Reviews by hannaha11104
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373182
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

That was such a beautiful story. There were parts that made me laugh, cry and angry at certain characters! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story! I was so happy he was there waiting for her when she passed it made me cry harder because it made me happy!! I can't wait to start on more of your stories on here or on fanfiction!

Melissa

Remember Me by NoelleSeven Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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One love.  One destiny.  Can you change what's meant to be?  AU/OOC NOT related to Rob Pattinson's movie of the same name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126600 Read Count: 8254
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

So beautiful!! I cried at so many different parts but I love that they finally got their HEA!! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story!!

Melissa

Ruthless and Ivory by MujerN Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 169]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is infamous. Everyone knows about the terrorizing murderer who leaves behind bloody scenes and corpses at night while the city sleeps. Bella, a journalist, investigates and finds her fear turning dangerously into love.

–Ruthless and Ivory
The full story to the Red Ribbon assassin. Finalist to Tattward and Inkella Contest




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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251248 Read Count: 40649
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Sunset

Goodness reread this again and its still just as excellent as the first time I read it. I still absolutely love this story, so great and heartbreaking at times but also uplifting at others and the love they have for each other is so bright and awe inspiring the way you wrote it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful awesome story with all of us!!

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

Oh my goodness that was one of the absolute best stories I've read in a very long time, it had everything, it pulled you in and the good ones always do that. It made me cry, it made me happy, it made me sad and at certain times it made me angry at the characters but that's the tell of a good author and an awesome story when it sucks you in and u can't stop reading. Thank you so much for putting this story out there I loved EPOV and I wished there were more of them, telling his side from the beginning through the end. I would have loved both POV through the story but even if there's never out takes of EPOV from certain parts of the story like the beginning and when he thought bella was dead and found out she wasn't, it's still a great story without the extra EPOV I guess it's just me wanting to see exactly how he was felling during those times especially when he said he loved her ever since the first time he killed for her. Anyway I'm babbling I just wanted to let you know what a wonderful story u wrote and I know I will read it again some day. Only the exceptional awesome stories are the ones I reread and yours is definetly one of them. Thanks!!

melissa

Summary:

All Human.
Bella's last words to her mother were words of hate. Now, three years later, December is the worst time of year for her. Still struggling with guilt, she tries to drown her sorrow in a one-night stand with a stranger whose name she doesn't know.
Who knew that this stranger would be the one to make December, once again, her favorite time of year.
Warning: Loads of fluffiness.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19089 Read Count: 3894
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2011 Updated: 24 Sep 2011
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

such a beautiful story. i wish it had been longer but i am so glad i finally read it. thank you for sharing such a wonderful story.

 

Melissa

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218311
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

That was such a beautiful story, I laughed and cried through 

most of the story. You are such a great writer, thank you 

for sharing this story with everyone! 

Melissa

Summary:

 

Sequel to ‘Virgins & Villains’ and ‘Love Rescue Me’. Follow Edward, Bella and the rest of the family as they survive pregnancy, childbirth and anything else that life throws at them. Alternates between BPOV and EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52678 Read Count: 14112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2012 Updated: 23 Oct 2012
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Fun Houses & Gossip Rags

I absolutely live this story and the one before it I hope you will continue it and finish it I would love to know what happens to this beautiful couple! Thank you so much for sharing this, they are both now at the top of my favorite stories.

Melissa

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

What a beautiful story! That story is definetly at the top of my list as favorite stories! Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story!!

melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324370
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

I'm up to chapter 19 but I'm finding I don't want to go any further until it's finished and it's not because it's not good because it is such an awesome story I just don't want to get to chapter 35 and wait until the next chapter comes. I want to wait till it's finished and then read all the way through again until the end. I hope the ending is coming soon because I'm anxious for the end so I can read it all the way through. You are a great writer and can't wait to read this to the end!!

 

melissa 

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Ripples

I absolutely love this story, all your stories are great but this one has everything. Can't wait to see where the rest of the story goes, thank you for sharing all your awesome stories!!

melissa

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85675 Read Count: 43885
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Epiloge

Such a great story! I absolutely loved it, so many stories I can only get a few chapters in before I change stories but yours had me constantly hitting next, for the next chapter! Thank you for sharing such a great story!!

melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Six years ago he tore her apart, broke her. Bella's a new, take charge woman now. What will happen when Edward walks into her conference room, and back into her life, as her new client? Drabble fic, short chapter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 72 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12906 Read Count: 146077
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Such a beautiful story and so sad at some parts but it had such a wonderful ending. Thank you for sharing this great story.

