Penname: campyrs2 [Contact] Real name: suzanne campbell
Member Since: 14 Feb 2013
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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 122240
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 14 May 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Sure wish you would have finished this story.  :(

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 81480
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I absolutely loved this story.  I read it quite awhile ago, but decided to read it again.  Thank you!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I absolutely loved this story.  I read it quite awhile ago, but decided to read it again.  Thank you!

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 177221
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

This was such a wonderful story..  I ran the gammut of laughter to tears.  Not many authors have your talent.  Thank you for sharing this awesome story!   I thoroughly loved every chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 445905
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue

This story was the BEST!  I haven’t laughed this much in a long time.  Thank you!  I enjoyed every chapter.

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 77963
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

This was a really good story!  Thank you for writing a vampire Edward and Bella story.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 29420
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Outtake - Official Timeline

This story was really good.  I hadn't seen this one before.  Thank you!

Sinful by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

As the end times approach the battle for souls on earth begins, so many people have yet to choose sides.

 Heaven and Hell have opened the gates and let loose the best they have to offer, the gates closed and

nothing may re-enter until the battle is won, unless, that is, you perish.

Amazing banner by; My husband

Fantastic beta's js18 and RAH07890- who also Americanises this story

This story will contain lemons...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25453 Read Count: 12364
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2012 Updated: 19 Feb 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

This was such a neat story.  I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

 Camprys2- Thank you for your kind words. xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

poison

Bella Swan's intrigued by vampires. Edward Cullen's bored and alone. What happens when they meet? AU, vampire. Inspired by Katy Perry's ET.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72381 Read Count: 13613
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interestimg chapter!  I love this story.  Thank you.  I always gravitate to the vampward stories.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's fun to write the vamps again :)  Been a long time!

Summary:

I am a vampire. He is a human. I am designed to kill. He is my ultimate prey. But can I make him mine?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 163034 Read Count: 47811
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter.  Glad you didn't abandon this story!   ;)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapter. Love Vampward the best of all stories.  Thank you!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This was such a great story!  I have loved each and every chapter.  I'm not much of a A/H reader so when I find a vampward story, I'm thrilled to be reading it.  Thank you so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Winner of the Twi Girls Next Door 12 Days of Christmas Challenge.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32659 Read Count: 9795
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This was so good!   Thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward met when she was 18. Now 4 and a half yrs later they meet again. Bella is a teacher and Edward works for the fire department. Will they let love in or be burned? AH. M for language/lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44330 Read Count: 37923
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This was an awesome story!  THANK YOU

Unlock Your Heart by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 440]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 102730
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awesome story!  Thank you very much.

Yawaruna's Coven by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Carlisle and Esme visit the fledgling coven of Edward Yawaruna ('The Panther') in time to celebrate his birthday.  They have quite the adventure in The Amazon, but they thing that will strike them most is the change in their son.  Whatever happened to the prim and proper boy?  It must be Bella's influence...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20908 Read Count: 1119
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was soooooooo good!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

I've missed being notified for a bunch of reviews. Thanks for reviewing! Nice to see you here. :)

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

Nominee

Win


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 293579
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween Hijinks

I was so glad to start reading this here on twcs.  I am trying to avoid ffn as much as I can.  Loved this chapter!   HOT........  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 92509
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - The Conference Room

Good chapter.  Bella has delt with so much pressure I'm not surprised she cracked.  can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the chapter.  Having a breakdown over everything wasn't that surprising, but at least Edward was there for her, and they could work together come up with some solutions.  The next chapter will post today!

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Just the beginning

This story was really good!  Thank you.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

tbw

Homeless Bella meets Edward just after being rescued from an assault. Mob boss Edward meets Bella just after being told he's out of time...he has to find a wife. Can they help each other? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36637 Read Count: 100449
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2014
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapters!  I love this story.  I always get excited when I see an update.  Gotta love Mobward!

Offers by California Kat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

offers

It’s been a year since Sookie witnessed her best friend being buried and since she got an offer from Eric.  She took him up on it.  Now she has an offer of her own for the Viking.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24122 Read Count: 1153
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2012 Updated: 13 Feb 2012
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Offers

This was a great story.   Thank you!

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 85662
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is sooooo  good!  Thank you.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three: Fire and Ice

Holy shit!  What an explosive chapter.  I can't wait to see where this story is going.  Thank you!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Diavolo

Wow, this has started out great.  Love mobward.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  I read it first on ffn but I like the pictures imbedded here at twcs much better.  They make the story better.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Untainted

Great chapter!  Loved it.  so well written.  Poor Bella, what a horrid time she is having.  

