Reviews by PetralouiseSahriSahri
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, America's young sweetheart on screen, is starring in her first R-rated film. Her co-star is Edward Cullen, Hollywood's reputed playboy, and he won't give her the time of day. Will they fizzle onscreen as Bella attempts to turn up the heat in her first erotic scene, or can she cause a reaction powerful enough to burn through his arrogant, impassive facade?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39631 Read Count: 6257
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2014 Updated: 04 Apr 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hope Edward is a jerk



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Your wish is my command.  ;)

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Sweet

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love how fast the chapters our being posted



Author's Response:

:)  I'll try to post at least once a day until all my finished chapters are posted.  There will be 31 regular chapters and an epi.  Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like that there hasn't been a lot of banter between the two yet it gives a air of mystery to who an why Edward seems so smug



Author's Response:

Their interaction builds slowly over the course of the story.  :)  He's definitely a mystery.

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56092
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the twist hope he is all kinds of kinky fun can't wait for next post

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LOVE HIM

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Again I'm loving this story 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So glad that Bella is over this let's not be friends

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9511
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story love to see some more of there life in other shot story's

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: Deebelle1

Summary: Edward is a jaded loner who doesn't want a friend. Then there is overly happy Bella who drives him insane with her perkiness. He wants to know why, but he doesn't want to come out and ask, fearing she will think they are friends. The two of them are partnered up in gym class where Bella gets unexplained special treatment. Tragedy strikes and Edward can't ignore her anymore.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30198 Read Count: 19998
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2014 Updated: 08 Apr 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope you post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOVE this Edward an Bella can't wait to get the next chapter

Judgment Day by 2amlovesick2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 113]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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This fabulous banner was created by debzdezins. Thank you so much!

Three innocent people, each surviving day by day until their lives intersect. One man accused of a crime he didn't commit. A second man setup to save another. A young woman whose life is threatened, hiding from a killer on the loose. Connections are made. Bonds are formed. Each living with the hope to see their own Judgment Day. Canon pairing AH M for violence and adult content.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 314922 Read Count: 30029
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2014 Updated: 14 Mar 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope that I will keep you attention.

Take care.

Summary:

All it takes, is one call. Just one, to change a persons life forever.*WARNING* Lots of lemony goodness inside. E&B, HEA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7615 Read Count: 2199
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2014 Updated: 09 May 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Crazy ending LOVE IT

My Daddy by Kitacullen89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

My name is Isabella Swan and this is my story about me and my daddy


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27756 Read Count: 38332
[Report This] Published: 03 May 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Dr Jasper

I hope you have a hot chapter with all four of them getting dirty with each other



Author's Response: Thank you for reading

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner courtsey of Fallingsnow Winter

Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter during Edwards speech you had me choke up a little looking forward to seeing what you have in-store next

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I so hope you post soon cause that was a great way to leave that chapter 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice start hope you post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love the banter is Edward Alice's brother

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This story always makes me laugh post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Another great chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

To funny of a chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Post soon MUST know

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great way to end the chapter 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Another cliffhanger please post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

 His words were Harsh but I love how you pulled everything together

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Classic

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Great story sad to see it end maybe you could write about the food truck an Bella finding out who her family really are just a thought. Thank you for giving us a great story to fall in love with

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by:CaiteexxGraphics

SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Had me choked up great job

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great job on both of the last chapter's

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Sweet

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOVE it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

LOVE Peter's speach

Summary:

 

Two lonely people, living in New York City, having dirty conversations via Tumblr. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19361 Read Count: 5125
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2014 Updated: 01 Dec 2020
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait to meet Edward



Author's Response:

I hope you love him!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Dirty Conversations

Was hoping to see the next chapter I hope you keep writing



Author's Response:

It's coming... real life gets in the way...

Summary:

fvwl

A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126107
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please post soon have to know what happens

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, free from an abusive ex and his controlling family, takes her son and moves away from the life she knew. Opening a Bakery, she meets Edward, a fireman, when her partially deaf son runs off. Can Edward be the Baker’s Man, and Irina’s daddy too? What baggage does he have?

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Banner by: Chandrakanta


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15651 Read Count: 3430
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 01 Jun 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love story's that deal with deafness this is a issue that is close to my heart. My son had hearing issues and signing is a big part of our lives, so thank you for giving those who can't hear a voice .