 

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

scsl

Izzy's a successful woman in her own right. She's also a Hollywood heiress whose life gets flipped upside down as a result of an unfortunate event. Tired of the paparazzi, she flees from the limelight in search of who she is on her own. Sometimes you have to leave the world of make believe behind to find a snowmobiling prince you never knew you needed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79271 Read Count: 44106
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Happy Endings

That was such a beautiful story they adopted twins like her parents had! It took me forever to finally read this story and I'm as I passed it up so many times I absolutely loved it and read it all in one day while doing stuff around the house! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story!!!

melissa 



Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm so glad you took the time to read it, but more importantly that you enjoyed it. 

It's people like you who make me smile and keep me wanting to write.

xx Dee

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334478
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Such a beautiful story I can't believe I didn't read it sooner! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review the chapter before. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter and apparently on the 2nd to last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review on the 1st chapter. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!

Melissa

A Thin Line by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

They say there's a thin line between love and hate, even between enemies like Bella and Edward. The problem was there was mostly hate. They can't decide if they'd rather kill the other or rip each other's clothes off. What they do realize is that they can't stay away?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25851 Read Count: 4233
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 12 Oct 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

that was such a great story, absolutely loved it.

 

Melissa

Summary:

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I should've listened to my wife, now I'm paying the price. She's really mad.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9022 Read Count: 2470
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was so hilarious and sweet, i know exactly what its like taking kids to the store since all 3 of my daughters are around 2 years apart so i know all the pouting and screaming for something they cant have and my youngest has the urge to run off down the isles for the next one often and since shes 6 now she cant fit in the cart and chasing after her is exausting so i usually have my oldest run after herwhich nowafter all that they do in the store i try and make sure we have enough of everything to last till the weekend when i can go to the store by myself when my, well soon to be ex husband is home so i guess the going to the store by myself wont last much longer. anyway the point i was getting to was that this was so funny and i can deffinetily relate expect for the part where my husband has to do the same thing and finally understands what im going through since he has never gone to the store for me. ok enough of my drama, thanks for sharing this great story. cant wait to read one of your others.

 

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

Such a beautiful, sexy, erotic at times and heartrenching at others but it was sooooo good and I'm mad at myself for not reading it sooner. I love all your stories!! Keep up the awesome work u do on your stories and I know I will absolutely keep reading them. I know all the feelings Bella felt through this story because I gave felt that way for the past for years with a husband that has ridiculed me, called me names and cheated on me which thankfully will be over soon since we've past the 60 day mark for a judge to grant a divorce now he just needs to agree with everything I'm asking for which is only half of everything we've accumulated while we've been married these past nine years and primary custody of our 3 girls but he's stalling even though if we go to court the judge will grant me what I want since Texas law states I get half of everything! Anyway sorry for rambling I just know what Bella was feeling since I could relate and I think she was an excellent character along with Edward he was so sweet and sexy and naughty! Thanks for sharing this incredible story!!!

Melissa

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

silence

Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

aww another extrodinary and beautiful story. I absolutely loved it. thank you for sharing all of your awesone story's with all of us. I wish the was an outtake of their future but endng it here is good also. I cant wait for the next story you write since I have read all of your stories and I have loved every single one of them!

 

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478599
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Such a beautiful and very intriguing story, very original and definetly one of my all time favorite stories now. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story and cant wait to read the outtakes!

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Still my absolute favorite mafia story, I'm not even sure how many times I've read it now but I like to come back every 5 or 6 months and read it again. Thank you for putting out all these wonderful stories that I just love to read.

Melissa

Buried by ericastwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary: Past Featured Story

buried

His reality was made of nightmares. Hers were plagued by them. Can she conquer her fears in time? Can he protect her?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72544 Read Count: 27017
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2014 Updated: 02 Jul 2014
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Wow, another awesome story and it is nothing like I've ever read which I love. Can't wait to see if there's another story of yours that I haven't read. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. 

 

Melissa

Summary:

 

Two lonely people, living in New York City, having dirty conversations via Tumblr. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19361 Read Count: 5125
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2014 Updated: 01 Dec 2020
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I say yes because I have a feeling it will be awesome!

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a paranormal investigator. Edward is being seduced by some frisky ghosts. Will Bella be able to help his situation? Or will she just add to the problem by seducing Edward too? This is sort of a crack-fic. Something silly or funny in every chapter, but with a good plot.

This story contains some sexual situations, violence and foul language, so if any of this offends you, please do not read. I do guarantee a lot of laughs along with it though.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72567 Read Count: 6339
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: One Year Later...

That was hilarious I could not stop laughing through the whole story. Absolutely loved it, thank you for sharing!!

