Membership status: Member
Bio:
I am a "Mature" woman who admittedly is obsessed with Robert Pattinson and The Twilight Saga much to the chagrin of my family. Thankfully, they let me indulge in my favorite past time of reading twilight fan fiction stories.
I would love to be able to write like all these wonderful authors but haven't had enough talent or confidence to write. Maybe one day but for now, happy just to have the opportunity to read these incredible stories!
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises
Wow - TPW really grabbed my attention and now VO is doing as well. Wasn't sure how the Cullen's were going to factor into this...I thought maybe Renee & Phil were going to ship Bella off to Charlie and that's where she'd meet Edward.
You threw me for a loop. Gotta continue!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother
Oh my...is it like that Polygamy cult??? Must read on!!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
Never knew how brainwashing worked but whatever research you did, I can see how a person can lose their identity.
Really scary...
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
So...seems that Felix has feelings for Bella. I'm guessing he's not part of the cult.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Just started the story today so can't tell you if I'm getting updates.
I can tell you that I'm, disturbingly, enjoying this story. It's very current and so evil. Aro make my skin crawl.
Good job!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
Excellent!!! Aro has brainwashed them all! I wonder where these women came from.
Cannot believe Aro blamed Bella for his inability to control his disgusting feelings. Waco anyone?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
Excellent as always!! Welcome back & looking forward to all your story updates!!
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
Don't know what to say...kinds makes me sick knowing Aro intends to for all intents, rape her before given to Edward. I'm intrigued by this story, love how you guys write & impressed that you have the courage to write on topics that maybe be uncomfortable or distasteful.
Really good job & please update when you can.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Sorry, I see nothing hysterical about Aro. I think he needs to be poisoned or have a heart attack or get horribly ill that Carlisle needs to take over temporarily and free Edward, "Elizabeth, himself and Esme from this cult. Just the idea of Aro having his way with Bella is disgusting and him bathing his beauty makes me want to puke.
Great job writing something so distasteful.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
It's like a light at the end of the tunnel; even if it's just a pinprick! Seems like all is not well in cultville. Aro must have something huge over Carlisle & Esme to keep them there. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
Thanks for the insight into Esme's thoughts, feelings and fears! RE your a/n, there are cults out there who prey on those who are lost, insecure and/or looking for a way or something to belong to. These so called leaders prey on the weak and that's what gets them off and justifies their actions in their minds.
Your "crazy women" have done an excellent job in portraying what the inner workings of a "cult" may be like. An outsider or reader like us have an easy time to make judgements as we aren't living it but if you are in a cult like this and basically brainwashed, it's hard to differentiate between realities.
Thanks for the update and look forward to more. Really hoping they can all escape from the compound.
So what gives with Alice???
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
Rebecca is Renee, right.
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
Thanks for Charlie' pov. Nice to know someone is looking for her and won't give up.
Good chapter...it's rounding out the story.
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
Prickle of fear? Can only mean Aro if you ask me! I fear for Bella & the rest of the Cullen Clan. I want them to escape but with so many, it may not be possible. Only if Aro dies or is poisoned can an escape be made or if Charlie comes to save the day.
So if I'm understanding this right, Edward is biologically Aro & Esme's child, Esme fears for Bella because Aro is too enamoured by her, Carlisle & Esme believe in the lifestyle but not neccessarily Aro and Tanya was killed because she rebelled or remembered.
Hmmm, hope y'all update soon!
Author's Response:
Nice recap.. LOL yeeeeeeaaaaaaaahhhh that is pretty much it.. yep..
and will update next week.. (I hope, we need to write it)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us
Thanks! Loved the APOV. So....when Alice & Jasper marry, will Aro take her virginity & continue to have sex with her until she is pregnant or is it a one shot night? I'm assuming the injections Alice is getting is similar to ones that a woman going through in vitro would be getting. Is Jasper (& others) expected to "witness) Aro's viginity rite or is it private?
So many unknowns. Can't wait for the update!
Really great job!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Excellent. Little freaked out on how Father takes their virginity & am assuming Carlisle comes next with the turkey baster.
Is Aro going to do something to not have Bella bleed or will her suppressed memories resurface and she disappears?
So scared for the Cullens.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
I knew Aro was sick, sadistic & cruel but this went beyond even that. To purposely inflict pain, emotionally & physically was horrid.
We all know his obsession with "Elizabeth" is obscene so I'm hoping they ALL escape his clutches before it's too late.
