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love reading fanfictions but with them starting to get rid of the smut filled ones i feel i need to start to read others on different sites cant wait to read them on this site now !
When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?
Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64021
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20
well i hope that james dosent get to see ness becuse it will break bella! i cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21
great birthday even though shes stuck with whats going on! when will they ever get some happiness! i hate the cliffee the only person i can think it is is jacob. cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22
well i hope that meeting charlie will be good for edward! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23
thats just wow!!! i hope in the end that she gets what she from going back to forks! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24
well in the end im glad that edward isnt just sitting on his ass and doing nothing and hopefuly they will figure out whos behind all of this! keep the chapters comming
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 25
well i hope for her sake that she can figure out the way to keep james from her and nessie! keep the chapters comming
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27
well im happy that shes preggo and hes able to be a daddy but i hope for her sake that she wins everything and dosent loosethe baby! keep the chatpters comming
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
well i hope they are able to !! keep the chapters comming i cant wait to see if they are able to get him in jail!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29
her life is just spiling out of control ! now i hope that she can get out of the medical board hearing! i hope carlisle is alright! keep the chapters comming
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30
well im glad that they have talked and i hope for her sake that everything starts to level out! keep the chapters comming
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 31
well i hope it starts to look up for these 2 ! keep the updates comming
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
im glad its finally over for her and that hopefuly after this they can finally be happy and have some happier times!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 33
well im happy that she didnt get her lincense takens away!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 34, Epilogue 1
great ending!
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 35, Epilogue 2
what a great ending !
Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:
It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon. There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend. Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life. But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle. This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back. There are some laughs along the way. The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64644
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Emmett's Here
well edward is an idiot thinking that he can get her just to leave whener he wants her too! cant wait to see the blow out from it
Author's Response:
Lani: I think you will be getting your wish in the next few chapters. They will be posted soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23-Reconnections
freat story so far cant wait to see how flordia goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you Lani. More chapters are up and they do finally arrive to Florida I am happy to report.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37-And It All Comes Tumbling Down
well this was unexpected! i think ... lets see what happens next
Author's Response:
Lani: Unexpected can be good...right? LOL. I plan to have next chapter up by end of the week. Teaser will be posted on forum tonight.
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie
great reaction! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks Lani. More to come soon. Teaser for next chapter should be posted on the forum Thur. or Fri.
Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?
This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too. Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.
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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.
This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.
By- SexyLexiCullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420623
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Ice Ice Baby
wow im happy that they are having a baby that is a miracle in its self cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Don't mess with the Jedi
alright lesson learned ! pull out method dose not work just after having a baby! great chapter!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Complications
wow hes so stubbared some times ! and it shows totally in this chapter ! cant wait till the next chpater
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Quagmire and the hag
she should be knocked up again! it would be hella funny and take it all otu on edward! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
that was a really good ending !
Bella Swan is in for the shock of her life when Edward Cullen comes back into her life 7 years after graduation. Can the scars from her past be healed by the reclusive musician or will she shut him out like she has everyone else since the fateful accident four years ago.
Thanks to evilangel813 for my beautiful banner!!
TRIBE won The Emerging Swan Award!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124446 Read Count: 34247
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Burn it Down
well didnt see that one comming! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Here's the sneak peek I promised:
EPOV
Hang on baby, please hang on… I kept repeating this over and over in my head as I made my way back to Los Angeles. I was exhausted and yet my brain wouldn’t shut off with the events of the morning rolling around in side of it.
When Victoria took me off of speaker phone all I could do was listen to the crackle and roar of the fire that overtook Bella’s house. I was already on the hotel phone dialing Emmett trying to figure out some way to rescue her. When he told me he was actually working tonight and was en route to a house fire that had been called in, my stomach rolled. I was happy that someone had called it in so quickly, but nauseated that the fire was big enough for someone to have already noticed.
“Bro are you there?” I reflected on Emmett’s words from earlier.
“You’re going to ninth and California, aren’t you?” I could barely speak, tears streaming down my face, knowing there was absolutely nothing I could do. I never knew what it felt like to be impotent until that very moment.
“I am. How did you know?”
“Emmett, its Bella’s house! She’s inside. Please hurry…”
“Fuck, are you sure?”
“Emmett, Victoria just torched her place; please let the firefighters know that there is a woman inside that house.” I was surprised that for as panicked as I was, I managed to sound calm and coherent.
“I gotta go. I’ll call you later.” He hung up quickly, not even letting me respond.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Hold On
well im happy that shes alright but i think that they all need to kick jacobs ass! i think it would be intresting to see an outtake with her not making it ! just my opionion cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Everyone things that Jake needs a good ass kicking - pretty funny. He was a desperate man, and someone offered him big $$ for a story about a girl he once knew... he didn't feel any connection to her any while yes, he definately deserves some ball kicking, he needed the cash and took the money & ran.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: At Last
what a great happy ending !
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue #1
aww what a cute chatper !
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue - Alternate Ending 'Only Hope'
wow that was a tear jerker but im glad that you gave the alt ending!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. I was a little hesitant about it not being the true HEA - but since it was an alt ending, I figured why not just post it and see what you get?
THanks for the review. I appreciate it!!
Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.
