Reviews by li-spar1
Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76224
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

The whole story was great except for the ending where he is lieing to her. It makes their whole immortal relationship a lie in my opion. Other than that it was a wonderful story!! 

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would love to read more. Please let me know if you continue it



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed, no plans to expand at this time, will definitely let you know if i do! thanks again for reading

Citrus Dreams by ash_golden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella has a fun time reading while waiting on Edward to come back from his hunt. LEMONY. Vamps. OOC. All canon. Please review!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7998 Read Count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Would love to see this as a story

Summary:

Bella goes out for a girl's night out and ends up having a one night stand.

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Thank you to mkystich for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2526 Read Count: 1136
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 09 May 2010
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 03 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG no you can't leave it there. I need to know more. Such a good story so far.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420645
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.

Loved it!! I laughed so hard during parts of it. Can't wait to read more

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Post Coital

So he's a manwhore

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

Really good story!! Now I'm going to check out if you have more

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great story. Please update soon

Summary:

Getting the Hell Out of Dodge

Banner by LunarEclipse1

Immediately following the battle with Victoria's newborns, Bella learns that the Cullens were using her in a most malicious way.  With the Volturi wanting her to be dead or changed, time is ticking for poor Bella.  Will someone get her the hell out of Dodge?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9423 Read Count: 3767
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good story!

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Say Goodbye Banner by FrozenSoldier

Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27182
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 May 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Sweet

Wow way to go Jasper and what a bitch Alice is after what Bella did for her letting Jasper go.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 May 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy

Bella's just too damn selfless. Who cares if Alice loved him if he was with Bella. Alice could have jus found herself someone else.

Summary:

 

Best Bella Banner

Summary: Bella is tired of Edward's flirtatious ways. She tries to forget him by dating another man, but it doesn't work out as planned. Heated words lead to passion. Is it the end for these two?    

Winner of Best Bella in the Friday Night Bites Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8057 Read Count: 1307
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 20 Jan 2012
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This would make a wonderful full story! You did very well on it and I really enjoyed reading it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Omg I laughed so hard

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 69589
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG loved this 

Deeper Discord by ifyouweremine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

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Edward is a boxer with a dark past and secrets. When his best friend's little sister moves in, he finds himself in the biggest brawl of his life. A story of love and sacrifice and fighting for what matters most. AH/OOC


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37761 Read Count: 15859
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 24 Oct 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I think they need to sit down and have a discussion about what they both want out of the relationship and where they are together in the relationship. Loving this story so far.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Next chapter is EPOV and will will gain answers. 

Summary:

Drabble fic - Bella's life was ordinary until a package came and opened old wounds she thought were long since healed over. She thought wrong...

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4579 Read Count: 20769
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Outtake 1

Great story!! Wish I knew what happened those 2 yrs and what happens now.

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 790]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167444
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17

Good story so far. He seems remorseful but there's no way I could take him back as more than a friend after he slept with all those girls after her. I'd just keep remembering them everytime we got close. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good story just wish it was finished. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Izzy's a successful woman in her own right. She's also a Hollywood heiress whose life gets flipped upside down as a result of an unfortunate event. Tired of the paparazzi, she flees from the limelight in search of who she is on her own. Sometimes you have to leave the world of make believe behind to find a snowmobiling prince you never knew you needed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79271 Read Count: 44106
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Happy Endings

Really really good story!! You did an amazing job with it and was a great pleasure to read

My Pereche by ggf83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Since the days when the Romanian Coven ruled the vampire world, Sufletul Pereche was a common vampire myth -- a vampire fairy tale.

When Jasper's own Pereche moves to Forks, he is torn. He already has a mate he loves, but how can you stay away from the other half of your soul?

How can he give up Alice to be with Bella, and how can he protect Bella from his brother who thirsts for her blood?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59848 Read Count: 20727
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I can't believe how quickly she got over the fact he was married and didn't even tell her before he took her virginity. If she were told she may not have went through with it. She believed she was his one and only but she wasn't. It seems Bella is always way to forgiving. The rest of the story I really enjoyed though. It has been really well written.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

So happy there's finally a story where Alice doesn't get away with everything. Glad Bella stood up to her.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

So happy there's finally a story where Alice doesn't get away with everything. Glad Bella stood up to her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478597
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Okay I did not see that coming!! I am so so ready for the next chapter. Please post soon cause I am so addicted to this story

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Such a good chapter!! I can't wait to read more. You guys are awesome!!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love this story so much!!! Can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I look forward to seeing the updates on this story everyday. You don't find a ton of good mobward stories and this is truly a great one. Can't wait for the next chapter so we can find out more.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love that she is letting him in. As always great chapter and can't wait for more

