Reviews by lanigirl96003
Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183786
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

sad to see them go but great ending and im glad that they worked everything out in the end! 

Summary:

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This is the outtakes from my story 'Married to the enemy.' Please read that story before reading the outtakes!


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6428 Read Count: 2011
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Secrets EPOV

well it shows how edward just dose and dosent talkt to her about anything! cant wait till the next chapter 

Life's Journey by JoeMomma1214 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 200]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LJ_Banner2.jpg Life's Journey Banner 3 picture by joemomma1214

Bella is left with a baby that's not hers. What happens when she meets Edward the Pediatrician? Follow us on Life's Journey.

Rating for language, violence, and citrus...

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34843 Read Count: 31444
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

great chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you, and thank you for the review!

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14798
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Save Me San Francisco

great out take cant waittill the next one

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: In The End : VictoriaPOV

well i hope that she realizes in the end what she did was wrong 

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23069/images/MafiaPrincess.jpg

Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87537
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well boys will be boys! they are agravating! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

Edward and Emmett are protective of Bella, that's why they clash. They have different views on how/what will make her happy. 

I'll be updating as soon as I can, don't worry. ;) Thanks for this! =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well in the end its going to get ugly! cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

yeah, you got that right. ;) next chapter will reveal who's responsible. I'll try to update soon. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well i hope that she suffered enough for the all!



Author's Response:

At least she's out of the way. Anyway, Happy New Year! =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

hot angry sex! i would of still beat the crap out of edward ! cant wait til lthe nexthcapter 



Author's Response:

lol! Thanks bb! =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

their hot together! keep the updates comming 



Author's Response:

thanks! =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

emmett will kick his ass and kiill him ! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Emmett's reaction will be one to wait for. Don't worry, it won't reach to a point that they will be killing each other.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

well i hope for her sake that she realizes that he cant protect everyone cnat wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Bella will get over it...eventually. Don't worry. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well leave it to her to get in to deep 



Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

they aretotally hot together 



Author's Response:

*grins* Thanks.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

looking forwardd to the enxt chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58288
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

im happy they are finally getting the happy day! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i cant wait till the next chapter ! they should all go into a private practice! i think it would be hella funny all... cant wait till the wedding.... 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well she preggo cant wait till all the others are preggo too !!! keep them comming!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

im so happy for the both of them! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

they can never catch abreak keep the chapters comming! i hope charlie will be ok!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

 cant they ever catch a break? i dont like it when they kill charlie off of stories! i like him a lot ! cant wait till the next chapter hopefuly with the stress she wont loose the baby! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

i just hope that she dosent loose the baby! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

she couldnt of carried the baby to term with all the stress and the non eating she wasnt doing! i feel for them but hope for the best in this story cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

this will only make them stronger! cant wati till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

maybe she just needed her mommy to cry with and now hopefuly she will get better ! cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

well i hope everything works out for them cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well i hope that she gets what she wants but it cant always be easy cant wait till the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well i hope they get more happyiness in their lifes and not all this dread! cant wait til lthe next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

well its been a very difficult year for them and its vcome back around but then need to talk and work it all out if they want to move foward cant wait ti ll the next chapter keep them comming 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

well its about time they talk ! cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

well im glad that they are back on the same page! its about time 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well in the end they all need to start their lifes and its time for theirs to start keep the chaptres comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well i hope that they dont loose the family when they move keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

i think all their family are blaiming them and its wrong its not horrible to want to be on your own! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

well i hope they all start to  get over them selfs! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

in the end all that matters is that they are mending everything ! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

they need to drop everything that they have a gainst these 2 ! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

They don't have anything against these two. They were just coming by to hang out.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

its about time that they all sat down and talked! keep the updates comming 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

excited for them! keep theupdates comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

im glad they finally got what they wanted! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella lives a charmed life, Edward has skeletons in his closet. They are drawn to each other but fight the pull, how could two people so different ever make things work in the real world. Dark themes and Canon Pairings.

 

Thank you to Decode Banners for the wonderful banner.

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58248 Read Count: 12974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

well i hope bella see thru it all ! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. See you next week!

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Esme's OT

im glad taht shes opening up to everything in their private lifes! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Charlie's Surprise Visit

loved the chapter looking forward to another outtake !