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Two troubled pasts that took different paths. She takes life by the horns and tries to live it to the fullest. He hides away on the mountaintop, rough all around. What happens when they meet? What happens when their worlds’ collide?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: mamih's favorites
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55154 Read Count: 24720
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jul 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Crash

MUST HAVE NEXT CHAPTER SOON

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Support System

Love Emmet get to the point still can't wait for your next chapter



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yeah, Emmett was a bit intense but I think he projected his own fears on Bella and Edward. After all, he's quite the man-whore and I think he's scared to death that something like that could happen to him. See you next chapter with the mystery encouter ;).

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Walk of Shame

Great start I hope we get to see how they meet an all the good groping



Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Yes, Edward will tell you how they met but it'll be some time until there's any groping. After all, he doesn't remember it all that clearly either ;). See you with the EPOV.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 - Revealing Secrets

Such a great chapter can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I had a lot of fun writing it. See you next chapter.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

As always happy to read and Emmet an rose make me laugh can't wait to read more



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Rose and Em are a hoot. I really love writing them. They basically write themselves. See you Monday with the update.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I hope it's sooner than that



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm afraid you'll have to wait until July 1st ;).

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale

Post soon



Author's Response: I'll try, but I can't promise anything other than it won't take longer than two weeks.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

Post soon love this story



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you love the story. Unfortunately, it'll take two weeks until the next update :(. Hope to see you then nevertheless.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

Post soon



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wish I could post faster, but I really can't. Sorry. But I'll post as soon as possible.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Baby Steps

LOVE Alice she's a hoot looking forward to how Charlie is going to react I hope he goes all cop on Edward



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. You might be surprised by Charlie, though. See you in Forks next chapter.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Just Friends

LOVE this story 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you love the story. I do too ;). See you Monday.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Busted!

Always get excited when I see your post I look forward to seeing what kind of part Esme will take part in their lives



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Esme's part isn't over yet. You can get excited again on Monday ;). See you then.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - What Daddy Wants

Loved that Edward showed his father that he had a back bone



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, he stood up to him, probably for the first time. We'll see where it'll lead. Merry Christmas to you and your family. See you on the 29th.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Be Careful What You Wish For

Great chapter an your so right about the  crazy emotions you have when your pregnant😊your a crazy person



Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. It's great to hear that there are others who had crazy emotions like Bella. See you Monday.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Ambush

It's going to be so hard to wait for the next chapter but way to be a tease



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, I'm sorry I have to keep you waiting, but I promise this is the only evil cliffie I planned ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Truth and Nothing But the Truth

😱🌼😊



Author's Response: Thanks!

At His Command by dpdp2317 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 87]
Summary:

 

Isabella Swan, 21, a student at NYU, spends a passion filled night with billionaire Edward Cullen, 31. The next morning, he tells her that he wants her to be his submissive. She finds herself thrust into the world of BDSM, where pain is pleasure, and less is more. Follow Bella on this kinky journey, as she tries to be Edward's perfect little pet. But, is there more to the story?

Thank you BE1965 for the wonderful banner. 

I'm ever grateful to RAH07890 who is painstakingly beta'ing every chapter. She is an essential to the story, and I'm so thankful to her.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26137 Read Count: 26169
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Jun 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Like it hope you post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Like what your doing with the story can't wait for more hope it's soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter want need more

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hate when the chapter is over its getting so good please post soon can't wait

Sold My Soul by glassbug Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

He's a rich doctor and she's a struggling student. What happens when he offers her the pile of papers that will change her life with just one signature? entry for the entry for the TwiFic Doctorward contest


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6111 Read Count: 2416
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2014 Updated: 26 Jun 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hope you keep going

Summary:

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Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66591
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

No not at all Edward needs to pull it together 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Nice

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nice to see them working 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope you post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Post soon

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love the tension between them can't wait for your next chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great chapter love the interaction everyone

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOVE all the point of views you covered

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That was just mean and good all at the same time

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great to see your post

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

SWEET

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Each chapter gets better and better 

Summary:

He's 30 she's 16 will he get what he wants?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5576 Read Count: 11229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Jul 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Young Beauty

Hope you write something else an with more chapters an as always full of kinky goodness

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72878
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

He's reached 

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He is just awful

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great twist

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOVE hating Carlisle in this story Are you going to bring Edward ? in to save her or is this a story of Carlisle growing a heart?

