Reviews by treymaine
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 367027
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: treymaine Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

Heartbreaking chapter.

Did Rosalie hit Emmett on the head and he has selective amnesia?

 Did his conversation with Bella not happen?

 Cause if not Emmett is a first class bastard. The only thing Emmett stated correctly in his conversation with Edward is that they both owe Bella big. That's correct cause I see Esme, Alice and Rosalie going to town on him if they ever find out what he said to Bella. And let's not forget Bree...LOL just the thought of Bree being let loose on Emmett is a giggle worthy thought.

While Bella and Edward have some things to work through, this heartache is all on Emmett. I think they could have worked though this (lots of yelling and others thinsg would have happened) if Emmett hadn't so thoroughly used every weakness he ever learned about Bella in order to help drive her off.

That said I can't wait for the next update.