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Jessica's Dilemma - read after chapter 79

looking forward to the next outtake 



Author's Response:

There wasn't suppose to be any more OT's ...lol.. not untul the end of the story and in between the epilogs...so i suppose they will olny come as the spirit moves me...thanks for reading...louise

Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Closure

well i hope he tells her whats going on ! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Explanations and Wagers

well loving this story cant wait to see what happens at the dinner ! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Paying off Bets and "First" Dates

i would totally have marathon sex with this edward cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-True Confessions

if they are goign to vegas i think it would be funny to have a drunkin night and get married cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case

well i like that they are going to elope! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents

well im glad that he pulled out all the stops for her! the icing on the cake was bringing dad for bella! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Elation and the Aftermath

well i hope she kicks jakes ass! keep the chapters comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos

well i hope she is preggo! it would make for a happy edward! 

Changes and Surprises by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/30342/images/changes_and_surprises_2.jpg

 Bella is moving back home to work with her father at his medical practice. She and his best Carlisle become secretly romantically involved. Once their cover is exposed, life changes and spirals for Bella in unexpected different directions.

 

Thank you to Julie for making me a banner!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186286 Read Count: 30287
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well i feel sorry for rose cant wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

im happy they made up cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well that was quick cant wait to find out who the daddy is ! and the out come from that ! keep them comming! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting and stickign wiht the story!!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

well im sad that mike is the father of the baby in a way i hope she dosent have an abortion. but with her emotional state i  think she needs it ! i know its bad but i only agree with abortions in reasons of rape! i do hope that rose helps bella to get the help she needs also! i cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing the last chapter.  We'll find out in the next chapter what she decides.  PLease keep reading and let me know what you think of the next chapter!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

im so happy that she didnt go thru with it! i think it will make her so much stronger as a person and i think the baby should come out to look exactly like bella ! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm sorry it took me a few days to respond.  Life has been a little crazt to say the least.  I just posted the next chapter (it's a little long).  Let me know what you think!  Thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

well i hope in a way that its not victoria but in a way they can finally put the past to bed and start on the future with rose and the new baby! cant wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

As always, thank you for reading and reviewing.  The next chapter will be posted shortly.

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

im happy she got to let him know a piece of her mind but im also happy that shes going to go and get help from an outsider! thanks rose! kept up the good work and cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  It was kind of liberating to write the scene with Mike.  Also, I always wanted Rose to be the one to convience Bella that she needed help.  

The next chapter is up and I hope you enjoy it!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

im enjoying the lemons! cant wait till the next chapter and hes finally starting to open up about whats going on inside himself! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking th time to comment.  I really, really appreciate it!  Hope you like the next chapter.  It should be posted later tonight.

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

totally excited that alice and jasper are getting married ! rose and edward are so cute together. and carlisle and bella are just content with each other. i think shes scared to bring up the whole marrage thing to him ... cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thanks again for reviewing the story.  I'm editing the next chapter it should be posted by tonight!  Hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

getting back to every day life! i cant wait to see whats instore for the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I'm hoping to post the next chapter later today.

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

well i started to tear up when she and alice were going at it ! i would think it would be hard that your father is dating your best friend! i think you should do a pov of alice into her mind just my opionion! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

 I agree it would be hard and strange for your best friend, how is almost like your sister, and your father to date.  I'm not going to pov with Alice, however, I promise LAice will get to exomain her stand on the issue and there will be a resolution.  We  haven't heard the last from her yet!

As always, thank you for reading!  I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

well im happy we got an insite to alices mind. im totally stoked that they are getting married didnt think that he would propose to her! happy for the loop! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  As I said in teh AN on the site, it was my favorite chapter to write so far!  We will hear a little more from Alice too. I would love to know what you think of the next chapter.

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

wow is all i have to say about this chapter they both cant catch a break but at least they finally found victoria! and ill be on pins an needles till the next chapter i really look foward to the updates on this story ! keep them comming 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the review.  I promsie to update before the end of the week. :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

well i hope that she starts to take it easy. im glad that alice and her made up i think she missed her alot and i hope tbat carlisle makes it i dont think that bella will make it with out her! cant wait to see when victoria wakes and know the truth about the accident! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

As always, thank you for rewviewing! 

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

well im upset that they cant catch a break at all ! i cant wait till the next chapter and i hope that the baby will be ok and carlisle will make it i dont think bella will come back from this if she dosent ! keep the chapters comming and fast i dont think i can wait ! 



Author's Response:

Hello-

Thanks for the comments!  Things will turn for Bella soon.  I'm trying to edit and post the next chapter before Glee comes on in a half hour!  If it isn't posted before then, it'll be posted before the end of the night. 

Thanks again for reading!!