Summary:

Bella decides to move in with Charlie, when she realizes that her mom is missing her husband Phil. Once Bella moves and settles in with Charlie on the first night she begins to have weird dreams of the supernatural and a goddess, telling her the stories of the supernatural. Council meetings, vampires, werewolves, witches, warlocks, and many more… The goddess leaves Bella a gift the night before she starts school. “Yeah, a council meeting, things changed Bells. Forks, isn’t the same anymore.” AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After, Supernatural, YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12393 Read Count: 2081
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Nov 2015
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow I do hope you are going to continue this story because what you have so far is really good and I would love to know what happens next!

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

top ten

Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601743
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i cant wait for the sequel, i usually dont like reading 3rd person POV but this was so well done thank you for sharing an excellent story.

Melissa

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

slt

 

In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Roundabout

Awe, he's finally getting it that he does Love Bella. A little slow on hte uptake but I'm sure he'll get there soon and hopefully so will Bella since she's the stubborn one who kept denying what they had all along, only took a little jealousy to get her there but thankfully she did get there now she just needs to realize she's In Love with him of course he needs to realize it also. On to the next chapter. By the way this is another awesome, beautiful and amazing story.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Epi - Speed Limit 70

Goodness that was such a beautiful story. I loved reading every part of it, the ups and downs and the exciting beautiful moments especially when they added to their family that was just great. Thank you for putting this story out there and letting us all read your wonderful creation.

Melissa



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much for reading my story and taking the time to stop in. I love it so much when someone who reads this as a complete fic, instead of a WIP, decides to chime in and let me know they truly enjoyed it. I think, at least for me, I always wander if it will read as well in one go as it did week by week so it is super extra special when someone takes the time to let me know they enjoyed it. It was definitely a roller coaster ride in many different ways, but as soon as our Bella and Edward realized that time and circumstance didn;t matter, they were able to come together and make the best family. Just what they needed to be before they faced Jake's hardest time. Thank you sooooo much for stopping in :)

Fyre

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99337
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Commitments

Aww yay I'm glad they are on the same page. Can't wait to read what happens next.

melissa



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177659
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - a little family drama

Wow a lot of things happened this chapter. I was so happy to see an email in my inbox telling me their was a new chapter. I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if it will be the rehearsals dinner with Jasper's proposal or just right onto the wedding and honeymoon. Can't wait.

Melissa 

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - no trucking way

Wow that was awesome, yay for kicking jacob's a**! He is such a prick, how he treats his wife, how he treats his mistresses, how he was stealing from someone who trusted and how he wanted to do human trafficking inside the USA is disgusting.mim glad Edward shot him several times but I think even with the rules he should have killed him because it will most likely come back and bite him in the tush. I can't wait to read the next chapter this is an awesome story! 

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - grateful for this absence

Oh wow Jacob is a real a-hole in this, poor Claire but at least she'd been smart about making sure her daughter would be taken care of and I think the missing money Jacob can't find is what Claire has been taking. Hopefully if Bella and Edward find out its Claire they'll help her rather than do something horrible. Another awesome chapter, getting to see into Jacobs head and to know exactly what he's planning, I hope Bella's the one to put that pig down! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - the dreaded rat

Holy crap that was a good chapter, I kept trying to read faster just so I could find out what happened. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - secrets

I think she’s going to be pissed if she finds out he knew the whole time that she was pregnant and he never told her, I can understand his protectiveness but secrets are never good in a marriage. Most of the time the secret comes out so I hope he’s prepared for that. Awesome chapter, can’t wait to read what happens next. 

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

TOTGA

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?

Banner by Clo Rodeffler

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196828 Read Count: 280777
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2016 Updated: 23 Jun 2017
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That dumb twit he's her godson and she didn't know he was allergic to peanuts, seriously and worrying more about getting her phone back and then his mom sent him with an expired epi-pen when she should have gotten a new one before the other expired goodness that's her sons life she was gambling with. Ok I'm ok now that would just drive me crazy especially when my youngest who was in the NICU after she was born came home with an apnea monitor because she would forget to breath every once in a while and it would alert me when it would happen and she had to wear it for quite a while and I had to constantly monitor all the things connected to it to make sure they were working properly it was a lot of work but I did it for my daughter because she means the world to me just like her 2 older sisters so I get a little testy when I read about things like this even though it is fiction it still makes me want to find those two fictional twits are shake some sense into them. Lol. Another great chapter can't wait to read the next one.

melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

aww he's so sweet. can't wait to read what happens next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my goodness she is a grade A B**** I can not believe she can't just leave Edward in piece to be happy, she is a miserable, horrible woman who shouldn't even try to call herself a mother to those kids, Bella shared more care asking after them and she hasn't even met them. I hope Tanya gets a big dose of Karma. Ok I'm done ranting. I loved that chapter, can't wait to read the next one.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I agree with Edward, the only reason Tanya got pregnant was to get Edward to marry her but she didn't even want the twins which is horrible you should never purposely get pregnant and on top of that you especially shouldn't do it when you never even wanted those kids that's just cruel to those innocent children. So I completely see where Edward is coming from. I know Bella means well but with a mother like that it would probably do more damange to those kids than help them because I can just imagine how she would treat them, I'm sure she would put on a show in front of everyone but her true colors would show when she's alone with those kids and they don't deserve that. Children should be cherished because they are a tremendous gift. Anyway that's just my opinion on the topic.

