Reviews by lanigirl96003
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135060
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well at least shes starting to open up with the others cant wait till the next chapter



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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well im happy that shes able to finally let her mom in cant wait till the next chapter



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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

im happy she told someone else ! cant wait till the next chapter 



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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well im glad hes not running to the hills ! cant wait till the next chapter!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well thats an intresting chaper cant wait to see what happens next 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

well i hope that they get her help that she needs and not what she wants! i think its getting too much for her to do it by her self! cant wait till the next chatper 



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

im glad that they are getting her some drastick help! cant wait till the next chapter 



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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well im glad that shes leaving but hopefuly they whole leaving everyone behind will work for her ! cant wait itll the next chapter 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

well im glad that they are going thru the same thing and  that they hopefuly can help her but does she want the help? cant wait till the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Yes, she wants help. She just doens't know how to ask for help.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

well happy she with her family again! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well i hope that she realizes that people just care about her! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

well at least shes getting justice for one of these people that did things to her! 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

well that was a turn of events with jessica and lauren! cant wait till the next chpater keep them comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

well im glad that they are getting better and better every time ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

well im happy that they are starting to move on with their lifes! cant wait till garrett gets pissed at bella and she gets pissed right back! 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

i think she should help people with their problems! it would help her with hers! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

well i hope for bellas sake she makes it out of this again! keep the chapters comming 



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

well didnt see that one comming! i wouldnt think that she was ready for that but i guess in her eyes she was! cant wait till the next chatper keep them commign 

 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

i hope in the end everything works out for them ! 

 



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

im happy shes getting everything she wants in life!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

well i hope in the end that they live happly ever after! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134480
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well i would beat renee up and pull her hair out ! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

lol, I would too!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

well i hope that she lets them in but not for a long time though ! i would be pisesed ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cute ill read on! 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well its a start into her past ! cant wait till we get more ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

well she should of beat the shit out of her cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

thats great and a horrible punishment too who would want to ride with the princepal of the school lauren will just pick on her somemore! cnat wait till the next chapter 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

cant wait till the next chapter cant wait to see what happened in her life



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well im happy she finally has a friend cant wait to see what ahppens next and im glad we have the back story for bella! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

cant wait to know who showed up ! keep the chapters comming 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well at least they are starting to act like teenagers! 



Author's Response:

Little bit:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

glad shes starting to be a kid ! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well i hope that the other brothers are nice about it too ! 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well wonder what esme wants to talk about cant wati till the next chapter 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming bella will love edward back eventually



Author's Response:

Thank you:) She already does:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

well its a small town it was bound to come out now how did she find out cant wiat till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well what a great way to meet the parents! cant wati till the next chatper 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well i hope she knocks her parents out in the next chapter ! i could not imagin how it would feel if i spent a month in the crazy house and my parents were alive ! keep hte chapterrs comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

well at least they arent taking hmi from bella! cant wait till the next chapter 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

what???????? didnt see that one comming!!



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

well that went well i hope that they get aro! keep the chapters comming



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

well that was hott! im happy she has someone that she can lean on that wont leave so far! keep the chapters comming



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

well i hope that they realize that they are the ones at fault for it all ! cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

wel i hope for her sake that they can get some peace in this mess cant wait till the next chapter 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

well i hope that they live ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

well back to the real world! cnat wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

well i dont think in any court of law that they would get custody of her after what supsly happened to them made her go crazy! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming 

 



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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

well im happy she gets to stay at home! keep the chapters comming



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

well i hope for her parents sake they leave her alone! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

it better go in the way they want or shes going to run! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming

 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

well i hope they keep it going ! and go to college! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

well im happy they took the next step! i think it was cute! 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

i hope it goes well! keep the chapters comming



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

well i hope that they stick together ! cant wait to see how everything works out!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

cant wait till the next story 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Isabella Swan by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All Human. OOC. A model striving to reach a goal that was once her mother's. A young prodigy that has everything and is unwilling for change to happen. The attraction is there. Will it be enough?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86502 Read Count: 12304
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2010 Updated: 08 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

im excited for them ! cnat wiat to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

what dose daddy dearest have instore for the cullen boys ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing bb. *hugs*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well i hope in the end she turns back and at least throws the neckalce at him! cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Lol! yeah, she just might do that! =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

slowly hes making his way back to her but i think he needs to ditch his dad! 



Author's Response:

Lol! If only it was that easy. ;) thanks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

she shoudlnt of jumped into bed with him! cant wait to see what happens next. keep the udates comming



Author's Response:

thank you sweetie. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wonder what hes up to?



Author's Response:

you will soon know. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well he is helping more and more now! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

thank you. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

im glad that he is sticking to waht he told her!  



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well im intrested to see what happens next with daddy ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

excited for them to be starting fresh! i just hope the family dosent caus problems



Author's Response:

=) thanks!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

well i would be pissy too with her dad



Author's Response:

Thank you. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

im glad taht she showed up! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

im excited t osee what esme has up her sleeves 



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

well that was an intresting turn of events! cant wait to see what daddy dearest has up his sleeves 



Author's Response:

Thanks. =)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

im excited to see how this affects her even though she dosnet like him that much! 



