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Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well i hope that the sister can see how much bella means to edward! keep the chatpters commign



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  The next chapter will be posted shortly!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well i would love to kick her ass ! i have afeeling the breaking point between jane and mommy derest is comming up very soon and its not going to be pretty! keep the cahtpers comming



Author's Response:

Hello,

I am glad you enjoyed this chapter!  The breaking point will come later down the road...can't wait to hear what people think after that!  Thanks again for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well that a big turn of events! god thanks a lot! i teared up right along with bella! cant wait to see what happens next! keep the chatpers comming



Author's Response:

As usual, thank you so much for reading.  this last chapter was really emotional to watch.  I'm working on the next chapter but I don't know when it will be completed.  it might not be until the end of the week.  I hope you enjoy the remander of the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well i hope in the end that you do a chapter with him in washington with his parents to see whats going on in his mind! becuase i think his needs to let known! but im happy that she went to visit emmett cant wait to see what happens when it gets back to esme it always happens! keep the updates comming 



Author's Response:

Hello!  We will be getting a brief look in Edward's mind, but not a whole chapter.  Thanks for r/r!  next chapter will be posted this weekend or early next week.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well i hope his talk with is mother will help his decision to stay with bella or he will be making the biggest mistake of his life! and im suprised that mamma esme was nicer this go around ! cant wait to see what these 2 have in store next! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  There will be more talk of their relationship and it will move in a different direction.  I am having a bit of trouble writing the next chapter, so I think I'm just going to fast foward a few months.  Hope you continue to enjoy the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

well i hope i the end that edward comes to terms about this and his momma and daddy beat his ass when he gets back to them! keep the chatpers comming ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting. 

He is an ass right now, he's confused but none the less he's still an ass.  

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

well i hope the next chatper is him going back to his parents i want t osee charlie kick his ass! keep the chatpers comming 



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for reading nd reviewing!

We are going to get a peek into Edward's side of the country (meaning he's going to explain himself a little bit to his parents and Jane...lovely oh lovely Jane!).

The next update will be in a day or two!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well i hope for his sake he gets his head out of his ass before the baby is born so he dosent miss out but in a way im glad that she has jake for support! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Hello and thank you for R/R.

I really like writing Jacob as a good friend for Bella.  I think sometimes in stories he's seen as a bad guy, but I really like him as a character (just not romanticly with Bella!). We'll hear from Edward again relativly soon.  I was going to take a day or so to update, however, I can't stop writing this story.  I am working on the mext chapter as we speak!  It should be posted by tomorrow sometime!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i think this trip is going to be a bad thing because hes going to realize that hes being dumb and stupid! cant wiat to see waht ahppens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a note.  I'm working on the next chapter as we speak.  I feel very addicted to the story!  I hope you will continue to enjoy it.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well i hope for his sake that hes pulled his head out of his ass and tell her everything! cant wait till jane hers about this ! keep the chapters comming 



Author's Response:

Bella will find out, promise.  Jane will also be coming up soon enough too,  Stay tuned!

Thanks for r/r.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

well i hope that this is finally her breaking point because i dont know how much more she can handle! cant wait to see what happens next ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for r/r.  The enxt chapter is up soon and you'll see what happens to her.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well i think she should read it and im glad that her and jane made up for the most part! edward is the most afwul person and i hope for his sake that its not to late when he hopefuly pulls his head out of his ass! keep the chapters comming!



Author's Response:

Hello adn thanks for r/r.

Bella will read the letter, it just might not be immeditly.  I'm kind of torn when she will read it.  I kind of wwant it in two places, we'll see.  All i promise about these two is that there will be a resolution at some point!

I'm working on the next chapter after dinner.  I am also debating about doing a chapter from Edward's point of view (but I haven't decided yet).

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

well im sad ! cant wait to see what happens next im really starting to like jake and kinda hope that they get together ive been all for edward this far but after the last chatper ive shifited! but i have a feeling that the flowers in the airport trash was edward? just my opinion i look foward to his outtake and cant wait till the next chapters! im sprised that emmett still hasnt got to kick edwards ass!! i think he should! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for R/R.