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You have me so hooked I still hope you bring Edward in that would be hot

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Every chapter is just crazy you have me hooked

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

  I think a great twist would throw Edward into the mix

Summary: Past Featured Story

Aysy (Bella) and The Moon    

While sulking in his "woe is me" attitude concerning his lack of a love life, Edward ends up waking a centuries old wolf (Bella) from slumber who has no memory of her past life; the only thing she knows is Edward is hers. Looks like some legends are more than what they seem.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101749 Read Count: 20286
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Nov 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue

Love this already I hope to read the next chapter soon



Author's Response:

The next chapter is already submitted but it is quite short but don't worry the other chapters are long so I hope you all be little patient with me. Thank you for all your thoughts.

Aria.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Scary stories.

Glad to see that you posted again can't wait to see what's next



Author's Response:

Really sorry it took me this long, I did post as soon as I got the chapter from my Beta. If you are in a hurry to read this I have an unbeta'd version on the fanfiction.net under the same name.

Aria.

Summary:

I was content in the limelight until a coffee girl flipped my world upside down. Titles like 'Academy Award Winner' and the 'People's Choice' used to mean everything, but it's my newest title that I cherish the most...the Hollywood Dad.

 

*The True Confessions of a Coffee Girl Sequel*

 

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*Banner by Mina*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52074 Read Count: 39331
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2014 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I loved Bella's POV  it will be fun to read Edwards

Summary:

She's not supposed to be with him. He's not supposed to be with her. And they both know it. But what can you do when attraction is too strong and you can't resist temptation? You hide it, of course. But you know what they say about doing it in the dark... BxE/AH/OOC. Rated NC-17 for lemons, language, and adult situations so consider yourself warned! 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3712 Read Count: 658
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Sep 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Rendezvous

Nice Love It can't wait to see where you go with this

Summary:

It all began with a lesson...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4272 Read Count: 10317
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would love to read more of this story hope you write more



Author's Response:

Im fixing it right now because its a bit rushed, one more chapter and thats it.

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOVE the second chapter as I said I hope you take this story further I can see many twists and turns for them

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh boy oh boy is Edward going to lose it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love the banter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter LOVE Edward

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice l hope there both smart mouths

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Nice

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOVE it

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great post

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The banter back forth crack me every time 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

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Edward & Bella may have had some difficulties in the beginning of their relationship but as they move forward, they will find that it will take even more work to stay together. In order to make her future work with Edward, Bella has to search out her past. It just may take this journey for Edward and Bella to learn the true definition of love. Continuation of Lottery of Life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80982 Read Count: 22997
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Jul 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love that you are writing the next phase of their life looking forward to more

The Writer by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

She thought she was writing fiction but what happens when her vivid imagination gets a little too close to the unknown truth? Twilight AU Mature language/material Vampire/Human Bella/Major Whitlock pairing DARK/DOMINANT MAJOR not a fluff story! SOME DOM/sub SITUATIONS Can't handle that, take yourself elsewhere. Full summary now heading Ch. 1.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26483 Read Count: 13503
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2014 Updated: 04 Jan 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOVING this Jasper looking forward to read the next chapter

Burn Notice by ifyouweremine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The last days of summer. Two weeks of freedom. One lie. What could possibly go wrong? BxE, canon couples, AH-OOC. M-RATING for lemons

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25364 Read Count: 13462
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope you post soon want to see the shock Bella gets when she sees Edward

Summary:

Bella is leery of falling in love. She soon learns that life is filled with countless forms and degrees of emotions. There is love, loss, healing, and everything in between. BxE. Canon couples. AH-OOC. HEAVY ANGST in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10590 Read Count: 3211
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 24 Nov 2015
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Already a great start can't wait for the next chapter please post soon

Summary:

Lady Isabella Swan finds herself in an impossible situation after the death of her father, Charles. With the estate in desperate need of repair, will an arrangement made with the wealthy Edward Cullen provide a solution to Isabella's money worries or create more anguish and heartache for our heroine?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9048 Read Count: 5838
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2014 Updated: 22 Sep 2014
Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That last statement makes you want to Smack him an like him all at the same time 



Author's Response:

He is not an easy man is he, lol. I loved your statement.  Thanks for letting me know what you thought and please continue to do so.

LD

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Can't wait to see what Bella thinks of  this idea her dad had



Author's Response:

It'll be interesting wont it.  I guess I will find out with the rest of you as atm it's pretty much writing itself.

Thankfully I have a plan, now I just need the characters to play nice and follow it,lol.

LD