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Bio:
So, I'm Juliann (but you can call me Grizzlies, IG, Jules - whatever) and I love to read and write, and I honestly don't particularly care for writing a bio right now. I live in Lodi, CA, go to Middle College High School in Stockton, have the bestest friends in the WORLD, love to read and write, and am probably borderline insane.
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64225
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
"You live downstairs from a hot doctor who walks around naked?" <That made me burst into laughter. It's like, yeah, that pretty much sums it up, Alice. ;)
This is sooo funny, I keep cracking up and getting weird looks from the family!
*skips off to read more*
On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.
2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Guest
So far, I do like it quite a bit. There were a few typos that I noticed, but nothing major enough to detract from the story. ;) I can't wait for the next chapter and hope you update soon!!!
A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.
He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.
Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.
She's also a 110 year old vampire.
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In the MYSTIC AWARDS:
GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE
CUTE CATEGORY:
Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love Letters
;) I love your story so far, it's amazing. And I'm really picky about my stories, especially these types with VampBella and HumanEdward.... lol.
As for enjoying writing Stalker POV... lol... Don't feel bad about it. ;) I enjoyed writing one of my bad guys chapters the best.... (And then several people mentioned that he was way creepy and they were afraid of me. *snickers evilly*)
I'm off to read more! ;)
Author's Response:
LOL...yep, several have said that they are afraid of me too...LOL
Makes me happy that my twist is working for you!
Kathie
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I Love Him, He's MINE!
... I think that girl creeps me the HELL OUT. *shudders*
*grins*
GREAT job, I LOVED it!
Author's Response:
SO MUCH FUN! LOL
Kathie
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The First question
;) Caught up. It's now 1:30 in the morning, and I think I should probably be in bed... lol!
Yay for kisses! And surprises... and the two together is always wonderful. Heehee....
Can't wait for more!!! Love your story!
~IG
Author's Response:
Yes, you should be in bed! LOL
So glad that you are enjoying the kisses and surprises!
Thanks for reading and the lovely rating, InsaneGrizzlies!
Kathie
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 It was Time
Holy Cow that is a NICE house! Me want!!! lol.
;) Off to read the next chapter....
Author's Response:
Isn't it GREAT? I'd love to wander through it...
Kathie
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Answers
Loved it, loved it. I loved how they both ended up laughing despite the rather serious conversation. ;) And Edward really does make me chuckle, he's just almost... "Oh, vampires, I guess that makes sense...." lol. I don't know how to describe it. *shakes head* But I like it. ;)
Can't wait for more!!!
~IG
Author's Response:
LOL...glad you like his response...He's just ready for HER...no matter what she is...well, maybe!
Thanks for reading...and those lovely steaming coffee cups!
Kathie
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Not Keeping the Secret
;) Loved it. Haha, funny thing... (kinda random-ish, but funny....) While reading about the frying bacon, the smell of the bacon we're frying here at home finally started drifting into the living room. Made it feel all so much more realistic, lol!
I COULD SMELL EDWARD'S FOOD!!!!!
Haha, poor Edward. I bet he's all "What the hell just happened?" and confuzzled. Didn't realize he'd just mentioned such a sensitive subject.
Now what does Alice have to say to him...? *grins slyly* The sneaky pixie CAN'T be up to any good.... lol.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Too funny! Frying bacon at YOUR house too!
Ah, Alice...sometimes she has GOOD news...LOL...about bears...
Black bears...not Grizzlies...lol
Kathie
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Anticipation
awww! Go Edward for manning up and saying those pesky frightening words!
Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Weren't you so proud of him? LOL...I was! Especially since he was going to let her go FIRST!
Had to fix that, for sure...
Thanks again, IG!
Kathie
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Gifts
LOL, to change or not to change? That is the question.
I know. I'm SUCH a dork.
As for wanting the relatives to leave... sometimes, if YOU'RE the one visiting, YOU just can't wait to leave... ;)
Haha, sneaky Kate, hiding things from her family. heehee....
Can't wait for more! I LOVE IT!!!
~IG
Author's Response:
Ah, that really IS the question...I have no doubts that he will make the RIGHT decision!
Exactly...just a couple days at my in-laws is enough...LOL
That Kate...she was sneaky...and happy!
Thanks for reading, IG...
Kathie
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Company
*shakes head* Oh yes, your family is obviously VERY helpful. LOLOL!
Oh dear. Tanya. Tsk, tsk, woman, have you no shame? Going after taken men....
