Reviews by RubyDee
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983473
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She'll do it for Edward.  After all friends do help friends right.  Looking forward to PP's visit.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Much as I dislike the pig I have to remember that Bella gave him threet years of her life.  That has to account for something.  In any event he is gone for now.  And speaking of now.  Doesn't Edward have something to ask Bella or at least tell her about?!!  ;)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I swear I held my breath when she asked who he was taking to the event.  Still holding it waiting for her response.  I should skedaddle to the next chapter before I turn blue.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

No matter how anxious I am for them to "get together" it is pretty clear this relationship is platonic.  If nothing else they are fun.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Sounds like Jasper knows what he is talking about.  Perhaps Bella shpuld listen.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well.  Judging by her 3 things list she could fall for him if she wasn't concerned about affecting her relationship.  Looking forward to the gala now, really big.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Nothing like giving Bella a case of the nerves.  Can't wait to see the dress.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

The winds are shifting as Bella's dreams continue.  I'm sure Edward will let us know if she talks in her sleep or not. 

I have not commented on this yet .... I am sooooo glad Bella is a real girl.  I can remember a time when everyone around me was all tiny and skilnny and here I was with my 38 - 25 - 37 measurements and stuck out like a sore thumb.  Back then I jumped back and forth between healthy eating and anorexia.  It was terrible.  Today I see so many girls with curves and they are proud to own them.  Thank You for writing a breatiful young woman with a quick wit and good heart.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

One must agree, Rose is a piece of work.  Maybe you could unleash her against Paul.  In any event Tanksgiving should be fun.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I don't know that I would want to spend any amount of time with Rose.  Maybe she can get nicer as the story progresses.

 

Here's a true story for you.  My husband thought he'd be cute and record me sleep with the video camera.  Silly man was laughing so hard you couldn't hear anything else.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

R gets worse and worse.  Looking forward to the revenge.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Blue becomes her .... yeah I had to go look.  Loved how Bella presented the chicken and lettuce.  lol.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Rosalie is a disgusting pierce of work.  Yeah, she should be with Paul.  Loved how the Cullen family dealt with her.  Just glard Edward was there to hold her and talk to her in the aftermath.  So we are switching back to BPOV and still do not know what she says or if she talks in her sleep! lol.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Can't help but feel bad for Emmett.  Also wonderif Rosalie's problem with Bella is nothing more than jealousy.  Gues we'll find out should she come back in to the story.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Esme, ya gotta love that woman.  And E/B?  The writing is on the wall.  Only question is when will they read it.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Decorating was so much fun .... a real family affair. 

Looking forward to the benefit!!!!!

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

He does look, yeah?  And about the feelings stirring .... oh yeah.  I have no idea what she is wearing but I have a feeling the stirrings are more physical seeing her come down the stairs.  

Thank you for this update.

Summary:

After being announced as America's longest living married couple, Bella tells her great-granddaughter the story of how she and her husband started their life together. Inspired by the story of John and Ann Betar, but with a modern twist.

This story is my entry to the FictionPad Olderward/Olderella contest, where it placed 2nd for Best Bella and 2nd for Best Romance. Right now this is just a one-shot, but I may eventually extend and rewrite it into a full story. For now, please enjoy! 

 

2nd place Best Bella

 

2nd place Best Romance

Award banners made by Ashes AtMidnight.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6096 Read Count: 718
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2014 Updated: 01 Mar 2014
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1


This story actually brings tears to my eyes.  My parent were married 63 years when we lost mom.  Three years later  not a day passes that dad does not miss or speak of his "bride" as he has so lovingly called her all these years.  I am so happy that you chose to tell a love story that has experienced the "Test of Time".  Thank You so much for sharing Eternally Entwined with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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To Edward Masen, Bella Swan was nothing more than his daughter's best friend. That all changed when they both applied for the same weekly writing course. She didn't appear to be the young girl who had played with his daughter since her family moved in next door. What will Edward do when he realizes that he's developing a very forbidden attraction for a woman twenty-five years his junior


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58 Read Count: 18209
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2014 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Story has been temporarily pulled

  Forbidden Attraction is the perfect name for this story.  I have read very few olderward stories and I must say this one changes my perspective of that thought.  Can't help but feel saddened at the outcome and yet know that, given enough time, they could find their way to one another.  Thank you for sharing this with us.

