heartache for our heroine?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9048 Read Count: 5838
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2014 Updated: 22 Sep 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh oh can't wait to see why our dear Edward bothers her so



Author's Response:

Hi PetralouiseSahriSahri,

 

I love a cliffy, don't you.  All will be revealed and sparks will (fingers crossed) fly.

I will be posting up to ch5 tonight before breaking over the weekend. 

Thanks for the review.

 

LD

Summary:

He was an awkward and geeky boy who had absolutely no brain-to-mouth filter. Then why did I fall in love with him? Now, that is a good question. AH. Rated for language and adult situations.

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5459 Read Count: 1407
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2014 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So so Sweet world LOVE to read Edwards point of view



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

Your wish is taken into consideration. Knowing myself, my hands might itch to write a futuretake of these two kids for real. So ... ;)

Take care.

Ann

Fairy Godfather by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 79]
Summary:

Young doctor Edward pulls a beautiful girl out of harm's way, and finds that he may have just stumbled onto his greatest desire. Daddykink, so if that's not your thing, go elsewhere. For abadkitty.


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33156 Read Count: 40020
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Mar 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just finished the first 4  chapters an already can't wait for the next chapter post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so glad you reposted this story I just reread the whole story again  an loved it as much as the first time I read it.looking forward to reading more

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192167
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Looking forward to Monday's chapters

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

As always want the next chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great post can't wait to see how the girls react to seeing them



Author's Response:

:D Thanks hun xxx

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Fun fun fun



Author's Response:

:D xxx

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I LOVE how Edward sees Bella

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Always worth the wait

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOVE rose and Bella 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hot

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Another great chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella's next chapter is going to be great if it's anything like how you wrote it last time

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hot So Hot 



Author's Response:

Thatnks hun! :D xXx

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

From the beginning to the end of this chapter was SO HOT 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

She's taking it all in stride

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love Emmet 



Author's Response:

I love him too. :) <3

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hate having to wait

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

SWEET I've missed this story really happy it's back



Author's Response:

Thanks, hun. I'm glad it's back, too :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Glad to see that you have reposted this story looking forward to seeing what you add an just how kinky you make it



Author's Response:

Thanks hun :D xxx

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Looking forward to seeing how they get along with the shopping

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cool set up I hope you write more



Author's Response:

I have lots and lots more to post ;) xxx

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So glad to see u back

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start



Author's Response:

Thanks hun :)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Just the other day I was trying to remember what story that scene took place I think that's one of my all-time favorite chapter's again loved it as much as the first time I read it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

like always soon good looking forward to seeing what they get into

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

LOVE when you update

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Not nice to leave us hanging

Summary:

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While out for a night with the girls, Bella gets a text that sends her running home. A Texts From Last Night Contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 3403
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Running Home

Love it

Summary:

I had a simple task. I had to go meet her father and ask for his permission. But his daughter was not helping my situation ... at all. All human. Canon couples. Rated for language and adult situations

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3431 Read Count: 1268
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Vary sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you. :D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Summary:

Summary:
AU~ E/B ~HEA
Izzy has followed in her parents’ footsteps, and is working in the porn industry at Cullen Enterprises. Everything is going wonderfully.  Then, she begins to feel as though someone is watching her with every breath she takes.  Those haunting eyes seem to be everywhere.  Who is it, and what do they want?

Beta'd by RAH07890

Banner


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4036 Read Count: 21897
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2014 Updated: 06 Aug 2019
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOVE the pics hope the chapter get longer

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice start

Substance by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

When a vampire finds their mate they are inexplicably bound to them, the bond forged between the two is both eternal and unbreakable. It is also mutual, but what would happen if their other half were a human?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7239 Read Count: 576
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2014 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start can't wait to see where you take this

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122122 Read Count: 16292
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2014 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Edward

Great start enjoying it a lot this is story that I have not seen written in this way



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! We are so glad you found our story and decided to read it, Reviewing makes our day every time we recieve one :) I hope it lives up to your expectations. We'll be [posting ecery Friday, look forward to hearing from you!!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Ocean Waves

LOVE It



Author's Response:

Yayyyy, so glad to hear that. Thaks so much!!! Thanks so much for reviewing, we cherish every single one :)


Fyre

This has Alice and Rose written all over it.

I get up and head down the hall yelling at them both to get their a*** up. Of course Jasper and Edward get up with the noise, too.

"What have you done?" I say through gritted teeth, looking at Alice.

"What?" she asks, trying to look innocent.

"It seems one of the girls ..."