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Freed.

This is such a good story.  I hope you continue writing it.  I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is sooo good!  I'm glad you didn't forget this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter.  So glad you're back to writing this one again.  :-)

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow!  This was one hell of a chapter.  Love this story.  Thank you!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This was really intriguing.  You had no idea if he killed Bella after the previous chapter.  

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, this was a great chapter Ray!  Thank you so much.   I love this story.  

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh boy!  This was good.  Jessica was such a bitch to Bella.  Serves her right.

Decisions by Meridian Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Decisions...a different "Godric and Cara" story.

Godric is a very powerful, enigmatic vampire over 2000 years old. Cara is a 23 year old cheeky human office worker. Where will their decisions lead? OC/OOC, True Blood but *NOT* canon. "M" for future lemons. Minor Eric/Sookie appearances planned.

Decisions


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Crossover
Characters: Godric/Other Character
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100927 Read Count: 12694
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 23 Feb 2018
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I found this story and haven't been able to put it down.  I love Godric in this one.  Just a bit off-kilter.  But still loveable.  Thank you!  I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

campyrs2:  Thank you!  (Currently I have WIPs - this one, Moon, STC, EN: ATS, and One Night, so there's plenty to choose from!)  I'm glad you like it - Godric is the character who got me into writing fanfics, and I love being able to see and write him different ways.  I'll always be a little sweet on the old guy...  :D

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

This was great!  I had to go back to chapter 20 and re-read it to brush up a bit.  I was so happy to see this update.  Any story with Godric in it rates high on my reading list.  Thank you!!!   I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

campyrs2:  Thank you!  I freely admit to having a special place in my heart for my Godric-and-Cara stories and it's so nice when Cara "stops by for a visit".  I'm hoping the FLM (my Flighty Little Muse) will let Godric stop by and hang out for a bit soon, too!  Glad you liked it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 317473
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter.  Renee got off too easy.  She needed to suffer for being so abusive to Bella and an absolute bitch to everyone else.  Still, I'm glad she is gone.  I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter!  Finally good things are happenning.  yeaaa!



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Really good chapter!  Love this story.



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  I really feel sorry for Bella in this story.  Charlie is a real piece of work.  Bastard!



Author's Response:

Hey everyone thanks for reading and reviewing.  There have been several questions and some we can’t fully answer to not give away too much about the story and where we’re taking it.  But let’s start off with the easy stuff.  This will be about 25 chapters in total, give or take a few and we update every Monday or very late Sunday night.  There are many questions regarding the scene that Edward will be participating in.  It is a scheduled demo, teaching session.  We don’t want to give away any info on the scene as of yet, but trust us that there will be nothing remotely sexual about it for Edward at all.  The submissive which will be a part of the exhibition will not in any way shape or form, want or try to keep Edward as their own.  As for more info on Bella’s parents and why they are the way they are, you all really have to be a little patient, you haven’t even met them yet.  There are a LOT of seriously wicked guesses as to what is going on and why things are the way they are, but so far nothing is dead on correct.  You can join us on Facebook, search for the group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Hope you enjoy the teaser... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  The rest of the night goes slowly and my mind often deviates back to Bella.  I end up texting her just to have some communication with her.

Beautiful. How was work tonight?  Did you get much work done for college?  I just finished eating some of the lovely apple pie that you made me. It was truly one of the best I’ve ever tasted. Thank you.  ~Edward

I try to focus on my work, but find myself unable to stop looking at my cell. I close the club and head home.  I’m sad and upset that she didn’t respond to my text. By the time I get home, I feel even more upset and even angry.  I wonder why she wouldn’t text me back.  Thinking over reasons, I make a mental list. 

Have I scared her off? No, I don’t think that’s it.  She wouldn’t have agreed to meet up with me if I had scared her.  From what I see and know of her, she doesn’t ignore people, so that can't be it. 

Maybe her phone is out of minutes.  Now this is more possible, because her cell is one of those cheap pay-as-you-go ones and she has little money.  If that’s the reason, then there is no way for her to call or text me back.  Do dorm rooms come with a phone in them? Not really sure about that, I’ll have to check.  I know she is the type of person that would try to keep money on her cell and would say if she was low.  She has often said she needed to switch her phone off because she was low on minutes. 