*slow, evil grin* Try not to piss off Rose....
Author's Response:
LOL...my family CAN be helpful...but not often...LOL
"Asteroid Attack"...sigh...
Tanya...she's such a bad girl!
Thanks again, IG!
Kathie
Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Finding My Way
"I had the perfect way to dispose of the body too. I was going to put it through the wood chipper and shoot it out into the lake." <Bwahahahaha! Okay, so I read that and I thought "Heeheehee... I think I'm being sold on this story full-time!" And then NCIS is brought up which is one of my all time FAVE shows (yes, I'm a bit of a dork. I blame my mom though, she's the one that got me hooked. Now we always race to figure out who did it first, lol!) soooo.... I'm your loyal reading slave now. ;D
I mean, I liked it before all that, it was funny and well written, but with those added in.... ;)
Yeah. I'm a strange one. BUT ANYHOW.... I love the story very much and am off to read the next chapter! Great job and hooray to you for stepping outside of the box!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Lunch Time Revelations
*is still laughing from the countless things that cracked her up this chapter*
Usually, I would be highly annoying and point out every single part I found funny, somtimes even saying why and adding inane comments that come from my twisted mind.... But right now I just want to read more, so you're spared the torture of my usual MO. ;)
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Up in Smoke
*bursts into side-splitting laughter*
"No Mom, I did not set the school on fire this time, I swear!"
Oh, now THERE'S a story I'd definitely want to hear! Hahahaha!
*hurries off for more reading*
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tis Better to Ask Forgiveness...
*pouts* I went to press next....
...And there wasn't a next.
But I guess this just means I get to practice more patience and wait for the next amazing chapter to be released!!! I really love your story, the plot is amazing and the characters very deep. I can't wait for more!
Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.
Banner by Mkystich
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144851
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Sounds like a plan, Batman.
Sorry, I couldn't resist. I think it's because I'm tired, and it's late, and I woke up early. :S
Ignore the geeky insanity. ;)
But yeah, I like the idea of getting a couple chapters on the other characters. Getting an idea how things are going for them.... ;D
Can't wait for more, love this story.
Author's Response:
lol, I totally use that phrase all the time!
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
'I hope Vivian and Arthur Hale never come across Bella in a dark alley. Actually, maybe I do.' <THAT CRACKED ME UP! LOL!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
BWAHAHAHA!!!
Have I MENTIONED that I LOVE Tanya? I have? A million times? Eh, well, it's true. XD
Great chapter, have a great birthday!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!
XoXo
Shel
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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.
She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.
"What's wrong, baby?"
He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.
"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."
She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Oh dear! Now I'm all worried!!! What's up with Jack, what's going to go wrong, WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NEXT CHAPTER THAT I WON'T LIKE?! lol
(I'm obviously overreacting, but I can't help myself....)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"
Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."
Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."
She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
This is good, and I like it an awful lot. ;)
Just wanted to let you know that I think you have a typo in here.
'Sue and Leah came over later that afternoon to exchange gifts and have dinner. Leah opted to stay in Seattle with friends, which made Sue a little melancholy.'
I believe you meant "Sue and SETH came over...." and not Sue and Leah, lol. ;D Just thought I'd let you know!
I can't wait for more and hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
{Thank you so much for pointing out the error! I totally appreciate that! I went in and fixed asap!}
Thank you so much for your review! Here's a little teaser for the next chapter! I hope to have it out on Friday. ^_^
Bella sat, swinging on the Swan's back porch, watching as Jack and Charlie played with his new pool and water slide. She smiled as she got to see a side of her father that she had never really seen before. She didn't remember much when she was Jack's age and when she was older, it was all of the arguments and tension in the house that she recalled, none of the fun times. After Renee left, Charlie continued to throw himself into his work.
Now, it was like he was getting a second chance. It was amazing how much this little boy had changed all of their lives.
Just then, Bella felt something whiz past her head and then splatter against the wall, wetting her slightly. She looked back at the pool to see Charlie doubled over in laughter and Jack grinning.
"Nice one, Jack," Charlie managed to get out through his laughter. She watched as Jack reached down into the water and pick up another water balloon.
"Don't do it, Jack," she tried to say in a warning tone, but could barely hold back her own giggles. She was up and squealing as he let the balloon fly towards her.
Also, just to let you know, I submitted a pic from this part of the chapter on http://pictease.blogspot.com, which get put up on Mondays!