"Jessica," Jake supplies.

"Jessica ... has received a card directing her to the nearest clinic to get tested for an STD," I say, giving her a raised brow. 

She just smirks.    

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Beginning

Please post the next chapter soon



Author's Response:

It definitely helps that we are impatient. Lol. Plus you guys are awesome so you may see another chapter sooner rather than later. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. And thanks for reading and following our tale. Here is a tiny sneak peek into the next chapter. XOXO
Lissa

I tell 'em that I'm in love with Bella and that I'm lucky enough to have her love me back. Emmett's happy for me, but Jasper's a little skeptical.

"Man, you sure this is the path you wanna take with a woman?" he asks me.

"Whacha mean?" I ask him back, 'cause I don't know where he's going with this.

"I mean, are you sure you wanna end up with a woman who's been with other men?"

I don't know how to respond to that. I mean, of course she hasn't, but that's Bella's business. It's not my place to talk about her sex life, or lack thereof, with my brothers. So I go with evasion.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Payback and Yes

Little bit of a tear jerker 



Author's Response:

We were just told we should have issued a tissue warning. Sorry. :( We tried to balance it with some humor which I hope made things a little better. ;) Thanks so much for reading and for the review. If you celebrate it, I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Here is a small teaser for the next chapter. XOXO, Lissa

After a long, slow kiss, I drag her over to my bed and push her down to take a seat.
 
“So …” I start. “I was, uh, thinkin’ …” I’m a bumbling mess. Scared to just go on and spit out what I wanna say. “I was thinkin’.”

“Yeah? About what?” she asks.
 
“Well I was thinking weshouldgetmarriedinAtlanta,” I say, too fast for her to possibly understand me. But I got it out once, maybe the second time I can actually say it so she can hear me.

“Huh?”

I force myself to slow it down and say sincerely, “Bella, I want us to get married in Atlanta … next week.”

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved

LOVE it love it post soon



Author's Response:

I promise we will bring you the next 2 in the same time as it usually takes for 1. So glad to hear you are loving it :) Thanks so much for revieing, we love reading them so much!!

Fyre

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Bring on the Sharks

So sweet 



Author's Response:

Yayyy so glad you liked it :)The reviews for chapter 14 were so unexpected and such a pleasant surprise. We will be sticking firm for next Wed though ;) Here's a small teaser to keep you til then though...


Fyre

Finally, Mrs. Cullen puts her menu away and turns to Edward and me. "Son, will you please fill us in on what happened? How the two of you came to be married?"

Edward looks at me and smiles, and then he turns to his mama. "Sure …"

Mr. Cullen interrupts, "Yes, Edward. Please tell us how you came to marry Miss Issa here when we weren't even made aware that you two were datin'. It seems we have a lot of catchin' up to do."

Edward frowns at his dad. "Well, I was tryin' to tell ya how I came to marry Bella,"—he makes sure to stress my real name—"before ya interrupted." 

"By all means, please continue then," Mr. Cullen says as he makes a go ahead motion with his hand.

Summary:

pr

 

The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6112 Read Count: 552
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Pop Religion OneShot

Great chapter I do hope you continue to write more of their story



Author's Response:

We are writing their full story now. We update every Friday. The story is pretty much completely pre-written. Hopefully you give it a try and enjoy their journey. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. XOXO

Lissa

Summary:

Edward is from old money. Bella is not.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33054 Read Count: 32552
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like to see where u go with this

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh I hate Victoria

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great crazy chapter LOVE it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Kick in the teeth

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Cat fight go Bella

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Always a good chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh poor them

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love Edwards back bone

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hope Victoria tells the truth

Summary:

New probee officer Bella Swan is put on the Molten, Washington Detective squad. Once her probation period is over she gets assigned to pull duty with the narcotics squad. Will her direct supervisor Edward Cullen treat her like all other detectives, or will she have a lot to prove? What kind of trouble will happen when Edward's own life is in her hands. All Human.