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The next chapter should be really good since its the talk one. I am so looking forward to reading it. Such an awesome story and I'm loving the daily updates

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think Guido is Dora. This story just keeps getting better and 2 updates within one day is awesome!! Can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh wow so she is Esme's goddaughter. This just keeps getting better can't wait to read more!! Jasper is starting to get annoying with the whole Bella thing.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Please tell me the fighting will be soon. Oh and does Bella carry a gun and if not why not since she seems to know as much as they do. Can't wait for the next chapter. This is one of the very best mobward stories out right now.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think he's an ass but I think a lot of men would have reacted the same way being that worked up. Poor Bella having her night ruined for her. I think Chaos is part of her security for the house and is a computer program she has. I think tomorrow should be a double post day since it's my 16th anniversary lol

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love this story. I am so glad she is opening up to him finally and so glad they admitted their feelings. I cant wait for the next chapter and really hope its today so we can see what happens. And wow Bella is freakishly smart. Please please pretty please update today!!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ha ha love how she put Emmett down. Wonder what Sasha does next. Can't wait for the next chapter and the talk

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh boy hope they get them soon. Can't wait to see what happens when he meets Ms Honey and Guido. This I'd by far the best story I have read in awhile

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This just keeps getting better!! I really hope you post again I am dying to know what Stark has to say along with Jasper. The older with Black sounds an awful lot like Dora's description to me

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 02 May 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

 

I am so glad Edward is not letting them push him around now and Bella is going to make a great addition to their team. Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm thinking either the twins are like her or are really hers which would be cool.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Great chapter as always. It has to be strange to know that the children you love as your own are really your siblings and your soon to be husband has children with your mother even if they didnt have sex to make them.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Loved this story and can not wait to read more from you!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good first chapter!! Can't wait to read more

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter and a few questions answered. Can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It sounds like their father might be abusing them. I'm really not liming Rose in this one. Is there going to be a Bella's POV?

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter!! Can't wait to see what happened between her and Esme. I wonder if she told her they were coming to live with them instead of Edward.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'd say another one of Bella's problems is she feels abandoned. I mean she likes the ranch and gets into a routine and them Edward ships her off to his parents. It seems everyone she cares about leaves her. Really good story as always

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Thanksgiving

I understand that Edward doesn't want to burden Bella with alot of decisions, but she should be the one in charge of her son's trust not Jasper. He has nothing to do with her child and should not get to make decisions about what's best for that child. Also she should have the final say in what would happen if anything happened to Edward. Is he going to change this will once they are married? I'd sure hope so. I'd be hurt if I knew my husband put someone above me to have the final say in decisions like this. Great story just my thoughts on this one chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thank you very much for reading and sharing your thoughts. All the precautions Edward is taking are to protecct Bella from his parents contesting his will in the event that something should happen to him, If Bella were to be the trustee, they could argue she somehow coerced him into getting his money. The living will is basically the same. Edward doesn't want the weight of having to decide to withdraw care from him in the event of an accident on Bella's shoulders, but he also doesn't want an opening for his parents to accuse her of doing so to gain some sort of advantage by letting him die. They might change some of those legal arrangements after they get married, but it wouldn't be the worst thing if he didn't. Many people make arrangements like that for many reasons.

I hope you'll like the rest of the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

CITF_Chandra

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Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Loved it!! So sweet at the end

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Great chapter. I really hope she lets him stay

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

The story just keeps getting better

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

Good chapter but hurry back we want to know what happens

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Him I'm betting the friend was Edwards grandfather and the temp CEO is Tanya. Loving reading this story

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good so far!!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loving the new story. What's your updating schedule for this one?

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm really loving this story and can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Tanya gets what she deserves soon

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That was so hard to read. I wanted to beat him in the book too when he thought he could make all the decisions. Thursday can't come soon enough to see what happens next

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm glad you guys aren't changing anything. It might be hard to read at times but it is your story. I have enjoyed reading all them and look forward to the next chapter. 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh poor Bella!! I can't wait for them to be back together again.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter and I'm glad Bella had them there

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think she will give him a chance because they were so good together before the Tanya stuff. 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved it. They really need to go slow and work things out. Can't wait for the next chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella doesn't have the break down everyone expects,   instead she gives Charlie a story that puts her in a bind and ends up happier then she ever thought she could be.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26144 Read Count: 20832
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2014 Updated: 24 Sep 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Such a good story. I really hope you will complete this.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ummm does he not realize she isn’t a child anymore? I’d go ahead and graduate early and leave! Good story so far.