 

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

ohh come on!!!!! cant anything go right for her or carlisle !!!!! i hope you dont keep us waiting !!!! argh 



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thanks for the comment!  There will be some kind of resolution in the next chapter.  Can't wait to see what  you think!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

well im glad that i was still up! glad that they both made it! cant wait till the next chapter to see what happens next to these 2 ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving your comment.  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  The next one shoudl be posted either tonight or tomorrow night!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

well im happy they finally have some happiness in their life and  i hope when they  finally get back home they can have more with being back with rose! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  Stay tuned, their homecoming is next!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

well finally a happy up beat chapter! finally everyone is home for good and that includes edward! cant wait to see whats up in the next chapter keep them comming 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  The next one will be posted soon.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

well carlisle over thinks way too much! cant wait to see what happens next with these 2! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a comment and reading!  This is the last super serious chapter.  There are only a few more left ot the story!  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

well finally something happened that was better than ever! hope the next chapter brings much more good news to the happy family! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you lied this chapter.  The enxt one is ready to be posted. 

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

well im glad that she got some things off her chest ! im also glad that they talked and victoria finally realized that shes an idiot and what she did to that little girl even if she didnt do it her self! i cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

First off, thanks for reading and commenting!  Bella had to put VIctoria in her place and she did.

The enxt chapter will hopefully be posted later tonight.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

argh i hate cliffie chapters! cant wait till the next one ! keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!  I'm glad you liked it.  Next chapter will be posted soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

i have a feeling that they are getting married and decided to keep it quiet! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 ! 



Author's Response:

Their getting married?  I don't know...maybe, maybe not...just read the next chapter!  I'm going to try adn post it tonight but it might not be up until tomorrow night.  Thansk for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

well im happy that they got hitched! im glad they are finally getting their happy ending! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  I have one more regular chapter that i am going to try and post this morning, we'll see though.

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

its was a nice quiet evening at home with the love of his life and it couldnt get anybetter that that! cant wait till the next chatper of their lifes! 



Author's Response:

Helllo, I;m glad you liked the chapter.  the epi should be posted soon.  I'm so sad this story however, there is a new one that I might be posting tonight (not B/C).

Thank so much for taking the time to read and comment!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

loved the ending! i think you should do some into the future chapters if you fee you dont want to let these 2 characters go!  but men are dumb and stupid! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  I have decided to write part two of the epi.  it isn't close to being finished yet, but it'll be posted in the future,  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue Part Two

well im happy they got their happy ending! so sad to see these 2 go!



Author's Response:

Hello,

Thank yo so much for reading my story adn leaving all of the wonderful comments.  I'm so happy to have written a story that people have enjoyed.  I was also sad to see these two go, however, at least they are living happi;y in teh distant future!  Hope you are enjoying my new story!

 

-Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?

Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 May 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 My Last Breath

well i hope that she realizes that life is too short for her problems! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

I think you will be happy with the change in Bella's behavior coming in chapter 12. I hope to get it up tonight.

 

Thanks for reading,

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Black Holes and Revelations

well i see how she could think that hes not who he says he is! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: chapter4 All I Need

well if he was smart and didnt think with his manhood he should of told her the truth before he did the deed its going to be even harder when the times comes to tell her ! and shes going to be devistated! cant wait till the next chapter of this story 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Decode

well i think shes looking into it way to much and just needs to talk to emmett! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

She might be, but she is a bit paranoid and scared at the moment. Imagine how yo might feel if someone who is locked in solitary confinement, finds you halfway around the world.

 

Thanks for reading, chapter 7 will post later tonight.

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Secrets

well the boys an idiot ! cant wait tillthe next chapter 



Author's Response:

Yes the perverbial shit will be hitting the fan!!  Thanks for reading!! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool

well i think she handeled it well ! cant wait to see what ahppens next 



Author's Response:

It can't be easy to have learned all that she did.  I imagine its har dto be relieved that Edward is not the accomplice and be pissed at him at the same time.

Coming up in chapter nine our dear couple have a little fun as well as that much needed talk they need to have.There is a teaser on my blog now.

Thanks for reading.

EA~

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 False Pretense

well i hope she jumps him soon that tension she is carrying is horrible. cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

Bella is carrying around a lot of tension. As I have promised before she will be giving in to her feelings for Edward very soon. There will be a bit of drama in chapter 11 which will post around Friday, but after that, I think our girl will begin to see what she is missing out on.

I have a bit of a funny question for you. I posted chapters 9 and 10 at the same time the other day, and no one seems to be responding to chapter 9. I am just curious if you got an alert for both chapters.

