Reviews by lanigirl96003
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995707
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

great chapter ! im excited that the babies are comming! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

wow shes dense he told her to go into the bedroom not to leave! cant wait till the next chapter ! 




Author's Response:

I TOLD her! thanks for the review

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

well that was a super chapter! i cant believe that he did that to her on their honeymoon no less! im glad taht hes ok though ! cant wiat till the next chapter ! 



Author's Response:

thanks so much for your review! xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

i hope she can last with out him! keep the hcapters comming



Author's Response:

thank you 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

well im excited and cant wait till the next chapter! even though something bads about to happen keep them comming



Author's Response:

okay - will do!

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

im happy that they were able to get out of it with what little they did! cant wait till the next chpater



Author's Response:

glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

well im happy that rose isnt dying and that bella is alright i think she needs to seek some professional help to deal with some of it! cant wiat till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

well excited for bella to see her family cant wiat to see what the christmans season has instore for all of them! keep the chapters comming



Author's Response:

thank you for the review

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

well that was totally hott cant wati ttill the next chapter keep them comming



Author's Response:

glad you liked it - thank you

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

well i hope that they stick to all this happyiness they have right now becasue its going to be one bumpy ride with the therapy they are going to !



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

well can they not have one day week or month that they can take it easy! keep the chapters comming 



Author's Response:

they will get through this - promise!

 

 

PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

well i happy shes finally starting to reaize that hes not leaving her and lover her for who she is and its about damn time!



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

well im glad tht they are happier in this chatper but i hope that she dose persue her arts! i think it would make her much happier1 keep the chapterscomming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

well she diserved everything that she got! cant wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

thank you!!! That's what I thought as well!  See you in a couple of weeks.

Michele

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

im so happy that she said yes! but i hope that she finally starts to open up about her mom! cant wait till the next chapter



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments - I hope she gets better too. xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

im glad that she came back from this melt down! shes come along way! totally excited for them getting married and cant wait to see what you have instore for them next



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

wow is all i have to say about this chapter! there was so much going on its uneblievable! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

im excited that alice is preggo ! glad that she is starting to realize that he wants to take care of her! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you liked it - I'm writing the aftermath right now and they will come soon

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

well in the end im glad shes trying to work thru it by herself! but i hope that she starts talking to him more and dosent keep everything in 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

loved this chapter looking foward to the next one 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

well im glad taht they are back on the saddle again! and in the end im glad that renee dose not share the same dna with bella! but now i wonder who her mother is .... im excited to see what happens next chapter 



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

im excited taht they are happy and well and in the end that they are finally getting back on track! its been a tough road and its slowly getting to where its supose to be ! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review and your comments - These two drive ME crazy and I flipping WRITE THEM!  Seriously, noone ever said it was going to be easy, hey?  Just like RL xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

well im excitd to see whats in that letter! cant wiat to see the wedding and im loving the pictures! keep the updates comming



Author's Response:

thank you so much  - update soon xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

well i hope that he realized that he was a totall duche and needs to be punished him sef! keep the updates comming 



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

i think she wants to havea baby! im excited that everthing is back to normal and hes back to 100% ! cant wiat ot see what she and alice were talking about 



Author's Response:

hmmm - I could tell you, but then I'd have to kill you... :)

Thanks so much for the review bb

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

im excited that they are preggo i hope that it brings them closer together ! cant wati till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

well im glad that bellas getting better and in the end i hope that carlisle gets his head out of his ass before its too late! i love bella tanturms ! got to love the hormones ! and its twice as bad



Author's Response:

thanks sweetheart xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

im glad that they have made up! excited to see what happens next chatper 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

excited that they are settling down and doing what they want to do and not what they have to do! excited to see how they grow 



Author's Response:

thank you so much xoxo

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

great chatper again! excited to see what happenes next and how they are going to do away from eachother ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

loved the chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

loved this chapter looking forward o the next one



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

always love and update! they are always getting into trouble and its always becuase they dont talk! loved it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

loved the chapter ! i would love to read more about them growing as a family in a sequel

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

loved the chapter looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

loved the ending ! 

