Reviews by Sellabella
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625424
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Sellabella Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I liked the dream. But afraid of Edward not believing Bella when she finally tries to tell him of his father. Will he believe her or think of this as a reason not to.

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76230
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Sellabella Signed
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Being Away from Her

Great chapter. Hope Edward does explain to Bella. I want to see her reaction. Will she be relieved? Are we getting closer to finding out what really happened to her? Waiting patiently for the next chapter.

I had a total knee replacement two years ago, so I know how hard the recovery is. Despite set backs with the recovery, once it's over, life does get much better than before the surgery. Just during recovery, it feels more trouble than worth. I wish you all the best to you, your mother and your family as you try to get through this.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Edward will explain the mating thing, not right away but he will.  Her reaction?? you'll have to see!!

Thank you for the kind words as well.  My mom had her other knee replaced last year and di much better.  This leg was worse and they needed to do more invasive things to fit the knee, and then she feel in the hospital which wretched everything.  She's doing much better now so hopfully she's past the worst!

 

Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next chapter.  Don't hurt me!

Emmett spoke up. “Will she be ok Carlisle?”

He nodded. “She should be fine. She’s dehydrated, and has lost a lot of weight.  From the look of it she hasn’t slept and it looks like her body just gave out. It happens to people that push themselves past the point . . . “

Carlisle cut off when Esme gasped and Rose called out, “What the fuck!”

I had been avoiding the thoughts of the women to give Bella as much privacy as I could, but immediately I saw what they had seen.  I shot off the couch yelling. “What kind of sick sadist did that? What happened to her?”

I started pacing and was growling. Jasper put a hand on my arm to calm me.  I wrenched away from him. “Leave me alone!”

He didn’t take offense but spoke in a calm voice. “Talk to me brother. What did you see? What happened to Bella?  Is she ok?”

I tugged at my hair. “Yes, no, I don’t know. She’s . . . marked.” I couldn’t bring myself to say more.

Emmett came up to me. “What’d you me marked?”

I swallowed and put my hands on my hips trying to get the vision out of my head, but it was burned there and would never leave.

“On her stomach . . . it looks like she was cut with a knife . . . multiple times . . .” I took a deep breath.  I couldn’t even say it.

Carlisle spoke. “What else son?”

I looked at him and whispered, “Someone branded the word ‘MINE’ over it.”