Just the thought of all first borns being Aro's and his intent to physically be with Bella is sick!
Author's Response:
He is a deviant bastard. Thanks for the review..
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....
"She's alive. Be careful" or "Aro Volturi. Very dangerous" or something like that.
Felix did a good thing. Just hope Charlie can get to Bella & the entire Cullen family before it's too late.
Great chapter. Thank you so much.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will
I don't know what it is about your stories but I swear, each update I enter with heart palpitations!
Aro is clearly insane & delusional. He must be
stopped but like all psycho's, he has his "flocked" so brainwashed, no one can see it.
I hope the Cullens and their entire family, including "Elizabeth" are rescued, saved, escape, whatever before Aro can do more evil. Talk about Branch Davidian, etc. all over.
Excellent chapter and look forward to more.
BTW - thanks for the key chain! I use it proudly!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling
Sickos! But you knew that. Hoping for
Bella!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Aro is pure evil. To prey on the sad, depressed & distraught under the guise of counseling & anger management is disgusting.
I fear for Elizabeth/Bella. Aro is too obsessed with her and Phil is another psycho.
I hope Carlisle is able to find a way to escape with all of his family & Bella. Maybe a les brutal Waco?
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning
Ok....it's time. Edward HAS to tell Esme and/or Carlisle about the flyer, Carlisle has to call Charlie and Charlie has to come in with enforcements & liberate those who want to be liberated. My fear is they have removed Elizabeth/Bella so she has to be found as well.
Shades of Waco....it's getting too scary and it's bubbling to a head!!
Great job ladies!!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First
Hmmm....I wonder??? Could it be Bellabeth in there??
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more answers to our questions!!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
Yuck! Sick mofo!
Damn, you ladies know how to weave a tale!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Good! Hope Charlie can save them all!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love
Excellent! Just hope Edward stays safe as well!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Pure evil! Can only hope Charlie & the Calvary can get their in time to rescue them!
Thanks for the updates....still is an excellent story!
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us
Wow....very powerful. If they die, at least they are together!
Thanks....happy holidays!!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption
Happy New Year.....more please....when you can!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!
I see a little light at the end of this nightmare. Just hope the rest of the Cullen family makes it out okay & there won't be another Waco or Guyana tragedy.
Excellent as always!
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514650
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A
Oh thank god!! I haven't commented before because I can't stop reading but I was getting fearful that James would leave with Bella before the truth came out.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Oh Thank God!!! I have done little the past few days but read this mind blowing story! Every free minute I have, and I do mean that literally, I am reading this!
I haven't reviewed each chapter because frankly, cannot wait to read more and when I'm reading it on my handheld, the buttons are a bit hard to press!!
I figured if James ever got loose, he'd find Victoria through the GPS but honestly thought, he'd die at the school. So many stupid mistakes and Lauren ???? Well, she will get all she deserves and more. I'm glad you all made Lauren the bad person since she didn't have a role in the movies so it's easier to visualize what she looks like using our own imagination. Of course, the actors portraying the key characters are perfect so I love have those visualizations!!!
I am so glad James dropped his blackberry. I was seriously going to have heart failure if Edward did not have a way to find her. I am so glad you guys do not draw out the angst and terror unnecessarily. There are some stories out there that torture the reader for no good reason except to drag it out. This story is so fast paced that to have days if not weeks go by without something to go on would get boring or annoying quickly. There are some stories that can handle the slow build but not this one.
You have an amazing tale to tell and I cannot wait to read more!!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Thank you...I was getting worried you guys gave up on it!
Good chapter but wished for more detail. Did James have anything to say when he was being taken care of by the boys? Guess all the questions will be answered in the next chapters and epi.
Think it could be an original and would love to read Bella's back story. Hope the censors don't mind the graphic ness since it should be as the detail in the chapters really bring the story to life!
Great job and look forward to more!!
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76
Teehee teehee!! I was smiling throughout the entire chapter without one iota of sympathy for James. He got & is getting everything he deserves and needs more "training". I'm looking forward to the epi. So many questions but I trust you will answer all. Good luck & waiting with baited breath!!
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Fan-effing-tastic!!! Perfect ending to a wonderful journey. Good luck with the Orginal TSS. Cannot wait to see it in print!
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624918
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love
Wow...difficult to read.