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake 1

I really hope you update soon so we can see what happens. 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good chapter and glad she put her in her place.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved this chapter! So glad she got rid of Jacob and not just let it slide and.take him back. Oh and I would love to see a sneak peak

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loving this story

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think Rose is just a bitch since she only thinks of herself. Great chapter can't wait for more.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Authors note

can't wait for more. I am really enjoying the story.

 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 17 May 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Outtake 1

Such a good story. I really wish it was finished.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113792
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 12 part 6

So glad he's not going in the room with the witch. Now to just him with Bella.



Author's Response:

I wish they could just be together now... but where is the fun in that????

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 5 (part 5)

Loving this story can't wait to read more

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

They seem to be getting closer.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

God she's even more evil than I thought!! 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Awww I'm glad they're getting closer. I just hope he doesn't go back in that room with Tanya. Its a big house there are other bedrooms.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Oh thank god he wasn't in the room with her.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 26 May 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

SO excited for the update. Hehe I bet megatwit goes off for that comment. I really hope she doesn't stay long.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

I hope Bella has other things to do and can't make it to the photo shoot. Let Tanya screw herself over with not knowing what she's doing with him. The evil wench really needs to go. She doesn't care for anyone but herself.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 7 Part 6

Looks like Edward likes the idea of no Jacob!! Such a great story

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Oh joy the evil winch is back can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

Uhhh I can tell I'm not going to like Tanya at all in this one. 

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 11 Part 6

Yes Edward get rid of queen bitch!!!

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

I'm glad he ended it but I wonder what Bella has to say when he gets there and I wonder how Charlie is now

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 15 Part 6

I love this story. I just hope he doesn't ruin everything with Bella on his outing with Tanya cause you know if he sleeps with Tanya then Bella won't forgive him for it. I like the daily posts for the story.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

Good chapter!! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Ohhhh boy Rose is in Tanya's house. I wonder what happens next

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 16 Part 2

Can't Edward see Tanya isn't a real mother. I mean come on she's not even there when he's sick. I hope Edward cancels the date and when Tanya shows her true colors he sends her packing. Can't wait to see the next update.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 16 Part 4

Oh boy the evil twit strikes again. She knew he was sick but went anyway. I really hope Edward isn't going with her now.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 16 Part 3

Stupid Edward! I hope she gives him hell for not saying anything and Tanya just loved getting to tell her I'm sure.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 16 Part 5

Oh poor Charlie!! I hope Edward kicks her to the curb right in the middle of the photo shoot. Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Oh please let them use the different pictures to show what a horrible mother Tanya is. I hope Edward gives her the boot now but I have a horrible feeling she's going to go after Bella now.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

Edward has got to be the dumbest person ever. I hope he looses Bella completely for this stunt. Uhhh how can he still go to the hotel after all she did.

Dissident by hellawhitlock Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Catching her eyes across the crowded cafeteria, I couldn't help thinking back to where we had been several hours earlier. Her beneath me calling out my name with such a breathy moan... I gave her a lopsided grin, it growing wider as I could see her blush spreading across her cheeks. She looked away quickly and back up at her boyfriend. My step-brother. AH. JxB


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8772 Read Count: 2897
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Jan 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 30 May 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Left Alone

Please update! Sounds good so far.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Left Alone

Really good start and would love to know what happens.

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved this story

Summary:

 

Banner by: Caiteexx Graphics

Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126007
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella he takes her virginity and then abandons her. Edward has a long way to go to redeem himself after that one.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Really good chapter. I really don't think Edward and Tia are right for each other so please please don't let them have sex. It would break Bella's heart since I don't think her and Emmett are really together.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm really thinking Rose and Emmett have something going with her looking hurt. They just all need to sort stuff out so no one gets hurt.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh I really hope it was real.

Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh wow he finally knows!! I really hope they talk and figure things out soon. Emmett needs to come clean too. You guys made my day since I am sitting in the hospital after having to have an unexpected caesarian with baby number 8. I was so happy to see he now knows about Bella. Great story as usual.

Guns and Pies by acullengirl40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella a bakery owner in a small mountain town where she grew up has sworn off men as most of the men she comes in contact with every day are tourists, until one day a sexy bearded man walks into her bakery wearing camo. Will he end up being her prince charming or will another summer tourist win her heart.

Edward an Ex Army sharp shooter is sick of his current situation with his demanding vegan girlfriend. He is on the verge of breaking up with the green monster as he likes to call her. Will walking though Bella's bakery door make him see that he needs more sweetness in his life and finaly cut his girlfriend lose or will he keep her around out of fear of being alone

Will these two let their hearts finally decide their path in life or will they both let fear drive their hearts away from what they both need, each other.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44255 Read Count: 20430
[Report This] Published: 01 Aug 2015 Updated: 09 Sep 2017
Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Cheaters never Prosper

Great chapter and glad Tanya's gone.