 

The next chapter is an out take of Edward's POV.  I'm hoping to get it posted tonight, I don't know if it'll happen (keep your fingers crossed).  There are several of you who think that Emmett should be kicking Edward's ass.  You'll just have to wait and see what happens next!

-Lisa

PS-Right now I am on a borrowed computer.  My computer was attacked with several viruses.  When I brought it to Best Buy, the good geeks there noticed that one of my fans wasn't working and shipped it out to be fixed.  I should have it back in 2-3 weeks!  GRRRR! I'm so sad.  Please keep your fingers crossed for a speedy recovery for my computer!  I hope you will still be intersted in reading when it comes back.  I'm still writing so when I get my computer back all i have to do is type the new chapters out!  hope to hear from you then!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

im glad shes finally set the recond straight with jane about jake! also happy she finally pulling her head out of her ass and talking to him ! cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  The next update will be in a day or so.  I'm working on it now, as well as an out take from Edward' point of view.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty Seven

well i  hope she notices that he called and then calls jake out on his stupidy! i hope for his sake the dosent disappear in the long run! cant wiat till the next chapter and i hope he jumps on the next plane to her



Author's Response:

Jacob was just expressing his feelings and doing what he thought was right.  He was trying to protect Bella and the baby from getting hurt again.  We'll find out what happens with Edward in the next chapter because it's from his pov.  It should be posted tonight or tomorrow night.  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Out Take Two-Edward's Point of View

well its about time he gets off his ass! i cant wait till she sees him on her door step! and i have a feeling that jake is going to be the worst when it comes to him! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading:) If you thougth Jacob was bad in the past you should see what happens next.  I should be updating today some time.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty Eight

im happy that she finally kinda kicked him out ! i hope that they sit down together and talk and that he finally holds her! thank god for alice to help her now ! keep it comming 



Author's Response:

Jacob isn't gone for good, he'll be back sooner than you think.  he's just trying to protect Bella.

I really hope you liek the next chapter, which will be posted tonight some time.

Thanks for reading adn commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29

well its about time it came out! and im glad that he didnt even leave boston! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Edward loves Bella more than anything (except Charlotte).  Technically he did leave Boston fro Seattle, but he turned around and got right back on a flight back to Boston.  next update is in a day or so.  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty

ohh lets get it on in the kitchen. i hope that he isnt going to break her heart again! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

LOL!!!  I'm sorry to report there won't be any loving in the kitchen any time soon!  They will chat, in a few chapters.  Edward's POV is next!

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Out Take Three-Edward's POV

well cant wait till the next chapter ! i hope that they kissy kissy and start working out their relationship again!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I am working on the next chapter as we speak.  It might even be posted today at some point (if not tomorrow for sure).

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty One

well its about time her mom started to accept everything! cant wait till their date! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :) Esme is fun to write right now.  Just when you thought you knew her!  I'm working on the next chapter and it should be posted by this weekend.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three

im happy they are on track and momma is happy for them! cant wait to see whats instore next for these 2



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  They are trying to find their way as a couple.  I wonder what will happen next.  The next update will be soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty Four

well im happy that they are going back to where it started! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  Next update should be by yhe end of the week.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty Five

well im glad that he finally pulled his head out of his ass and kind of listened to bella! cant wait to see what happens next on the red carpet! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/  Edward is slowly realzing what is going on in his life, espiecally with people he thought he could trust.  Thanks for reading, the update will be soon.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty Two

upset that he is getting arrested hope it will work out 



Author's Response:

thanks for readign and reviewing. 

You'll see soon enough what happens with the arrest.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter Forty Four

well in the end i hope that he dose it soon ! i cant wait to see what happens next to these 2! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

We are close to the end, however farther than I thought we were.  there will be more to come.