Author's Response:

Yes, next chapter will be posted soon, so u would know. Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

glad tahtthey got thier happy ending



Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

first

 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104700
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

god shes difficult and i cant wait till they finally talk and get everything out in the open ! cant wait till the next chatper 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella is divorced and heartbroken. Lonely and broken four years later she is in a tragic accident. Can her Greek god heal ALL of her wounds? OOC/Cannon pairings. Rated M for lemons! Lots of lemons...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 111950 Read Count: 47924
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

god edward is such an idiot! cant wait to see what happens next 

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Please Remember Me

well its still getting intresting cant wait to read on! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

thank you,

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

well im excited that they are undercover now and to see what happen next



Author's Response:

thank you bb

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well i hope he gets help! 



Author's Response:

me 2, the boy needs it ;-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Dragons & Punishment

i think a bella pov would be intresting to see whats been going on! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Smart man

well i hope that he figures it out soon ! 



Author's Response:

:-)

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27210
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

well he got her to open a bit! im excited to see hat happens next 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

well im glad to get some of her story cant wait to see what happens next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

thank you;-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

well im glad that leah is opening up but in the end i hope that she dosent regresss again and i excited but scared to see who showed up ! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

i hope it progresses with him ! cant wait til lthe next chapter 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

im glad that they are getting comfterable with eachother



Author's Response:

me 2, thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 part 2

im excited for them im glad that bella told him the story! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

thank you, :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

im glad that edward is trying to look after her ! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

thank you bb

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

cute chatper looking foward to the next one 



Author's Response:

thank you.

Your teaser will be sent through PM. enjoy

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 part 1

loved it ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12 part 2

looking forwarde to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 13

Looking forward to more

Things Least Expected by lmw Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 477]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella thought her life was going to be different by the time she was close to thirty.  She thought she'd be living the American dream with a husband the two kids and a dog.  Instead at twenty eight she breaks up with her long term boyfriend and is the only single person among her friends and family.  With a reconnection of an old crush thanks to Facebook and an unexpected meeting with a new man, Bella does the only thing she can, follow her heart.

 

I have a banner!!  I want to give a shout out to Mehek18 for creating it.  I think it's pretty nice.  You should really check out her site at http://mehek18.tumblr.com and take a look around. She is amazing and I want to thank her for taking the time to create my banner!  Thank you!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 296726 Read Count: 118582
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 26 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty Two

excited that they are getting along well and i hope that their date goes great and they get back on track with eachoter!



Author's Response:

The date is the next chapter, which is going to be posted.....TONIGHT!  can't wait to hear what you think of it!  As usual, thanks for reading and leaving a little comment!

-LIsa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Out take- Edward' POV

god hes such an idiot if he was just upfront and honost with her it would be a problem! loved the out take! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback.  He's a confused boy (i hesitated usign the word man).  It was kind of fun writing the out take.  Glad you enjoyed it.  Next update should be in a day or so.

-Lisa

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well it great so far ! cant wait to see what happens next ! keep the chapters comming!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading another story I have written!  I appreciate it and I hope you enjoy it!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well its looking up and i have a feeling that jacob will be intrested in her too ! cant wait till the enxt chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, the next chapter is posted!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well shes working on it with him! i just hope the press dosnet eat her alive! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

lanigirl, thanks as always for the comments! I hope you enjoy this story as much as you liekd my last one :)  I'm trying to finish up the next chapter and post it while waiting for my laundry to dry.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i would have thrown the biggest temper tantrum towards mommy derest for saying those things to me ! cant wait to see what ahppenes next keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Hello adn thanks for reading!  Bella is a little intiminated by her mother.  Esme has set up all of these expectations for Bella and she hasn't met them.  We'll be seeing more of sweet mother Cullen later on in the story.

-Lisa



Author's Response:

Hello adn thanks for reading!  Bella is a little intiminated by her mother.  Esme has set up all of these expectations for Bella and she hasn't met them.  We'll be seeing more of sweet mother Cullen later on in the story.

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hes cute and i cant wait to see what this weekend has in store for them! keep the chatpers comming and i hope she tells jake soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! The next chapter is going to be posted soon.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

aww im happy shes getting her man! cant wait till mommy derest finds out ! keep the chapters comming 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Mommy dearest is back in the next chapter!  Would love to know what you think of it.

-Lisa

PS-Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i though it was good ! im glad that hes there for her and not the family! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming ! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far (and I'm glad you think the last chapter wasn't too much).  I'm hoping to finish and post the next chapter before I go to bed tonight.

As always, thanks for reading!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well in any case she just needs to tell him anyways! cant wait to see whtat happens next keep the chapers comming



Author's Response:

We'll see when she finally tells him!  Hope you like the next chapter!

-Lisa

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well she should of told him a long time ago its going to get ugly espically since esme like jake better than edward keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  She should have but she has kind of created her own little mess.  Oh well, I promise in the enxt two chapters there will be no Jacob/Esme drama!  Speaking of which, the next chapter will be posted in a few.  thanks for reading!

-Lisa