Summary: Past Featured Story

fertile

 

 

Summary: Almost over the hill--in her own mind--Bella wants a family, so she chooses in vitro. Tainted by playboy father, Charlie's need to date barely legal girls, causes her to push away a younger Edward. AH/Rated M

Edited for content on FFN. Unedited will post on TWCS and FicPad.

Banner by: Beffers87

Birthday story for: Bobbi Wordsmith aka: AWayWithWords


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20562 Read Count: 56115
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2014 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward is so damn adorkable.  If he keeps at it he will get into her heart too.  Besides he'd be good for her.  She's just too damn serious. 

*psst* has he donated any sperm lately?

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fertile Dreams has all the earmarks of a good story,  Looking forward to more.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jessica and Mike?!!!  Hate to be them if and when they are caught.

Bella and Edward.  My, my.  The dance has begun.  He is young and flirtatious.  Not so much smooth as outright in his effort of seduction.  She is older and wiser.  Not to mention she the snarkier edge. It was fun to watch them in this chapter and one can only imagine it is going to get a whole lot better.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Repost .... A spelling error here or there sure can make a difference in communication, lol.

So there we have it .... the mystery of the baby daddy.  Bella's history with men is not to promising.  She needs a good guy. Could it be she has found one in a younger man?

And what do we think of Charlie?  Hmmm.  He is quite the character.  He  pulls no punches with what he wants.  Does he seek the virtual fountain of youth or has he simply not found a woman his age that can replace the wife he lost all those years ago?

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Charlie and Edward have hit it off.  And since dad has no problem with age why should Bella right?  lol.  Think it's funny that Charlie came to Bella to help him break up with Kate.  And Edward?  He is so swoon worthy.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh Edward.  Bella added fruit loops to his wheaties and that just wasn't right.  In Bella's defense her reasoning is valid.  After all she has never led him on.  Despite everything  Edward has been nothing but wonderful to Bella.  Ah but what will it take for her to see him as a man.

Charlie could use a little growing up. Perhaps he could follow Edward's example.

Bella sure had a crappy day.  Did she ever take the time to eat?  Is that what is wrong with her now.  Lucky for her Edward came to the rescue yet again.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is absolutely wonderful.  Liked that Carlisle was able to give Bella a little peace of mind.  Edward staying down the hall in his father's office is so sweet.  And coming by in the nick of time the following morning was priceless.  Bella sure held her own with the mean nurse.  And shame on the nurse for causing Bella more stress.  And thanx a lot.  It is only 10:15 am here.  Breakfast is behind me lunch a couple hours away and all I want to do right now is eat bacon and eggs.  lol.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Whoa!  Jump Back Jack and Hold the Phone!  How cool is this twist?!!!  Just think they will be spending a whole hella lot of time together now and we are already seeing a few cracks as Bella's resistance crumbles a little.  Way To Go, Edward!  Slow and Steady wins the race.  Well, it's not exactly a race but my excitement and enthusiasm is the same.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Can you all the smiles at computers throughout the world right now?  Sure there is a certain amount of fear for little one and Bella but with Carlisle in his scrubs and Edward by her side we just know it is going to be alright.  Of course faith in our author helps too.  :)           

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

My heart fills with simple happiness for these two.  Correction.  These three.  :)  I wondered if Esme might not be older that Carlisle.  The way he tells her he will propose to her ..... *swoon*

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yes.  Quite the proposal.  While we are at it, let's not forget those perks.;)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This has been a fun story to read.  How could anyone not love this Edward.  Charlie may not have bee the perfect father but I did get quite a few laughs at his expense.  Loved Bella.  It was fun to read all of Edward's antics in trying to woo his girl.  Mia was so much fun to read too.  Smart little girl.  I just hope she continues to follow her dreams and stays on course to be just like her mommy and daddy.  I sure would hate the thought that she would grow up to be a used car salesman.  With that much charisma she could do some major damage.  lol.  Nah, just havin' fun with ya.  Thank You So Much for sharing Fertile Dreams with us.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113997
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 13 part 7

That was certainly interesting.  So sweet to see Edward in a domestic role with Elizabeth while Bella sleeps.  Jasper is the one that surprised me.  But where is Alice?  Certainly she did not come home early.  And if she didn't Jasper would not have lost her right?!! lol.  Was he setting the stage for diversion allowing Alice to sneak in?  Looking forward to this explanation (with amusement, I might add!).

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 17 Part 9

The Kiss!!  Omg, this is going to really happen isn't it?!!  A very tender moment.  :)  Even when Alice and Jasper walk in. 