The next update should be this weekend.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty Six

well im happy they finally are back to where they need to be! cant wait to see whats instore for the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and commenting!  They have picked up where they left off months ago.  The next chapter should be posted soon.  I'm working on it as we speak!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty Seven

mamma esme is up to no good again! cant wait to see whats instore next for these 2 and hope tanya disapears 



Author's Response:

Mama Esma is just old fashion and over protective.  Underneth her thick skin she cares and does love her daughter.  the problem with her is she thinks whatever she says is true and everyone around of her should listen to her.  She kind of reminds me of my grandmother.  i loved the woman but she needed to take a step back and realize that she wasn't always right and she couldn't say whatever she wanted to people (although her best intentions were always at hand).

Tanya will be back later on....I promise!

Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty One

i hope she dosent jump to conclusion and why would she hold it to him when they were not together. cant wait to see what happens next chapter



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading/commenting.

Bella and Edward will have it out next chapter (which should be posted by Saturday).

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter Thirty Eight

well they are cozy and i hope that what ever tanya has to say wont break them up ! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I want them to show each other that they love each other ,which is why they are cozy.  Tanya will eventually speak her mind, I promise!  I'm hoping for an update by the weekend or early next week.  It'll be an out take from Edward's POV (which means it will be kind of longish).

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter Forty

im upset that shes not working anymore but in a way i think its good for her so she can stay home with charlotte! cant wait to see what happens when they go to la! 



Author's Response:

Hello adn thanks for reading.

She was having her doubts about going back to work.  Unlike most real working women in the real world, she has a bunch of money so she can afford it.  Things with her and Aro aren't over yet. 

The next update should be sooner than later!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter Fifty

well im glad that your back! and im excited to see the comfortation of mother and daughter next chapter ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Things between Bella and Esme will have a turn in the next chapter, which should be posted in a day or so. 

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Out Take Four-Edward's POV Part One

im glad he dumped his ass and cant wiat to see whats going on with tanya 



Author's Response:

Hello and thanks for reading.

Tanya is gone, for now.  The next update, the second part of Edward's POV will be posted tonight.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Out Take Four- Edward's Point of VIew Part Two

well im glad that they are enjoying their holidays and im glad that edward is starting to change his mind 



Author's Response:

Edward is doing a lot of thinking.  He loves Bella adn wants to do anything for her.  He is thinking really hard about marriage.  He's a silly boy so who knows what he'll decide.

Thank you for reading and commenting!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter Thirty Nine

shes working on breaking him down ! cant wiat till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

They needed an honest talk and I think they did a pretty good job.  They are trying and I think that is apparent.

I'm going to work on the next chapter tonight for a little while.  I'm hoping it'll be up this weekend.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty Three

im glad that everything worked out and they finally are on the same page ! im excited to see what happens next and i think bella should kick emmetts ass! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

hi and thanks for reading.

Bella and Emmett will talk on the next chapter.  The next update might take a little while.  I'm rewriting the outline and trying to figur eout how to tie up the story adn how many chapters (we are close to the end!).

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter Forty Five

well im intrested to see how alice tell jasper that shes preggo and in the end i hope that he takes her breath away when he proposes! 



Author's Response:

You know Jasper and Alice, they always work out.  The proposal will be epic.  It's still several chapters away, but I hope that you guys enjoy it when it does happen.  I can't wait to write it, but as I said, it is still several chapters away.

Thank you for reading.  The next update should be by mid week.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter Forty Six

thye are so cute together and she worries that hes never going to propose! i hope he does it soon and im excited to see what hapepns next 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Please have faith that everything will work out the way it is meant to.  I'm workign up to something big, I promise!  I'm hoping the next update will be in a few days.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter Forty Seven

well they are moving at their own rate and is good for them! im excited to see where this is going 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  they are both very happy right now.  Good stuff is on the way.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter Fifty Two

excited to see what happens next chatper ! keep the updates comming 



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!  Next update will be soon.  I'm glad you have enjoyed the story!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Out take five: Edward's POV Part One

well in the end i hope that hes making the right decision with out bellas approval! cant wait till the next cpater



Author's Response:

It'll all play out so I guess you;ll just have to read to find out!

