Reviews by Nedbella
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Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Absolutely BRILLIANT. so much emotion.  It was up and down for them.  I love how you wrote Christian's past with Elena.  It's probably the most detailed and more believable explanation about their "relationship" that I have ever read.  Well done.  Can't wait to read Clarity.  Also, I LOVE how you write sex scenes.  They always leave me panting. 

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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

It may have been short, but it was a wonderful chapter.  A sad moment when remembering Sam.  I'm glad that Christian is openly saying he cares for Tommy.  I hope they adopt him and make him a Grey for real.   Can't wait for more of this fantastic story.  

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Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 158: Chapter 158

Great to see you back. Great chapter too.  Your kid talk is soooo cute.  I've got a my brain.  LOL I hope Mouse doesn't have health problems.  She's so lucky to be a Grey member.  I also hope Christian does get a full physical.  He's not normally tired, even with the kids added on to his work schedule. Anyway, good to see more of this story and can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Totally in love with your trilogy. Full Circle is an awesome finish to the three stories and I can't wait to see where it goes.  

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Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Another great chapter.  I've probably said this a tonne of times, but I really love the way you write the kids when they talk.  Especially Grace.  When she was asking for her presant while on Christian's lap I couldn't stop laughing, it was so adorable.  I can't wait to read when they go and see the little girl. I am sure they will adopt her.  Being a Grey will be the best thing to happen to her.  Plus, I bet Grace would love a baby sister. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Oooooh, I wonder how the Tommy talk will go.  That must have been Lorna's pimp who left with her.  I bet they try and blackmail the Greys or try something for money.  Tommy belongs with Ana and Christian.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Poor little Tommy.  He would be better off if his Mother Just put him up for adoption to the Grey's.  Christian isn't handling this well and I think it is because, having heard more of Tommy's life, it reminds him of when he was a child and abused.  I htaker doesn't take his anxiety out on Ana.  it's hard for all of them. Gret story, can't wait for more. 

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Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Yaaaay, Ana. I'm glad you came to the conclusion that yes, you can love another child.  I think the baby will turn out fine health wise.  None of the issues mentioned here.......hint hint LOL.  Great moment there between Ana and Grace.  She's so cute.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

My guess is that crazy Leila  has somehow broken into his office and trashed it or is  kneeling naked in " the position " waiting for him, not expecting him to arrive with Ana. I'm so glad Ana insisted on going with him.  He needs to include her in these situations so that if he does have to be in the same room as an ex sub, then it will leave no room for doubt in Ana's mind as to what actually happened.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 30 Jun 2015 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

LOL, I love fun, cheeky Christian when he wants to play silly during sex.  Also, when he soothed her out of her bad dream with his love making.  So loving. Great chapter. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

LOL at Christian making just bacon for breakfast. The more I think about them and baby peep, I'm having second thoughts if they should adopt her or not.  It is a huuuuuge decision.  On one hand it would be good for peep to go to a family like the Greys and it would be good for Grace to have a sister, but also it's a big change to the family when it comes to any future decisions.  An extra child will change everything. Either way, the story is amazing and I can't wait for more. 

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Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

LMAO......love that end part.  I love your sense of humour.  I was eating my lunch while reading this chapter and I got a little worked up by the bedroom scene to the point I bit my tongue....LOL. Nothing bad though.  Haha. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Awwwww, no mouse to join the Grey clan. I was certain they would adopt her. Oh well.  I wonder what Christian is about to tell Ana on the jet. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

OOOOOH, I feel a big chunk of kinky fuckery coming in the next chapter....with a twist of lemon for good measure....LOL.  Loving this story and so can't wait for more.  

 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Another excellent chapter. Kate may not like it, but I like it when Christian gets jealous of other men around his wife.  Ana doesn't like women around christian, so it goes both ways.  That bathroom scene was HOT!.  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

LOL, Jason and his drum solo.  That was cute.  Poor Christian, he's really crook isn't he.  I think he should be off work for a couple of more days at least.  He needs some antibiotics, maybe a visit from his mother ( I can't remember if she has been to see him or not ). Anyway, can't wait for little tommy to call Christian Daddy to his face.  