Semper Fidelis by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has a great life but she's missing something...Will the new Marine in town be that something? Will she be able to handle the life that a Marine leads or will it all be too much?

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93026 Read Count: 23379
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 19 Use Somebody

loved the story cant wait till the new one comes out !



Author's Response:

I will be working on the sequel once I get a little further into my WIP fic

Summary: Past Featured Story

last night

Banner by: TwilteAddict

Bella is in Paris on a ten day High School Senior Class trip when an encounter in the Plaza of the Centre de Pompidou leads to her being rescued from an uncomfortable situation by her Knight in Shining Armor...and the night of a lifetime.

One big Sweet Schmaltzy Lemon.  Third Place Winner in the ff.net Bridal Style Anonymous Contest (who could write  the most over the top "Harlequinesque" lemon).

fs

(RosaBella75 aka IslandWoman221)

 

banner by: FuzzyLittleWingedThing  banner

Will be expanded into a short multichapter fic at a later date.

**If you are not of legal age for adult material or sensitive to graphic content, please use the back button now.**


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4915 Read Count: 645
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

cute ! cant wait to read the next chapter



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  It'll be a while.  My update times have sucked lately so I want to get it roughed out before posting more so I'm just refining as I go rather than keep you all hanging.  Keep your eyes peeled for it, it's high on my priority list!

Thanks for reading and reviewing with words of encouragement!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

game

Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Passed Ball

i love reading the baseball stories ! great so far



Author's Response:

I love the baseball stories too. If you read over at FF let me know I can tell you about a couple of others that are really good.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Down and Out

man i would be pissed too .... but at least they didnt make it worse with yelling at eachother !



Author's Response:

HI, So glad you are enjoying the story so far. I see you have come to this website for the same reason I did. All the crap going down over at the other place.  I thought I betted have a backup plan jus tincase. 

 

I am post some more chapters today so keep an eye out for them. Thanks for reading and I look forward to seeing what you think of the rest.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 What Hurts The Most

im crying now ... its soo sad she is so stubbared!



Author's Response:

Trust me, it was just as hard to write as is was for you to read it.

 

You might want to check out the other story I am co-authoring with My Bella.  It's called Worth The Burn, if you like The Game That Changed It All, then I think you will like it too.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Taking You Home

aww im happy that they worked it out !!!



Author's Response:

I know I hate it when the angst is dragged out when I am reading a story, so I couldn't drag it out too long myself.  I will be posting the rest of the chapters I have completed tomorrow. 

 

Thanks for reading!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 It All Comes Down To This

hot damn i cant believe it was a cliffy chapter cant wait to see what happens next ! love this story !



Author's Response:

You won't have to wait long. I just posted the new chapter. Hope it lives up to your expectations!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Black and Blue

send jacob to the wolfs ! cant wait to read what you have in store for him !



Author's Response:

Jake is going to take a big hit to his ego.  Won't all happen immediately, but over the next couple of chapters it will all play out.

 

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 It's Time!

loved it ! had to make his way into the world in a gigantic way! great chatper 



Author's Response:

He did make a grand entracne huh?  I was a lot of fun and bery emotional to write.  Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Epilogue

i liked the way it ended! 



Author's Response:

I am glad that you did. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope to hear from ya when I take our favorite couple on their next adventure. I hope to have it up in a couple of weeks.

 

EA

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64140
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chapter ! loved it cant wait till the next 

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

tfymBANNER


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Reality Lost, Paradise Found

aww im happy she had the baby and the honeymoon was perfetc the right amount of lemons !



Author's Response:

Thanks...I was nervous about the lemon # in this one, but no one thinks I went overboard!  Baby and mama are fine and there's even more fun to come~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

what the hell?!! now i cant wait till the next chaters come up !



Author's Response:

Working on it, don't worry!  Trying to get at least one up before heading to work!  Thanks for the love and it'll be fun seeing your reactions~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella Notte

aww it was soo cute !