Thansk for reading,

Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Out Take Five: Edward's POV Part Two

well i mglad that i hope taht he got the closure from everyone and everyones imput! cant wait to see what he has up his sleeve ! 



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reviewing/writing.  One reason I wrote this chapter was to show Edward was very much thinking about Bella and the propsal.  The other reason was to give soem closure with Charlie. 

the next few chapters should be interrsting!  Stay tuned :)

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter Forty Eight

well i hope that esme makes it thru this and in the end it makes their realtionship stronger! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Esme is a strong woman.  I think her relationship with Bella is all ready growing.  I'm hoping this weekend for the next update.

thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter Forty Nine

i love this chapter! im glad that he finally did it ! 



Author's Response:

He was just waiting for the perfect opperunity.  I'm glad you liked it.  I'm trying to update and post before I leave for the weekend.
Thanks for reading

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter Fifty One

im glad that her mom realized that she was dumb! im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Sometimes it takes something horrible to make people realize their perspetive isn't always right. Although B and E will never have a normal mother/daughter relationship they are working on a foundation.

Next update will be soon!  Thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter Fifty Three

im excited for the wedding and whats to come! 



Author's Response:

The wedding will be next and then just the epi left!  I'm a little sad. I'm hoping the next update will be sooner than later.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave a comment1

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 May 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter Fifty Four

well i happy they are getting their happy ending! excited for the epilogue



Author's Response:

They did indeed get their happy ending.  I hope it came across as simple and sweet, that was my intention.  I'm working on the epi now, so it's only a matter of time before it is posted and the story is over.  Thank you for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Epilogue

sad to see these 2 go but im exctied that htey got their happy ending! 



Author's Response:

I think thye deserve their happy ending, don't you?  I'm sad to see them go.  I had fun writing them.  their relationship had so many twists and turns, but they are happy. 

Just to let you know, I have started a new story called "Back to Boston" adn I will be posting the second chapter tonight (with an awesome banner!).

Thank you so much for reading every chapter and leavign comments.  They mean a lot!

-Lisa

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31054
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Scream With Me

i have a  feeling that the big fight is comming and soon! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Losing My Religion

well i hope that it dosetn get to far ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: New Slang

looking forward to seeing what happens next 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: 4 a.m.

well i hope he wakes up soon and proves them all wrong! 



Author's Response:

The answer will be coming very soon. I promise, I'm not going to drag this part out. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Invisible

well i hope he makes it for her to be able to talk to him! 



Author's Response:

Ah, so you're hoping for a reunion so they can work everything out. Well. even if that does happen (and I'm not saying it is or it isn't. Have to keep some things to myself. ;) it's a long way off. I promise, things will work out the way they are supposed to.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Letter to God

well i hope he heard! cant wait to see if he comes out of it!



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, there is a set of events that I have to follow, so I can't promise what will happen next. All I can say is that everything happens for a reason, and not just to build angst. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Soma

i just hope for her sake she dosent run! cant wait to see what happens next espically with alice! 



Author's Response:

At the moment, I have no intention of having Bella abandon Edward. She has too much invested in the situation emotionally. As far as Alice's problem, well, let's just say she has issues. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Paranoid Android

well i hope that carlisle digs his head out of his ass! cant wait till the next chapter i hope edward wakes up soon ! 