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Wow!. Christian has really taken to Virginia quickly hasn't he.  It's good for him.  Ana's butt must have copped quite the spanking the previous night.  I love how Ana gives as good as she gets when she and Christian have their little kinky chats....LOL.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

Excellent chapter.  Lots of info about Bo Peep.  That's was good because it gave us a more clear look at what is in store for her future.  I could see Christian warming to her more than he would admit.  She'll be a Daddy's girl for sure. Can't wait for more.

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Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Awwwwww. Poor teddy.  I hope Christian doesn't have a go at Gail.  I also hope Virginia moves in with them.  It will be good for all of them to have her close. I so love this story.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 05 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

This story is absolutely AMAZING.  you have written an action packed saga, filled with every emotion and a rawness that keeps me on the edge of my seat.  I hope they adopt little Tommy.  Clearly his mother doesn't deserve him.  Cannot wait for more.  You are very talented.  Nice back door action in this chapter. 

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Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OOOOOH, what's the phone call. Good cliffhanger.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I love this story.  

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Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Beautiful chapter.  I am so glad they want to adopt Tommy. It was a no brainier that they would though.  It's the best place for him.  I just hope they don't get resistance from the state. I also hope Lorna stays away for good, but I can just see her pimp forcing her to hit them up for some money or something. Scumbag.  This is a fantastic story, can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Gret chapter.  It's all coming out in the open and happening fast as well.  Geez, they have to put a notice out looking for the mother.  I bet that pimp will get her to hit them up for money.  Lorna might try and take Tommy from them if they dont pay up.  Hope it all ends well.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Great update.  I hope Lorna doesn't turn up while they are in New York.  Teddy and Grace are so cute.  Tommy is a lucky boy.  The way you write their home life is wonderful.  I hope Christian's health is ok.  Awesome stoy and as always I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Awwwwww, how sweet was that when Christian was playing piano to Tommy.  That was a wonderful chapter.  Some nice kinky fuckery, laced with some loving lemons.  Can't wait for more.  

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Poor Ana. I thought she was going to cry in his office.  That line of Christian's in the elevator about him wanting her so bad he could shit made me laugh, it was fabulous. I know I've said this a lot before, but I absolutely love your trilogy.  I look forward to Tommy becoming Tommy Grey.  Does he have a middle name.  It would be great if they gave him Christian as his middle name.  Just a thought.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

Great update.  Did Ana have a full hysterectomy.  With her urge to eat more foo and being emotional, could she be pregnant.  I can't remember if she is unable to have more kids or not.  that girl in the elevator, is she someone to really worry about.  Ana's gut feelings are usually never wrong.  Hmmm, could be trouble ahead.  Can't wait for more. I just love this story. 

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Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

Fabulous!.....I hope that Pimberton bitch doesn't keep causing trouble.  Christian will sort her out.  I love the backseat lemon and the phone call to the kids. Little Tokmy sounds like he's been ok while Ana and Christian are away, same as Ateddy and Grace. How cute was the call Christian got from Grace....that was super cute.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Now I want a bathtub with LOTS of jets in it....LOL.  And the kitchen sounds amazing.   Great chapter.  Can't wait for more.

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Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I adore how you write the children when they speak, especially Grace in this chapter.   She's too damn cute.  Teddy when he cupped his mouth and said "she takes drugs" was priceless.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: 18 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Great chapter.  I love how he tries to do special things just for the kids. Trust Christian to know about suckling. LOL

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Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

Awwwwww, Teddy is an amazing little boy.  So cute how Gracie talks.  Snoddy nose...LOL. Hopefully Christian will be feeling better soon.  Won't be too long before Ana catches it. Great update.  Hope for more soon. 

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Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Awwwww, that was the moment I've been waiting for for so long.  Little Tommy called her Mama.  I shed a few tears, well more than a few I have to admit.  He must be very close to calling Christian Daddy.  With things going smoothly, I have a gut feeling that silly girl Lorna is going to turn up out of the blue ( on the orders of her pimp of course ) to cause trouble.  I'm so happy tommy called Ana Mama.  Can't wait for more of your wonderful story. 

Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Great chapter.  I hope they get the adoption finalised and little Tommy legally becomes Tommy Grey, BEFORE Lorna resurfaces.  And OMG!, when he called Christian Daddy and Christian's response was beautiful.  Watery eyes, guilty as charged, LOL.  Fabulous story and I hope you are healing well so you can get back to typing with no pain. I know exactly how you feel.  I have carpel tunnel in both wrists from an old job and its not nice to have.  Can't wait to read more.  

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Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

It looks like my head has been in a blender.  LOL....the best line.  I'm wondering if Grace got any nail polish on the sofa and Ana hasn't seen it.  Especially if Jack has been walking on it.  Christian will hit the roof. Grace is a funny little girl the way she talks. Great chapter. 

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Great chapter. As soon as I read it was a pirate attack on one of his ships I thought Uh Oh, it's Columbia again.  I'm so glad Ana got him to stay put.  He really does need to think of his own safety and the fact that his family MUST come first.  Yes, even before the people who work for him. Good for you Ana for putting your foot down. 

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Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Just read the last two chapters and thoroughly enjoyed them.  The people in Dallas don't know the shit storm that's about to hit them LOL.

 

How cute were the kids talking about where babies come from. Little Tonmy when he said "I know but he didn't make me." Tommy explains. " He's my new daddy not my make- me daddy."....that wad beautiful. You write the kids so well. 

 

Can't wait for more.


Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Awesome chapter.  Love the cheeky, sex laced banter between Christian and Ana.  That shower was a great release for them both.  I can see Christian needing ALOT of releases during this crisis with the pirates.  Ana will always be ready for him. 

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

Excellent update.  I love the way you write.  What a great surprise for Ray and Myra.  I know they will be awesome parents. I can just picture the whole Spider-Man themed party.  Little Tommy must be in heaven.  I wonder if Lorna sends him a gift or something.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Excellent chapter.  Well the party had a few hiccups but all in all it went off well.  I can just imagine the scene with Grace and Tommy when they hit and pushed each other. Grace standing there holding a Piderman action figure and Tommy with a bleeding cut.  I thought Ana was going to cop it off Christian for shouting at him like that. LOL, he might get his kinky lemon payback in the next chapter for doing that in front if his family. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

OMG!  That scene with Tommy saying he wasn't part of the family and them showing them the photos.  I was flooded with tears.  You write with such real emotion, I feel it all as if it were me living these characters, not just reading about them.  I'm so happy for Jose and Amelia as well.  I can't wait for more. 

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Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Fabulous chapter and oh what a juicy lemon.  My mouth is still tingling....LOL. Hmmmmm, I bet he will do both.  Taiwan then Togo on his way back.  He won't be able to resist checking things for himself.  If he is going to Togo, it's going to cause a massive fight.  But what's a FSOG story without Ana and Christian fighting over something like this......I know I enjoy it because of the mind blowing make up sex.  Hahaha. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Oh please please please have them adopt the little baby girl.  As soon as I read about her earlier in the story I had a gut feeling she was meant to be a Grey.  She had copper hair if I remember correctly. Maybe even the grey eyes too.  I'm BEGGING you.  Have them adopt her.....LOL.  I sound silly don't I.  Can't wait for more of this awesome story.

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Date: 17 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Great chapter.  YES! YES! YES! please have them adopt little bo peep. I like the names Olivia, Angela ( because she's a little angel )....and Angela is my name and I fit the description of the baby. if you are thinking of names that is. Hint hint. LOL. Can't wait for more of this awesome story. 

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Date: 04 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Go for it Ana.  That baby will have the best chance in life with you and Christian. Have to laugh at Christian and the way he was speaking while he stroked himself when on the phone.  So funny, he just went for it by accident I think.  LOL. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

LMAO....little Tommy wanting to "hep" Daddy.  Love your kid speak. Great chapter and I loved the office BJ.  Kinky and funny at the same time. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Another beautiful chapter.  I love your way of writing the emotions of these characters. You can feel theM.  I had to laugh at the line of Christian scratching his balls while walking naked across the bedroom.  Having a "hard" time getting that picture out of my head and I'm totally OK with that.....LOL. Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

Loved that last line. Sick bitch for leaving some to Teddy.  She had a sick fascination for him as well.  She would have tried to have him as a sub when he reached his teens.  I'm soooo glad she's dead.