Author's Response:

Thanks hon, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Many Shades of Love

im glad they are getting the family they wanted ! cant wait to see what happens 



Author's Response:

Baby time for B&E...I've been so excited to write this part...can't wait for the sleepless nights!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Better Together

totally excited that you updated excited that they are getting babies and everything they want cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 15: The Battle Begins

looking forward to more

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Coming Home

loved the chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: I Would Die for That

i hope everyone will make it out ok 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 14: As Time Goes By

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: A New Friend Gained, An old Fear Faced

Looking forward to more

Summary:

Bella and Jacob are getting married. On the eve of the big day, Bella receives a phone call that will change their life.

 

Expect insights in their newlyweds' life, worries about imprinting, pack life, road trips, college memories and more!

 

This is an AU story which takes place almost ten years after what happened in New Moon. Edward never came back so Bella ended up living a normal life, as far as this is possible. There are vampires and werewolves but they are not the main concern of the story.

 

Rated for language and lemons (they just got married!)

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 254945 Read Count: 6808
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Will You All Stop Ruining My Life?

great story i just cant wait til lthe day jacob imprints on someone other than bella! cant wait to reat more !

Changing Lives by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21157
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - A rude awakening

im enjoing this story and cnat wait to read more  !



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying it.  THanks for reading!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167579
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

thats sad ! cant wait till the next chatper 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

well i hope they eventually figure out that its bella rose and em are helping out ! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

well i would need time too ! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

well edward is movin fast cant say i wouldnt! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

well at leatst he took his head out of his ass! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

great ending ! loved it! sad to see these characters end but im happy they way it did! 

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The Black Gardenia Ball

well i would kick edwards ass since hes an idiot and then i would kick carlisle ass since he know that bella should be changed and just to think that edward is there to what? catn wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

well thats intresting! cant wait to see what happens next!@ 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

last time it was edward and now its alice .. will they ever catch a break? cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Misguided reality

wow cant wait till the next chapter! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

that was totally hot! cant wait to see what happens next ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

cant wait till the next chapter! he needs to just turn her and get it over with ! men! cant live with them cant live with out them

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.

suprised that rose is alive and cant wait to see what happens when they go and visit aro! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Within Temptation

i think he did the right thing ! it took enierly way to long for him to change her i understand his reasoing but it was about time! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

well edward is an idiot! cant wait till the next chapter 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward are happily engaged with their whole lives ahead of them. What happens when a tragedy strikes that will change them forever? AU, all human.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86164 Read Count: 6795
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--Apocalypse Please

great chapter kcant wait to read whats next !~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever

i hope its not bad .. cant wait to read on !

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever

i hope its not bad .. cant wait to read on !

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 It's Not My Time

im glad hes mad it this far cant wait to read whats gonna happen next

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Keeping Me Alive

it makes me sad that he is taking it so hard!

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

BT Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

im glad that she has some one from the future so she can talk to them about whats going on? now is she human or a vampire? cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Next chapter will provide some answers... ;-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

well thats a different turn of events cant wait to see what happens next! 



Author's Response:

Definitely more to come... hope you like where it goes from here! :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

well i hope that it all works out for the both of them! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

intresting! cant wait till the next chapter and im sad that alice had to go back to where she came from cant wait to see who pops up next ! 



Author's Response: I'll miss Alice too.. thanks for reading! :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

im happy that they finally got married but cant wait to see whats instore in the next comming chapters! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

welll i hope for hher sake it worked ! if it didnt then everything she did was for nothing! cant wait till the next chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

well i hope that shes making the right decision! i cant wati till the next chapter to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

I hope so too... we'll have to wait and see. :-)

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

well i hope that everythign shes trying to do is going to work out for them both ! cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

well i hope for the best but dont know what to expect cant wait till the enxt chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

wow she was just sent back to give him some life experiences that he didnt get before he died! cant wait till the next chater ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

well i cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

well im happy they are together and happy! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

well im happy they got their happy ending after all that time!!! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

well im glad taht they got ther happy ending after everything that happenend ! 

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

im starting to tear up! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

well didnt expect that one ! 

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

banner was made by Wickedlovely731

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64200
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

well i cant wait till the next chatper 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

cant wait till the next chapter 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well i hope in the end that edward will be ok! cant wait till the next chatper

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well this isnt good ! 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

excited to see what happens next