Maybe she fell asleep and is a deep sleeper.  It has been after midnight when I texted her.  She did say she was normally home before eight and in bed by ten most nights.  Yep, that must be it.  She’ll most likely text me once she’s awake.  I’m sure she’ll feel bad that she missed my text.  One thing is for sure, she doesn’t need me being on her ass like white on rice.

I feel myself calming down after thinking over the theories, and I decide to head to bed.  I wake up and look at my phone seeing it's a little after seven in the morning, but I still don’t have a text from Bella.  I frown and let out a sigh as I rub my face, knowing that I need to get moving.  I’m supposed to be meeting my dad at nine for breakfast, because he won’t be able to attend dinner tonight.

I get showered and dressed all while glaring at my cell.  I see that there is still no incoming text. I text my father to say that I’m on way, and ask if he could text me back to be sure he got my message.  I frown even more when he's answering my text minutes later.  Well, that takes away the newest theory that my cell is not receiving incoming text messages.

I arrive at the hospital and see dad is waiting for me.

“What was the texting all about?”

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow!  What a chapter.  I get upset with how Charlie treats Bella.  I sure hope he gets what's due.  He needs to be taken down a peg or three...

 



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good chapter. Hopefully Charlie will get what's coming to him.  One can only hope.



Author's Response:

Well now seems like the major majority of you are all kinds of happy with Bella and Edward and how their progressing together.  We love it, Bella is finding her strength in Edward, but Edward is gaining and coming into a deeper strength too.  Many of you want redemption right away against Charlie and Jacob and the rest of the bad apples, and it will come, it’s still simmering and the dish of revenge is not quite ready to be served.  Next two chapters we will be given the honor of meeting Renee.  The way the story is going on our side there will be no more than 25 chapters total.  We have 18 written, and working on 19 and 20 now.  As soon as we are done, we will start posting faster.  I assure you that wrapping this story is one of our top priorities.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  Vicky smiles at me and then looks at Bella. “If you get tired of his old ass, call me,” she says as she hands her number to my girl.

I glare at Vicky.

“Oh, don’t pout, Edward. I will see your girl every Thursday from now on.”

I shake my head at Vicky, who is grinning widely.

I guide Bella out of the office, but then hear Vicky calling out for me. I turn and look at her.

“Tell James I’m ready for my second shot.”

I tilt my head and Vicky wiggles her eyebrows at me.

I smirk, shaking my head. “Will do, Vicky. Have good day.” I walk Bella out and see she’s still holding in her laughter.  “It’s okay, Little Girl, you can laugh. What did you think of Vicky, Little Girl?”

Bella smiles at me. “Sir, your girl thinks she is nice, but she seems like she walks to the beat of her own drum.”

I chuckle. “Little girl, Vicky has her own orchestra.  Let’s go to lunch.”

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, Renee is something else. I sure hope Edward puts her in her place.....  quickly.....   lol



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter.  Renee needs to tale a long walk off a short pier.



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Geez, what a emotional chapter.  I think I've had my fill of Renee.  I hope you off her in the next chapter.  Not sure I can continue to read more about her.  :(



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Really good chapter.  Poor Bella.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I too loved Esme's handling of Renee.  It was great!



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Another great chapter.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Such a good chapter.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love it!  Finally Charlie gets some of what deserves...   yeaaaaaaaaa!   :-)



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow!  This chapter was the BEST.......   Finally they got what they deserved..........   



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow, this chapter was great!  Thank you so much.



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter!  Sad that this story is nearing the end.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Such a great story.  Sad to see it end.  Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 95572
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter again.  Love this story.  Edward ALMOST acted normal.  (almost)........

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm not sure why chapters 9,10 & 12 the font will not resize.  11 seemed to be fine.  Its hard to read with the font so small.  

chapter was good though.  (what I could read)  lol

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Interesting story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Geez, Edward is such a prick in this story.  I sure hope he get his ass handed to him soon.  :(

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter.  Finally Edward is tolerable.  lol

 

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow!  Great chapter!  Love this story.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter!  Loving this story.

Broken Immortal by Sephrenia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Edward leaves Bella she gets changed when she visits the meadow. when she wakes she hides in the Cullen mansion. Will she be reunited with her mate? 1st story ... constructive criticism welcome

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Featured Story September 2013


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55208 Read Count: 58555
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thank you for this chapter. Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks ... I'm working away on the next chapter so hopefully there will be an update soon .... :)

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Finally some justice for Marcus!   yeaaa.  I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks ... the next chapter will be up shortly

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good for Bella thinking to use her power  to save the little boy.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks ... yes it is a good use of her gift ... now if there was only a way that she could do it more ..