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Date: 30 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 144

LOL, very talented way to improvise.  The part where he was rummaging around the kitchen was funny.  Then having the bow on his cock..LMAO. he's got a playful sense of humour.  I've forgotten who Amy is. 

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Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Wonderful chapter.  Loved the kids talking about bringing the baby home.  So cute.  I hope she gets well soon.  It sounds like they are about 95% in favour of adding Peep to their family.  

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Date: 17 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 156: Chapter 156

Wonderful welcome home for baby Ella.  LOL at Grace....can I howd my baby now....so funny.  They are going to need a new set of photos and some of just the kids together would be a great surprise for either Christian or Ana.   Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

OMG I'm soaked with tears while reading this.  I was so sure they wouldn't adopt her after the previous chapter.  It must have been Ana breaking down on the plane that bought his emotions to the surface more. I think he realised just how attached he'd become to the baby and how much of a hole it would leave in his heart.  I'm so happy they changed their minds. You write the emotional parts so beautifully and believably.  I can see Grace trying to dress her up like a doll already. LOL   Can't wait for more.

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Date: 11 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

That was great.  I had a laugh at Christian's eagerness to take her home.  Can't wait for the kids reaction, especially Grace.  She will probably try and play dress ups like she's a new doll. LOL  

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Date: 19 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 157: Chapter 157

Awesome chapter. I love miss Grace being all this is my baby and I'll watch over her...LOL 

 

loved the lemon, yours are always amazing. It was bursting with love, passion and possession.  

 

Cant wait for more.

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Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

LOL, his slimy stuff and baby poo in her hair..what a conversation. Sooo funny.  I couldn't stop laughing when Tommy said da baby asploded....hysterical.  

 

Did Christian smell the baby poo in her hair when he sniffed her and said she smelled good, but didn't say anything.....poor Ana was so shocked. 

 

Great chapter.

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Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

That was fabulous.  Love the part of Christian changing his nappy. Then wanting to talk about the " breast situation "....LOL. He doesn't like anyone sucking on those breast he covets so much. Haha 

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Date: 13 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Wonderful chapter. I wonder if Carla will behave herself long enough to make it through Thanksgiving. LOL, she's a loose cannon that one.  It's good to see Bob in the story in a more direct way. 

That Grace is a character. Still insisting it's her baby. So funny. 

Can't wait for more. 

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Don'tsayIdidn'twarnya

For all the Valentine’s Days that have gone…less than perfect. Now keep in mind this story does not take place on Valentine’s Day. BUT there are times when Charlaine Harris wrote characters behaving badly. I would read, shut the book ad think, “is that the reaction I would have had?” More likely than not, it was a resounding, NO!.

 

Having to read Sookie’s annoying, “I’ll think on it tomorrow” BS. I can't, it’s just too much, am I right? I truly think this is how Sookie would respond in this situation. Let’s see if you can guess where in the series they are. Please read at your own risk. Read that Title, again. ;)

 

I highly recommend the music while reading. Can you guess my inspiration? LOL! Also, please thank the amazing Gyllene for the beautiful banner! You are so talented girl, thank you!

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9514 Read Count: 604
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2015 Updated: 07 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Nedbella Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-I Can Make All The Tables Turn

That was awesome. You really wrote these characters well. I felt every emotion, especially when Sookie was killing Eric's car. Thank God Bill that piece of scum is finally dead and DeCastro too. 

At First Sight by hisviks Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 50]
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Take one ill fit bride and add one clueless groom and watch experts arrange what they deem the ‘perfect’ marriage that proves to be inconvenient to everyone involved but the happy couple. Mix in a healthy dose of scepticism, resentment, and rivalry along with some disturbing ‘senior’ moments and you might come close to getting what this story is about.

 

This is me needing to write something fun and light while the angst continues elsewhere… E/S and any other disturbing coupling you can think off (nothing graphic I swear! I need to retain some sanity through it all…)

 

E/S – Wildly AU and OOC – Rated M

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 77900 Read Count: 5473
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2015 Updated: 11 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Nedbella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Mr Clean

I have a strong suspicion that the car accident was no accident, but in fact a set up by DeCastro. It was to convenient that the bald kitty was there and that he said immediately to Sookie, do you want to be mine. Way to suss for my liking. Great chapter.