And now to put the kibosh on the rumor mills and buzz kill as a whole new scandal rocks the webs.  It is hard to believe that people actually get mad for gossiping about others.  While E/J come up with a strategey for getting E/B out of the hospital Tanya sits a few blocks away playing ... well what exactly is she playing?  Distraught mother?  Woman scorned?  Just hope that if fans have to eat this up they remember the sick child and the "parents" who love him.

What a way to start my day!  <3

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

Jasper is in trouble where Alice is concerned.  It's not that he is not up to the challenge and what a challenge it will be.  Can't help but think that sometimes you win when you lose.  *gigglewink*

And Edward/Bella/Tanya.  I have been so drawn to E/B that I'm afraid I have underestimated what Tanya may be capable of.  It is sad to think that she could use her son to paint her in the best light.  Hopefully Jasper will be able to stay a step ahead of her. 

No matter the direction it will be a win for me.  I hate the Tanya's that spin the tale to their advantage no matter who they hurt along the way.  And I love the E/B stories where they overcome obstacles and come out on top.  Bottom line I am hunkered in and strapped down for whatever is about to transpire.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10

Jasper was wise to want to spin the story in this way.   Im the meantime it is nice that Edward and Bella get this alone time with Charlie which has to give him a sense of the norm he would have if he were at home.  When Tanya does show up the ball will be in her court.  Question is will the ball be foul? 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

*rolls eyes at Tanya and her idle chatter. lol*  I'm with Edward on this one.  It would be so much more fun to stay home and watch with Bella and the kids.  On the other hand I do hope he wins an award.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 13 part 3

And a delicate new dance begins ....

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

We knew Alice would look stunning in her dress.  How will Tanya react when those on the red carpet take notice of Alice? ;)  Looking forward to what is to come ....

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 May 2016 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 20 Part 3

Gotta love Alice and her ability to re-direct the questioning.  The banter elicited more than a giggle or two that's for sure.  Looking forward to more.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 13 part 1

You don't suppose Tanya will want to take the little one tonight, do you?  Wouldn't put it passed her have the opportunity to eat up the attention. Besides Alice is going to get plenty of attention when she shows up in her dress unstaging the queen killer bee. 

Let the games begin ....

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 12 Part 5

Breast man indeed. ;)  For the most part the moments in this chapter are so honest and tender.  When he tell her, “Why couldn’t you be her,", I cannot help but wonder if he means Charlies mom. 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Everything was lighthearted until Tanya threw her weight around and "put Bella in her place".  That woman is  pure poison.  My heart may have melted just a bit when Edward asks if everything is alright.  Despite the saddness, the concern and comfort he offers her warms my heart.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

It really is sad that Edward shares a son with Tanya and yet they do not share the joy.  Despite Tanya's words and actions, I love how Edward (and Bella too) is so nurturing to his son.  One cannot help but feel the love as Milk Money unfolds.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 12 Part 2

This could be the start of something big for Alice.  Cannot wait to see what she comes up with.  Can you imagine Tanya's surprise should Alice's dress be the talk of the Red Carpet?

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 12 part 1

Yes, Alice, you are!  Will she still be wearing that little black dress?  Will she have time to put something else  together?  Their budding romance is so much fun to read. 

What about Bella overhearing the E/T convo?!!  Don't you know she is standing a little taller right about now.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 11 Part 4

Class and grace will not be found in Tanya's assets column.  Can't help but giggle that Edward tells Tanya that Bella's boobs are spectacular.  Her reaction .... priceless.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 17 Part 7

Thank Goodness Edward has arrived.  In doing so there is a certain calm that fills the room and we just know that little one is going to be alright.  In this very moment, as Charlie gets the care he needs and E/B are there for him we do not see his father and his wet nurse ... No, we see a family unit.

Now Tanya on the other hand?  Is she strong enough to to dance with Karma or will it eat her up and spit her out?

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 17 Part 8

Be.Still.My.Heart.  (*breath*ruby*breath*  Had I gotten any closer to the computer as I was reading that last part I would have bumped my noggin.)

Charlie's temp is coming down.  He's eaten a bit.  He's resting comfortably.  And they are keeping him overnight for observation.  Great sigh of relief in knowing the crisis has hopefully been averted.  Let's not forget how the doctor let them know he was putting bureaucracy aside in allowing Bella to stay.

Did Bella catch that little term of endearment when Edward referred to her as honey?  It is probably safe to say his admission to Bella has hearts a flutter the world over.  Just think, in the quiet of the hospital room, as Charlie sleeps restfully, a whole new future unfolds before us.