Author's Response:
It's going to get worse before it gets better. Please be warned chapters 1 - 10 are graphic and deal with the abuse Bella suffers from her father & brother. If this makes you uncomfortable send me an email and I'll summarize for you. I swear the story doesn't stay this way and does have a happy ending.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Very uncomfortable. I know you gave the warning and a part of me wants to skip it but I know it will be for the good of the story.
My rating is to indicate the powerfulness of your words and in no way the content.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
I was going to review every chapter but realized I was so entranced with the story, I just wanted to read and read.
I was up until 2a reading the 1st 15 chapters and now 5 hours later, I'm at it again.
The 1st 10-13 chapters were difficult to read. I know incest exists but the subject matter is so taboo, unless you witness or experience it yourself, it's difficult to comprehend. (No, I'm not a victim of incest nor know of anything first hand).
There is something in the way you write that is very powerful.
Really great job!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
I cannot comprehend how vile and disgusting Carlisle is!! Yes, I've accepted James perversion and have had to rethink my previous opinion of Charlie because of this story but for some reason, it's difficult to imagine Carlisle like this. One thing to pretend to "examine" her so he can cop a quick feel but to sodomize her and be proud of it and to tell her he gets "hard" from hearing her scream and that he plans to continue to molest her? It's a lot to handle and am revolted.
I know this must mean your writing is fantastic as it envokes strong feelings so I will give you props for that.
Also, when I review, please do not take it personally. I only write what I am feeing or thinking from reading the chapter. It really isn't personal; it's just a reaction to the words.
Thanks!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22
Thank God the creeps are gone!!! I love how Jacob & Sam are the "good guys??"
I hope Carlisle gets off his Bella fetish ~ it's disgusting!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
I know you've already written the chapters but just wanted to add my 2 cents and hope Carlisle NEVER has the chance to rape Bella 'cause that's what it would be and if for some horrid reason he tries, Edward walks in and stops it!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Progress definitely but I wish she could have told Edward about Carlisle.
Enjoyed this chapter a lot!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40
You know Carlisle is just disgusting, right?? Cannot believe he is lusting after a 17 year old and the daughter of supposedly his "true love".
Bella has got to tell Edward and they all need to leave and let Carlisle rot in his own private hell. Same with Embry...what an ASS!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41
I know you've already written the chapters and I'm just commenting on what I'm reading at the moment but I have such a visceral reaction to Carlisle and his evilness. I am praying that Edward stops Carlisle's madness before anything happens. The incest was bad but this is even more vile!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42
Thank God for a sort sweet chapter! I know how much both of them have struggled to get to this point but I still can't get over my anger at Carlisle. PLEASE let him suffer a quick death NOW!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47
I'm almost afraid to read more.....
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
You know I was about ready to hunt you down, right?? Just kidding. Talk about giving me heart failure!
Leaving in a week for a 2 week vacation with NO INTERNET!! Don't know how I'm going to last with reading more!
Your writing is AWESOME!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49
So glad the evilness has left...how many more chapters do you think there is?
I have really become mesmerized with this story!
Author's Response:
There are only about 3-4 more chapters left
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Ahhhh.....I was so worried that Edward wouldn't let her go or maybe she would fail or even decide there had been too much damage to heal enough for a relationship with him.
So glad that didn't happen and glad there had been significant time for both and all of them to heal!
I will be sorry to see this story end; even if it was extremely difficult in the beginning but like all good things, it will have to end eventually.
Looking forward to the epi with excitement to see the finale but with trepidation as I know it's over.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue
Thank you for ending it the way you did. It was "perfect" the way you wrote it. A long journey that came full circle.
Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Great insight to JxA. Are you going to continue this story?
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm continuing the story. I've just had my mind focused on TPW. I've also been playing with an idea for a new story that just won't leave me alone. I promise this and CAM are my focus this week.
Today is supposed to be the best day of Bella's life but she is freaking out. When she revisits her past will she find that she has made a wrong choice? How will she fix it?
AH, OOC.
Rated M for my explicit language and future chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17107 Read Count: 8851
Date: 11 May 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue
Great story! Edward was engaged twice? Lol - that I found funny.
Three men... One had her. One has her. One wants her. What happens when the one who has everything he could want and more loses it? Can she over come her grief and confusion about wanting someone else? Will she give way to the man that gave her pleasure in the past or find out what she can have with someone new?
