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A Saucy Tale by Deirdre Gold Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Fleeing the Terror in Paris, 1793, Marianne meets Guy Mansell In Edinburgh. She is too quick to trust this charming, and oh so handsome, man who seems to hold the answer to her prayers. He is playing a double game but his deepening and powerful attraction to this lovely woman makes him question his long held beliefs. She is swept up in a new and glorious passion but he holds a secret which may destroy her trust forever.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Historical, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15737 Read Count: 305
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2012
Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ah when virginity actually meant something other than a sharp pain and a bloodspot on the sheet.nice story

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923104
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 75

happy couple

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

alice is teasing jasper alot

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

edwards so considerate

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

how nice

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

what a teaser

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

that made a dildo sound bad

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

alice wants sex

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

bella and edward were hot

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

alice is sweet



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing each chapter!

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

bella deserves foreplay

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

glad victoria got off,but james will probably punish her for it

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

yay revenge

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

the breast pump seems painful

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

old mcdonald should be hiding from james

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

not the reaction to proposing a man wants

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

its wierd to have people watching

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

bella got ass raped

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

poor bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

ah a nice moment

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

jealousy

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

would it make a difference if bella knew it was a porn she was hearing

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

is rosalie ever not stuck up

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

what medacine was she on again?

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

bellas been kidnapped?

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow edward refusing a blow job really

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

bella elizabeth ok. edwards being forced

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

kind of freaky

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

both of them are captives

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

a very wierd family

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

those lessons sound painful

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

poor edward and bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

so is alice brainwashed into being a child?

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

tanya is very determined to give head

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

so rosalie was a virgin, bella currently is a virgin what does that make alice

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

feel sorry for tonya foreplay is important

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

what the hell was she lactating?

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ew on the cum splatter and ouch on the nipple clamps.

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

im glad edward was a gentleman and didnt try to hurt tonya dry sex isnt fun

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

a lose lose situation

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i like giving head but that scene wasnt a turn on

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

a bad place to have a period at

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

jasper is a good guy

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

tanya finally got off

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

edwards a buzz kill just like in breaking dawn

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

very gory

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

eek

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

that was messed up

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

i dont like james

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

that was sweet

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

so james is bi

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

how sweet

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

i like it when they make love

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

yay demented grandpa

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

alice is the same age as me

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

poor bree

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

they need to leave

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

yay their escaping

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 63: The Second Elizabeth Part 1

brainwashing

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Second Elizabeth Ch 2

i hate aro

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3

elizabeth could be in trouble

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Second Elizabeth part 4

how horrible

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 67: The Second Elizabeth Part 5

uh oh

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 68: The Second Elizabeth Part 6

no

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 69: The Second Elizabeth Part 7

daring escapes

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 70: The Second Elizabeth Part 8

yay

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 71: The Second Elizabeth Epilogue

bella is the 4th elizabeth

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 72: The Second Elizabeth Interview

nice

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 63 (back to IR)

this is gonna be awkward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

bellas ok

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

does she have depression or is anna pregnant

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

good little climber

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

interesting vibrater

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

divorce coming?



Author's Response:

No divorce. Never. A few bumps in the road, but a HEA story. 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

chrisian screwed up

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

way to be firm with christian

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

space can be a good thing

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hidden subs

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

phone submission?

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

the relationship isnt looking good

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

christian is a steam roller

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

christian is in the icu. ana must feel terrible

 

 

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

cool christians alive

 

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

must restock happy pills

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

complicated couple

Summary: Past Featured Story

chemistry

banner made by: ME !!

Bella is in her senior year of high school.  She hated all science until she met Mr. Cullen, her biology teacher.  He is older, she is just 18. Will their chemistry last past the doors of the classroom?

This a B/E story line

I should have been patient and waited for my Beta  she is great !!

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This has been Beta'd by RAH07890


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14159 Read Count: 54576
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

nice scene

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

vampire couples

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

go bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

yay vamp edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

foot in mouth moment

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

sticky fun

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

naughty bella

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

an alice sleepover

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

poor teased edward

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

curious little student

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

ok mr.cullen

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

phone manuals always suck

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ah jasper always wanted calm and alice was a spaz

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wow free phone

Reviewer: barbiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

happy edward