 

Thanks fo rreading,

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Used To

im happy shes letting edward back in even though it took her almost dying but thats stubbared bella for you! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Yes it took her a while, but I think the acccident made her really think about what if she hadn't made it out of that closet. Next chapter will be up shortly.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I greatly appriciate it.

 

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Come To Me

well i hope he takes edward out into the back woods and gives him a good talking to! cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 



Author's Response:

They will talk and that is all I can say without giving it away.  Here is the teaser you were promised for reviewing. Thanks so much for reading!!

 

With my parents off to bed, I scooted closer to Edward on the couch and rested my head on his shoulder. He draped his arm around me and slowly rubbed his hand up and down my arm.

“You’re tired,” he said.

“Mmmhmm, how can you tell?”

“Mmm, how about the fact that you can hardly keep your eyes open?”

I giggled softly and mumbled, “You noticed that huh?”

“Yep. Come on, Sweetness. It’s time to get some sleep.” he stood and held his hand out to me to help me up from the couch.

“But I don’t wanna get up,” I whined from where I had let myself flop over on the couch once he had stood up.

“Ok, hop on and I’ll carry ya up,” he said, turning his back to me.

I grabbed onto the back pocket of his jeans and pulled myself back up into a sitting position and then stood on the couch so that I could climb onto his back. He held my right leg in place when I hitched it on his hip and held on to his shoulders to bring my left leg up onto his other hip. No sooner than I was in place, he bent over to pick up the TV remote to turn off the screen, leaving me thinking he was going to drop me and squealing like a baby pig.

“You better be quiet or your dad is going to be out here with his gun thinking I am doing inappropriate things to you,” Edward chastised me playfully as he stood up straight, tightening his hold on my legs and heading for the stairs.

As Edward carried me up the stairs, I burrowed my head against his neck while resting it on his shoulder. I tried to inhale as deeply as I could and savor his natural scent without being obvious.  The real thing smelt even better than his sheets had yesterday and I found myself torn between fighting the urge to kiss his neck and wanting to cling to him as I fell asleep.  

Reaching my room much faster than I would have liked, Edward was laughing as he dumped me on my back onto my bed. He obviously thought the way he choose to put me down was funny.

“That was mean.” I pouted and swatted him on the arm.                                                                                                         

“Oh poor baby,” he teased. Crawling up on the bed beside me, he grabbed both my arms and hiked his leg over me so he was straddling me. While pinning me to the bed, he let his head drop onto my shoulder and remained there, hovering over me without saying a word.

 

See ya next time, EA~

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Never Say Never

well im happy that she finally let him back in! keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

Yes she is letting go and giving into her feelings.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter, as promised here is your teaser for chapter 15. I hope to have it posted this weekend.  Thanks fro reading, EA~

 

"Mmmm, why are you awake?" Edward rasped, while burying his face in the crook of my neck. "Did you have another bad dream?"

"No, you must have scared all the bad dreams away. I slept just fine once you were here," I admitted to him because it was the truth. It was the best I had slept in a long time.

"Is that so?"

"Yep. I guess you're like my personal dream catcher or something," I teased.

"Well I'll happily perform that duty anytime," he said placing a kiss just behind my ear.

I stretched before rolling over to face him. "I'm gonna hold you to that, ya know," I whispered as I scooted as close to him as I could get.

"I have no doubt you will, Sweetness. In fact, I'm looking forward it," he said softly as his arms tightened around me, holding me. "You sure you're ok?"

"Yeah I was just thinking," I answered after placing a kiss on the side of his neck.

"Penny for your thoughts," he offered.

"Just a little nervous about meeting your parents," I murmured against his neck.

"Don't be," he said.

"How can you be so sure they won't think I am messing up your life? Look at all you've had to give up because of me. I've just recently realized how much being here with me all the time has disrupted your normal life."

"Bella, first of all, it doesn't matter to me what they think. Or maybe I should say it's not going to change anything. Not how I feel or the fact I want to be here. What you are failing to see is that I haven't had to give up anything. I chose to do it and I have no regrets about it at all whatsoever. No one forced me to take on the task of keeping you safe. I volunteered. And given the choice again, I'd do it in a heartbeat."

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Love You Out Loud

well im happy she is finally letting him in her life completly! cant wait to see what happen next 



Author's Response:

Yes now that there are no more secrets between them, they can strengthen their repationship. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I should have chapter 16 up on Sunday. Here is your teaser.