This is AU/AH. There is both Canon and Non-Canon couples in this story. Multiple POV.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50741 Read Count: 5743
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Miracle
Damn this is hot! Saw it on the library featured page and decided to give it a shot. Hmm....so how will Mike disappear and how do we get Jacob to run off?? So much fun *evil laugh* you shall have!!! The attraction is already there so the bumps in the road just need to be eradicated!
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116427
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I thought this was a grreat chapter! The reactions were priceless and so true to life like what would really happen.
Glad to see they're going to tell Renee and Charlie. I think they should start off with, "Renee, was there anything "extra" in the smoothies you insisted I drink for the past 2 weeks", or " Renee, is there something you'd like to tell me about the food you've been preparing for me?"
Honesly, this is Renee's fault. If she had been honest about the antibiotics, the unwanted pregnancy may bave been avoided.
Sorry this story may be delayed but I hope you can get back to it soon...I can't wait to see the parental reactions!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
First off, I'm glad your Dad is recovering. I'm in my mid 40's and lost my Dad 4 years ago. Up until his last breath, I was still "Daddy's Girl" so I get it.
I loved this chapter! It is funny how many people make the age difference such a big deal. I could understand if this was child slavery, non consensual, kidnapping or something like that but it's not. They met and fell in love. In 5-10 years from now, the 8 year age difference will not mean a thing. Sure, it may have been better if she had graduated from high school first, but she didn't, they met and if their feelings are to be believed, then it's fate.
Love Aunt Irina's comment about not having children since she was too busy raising Renee's and as for Charlie's edict??? Well, all I can say is I would marry Edward in a heartbeat; child or no child!!!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Wow...love this dominant Edward! He knows what he wants & isn't afraid to say what he means. It's a very sexy trait!
Hope it's not too angsty...I know the age difference may be an issue but I think the should be happy...for now!
Great job.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
WTF?!?! Who the hell is this Damon? I gotta go back & reread!
How the hell does Damon know Bella is pregnant & where does he get spewing this shit? Someone must have been at the hospital or been talking about them for Damon to do this. Hope it wasn't Renee. Who has the hots for Edward that wants to break them up?
You gotta update soon.... This is killing me & you don't want to make my child an orphan do you? ;)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Thank goodness Edward is so smart! Of course it's an inside job...maybe Renee?? Nah, probably a nurse who has the hots for Edward or maybe an old friend who wants to swoop in and comfort Bella when Edward leaves and is paying Damon moola.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Excellent but you left us hanging?? Who the he'll would betray Edward & Bella??
Hope you update soon?! Love it!
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315695
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
WTH is wrong with Bella? She's got the guy everyone wants who only wants to be with her and she doesn't know why she's not happier abou it. Child needs some help. I get she's insecure but she's got to take a chance and see where this may go. It may actually be what she needs to break the cycle of their parents.
Love possessive Edward. Have fun in Turkey!
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Finally!!! Great job!
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Amazing what peer pressure and societal pressure can do to young kids. Sorry....but where are the parents in all of this?? Oh right....doing the same thing but now they are adults!
Hope B&E can help each other and stop the circle of destruction. Sounds like they want off the carousel and hope they can make it!
Good Job!
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
All bets are off!!! Finally....2 lost souls finding there way to each other!! Let the good times begin!! (or continue...)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram
I get Bella and her insecurites...better to hurt than be hurt, right?? Sure hope she doesn't do anything stupid. James is bad news, Edward is hurt and confused by her behavior plus he has issues of his own, Rosalie is just plain mean and nasty.
Hope Jasper or Alice help Bella out of there or Edward can be the Knight in shining armour and swoop in to rescue her.
Good writing but a little p'o'd at Bella's behavior. Hope the next chapter has her redeeming herself!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Never Think
My heart hurts for these two kids! I get what Bella needs to do for herself and why she felt she had to lie to Edward (veer New moonish) but still don't agree.
Good chapter!
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo
Thank you for an epic update. I tried to take a break but I couldn't...just plowed right on through!
You did an awesome job conveying their feelings, emotions, triumphs and heartaches. I think they did need the time and space from each other and Bella from Forks to gain perspective, grow up and become the individuals they were destined to become.
Not surprised about Emmett and Rosalie. It's unfortunate but I think they will continue the tradition of the Beautiful. Dirty, Rich adults.
So...did Edward just happen to go into Bella's restaurant or did a pixie or grease monkey give him the goods?
Great job...looking forward to the next one!!
World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately. Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front. How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad? Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?
Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64094
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crucial Correspondence
Oh no!!! You can't leave us hanging?!?! I knew Edward was more reliable & conscientious than to leave his company without a contigency plan! Like my previous note.... Bella should have told Carlisle & Esme. Please please update soon!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations
War is stupid, let Edward come home and we will all live Happily Ever After!!
OK - I know this can't happen and I know you said you have no intention of it being like Pearl Harbor with Ben Affleck and knowing how most stories go, there will be drama and/or angst but I love how you incorporate the love letters ~ such a lost art.
Hope Aro gets what's coming to him. The board meeting should be interesting...what a shocker!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP
Oh you are so mean....yes, please be on Australian time so we can get the updates sooner!
Revenge is best served cold and with Aro, it should be icy!!
Love this chapter and the teaser is fantastic. It could be a chapter on it's own but I'm hoping you won't be that mean and not leave us hanging. Cannot wait to read Aro's reaction!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick
Excellent chapter! I loved the shareholder meeting - classic!!!
You're doing an wonderful job! I usually read on FFn but with all the issues on mature stories going on and authors having to "edit" their stories, I'll be switching over to TWCS for my fan fiction fix!
Author's Response:
We're glad to have you :) I love it here. It's much more personal here somehow. It's hard to explain, but I enjoy being here.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions
No sad endings, right??
BTW - love this story but you already know that!
Author's Response:
I promise...no sad endings. I like to bring you all to the brink of heartfail, but I could never leave it like that...:)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises
So glad nothing happened to the baby or Bella because of James. Talk about pure evil!!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front
So sweet! Could the dream Bella have really happen to Edward and the reason she "saw' it was because of their intense connection??
Hmmm....I wonder! Great job and glad she has protection from those evil men!
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes
HEA right?? I know the drama that must occur and willing to accept that as long as there is an eventual HEA!
Great chapter...caught the feeling of new motherhood and absolute terror when a telegram arrives.
Author's Response:
Never fear...I couldn't stand to do a story without a at least plausibly HEA...:)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar
I loved the pov & reunion!! Have a great mini vacay & happy happy to your little boy!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966
Excellent! Thank you for the epilogue and catching us up with all 4 couples without being too wordy. It was perfect the way you did it!
Looking forward to SF and your next story!!
Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER. But fate has plans. In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams. It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need. But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....
WARNING: This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content. Hence the NC-17 rating...
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64121
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Just finished reading all 17 chapters in 2 days; barely stopping to take care of my family.
Awesome story so far and looking forward to reading more. I decided to use TWCS instead of FFn because like most of us "mature" readers, we like the smut!
Great job and look forward to the update!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks...have fun reading it ;)
AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer. Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174117
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Candid
First off...love your writing!
When I first saw this story, I had a difficult time "connecting" with it. Somehow (no offense to the 1st author), it wasn't capturing my interest. When I saw that you had taken over, I decided to give it another chance and by the time your writing completely took over, I was hooked.
Thank you for this; I'm only into the 1st half but I am looking forward to reading the rest and not have to wait for updates as it's complete!! YAAAYYY!!!
Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55106
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research
So glad I found this site and see so many of my favorites from "the site that shall not be named" continue to post their "mature audience" stories!
Interesting first chapter. Like to see the confident Edward and Bella interact. Refreshing change.
Glad this story is complete for all intents and look forward to the updates!!
Author's Response:
I love that you turned ffn into Voldemort...priceless! I will still use "it" but all of these stories are going to live here only becuase they'll get taken down if I keep them there too long. There's a lot of banter and things progress quickly so it gets interesting fast in this one. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it so far!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Spooning in Forks
I've been reading this story from yesterday and my family life and comfort is paying the price as meals and laundry have been pushed to the side.
This chapter brought tears to my eyes as I witnessed my dad dying of diabetes and was there when he passed. It brought back many memories. You did a good job.
Even if I don't review every chapter, wanted to let you know your writing is very good.
Author's Response:
Awe! Thank you for the support. I sent you that message because I wasn't aware of the need to fave both the story and the author, so I'm glad you dove back in, though dinner breaks are important! Thanks for feeling that I did the moment justice, its a weird thing to say I'm glad you felt that way...becasue I'm glad I was able to move you, though not happy to see you cry ;..( Your continued support really does mean a lot!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research
No worries about the earlier message. I'm glad you did let me know that not only had I had to fav/alert my favorite authors but their stories as well.