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aww they are adorable together I just wish one would choose to move and I'm not sure who it should be because Bella has the people who were horrible to her in school living in her hometown where Edward lives but her dad does live there and so do Edwards parents but then where Bella lives is like a fresh start for both of them away from all those they went to school with but it means moving his kids away from his parents and their friends so that's why I can't choose who should move. I do hope they figure it out because long distance relationships get hard and a lot of times you'll have misunderstandings that you can't talk out in person and the distance from them not being able to touch that person or wake up to them every morning gets tough. Love this chapter can't wait to read the next one. 

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Damn that was wow, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

melissa

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 22440
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

All I can say is wow, I really can't wait until the next chapter. I like reading about bad a** Bella's. And Edward is definitely jealous of each man he's met so far especially Garrett.

Melissa

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

six

Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 41062
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Melissa

Tagged by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

By nature, all male species want to mark their territories. It’s in their nature to try to keep their female safe and tag them as theirs. I wasn’t an exception … until her. She drove me crazy. She tagged me as hers. And in return, I gave her my heart. All human. Rated for adult themes.

 

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Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11334 Read Count: 15894
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2016 Updated: 07 Nov 2016
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds

Awwwww. That's my first thought at reading the last sentence.

Melissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Antique or Ikea, Beautiful inside or out, maim or kill, he had decisions to make today that would change his life.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 75 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 214108 Read Count: 157705
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2017 Updated: 27 Oct 2018
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was weird and interesting, so Mr Jarvis is a military man but they didn’t hurt quill which is weird but they had his devices so I could Kyle to trust any of them after they got ahold of them or his Range Rover. I don’t understand what the point of taking my quill was unless it was for his devices. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh my goodness that’s hilarious, he chokes on his drink because if something she said and they accuse her of hurting him. Poor Bella and Edward. Can’t wait to read what comes next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yay, go Bella!!

melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Damn Edwards mother is a royal b****, completely ignoring Bella. If I was Bella I would have been rude right back, his mother really is a complete snob. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

Melissa 

Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 146150
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I think maybe they took jimmy then blew up the swan dive, that just my guess. Another excellent chapter, can't wait to read what happens next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Another awesome chapter, I really can't wait to read what comes next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow that was quite a chapter and we got more info. They love each other, loving this story and I can't wait to read what happens next!

melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ugh Rosalie is a skank, I mean wow she has no shame and for Emmett, her own husband to see the photographic proof of her cheating, I feel so sorry for him because he truly loved her. I can't wait for the heat to turn up for Edward and Bella.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter, I love mobward stories.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Can't wait to read what happens next!

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow, this is such an awesome story. I have a feeling they are going to be going up against someone they know and wouldn’t suspect which might end up biting them in the butt. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

Melissa

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Awesome chapter!!

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Can’t wait to read what happens next, I absolutely love this story.

Melissa 

Summary:

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Earthquakes so rarely occur in the Pacific Northwest that the phenomenon causes the members of the Quileute tribe to investigate. They never would have expected to find her. She is stubborn, wild, and fiercely independent, and she willfully goes against everything they try to teach her. Especially when it comes to staying away from vampires. AU/Supernatural


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84901 Read Count: 40204
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2017 Updated: 30 Aug 2019
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Can’t wait to read the next chapter! I hope Charlie really thinks about what Edward said to him. Can’t wait to read what happens next!

Melissa



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate it! 

Summary:

MOTMFFF

Edward "The Boss" Cullen and his wife, Bella, survived hell and back. They are looking toward the future, which included a new path for the Cullen Consortium and impending parenthood. Edward and Bella are very excited for their new roles in their lives as Mommy and Daddy. 

 

In the wings, there's a new enemy waiting. A man determined to bring down the Consortium and specifically, Edward Cullen. He was going to stop at nothing to put "The Boss" behind bars for the rest of his life. He partners with an unlikely ally, a woman who wants what she deserved. What she is owed, by her only family. 

 

Will Edward, Bella and the family be able to move past this latest threat? One thing is for certain, they are Married to the Mob: Fighting for Freedom. 

 

Banner by Clo Rodeffer


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194528 Read Count: 41072
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2018 Updated: 07 Jul 2020
Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Love, love, love this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Melissa