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter!  Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks   I glad you like the story

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh boy its getting good now.  I hope Rosalie gets what she sows.  At least Esme sees through her act



Author's Response:

Rosalie will get exactly what she is asking for ... thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Another great chapter.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

ahh ... thanks for taking the time to read and review

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Another great chapter.  Geez, Aro is so deluded if he thinks he is getting Bella.....  



Author's Response:

Aro is certainly a weird duck ... and you are right he isn't going to get Bella... thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this chapter.  You can always depend on Emmett to want to help.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks,  Yeah Emmett will always be there to help protect his family.

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Interesting chapter.  Love this story.



Author's Response:

thanks ....

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

good chapter!  I can't wait for the next one.  ;)



Author's Response:

okay no more waiting ... new chapter is up   ..LOL   thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Cool chapter.  love this story!



Author's Response:

thanks, your reviews have meant a lot to me  ....

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Interesting story.  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

what a chapter! well done.whHolyw



Author's Response:

I am very happy that you are enjoying the story .... thank you so much for taking the time to read and review

 

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, this is getting really good....  can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read & review  I really appreciate it  and I'm glad you are enjoying the story

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter!  On to read the next......    ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review ...I'm glad you are enjoying the story

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Aw crap, a cliffy!  I can't wait for tbe next chapter.  Great story.



Author's Response:

thanks for your review ... by the time you get this the next chapter will be up and cliffy solved.

seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Another good chapter.  Good story.



Author's Response:

thnaks for taking the time to read & review the story ....I am glad that you like it

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter!  Can't wait for the next.



Author's Response:

Thanks ... Next chapter Emmett will join up with them  

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oooh  a cliffy! this is so good.  love it!



Author's Response:

thanks , I'm glad you like it  .... see you next chapter

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapters (as usual)  lol  Loving this story.



Author's Response:

thanks so much ... I'm really glad you like it

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapters.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it ... The girls have been busy so tonight is party time  

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter as usual.  I wish you luck on the eye surgery.  I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks ... thank you for the good wishes .. the surgery went very well ... I have one more on Oct.1 ... the next chapter will be up shortly ...

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter!  I hope your surgery went well.  love th

is story!



Author's Response:

The surgery went very well thank you .... thanks for the review I'm glad you like the story

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow, alot of stuff going on in this chapter.  Interesting .....



Author's Response:

yeah we're getting closer to the meeting with Aro so things will be happening  thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wonderful chapters!  I love this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you .... I am very glad you are enjoying the story ... next chapter should be tomorrow ...

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What the HELL!   Caius?  Wow, didn't see that coming.

 



Author's Response:

LOL ...  Yep he has the answers they need ....

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good chapter.  thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks ... the new chapter is up ...  I hope you like it ...

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Short but interesting.  Hope the surgery went well.  Love the story!



Author's Response:

thank you for the well wishes ... this surgery was a little tougher than the first one .... but the eyes are healing nicely .... I am sorry it has taken me so long to answer .... the next chapter should be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Interesting!  This is really getting good.  Glad you are back.  I missed your updates.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the welcome back .... next chapter will be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Whoo  Hoooooo!  Yea Bella!  Aro needs to be taught a lesson.



Author's Response:

oh they will take him to school .. LOL 

seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I loved this story!  I have since chapter one.  I'm so sorry to see it end.  I hope ypu continue to write.  I will read your stories greatfully..  Thank you!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the story ... thanks so much for all the reviews you sent me ... I am continuing to write  I am on the 4th chapter of a new story.  I want to get a few  more chapters done before I start posting ...

Seph

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 275373
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is such a good story!  I had a problem reading chapter 4, but Kelly said she can fix it.  Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This is a great story.  I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter,  Tanya is such a pain in the ass.  I can't wait for the next chapter..  

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great chapter!   Thank you so much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set from Season 2 after Sookie watches Godric meet the sun she goes to Eric to comfort him. Bill doesn’t like this. At first Sookie and Eric will be friends but soon they will become so much more.

 

This is my first story. All mistakes are mine.

All characters belong to Charlaine Harris, Alan Ball, HBO, etc.

I own nothing.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75043 Read Count: 9798
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2013
Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This was a very good story.  Thank you!