EA~

 

 

"I don't know, Bella," Emmett said as he debated whether or not to agree to my visiting Reynolds. I had spent the whole morning in my office contemplating what I would say to him in order to have the best shot at him agreeing. I knew if I couldn't convince Emmett, there was no way of convincing Edward. So I worked on my boss and good friend first, knowing he was completely aware of the number of times I had already come face to face with the monster who was locked up just two hours south of here.

"Look, Emmett, I haven't come face to face with him since all of this bullshit with the apples and the notes began. I need to see that he is still in that prison with my own eyes. I know it's a bit ridiculous and the rational side of my brain knows he is. But there's the other side that was scared shitless by what took place in that house and the nightmares I've been having since then that needs to do this. I need it for my own sanity. Besides I want the opportunity to confront him about the apples and letters and see if I can catch him off guard. Get a read on him and see if I can make him slip up and give us some information."

"You've been having nightmares?" Emmett asked, surprised by my admission.

"Yes, which only increases my desire to make sure he is still in that prison. And I've had enough training and experience dealing with Reynolds that I know I can go in there and keep my cool around him. I want to make him see he is not getting to me even if he has to some degree."

"I hear what you're saying, Bella. I get it, I really do. But do you really think you might be able to get him to admit something?" Emmett asked quizzically.

"I got him to confess to the crimes he was being accused of didn't I?" I retorted.

"Yes you did. But this is personal, Bella. Can you really go in there and not let him rattle you?"

"Emmett, what he is doing to me is nothing compared to what he did to those other women. I had to sit there and listen to him tell me about what he did. So yeah, I think I can. I didn't let the gruesome vulgarity of what he'd done to them get to me when I'd convinced Reynolds that I understood him and empathized with him in order to get a confession. I won't let it bother me now either. If it will make you happy, you and Edward can both come with me. I know that either you or Seth would have to go anyways, so why not take Edward too? He won't like it anymore than you, so I figure he'll insist on going. Might as well just avert the argument and set it up that way," I said as I continued to argue my case with him.

"You should have been a fucking attorney, Swan," Emmett huffed.

"Oh, but then I wouldn't have the pleasure of working with you," I added sarcastically before painting a fake pout on my face that had Emmett rolling with laughter the second he saw it.

"Fine, I'll call down to Stafford and let them know we'll be there tomorrow. In the mean time, you get to call lover boy and make sure he is available to go then.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 The Only Exception

well its going to take a lot more than a jeaous bitch to break them up



Author's Response:

You are so right. The jealous bitch doesn't stand a chance. I know you were promised a teaser for chapter 18 with this, but instead I am going to give ya the whole chapter. I have it done and ready to post so it will be up in just a few miniutes.

 

Thanks so much for reading!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Lady in Red

well mike didnt do anything to look! i hope for her sake that they catch the helper soon ! keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA. 

 

The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.

 

I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.

 

~Eternally Addicted~

 

Here’s your teaser.

 

“What are you up to, Cullen?”

 

“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.

 

“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”

 

“And what would that be, Sweetness?”

 

“That you join me.”

 

“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.

 

Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.

 

“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.

 

“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”

 

“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”

 

“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”

 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Univited

god i hope that they catch them ! i dont know how much more bella is going to be able to take! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

You will find out exactly who the accomplice is by the end of chapter 21. Until then we get some more info as to who it might be in chapter 20 that will post in just a little bit. Thanks so much for reading.

 

EA~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 I Will Not Bow

well i hope for her sake that it nothing that happens durring her drug induced sleep! cant wiat to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Nope, nothing will happen while she is sleeping. Lots of info and some answers coming next chapter. hang on its gonna get a little bumpy for a bit, but remember I am a happy ever after girl.

 

Thanks for reading and reveiwing

EA~Mary

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 OBSESSION

well i hope that they get to her before its too late! cant wiat till the next chapter



Author's Response:

You won't have to wait long. I will be posting the new chapter in just a bit. Thanks for reading.

EA

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Time for Miracles

well in the end i hope that they get both of them but him dead and her alive! cant wait to see what happens in the nxt hcapter 



Author's Response:

Yes dead would be good. Next chapter will take us to Bella and we can see how she is fairing with Jake.

Thanks for reading.\

 

EA

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Don't You Wanna Stay

well im glad that she finally is getting her life back fully! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Things will be even better for them in the next chaper. Thanks for sticking it out with me. Real life is a little crazy and bsuy right now, but I am updating just as fast as I can.

 

EA