Reviews by jmthorn
Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79426
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Please don't tell me that this is another story that Bella spends 99% of the time running from situations...ugh!!!!

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100857
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

I was wondering when this story was going to get good because I hated the fact that Bella didn't really have a voice so thanks for finally give her one in chapters 20 and 21...I anxiously await the next update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a teacher at San Bernardino High. What started as a class project slowly becomes something more. Edward is fighting in Afghanistan when he receives a letter that will change his life. What happens when love blooms through letters?

This story has over 800 reviews on FanFiction.net!

thanks to LissyLock for the beautiful banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39298 Read Count: 46990
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 23 Oct 2011
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

The story is okay it just sucks that Alice dies

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131 Epilogue

This was a really great story I love how you brought Charlie in to become a vamp

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He still watches her. She still plays the drums. They just do it together. Drummer Girl and Creeper learn to love, trust, and grow together.  Sequel/Continuation to "Watching Her". AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102600 Read Count: 17073
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2012 Updated: 05 Nov 2012
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is a very good story wow I laughed and cried and got aroused all in one story... Simply amazing work 

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Excellent story!

3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222234
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

This is a great story it had all the elements to create the perfect epic comic suspense and romance with a lot of erotica to spice it up. 

Summary:

Bella Swan is lonely and looking for an outlet. When she is out of commission she finds the answer to all her prayers, in the way of fan fiction. Follow Bella on her journey to become a writer, and see who she bumps into along the way.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32766 Read Count: 3976
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2013 Updated: 16 Sep 2013
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Revelations

Please update sooner...I am so enamored with this story!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285430
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

I must admit that I passed by this story several times and never really gave it much consideration. However after reading this I am totally enraptured and am anxiously awaiting the next update!!!! Great work! 



Author's Response:

this review warmed my heart so much.  thank you.  the first part of our lunch chapter 21 is up and i am working on chap 22 now.  

i hope you continue to enjoy it.

cheers, 

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281021
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't begin to explain how happy I am at the relationship between Edward and Levi! I'm so glad he knows who he is! Anxiously awaiting the next update! 

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I have no words... just WOW!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a divorced English teacher, who doesn't know she has a vampire in her class.

"Please don't push me away, Bella. Isn't it my choice if I want to be with you? I'm not a child in the way I feel."

"I'm not the older woman who's going to spend a season educating a teenage boy so he can go off and remember me fondly. I'm looking for forever."

"How do you know I couldn't..."

" Because you're a boy, Edward, a beautiful, sweet, confused, boy! You've got your whole life ahead of you. This kind of thing doesn't work out."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 83 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 453800 Read Count: 80995
[Report This] Published: 18 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 May 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 Ill Received

How is it that Alice didn't see this and Edward didn't hear their thoughts? 



Author's Response:

(Shaking fist)  Dang you Stephanie; you made them too stinking tough!  

Well... the story I'm going with, is that Alice's visions are never entirely reliable.  She sees best when there's a plan and a decision made.  Aro knows this, so he didn't plan, but crashed the reception spur-of-the-moment.  She did see there would be unexpected and unappreciative guests, so when Jacob, Leah, Tyler, and Mike showed up, she figured that was it.  She was also a bit preoccupied with all the wedding details.  She didn't foresee the attack, becasue there wasn't supposed to be any attack.  Aro is always looking for an advantage, and a chance to collect a powerful talent.  If he could break up the Cullen coven, and steal a couple talented children from Stregoni Benefici, then it's worth arriving uninvited.  

Edward was overwhelmed with all the guests at the wedding, plus he wasn't exactly on his guard, since they were out on the ocean.  The Volturi came aboard at the last stop, and were only planning to observe, until Bella stepped out in her wedding gown.  By the time Edward recognized the unfamiliar thoughts, it was too late.  Jacob probably smelled them, but because of all the Cullens, he didn't investigate right away.  

If that doesn't suit you, we could say they rowed up to the yacht in a dingy, and surprised everyone.  Thanks for the review.     

Summary: Past Featured Story


The Sequel to Swan Lakes Ranch. The Cullens are on the ranch and ready to help out. Bella comes to terms with her husband’s death, can she find a cure for her broken heart in Edward? Will Edward’s past haunt him? Will their relationship be ripped apart before it has a chance to grow? AH B/E M Romance/Drama

 

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Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, Stephanie Meyers does. However, I do own this plot and story-line.  I also own my own original characters.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, products, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of my story Swan Lakes Ranch. I would advise you read that story first as they go together and there are things you will not understand in LTLA without reading SLR. 

Also, if you are looking for a story full of lemons, this is not the story for you. 

I’m warning you now, there will be character deaths in this story.

Enjoy!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swan Lakes Ranch Series
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107330 Read Count: 40193
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2013 Updated: 16 Jul 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'

Finally! The feelings are out! Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Say Something by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Have you ever been hurt by words from the mouth of someone you loved? Have you ever wished you could be? This is a collection of moments of both, inspired by a song.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2400 Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2013 Updated: 11 Jan 2014
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Dying Meadow

I just want to comment on the song choice because I love that song and don't forget Christina Aguilera is featured on that song as well

That Night by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 76]
Summary: Past Featured Story

How far would you go to accommodate your husband's secret sexual fantasies ? Bella has to decide while coming to terms with her own newly discovered sexual appetite. Explicit Language and sexual situations . O/S entry for Twikink 2015 that I have expanded. stories/45126/images/AliciaW68_That_Night_002.jpg

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 236903 Read Count: 81036
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2015 Updated: 02 Feb 2019
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

She's sending mixed signals and emotions!!!!! So not fair!!!! One minute she wants it the next she doesn't then she blames him like he's forcing her. True he's slowly trying to feel her out and should be communicating more but she's so locked up in her head. She admits to wanting certain things they decides to blame him when she starts to panic and second guess herself!!!! Not fai!!!!! 

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28870
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I LOVE LUCY!!!!!!!!!

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 98047
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Bells needs to get over herself!!!! She would have done the same thing of worse completely avoid him!!!! 

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: jmthorn Signed
Date: 28 May 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

Now if he went to the movies with a "friend" she'd have a fit!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, of course she would because she knows how all the girls "swoon" for him. But don't worry, she realizes how her "friend date" comes across. ;) Thanks for reading.

Much love,

~Lisa