There should also be something completely different from this story on Teaser Mondays at http://www.fictionators.com/
Thanks again for your review and giving my baby a chance! <3
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Heh. I think Jake got off too easy.... I think he needs an "accidental" castration. ;) That'll teach him...!
Yes. I am rather vicious minded.
Loved the chapter, the end was very sweet. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Hello, loves! Thank you to those of you new to reading, as well as my lovelies who have been here from the beginning! Here's a snippet from the next chapter.
Also, don't forget to check out http://pictease.blogspot.com/ and http://www.fictionators.com for a couple of more teasers from the next chapter! PicTease is up now and Fictionators will be up tomorrow sometime!
Love y'all!
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Bella stared in shock at the envelope in her hands. She looked up at Alice, who merely smiled and nodded for her to open it.
"Alice," she asked, her voice thick with emotion. "This is from HarperCollins Publishing. What did you do?"
Allie clapped her hands in excitement. "Just open the damn thing and see what they said!"
With shaking fingers, she ripped open the flap and pulled out the paper. Alice bounced in nervousness and tried to peer over her shoulder.
"Holy shit," Bella breathed out, her wide eyes shot up to Allie's.
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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Only 2 more until we catch up with the prologue? Whoot! ;)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.
On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well.
Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!
~Shel~
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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.
"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."
Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face.
"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"
"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."
The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Ooooh!!!
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!
Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!
<3
Shel
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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind.
"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place."
Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water.
"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.
"Will she what?"
"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?"
When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.
"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts."
Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.
"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.
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Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
"I know a guy who knows a guy," she offered, smugly. "I'd go into more detail, but then I'd have to kill you."
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"I'm so tempted just to put a hit out on her ass. After just dumping your kid in a park to go off and get high, especially a kid as awesome as Jack, you don't deserve to be breathing."
Jasper gave Tanya a wary look and gestured to the folder.
"Can your guy take care of that, too?" he asked sarcastically. She gave him a devious smile.
"No, that would be my other guy from the Jersey Shore," she winked at him. Jasper blanched and went back to reading.
I love those two parts. Tanya made me laugh - hard. It was just plain hilarious in my mind. lol
Can't wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
{I totally tried my best to make Tanya lovable and somewhat funny! I'm tired of her always being the bad guy when never was in the books, lol!}
Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!
I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!
<3
Shel
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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."
Charlie's eyes widened.
"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.
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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
*taps her fingers on the desk rapidly*
Great chapter, but I really really really really REALLLY can't wait for the next update!!! I am anxious to see how everyone reacts and how you'll portray the other characters!
And I totally agree with you about the Tanya thing, btw. I made her a "good" person in one of my stories, too. She was never even a bad person in the series, she was nice actually. lol. ;D
As I said, great chapter, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
XoXo
Shel
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Heh heh heh... *shakes head* Oh you evil evil evillll author you. That was just cruel. How horrible to end it there!!! D:
And I believe I like being called a Veruca. I sometimes notice that when I'm telling my friends (okay, okay, fine; whining to them) about wanting to get a book, I sound like her, so I always laugh and point it out. ;) IMMA PROUD VERUCA!!! lol
I can't wait for more, please please please update soon!!!!! *gets on knees, clasps hands, and begs*
Author's Response:
{AS for the Veruca comment, I am a proud Veruca myself, lol, so I hope everyone else knows that I mean it with the utmost adoration!}
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!
<3 Shel
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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Great chapter!!! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!
XoXo
Shel
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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.
"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."
"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."
"Duly noted, Alice."
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
FINALLY! I got a laptop and internet and finally got to read the chapter I missed on Friday! It was very distressing, missing an update and having to wait so long... :(
BUt it was great and I loved the lullaby...! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts!
I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!
<3 Shel
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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.
"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Really, really wonderful!
Okay, haha, so almost every time I read a chapter, I think it might be better for me if I just wait until I have the whole thing to read, so I can just blaze on through this amazing story. But then I'll see the update in my inbox and there is not resisting such temptation! ;D So while the wait is tortorous (I don't always have the best patience, hahaha!) I love it. lol
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT FRIDAY! Hopefully it speeds on over! lol
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays; the latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak!
My computer is having issues at the moment, but I don't anticipate any delays for Friday! I normally respond to reviews on Monday afternoons, but said computer issues kept me from it until today!
Hope you enjoy the teasers!