I like TWCS library ~ FFn is good but didn't like all rules and regulations and them pulling or suspending really good writing! No one needs "big brother".
Almost done with the first story and cannot wait to delve into part 2!
Author's Response:
Awe...thanks! I've noticed a lot of people used to ffn not realizing that so when I saw the first comment and then nothing after I figured I'd drop a note just in case! I'm glad you're enjoying it and I'm working on betaing the rest of the sequel!
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373182
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess
You really have something here! I loved your stories from the "other" site and glad to see you here without fear of "big brother".
This story reminds me of the historical romances I love reading. That genre was my first love so I am looking forward to reading much more from you!
I am intrigued and cannot wait to read more....
Author's Response:
Thank you. I plan to post about twice a week for the time being. I have quite a few chapters already saved up and I want to pace them so hopefully I can keep it steadily posted on a regular basis. Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince
So....was it really Angela or was Bella trying to sneak a peak? If so, why didn't Edward recognize her???
Great story!!!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation
I love it! Have you on alert on FFn but decided to read ASF here instead!
Fantastic story and I love the slow burn.
Will they recognize each other at the wedding? How long has it been since their summer in Italy? What is the age difference between the two of them?
Do they get to honeymoon or is the passage back to England the honeymoon? Wouldn't it be great if they could go back to Italy for their honeymoon?
Anyway, sorry to get carried away...like I've said in earlier reviews, I love this time period and reminds me so much of historical romances!!
Author's Response:
Edward is 17 and Bella is 16 (many women were married off between 13 and 16 back then) They met in Italy nearly two years before. B was 14 and E was 15. The rest you'll just have to read to know. Actually I haven't had much time to write...so the last chapter I completed was the wedding night ;)
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities
--^--^--^-- (me jumping up and down) 'cause I love this story and this chapter as well.
I know it's short but to read about the fears and apprehension is so sweet.
Looking forward to the wedding & the wedding night!!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
Not long enough!! Don't mean to whine but it was such a great reveal that I wish it would have gone on a bit! Looking forward to the honeymoon. So glad Carlisle stood up to Charlie. Love how he took control. Great job!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss
OME!!! You did an amazing job capturing their love, lust and passion for each other!
I savored each word it was so special...I've heard about that era when proof of consumation and/or virginity was needed (like hanging the bed sheet out of the window to show the country that indeed, the bride was a virgin and the deed was done)but never that there were witnesses in the room. Guess it was different for royalty.
Excellent....not much more to say!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans
Excellent!! Nothing to add since you are weaving an incredible tale!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage
Fantastic as always. Glad to see a bit of humanity in Charlie...
Nice wedded bliss!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore
Calm before the storm perhaps?? Good job! Looking forward to reading more when I get back from vacation!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
Excellent!!! I hope Tanya does go to the dungeons & Edward sets her straight! OMG - didn't she hear about Edwards "Bella" italia is now his real love? Arghh...cannot stand women who refuse to face reality; no matter what the era! Have a great time & looking forward to the update!!
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
Hope Edward gets the chance to explain to Bella why he didn't come to bed & that Tanya is sent away before she can cause any trouble before she leaves. Edward should have been more forthcoming but he didn't know the evil Tanya had done or how Bella is feeling. These two will have enough drama for now without Tanya interfering. I'm sure she isn't done with her mischief yet but I hope you don't let her cause it now. Seems like Bella is in the"family way" so they deserve some respite before the sh*t hits the fan.
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath
Very good! I was so afraid that Tanya was going to cause trouble right at the start. So glad Edward nipped in the bud and Bella didn't have to wait so long for her happiness.
The calm before the storm...sounds like we're in for a bumpy ride. I hope you'll be including more of their newlywedness and the pregnancy progression.
It's such a great story...thanks for the regular updates!
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished
Yay - glad Edward put Tanya in her place & was honest with Bella. It may be too much to ask or expect but I hope Tanya doesn't cause any more trouble. More lovin from our favorite sovereigns. The calm before the inevitable storm.
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
Tanya is such a bitch! Woman scorned and all that. Know when to accept defeat and deal with it. Why buy the cow when the milk is free?!?!
Excellent chapter ~ You handled the language, tone and setting well. Looking forward to more!
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
Yay-Estrogen Power!! Tanya needs to get her cumuppence!!! Poor Mike!!
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
Yay-Estrogen Power!! Tanya needs to get her cumuppence!!! Poor Mike!!