Author's Response:

Not a lot of people like Carlisle, do they? lol. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Talk Shows on Mute

looking foward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Send the Pain Below

well in the end i hope they get over their problems with her! i hope in the end that he wakes up soon and he dosent hate her ! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

I'm working on them as fast as I can. Everything will work out, in some form or another. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Perfect Situation

im glad tht he finally stuck up for his relationship

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Why I'm Here

im glad that hes awake but i hope he remembers her ! i think she will be devistated if he dosent



Author's Response:

The answer to your comment will be coming very soon. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Times Like These

well im excited that hes awake and now in the end i hope that he reamembers her! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

Yeah, I've been waiting for this part of the story, too. :) I'm hoping to get an update out in a couple of days. *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hell & Consequences

i hope edward goes off on the parents and makes bella take him home! excited for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

lol. You and a lot of other people are hoping for this. All I can say is keep reading. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Sunday

i cannot wait till the next chapter i hate alice with a passion in this story! i hope edward goes off on the parents next 



Author's Response:

lol. I think everyone hates Alice in this story. I've never seen a more negative response to her. However, it has to be this way for the story to work. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't Take Me for Granted

im excited and waiting for the blow out between edward and the parents 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Not Sorry

im glad that she told her how she felt ! excited for the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Ladies and Gentlemen

about filpping time! but i have a feeling its not over with the paretns 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Underneath It All

loved the ending

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Edward has been avoiding sexual contact with his wife for six weeks. What happens when she lays it all on the line? After Edward and Bella reconnect she finds out she is pregnant what happens during her pregnancy?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25980 Read Count: 22357
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 18 Weeks

well its exciting! keep the chapters commign



Author's Response:

There will definitely be more in the new year.

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 24 Weeks

 cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter 



Author's Response:

If i told you what was coming next that wold be giving it away lets just i am sure you are all going to love it.

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 48 weeks Part 1

cute chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 30 Weeks Part 2

im excited to see what happens next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 36 Weeks

well im excited for the baby to come ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 42 Weeks

thats just gigantic ! im glad baby made it safely! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 48 Weeks Part 2

cute chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 52 Weeks On

what a happy ending

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389633
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

well i hope that in the end edward dosent get in trouble but i do hope that bella get in a few his first 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

loved it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

loved it looking forward to seeing whath appens next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

well in the end i hope that he can keep he head thinking right! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

cant wait to see what happens next to these 2 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

will i hope that she dosent freeze up about his comment! i cant wait to see what happens next with these 2! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!  Check out the teaser, I think freezing up is the last thing on Bella´s mind! :)


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

well that was totally hott! cant wiat ot see what happens next 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

well they are totally hot together! im excited for the next step of their relationship and to see who bust them!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

awsome chapter ! looking foward to the next one  i love sexy time with master cullen... 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

loved it ! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...

loved the chapter looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!

Krazi

xoxo

FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!

Hope to see you soon!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination

looking forward to more

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!

Krazi

xoxo

 

 

Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.

 

As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.

 

“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.

 

“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”

 

Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”

 

“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”

 

“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.

 

No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.

 

Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only.  “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”

 

“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.

 

“And what color are you now, Isabella?”

 

Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.

 

Trust me, Isabella!

 

You need this!

 

I need this!

 

We need this!

 

I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”

 

My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.

 

“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

looking forward to more 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

well i hope carlisle dumps her ass so fast ! excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

I actually enjoyed writing Esme POV...so yes some Carlisle action in there too.....hope u like it...xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

i would use her to get to bella ! cant wait to see what ahppens next 



Author's Response:

You and me both LOL DLIR has her chapter with the beta. So we're just waiting. Thank you for reading and reviewing! <3 Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

well i hope they finally figure out who each other are! cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

*squeals* I cant wait either...oh wait I know how it happens. Hope u like the way they find out....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

ohh thats horrible ! cant wait to see what ahppens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review...we will def be posting more chaps soon  DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

well im happy that they found eachother but in the end he needs to leave angela becuase shes a bitch! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much.....The next chap should be up soon...Its just with our BETA....xoxooxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

well im glad that shes leaving him but i hope he dosnet do anything to her more! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thanks and yes he has more of a dark side that we havent discussed....The next chap should be up in a couple days...xoxox DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club

god they are totally hot together 

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

well in the end its all that matters that they are happy



Author's Response:

And Happy is what we want...xoxo