BANNER BY: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20896 Read Count: 44718
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Liked hearing Edwards point of view 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I grew up in Kent so it will be fun to see the place you write about. Looking forward to where you take the story

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh the build up an then nothing great job

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Set up to this story has been great

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love how cofodent bell is looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Please post soon

Summary:

From the day she was born Bella was fascinated by Edward until,slowly,deeply she starts to fall in love with him. They Swan's are birds that fall in love once and then it is for a life time, so why did she fell for the most arrogant unfeeling stubborn mule of a boy, Life is so unfair...............stories/23407/images/large_2.jpg


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6542 Read Count: 7817
[Report This] Published: 10 Nov 2014 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Special day.

soon sweet

Regardless by Ray Ryan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

 

When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2014 Updated: 10 Jan 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Where It All Began

Wow what a great start

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh goody good goodness great job

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh no big daddy swan is mad

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonder if she an Edward will have strong words

Summary:

When fate stepped in and changed Bella's life, she hid from the pain. What happens when she has to face that pain? Does she find more trouble coming home or will she find forever? Contest Entry 13 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4234 Read Count: 185
[Report This] Published: 20 Nov 2014 Updated: 20 Nov 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You made me cry great job

Summary: Past Featured Story

vp

 

Mafia man Edward, has closed his heart off to everyone outside his family. He gets injured, and is helped by a young woman who seems to not like him. He then meets a young girl that tugs at his heart and he soon finds himself wanting to be something else so he can be worthy of them both.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74517 Read Count: 91259
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 27 Apr 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved your last story you wrote and this one seems to jump right off from the start hope you post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Nice

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Overreact much

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

To to funny

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The family meal was a great read but Edward referring to rose as stripper Rose was rather funny.

 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love that sweet moment when Edward goes to look in. On sashes but u how he has to touch Bella even if it's small you bring his feelings across the page 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Walls are coming down

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This chapter had me in tears great job

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Again tears

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love the bonding between Mike an Edward

Summary:

Bella works for a wealthy CEO, Edward Cullen, but her first job isn't what she wanted to be when she grew up

 

Author is www.fanfiction.net/u/4985819/bonadea777


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3336 Read Count: 583
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2014 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great I can't wait to see where you take this I hope this story has many chapter's. Very much looking forward to reading this story love when a story grabs you an that is what you have done. Please post soon

Soul Quest by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 160]
Summary:

Edward Masen does all he can to protect his little sister. When he gets involved with the wrong people, will the most least likely person he knows be his saving grace? Will Edward be able to find his way back into his body? Will he be able to be there for his little sister and Bella, or will he be too late to save anyone?

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41159 Read Count: 23152
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another great chapter post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This chapter had me choking up

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Was not expecting the story to take this kind of twist can't wait for your next chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

😱😍

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great job 

Smoke on the Water by FyreMasen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Smoke on the Water is an annual barbecue and music festival held in a small Georgia town. It draws crowds from far and wide. Only this year, country star Bella Swan is gonna be the main act. What happens when a couple of good ole country boys win passes to meet her?

An entry for the Get Your Southern On contest. We won First Place Honorable Mention

fs


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33786 Read Count: 13392
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 May 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh Emmet what are you doing whatever it is I'm sure it will be hilarious 



Author's Response:

Let's hope whatever it is makes things better, not worse. ;) Thank you for reading and for your review. XOXO 

Lissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39946
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Busy Bee

Looking forward to your next chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: sting in her tail

Great to see a post hope we get another one soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - midnight confessions

The mood swings are a hoot

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - she be but little

Glad to see Bee opening up

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - a secret garden

Frozen I love it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - one big happy family

This was a great chapter were seeing who bee is little by little vary cool

Summary:

When Bella shares her fantasy with her master he decides to make it a reality. So here's what happens.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4922 Read Count: 3626
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2014 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot

Summary: Past Featured Story

I was irredeemable. I was lost, and then ... she found me. A story of discovering yourself ... a story of resumption. OOC vampires, Canon couples. Edward x Bella. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74961 Read Count: 22725
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2015 Updated: 09 Oct 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

Like how she gets him all in a frenzy



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

Great start to the story 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter-1: Intangible, Not Impossible

I like that your showing this side of Edward it was in Between the lines of the books but your showing more of his self loathing. I would love to see he an Bella have some great bantering that he walks away thinking what just happened here

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh you can count on it! I love writing a snarky-Bella. ;)

Thanks for reading. :)

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

Great meeting can't wait to see where you take us



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

Edward is a little bit crabby I like it



Author's Response:

LOL. Tell you a secret? I like it too. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter-9: Not A Magical World

😱



Author's Response:

;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

I love when you bring Emmet into the story he just makes me laugh



Author's Response:

*Grins* I can't help but channel my inner clown through him at times. ;)

Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Oh my goodness

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

I like her an how she's not bothered by him 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  :)  Yes, she's seen this before, and she knows how to deal with him.  So glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Want to know what Edward is thinking an feeling but also a look into his past



Author's Response:

Answers are coming, I promise--we'll have some new information soon!  :)