Banner by Mkystich
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144807
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
well thats intresting! cant wait to know the back story on jacob
Author's Response:
Thank you;)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
well her boys took it alot better than i would have! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
well somethings bads a brewing!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
great insite into edward! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
hot damn that was desprate of jacob! cant wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
wow that was a horrible chapter cant wait till the next pov ! i hope they get their happy ending
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
it made me tear up a little to know the reasons why he decided to leave forks with his family! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
aww they so love eachother and need to make it out of the funk they are in cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
hopefuly he will be able to get her out of the dark place shes in cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
im happy she is finally up!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
im happy shes awake!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
well at least jacob cant get her anymore! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
bitch beat down! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
great chapter she needs to work thru her demons!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
they are becomming normal now cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
great chapter cant wait till the next one !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
i would bitch slap them ! cant wait til lthe next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
aww they are all going to get engaged! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
that was a good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
i wish my man would of proposed like that ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).
Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
well i would kill them all!!! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
well they seam much happier cant wait till the next chapter to see his dads reaction!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
well im happy that they finally got contact with family! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
im hoping that speach will keep him from doing stupid things! cantwait till the nxt chapter
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
wow hope daddy carslie makes it in time cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
im happy they are finally there !! cant wait til lthe next chapter
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
wow is all i have to say baout that chapter cant wait til lthe next one!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
finally he has seen the wrong from leaving bella! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
wow i would be excited but sad that i couldnt be there to recieve it! cant wait till the nexct chapter !
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
hes still an idiot! cant wait til lthe next chapter
Author's Response:
Yes, but he's an idiot for all the right reasons, and he is trying to think of some other way around his original decision; that is why he listed his points. He is trying to clarify things in his mind so he can work on them.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
come on edward you cant leave bella now! ur gonna get to go home! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
i love bill !! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
well that makes me a bit happier ! but is emoward still gonna run off? cant wait till the next chapter!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
thats was a bit mushy! cant wait till the next chpater
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
im happy that they all are going home! cant wait till the next hcapter
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
im happy they are getting their lifes back but hopefuly somethign dosent happen to them
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Uprising
cant wait to see what they found twins? next chapter please!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
im happy that they are finally getting happyness in their life! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
ohh thats not good ! cant they catch a break ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
well thats good they need the happyness cant wait till the enxt chapter
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
thats not good ! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
totally love this story and excited to see an update!
Author's Response:
thanks. I'm sorry you guys had to wait so long for an update. I was ecstatic when I found the memory stick; it contains Uprising, as well as other stories I have under construction.
Date: 06 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
looking forward to bella beating his ass looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 07 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
cant wiat till the next chapter
Date: 08 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
im glad he wasnt able to go thru iwth it!
Date: 09 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
well im glad that hes forgivin
Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251325
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
great story so far cant wait till the next chapter0
Author's Response:
LOL! theres 10 more chapters up! Enjoy!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
well im happy they are getting along and baby cullen is happy! cant wait till the next chapters!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
humh what did he want ? cant wait till the next capter
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...
im glad charles turned a new leaf! cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: EPOV with Caleb
thats very sweet! but sad at the same time! cant wait til the next chapter
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
well at least charles is trying! cnat wait till the next chpater
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
intresting way to end the story!
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)
great insite to what he was feeling like!
He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Loo moreking forward to
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
well im glad that he cleared it all up!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
loved the chapter looking forward to more
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Looking forward to more
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Looking forward to more
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
well im happy that went! well i hope that jack gets to know his other grandparents! but i just hope that victoria dosent show back up! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!
XoXo
Shel
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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark.
She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.
"What's wrong, baby?"
He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.
"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."
She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
great so far cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Hiya! Thank you so much for your review! Here is a Teaser for the next chapter of Parachute. A reminder for all of my lovelies, including the newer followers, I usually post a new chapter every Friday.
On Mondays, I send out teasers for reviewers. There is also a completely different snippet from the next chapter post on The Fictionators, as well as the PicTease blog on Mondays as well.
Thanks again for supporting my story! Love and Hugs!
~Shel~
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Bella fastened the clasp of the sterling silver I.D. bracelet over Jack's wrist. He looked up at her with wide, watery eyes as he ran his fingers over the letters that were etched in the metal.
"It has your name, Jackson Swan, our address and my phone number engraved on it. As long as you have it on you, you'll never be lost again."
Jack threw himself into her arms, with tears streaming down his face.
"Thank you," he sobbed. "Thank you for loving me so much!"
"Oh, baby," she sighed, crying along with him. "I never had a choice. You're my son."
The two held each other tightly, while the others in the room gazed at the pair in wonder and love.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
that went better than expected! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! The next chapter should up be up before you know it! ;-) If you weren't already aware, I've been posting the story every Friday (on FFnet and hopefully here now as well!) and on Mondays, I post teasers for the next chapter to everyone who reviews the latest chapter, plus send a completely different teaser to the Fictionators blog, as well as a pic tease.
Now, my ever awesome Beta has taken it upon herself to set us up a Blog! So, instead of having to hunt down the Fictionators and PicTeases, they'll both be posted to Parachute's blog in one convenient place! Feel free to check it out! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/
Also, the teasers for the reviewers are going to stay just that for now, no one else gets to see this except for you and your awesomeness!
Thanks again for giving my story a chance!
<3Shel
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Bella turned from her spot at the window when her phone started ringing.
"Hello?" she asked.
"Hello, is this Mrs. Swan?" a cheery voice responded.
"This is Bella Swan," she replied hesitantly.
"Hello, Mrs. Swan, I'm calling to inform you that your son, Jack, has just been admitted here at Port Angeles County Hospital."
"Oh, my God, is he alright?!"
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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
about time edward asked her out ! cant wait to see what her reaction will be !
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
deep chapter cant wait till the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!
I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!
<3
Shel
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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."
Charlie's eyes widened.
"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.
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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
aww man ! cant wait to see the reaction! keep them comming
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
XoXo
Shel
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
well they took it well as could be expected ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!
<3 Shel
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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.