XoXo Shel
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The pair got lost in each other's eyes until they were interrupted by the pounding of feet on steps.
Jack skidded to a halt in the hallway at the top of the stairs. He looked between his parents curiously, not quite sure what to make of them standing so close to each other. He walked over to his mother's side and looked up at his father.
"Is everything okay here, Mom?" he asked Bella, while never taking his eyes off of Edward.
Bella suppressed a giggle at Jack's attempt at bravado. She placed a hand on her son's shoulder, which caused him to look up at her. She smiled at him and nodded.
"Everything is just fine, Jack. We were just about to head outside."
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
HAHAHA. Uh-oh Bella, Jasper is there and he ain't happy witth you.... lol! ;D
DEFINITELY can't wait for the next chapter now, love the story and this chapter was just amazing! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak! PLease come join us for the Twitter #readalong on Friday at 8:00 pm, CST! Directions are up on the Blog! Don't hesitate because you've never done one before, neither have I, but I'm going to be there! I'll be happy to answer any questions or if anyone needs anything clarified!
Love you guys! See you all on Friday with Chapter 15!
XoXo
Shel
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Bella sat down next to Edward on one of the front porch swings. She turned and leaned her back against the side, pulling her right leg up and underneath of her. He turned his head slightly and smirked at her.
"How does it feel to be an old man?" she asked, trying to hide her smile.
He smiled widely and shook his head. "I'm not old."
Bella laughed and shook her head. She noticed that his smile fell as he stared off into the sunset. She nudged him with her foot and he turned to give her a small, sad smile.
"In my mind, I feel like I'm still 22," he sighed. "I haven't really celebrated a birthday in almost five years."
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
*happy sigh* I love this fic. It's just so damn cute!!! :D
I'm too tired to be appropriate Veruca demanding, but I must tell you once again that I canNOT wait for an update! and this one was EARLY!!! :D:D:D:D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
XoXo
Shel
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Hahaha... poor Edward just doesn't realize what he's gotten into, does he? ;)
AND OH NO JAKE IS OUT OF JAIL?! D:< No fair!!!
Can't wait for next week's chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.
Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!
<3 Shel
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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.
"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."
Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.
"What is your problem?"
"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.
"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
I feel like dramatic "dun dun dunnnn!" music should be playing at the end there. lol. ><
Very good chapter, I love all of it, the interactions between all of them, the sweet cute moments between Bella and Edward...! XD
Can't wait for more next Friday!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Hmm... okay, I like Marcus. ;)
Great chapter, I love the Bella/Edward moments!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like!
Just a silly little note, I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is a ton of fun and very cool. Check it out if you get the chance!
<3 Shel
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Esme's eyes turned hard and her lips formed a frown.
"Well, then, I guess there's nothing left to say, is there?" She said in a cold voice.
"Esme, please. I'm not trying to hurt you," Bella replied softly. She had expected this reaction, but it still stung.
"It's a little too late for that now, Bella." Esme stood from her spot behind her desk and silently left the room.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! FINALLY EDWARD! Lol.
I love this fic, can't wait for more!!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
LOL!!! Love Tanya haha. And Edward's remark about Bella and people showing up randomly. XD Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!
<3
Shel
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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit."
"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.
"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
*GASP* WHAT IS THE VILE MOTHERMARE (Haha, I got that nickname from a book series, Black Dagger Brotherhood. It's a combo of mother and nightmare!!! LOLOL) DOING AT THE EVENT AND CAUSING OUR POOR SWEET JACK DISTRESS?!
Thanks for the early update! When does the March for Dimes thing end? I'm a little tight on money this month, but I would just LOVE to give a little.
More soon please!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
Tanya smirked and nodded. "He's the only one of us who can legally shoot someone, remember?" <Bwahahaha! GOTTA LOVE TANYA! LOLOL.
"Oh, Bella... that would make for a very dull Tanya, and we all know that the last thing that I will be called is dull." She shot her wink and left Bella giggling slightly. <Heeheehee! XD
Can't wait for more!!! :D And I pray that Victoria gets all that's coming to her, and that it involves lots of pain and maybe torture. ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
Loved the chapter, I love the interactions between everyone. You keep the focus on the main members without totally ignoring the side characters. I applaud your balance!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?
I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.
"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.
"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"
Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."
The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.
"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"
"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!
That is all I have to say.
Oh, except that I DO think Victoria should get some pretty legit karma-justice. Like, being thrown in a loony bin or getting her hair burned off of her head or... something.
XD
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
*wolf whistle* DAAAAAAAMN, Edward, smooth move! I can think of a few things too! *wink wink!*
I am thankful for this amazing story with regular updates and a great author! ;)
Can't wait for more! Have a great Thanksgiving!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!
Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"
Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully. She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.
"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.
She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?
Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
Awww! So mushy sweet! I LOVE IT!!! :D Can't wait for more I soooo adore this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!
Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!
♥ Shel ♥
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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.
"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.
"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.
"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."
He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."
Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.
"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."
"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"
"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
*whimpers* Why are you tormenting me? Drama returns next chapter? Will DEFINITELY want a peice of the review reply teaser? IT HAS TO DO WITH STICKIN' JAMES AND BELLA'S BAD FEELING DOESN'T IT?! I swear if they mess with Jack, I will find a way to bust into your story and SMACK SOME B*TCHES. lololol.... I am so dramatic.
Loved the chapter so sweet and I love the ending with Tanya asking who was going to tell Alice. That was hilarious.
Can't wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Jamesssssss you in trouble nooooowwwwwwwwww!!! *evil grin* Edward's gonna KILL you!
Good chapter, I can't wait for next Friday and holy guacamole, I didn't realize Christmas Eve was so close! Yikes! Shows how much I pay attention... lol!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)
I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*
Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.
♥ Shel ♥
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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.
"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."
Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.
"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."
"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.
Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
Eh. I kinda feel sorry for Victoria, but I can't rustle up much sympathy, lolol.
Good chapter, happy holidays! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!
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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."
She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."
The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"
Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.
"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.
Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
Oooh, that song sounds pretty I'll have to check it out!
Can't wait for more, I had to bribe my sister to let me on the computer to read this before I headed to bed. (This is why it sucks coming home for break; at least at the dorms I have internet on my laptop!!! LOL)
Love this story soooo much, hate to think it'll be over soon. :( But it's just wonderful, I adore it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
AWWWWWWWWWW!!!! I think - in the history of fanfic proposals - this one is my favorite. I've read a lot of them, hahaha, but I just ADORE this one.
Maybe because I adore this story and the characters soooo much! It's sad to think it's ending soon, but I will somehow live... and reread it a bazillion times....
I can't wait for next week's Friday and the update! Amazing job with this story!
(*Grumbles* That rating buttons needs to go higher than 10....)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
I just ADORE this story, I'll be so sad to see it end, but at least I can always come back and reread it!!! :D :D :D
And the mention of a "next project" kinda helps. ;) Not gonna lie, I am still a Veruca Salt till the end!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
*wipes away a happy/sad tear* These moments of ending something so great are always bittersweet. I love and hate them, lol.
I have to tell you - I think one of the SWEETEST moments I've ever experienced personally was when my nephew first met and held his baby sister. He's ten, and his dad isn't his biological dad (who was - to put it in the most fitting and simplest terms - and ass), but he doesn't see it that way. Anyhow, he was at our house for the night, and then the next morning we all went to see the little newborn. Well, Justin just kept staring and smiling vaguely, and touching her hand or her arm or her leg. And him HOLDING her... *AW face* He kept staring and talking to her realllllly quietly and was sooo careful. IT. WAS. ADORABLE.
That's kind of how I imaginged Jack being. :) Justin had the same reaction about boys, too - he said "She's never going to have a boyfriend. Ever." XD (Also, he wouldn't let me or my little sister hold HIS little sister, and when he let me finally hold her, he was RIGHT THERE telling me EXACTLY what I had to do. Like I've never held a baby before. lol)
I just love this story, and I cannot wait to read the outtakes to come, and I will mostly likely follow you - it's not stalking... noooo, not at all.... - to your next fic. ;D
Oh. Almost forgot - best line EVER: "No, dear, I mean that your spawn is attempting to claw its way out of my hoohah."
I died laughing. XDAuthor's Response:
{Thanks so much for sharing your personal experience with me!! Sucha cute story, bb!}
Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
What are the chances of meeting your soulmate? What if you meet them at the age of 4? Edward and Bella have known each other since kindergarten. A fateful late night call opens their eyes to potentials they never thought of. AU, B/E, A/J, R/Em. Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62958 Read Count: 27936
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Sign
Sometimes, I think Edward plans this stuff. ‘Let’s make Bella really horny today…hmm, how to achieve that? Oh, I know! I’ll just wear no shirt!’ Edward would totally do something like that. < BEST. LINE(s). EVER. I almost died of laughter. *chuckles* I sooo had to repeat the "i know, I'll wear no shirt" part out loud to myself.
Several times.
And reaaaaal nice opening question there, Edward. The insant you're in her house, ask if she's attracked to you. Nice. Real nice.
She can't run! Mwahahaha!
lol
Loved it, can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
He trapped her! He got her into her house, closed the door, and then he just POUNCED! You can't run! You can't hide! FROM EDWARD!
The shirt thing was priceless. When my best friend read it she had the same reaction as you did! But seriously, can't you just picture Edward standing in his bedroom, thinking to himself "hmmm, what can I do to make her horny?" and then having the lightbulb moment and taking off his shirt!
Thank you so much for the review!
KatieJane4815
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Crush
PSHT, who WOULDN'T like being in his mind? *waggles brows and grins* LOL.
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I LOOOOOVEE being in his mind :) It's just an awesome place to hang out, maybe drink a little, maybe take off Edward's shirt a little bit...
I hope to update sometime tonight or tomorrow, probably tonight though!
Thanks,
KatieJane4815
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Use Somebody
If I were Edward, I'd get Rose to kick Angela's ass anyway. Just sayin'. ;) But then... I'm a rather vicious when properly provoked. Takes a bit to provoke me in the first place, but once it happens... oooh, boy, watch out! LOLOL!!
I am incredibly curious about the whole Alice issue, can't wait for that to come to light.
Loved the chapter, Bella better not doubt herself into trouble or I will jump into the computer, into this story, and give her a smack upside the head to make Gibbs proud (I'm a NCIS nutt. Heh...).
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
LOL, I'm pretty vicious when properly provoked as well :)
The Alice issue comes to light eventually, of course, a few chapters away still lol
Well, I've never watched an episode of NCIS (sorry) but I think I can understand what you mean ;)
Thanks so much for the review! I'm uploading two new chapters right now!
KatieJane4815
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Cooties
Haha, hard to tell if she's sorry there or not. ;) Because I like Alice in general I'll give her the benefit of the doubt....
At least until next chapter. ;D
Author's Response:
LOL, conditional benefit of the doubt...I like it!
Thanks for the review!
KatieJane4815
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Appeler
Okay... it IS rather stupid of Alice, but at least she basically acknowledges her hate as stupid. ;) So I forgive her too! LOLOL!
'The fact that I was thinking about him so much that I had noticed when he wasn’t in my dreams was a bit too pathetic for the Bella I used to know.' <That statement cracked me up. As well as Edward's remark about not wanting to kill the prostitute in a video game, lol! Call me lame, but I've only played a video game... TWICE. Yes, I know. First time was when I was stuck at my older sister's house and my little sis and nephew were off doing something without me, so her husband set up a LotR video game for me to play. I never got out of freakin' Hobbiton, btw.... Second time was just two weeks ago, though. My nephew asked me to play COD with him, so I was all "JUSTIN I DON'T KNOW HOW!" D: And he was all "It's okay, I'll go easy on you!" Then I killed him and he got upset and didn't go easy on me. Killed me, but then I killed him again. And again. And again.... He demands a rematch, heehee! ;D
Can't wait for more! Love the story!!!
Author's Response:
My son is addicted to video games, and I'm sad to say that sometimes I play them with him lol. I'm pretty good at Grand Theft Auto...
Thanks so much for the review!
KatieJane4815
Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71713
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
So I found your fic tonight - I was just browsing a bit not expecting to find anything new and interesting before I went to bed, but your summary intrigued me (and I've recently become a sucker for Peter/Bella fics if they're done right) and wala! You now have yourself a new, devoted, slightly obsessive and insane reader! ;D
Trust me on that... I got two honorable mentions in the people awards and one was for inappropriate love (which I insist isn't really... yeah, okay, even I can't lie about that one being true, lolol!)
Anyhow! I ADORE this fic. I love how you've written Peter, and Garrett (I've always loved Garrett, lol), and you're Bella is definitely likable. Her kickassness and sarcasm make my sarcastic mind happy.
I can't wait for an update and I just have to say again that I love love love love Looooooove your story!!! ;)
Thanks for writing something so awesome!
~IG
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am blown away by how many people are responding to my story and the response is amazing. I really appriciate all the positive feedback. You guys seriously keep me motivated to continue writing.
Feel free to show all the inappropriate love you want. I'm not scared! :)