<3

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 15 Part 2

Oh yea, life goes on, long after the thrill of the Oscars is gone  .....

It's heartwarming to watch "family" moments between Edward, Bella and the children.  Tanya is so shallow she does not see the down to earth foundation that is being built around her.  It will most likely be too late to stop it once the reality sinks in.  It will be interesting to see her reaction.

There was never any doubt that Alice would make the best dressed list.  Wonder if Tanya will want her to make her next big event dress.     Does she view Rosalie as a threat.  What lengths will she go to, to out dress her the next time around?  Sure hope Alice does not get caught in the middle of a dress war.  And if Alice is going to make a dress for one of them I hope she choses Rosalie.  While she is at it she could start making Bella a Cinderella gown in the outside chance she gets invited to the ball.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 15 part 3

In all honesty I am trying to feel bad for Tanya but I'm having trouble locating her motherly instincts. We caught a glimmer of happiness in Edward before she let him plumment back to earth.  It would be in everyone's best interest if she would back away from the photo shoot.  We'll see ....

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 17 Part 11

Holy Guacamole!  Did not see that one coming.  (Tanya's the slut!)  Wonder what would have spurred that on unless there is a phote of her being with James at the hotel in a seductive embrace.  You don't suppose Charlie's paternity will be questioned do you?  Holy mother of Pearl, that would be right there in the worst case scenario column.  And even if this would be the case would Edward (and Bella, too) have a leg to stand on in a custody battle?  Correct me if I'm wrong but wouldn't they get a whole lotta support as a trial would rage on.  Oh how I wish I had time to join your facebook page right about now.  lol.  <3

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Tanya is history!  Happy, Happy, Happy!  Just think Jasper did not have to do a thing to spin the story in Edward's favor.  Who would have thought the paps could be so useful.  And ya gotta love Rosalie and her warm motherly heart.  Thank You! 

PS - Hope you feel better soon.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Carlisle and the nanny?!!  Ewww. Just.  Ewww.  lol.  Laughed at Esme's words about Edward's vampire smile.  Of course actors act and we'd never know any different.  Emmett is so funny.  But I really like the playful banter between him and Bella.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 14 Part 1

Right under their noses, indeed!  I have a feeling Bella will accompany Edward to next years oscars.  :)  I'd be curious what Tanya has to say about Alice once she hears and reads the word on the streets about her dress savvy.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Nothing like starting the day with the most important meal.  The whip cream added  a new step to the delicate dance between E/B.  Certainly this did not escape Jasper's watchful eye.  The gathering of the family was so much fun to "watch".  I cannot stop laughing with everyone after Elizabeth's innocence.  I hope Tanya found the humor in the little ones use of the word.  Idk though, she does not have much of a personality. 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 20 Part 6

Never a dull moment!

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Every so often I find a chapter that I feel could have been written just for me, lol, and that is how this one feels.  From the onset you debunk the rumors and put Edward (and myself) at ease.  Emmett's interaction with her made me giggle.  I'm trying to figure if he is a tad bit infatuated or in awe of her beauty.  Talk of food choices was funny.  Now the body guard business may have struck a chord and I can very easily see a very protective Emmett surface.  So excited to see how that will play out.  In any event, Rosalie could very easily become a member of the extended family that is slowly building in a nearby home.  

Once again, Thank You, for another really good chapter.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

Tanya is pretty grumpy.  Could it be Edward won a trophy and she did not?  Maybe because everyone laughed when Elizabeth called hera bitch?  Or could it be that she simply cannot stand the domestic blissful harmony that seems to engulf those around her?  Of course it doesn't matter.  And hey who knows she might have something going on outside the bubble of home. 

A couple of things I found interesting this time around.  For some reason I was thinking E/T would be doing the show together (hmph, go figure).  I cannot seems to keep my imagination in check.  She have a strike against her from Tanya's court.  She is referred to as an Ice Queen.  And Emmett has heard she is a lesbian.  Now that the speculation has taken flight I look forward to the truth.  I sure hope Emmett eats his words.  And lets applaud Edward for his stand that no matter what, as long as she does her job well, it doesn't matter.  The other thing that grabbed my interest is the papps being at the park when E/B take the children there.  Boy Howdy this could be quite the fodder for our star and his sons wet nurse.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Their is the ease of family that surrounds them within the new routine at home.  One cannot help but wonder how long Tanya will tolerate the intrusion to her home.  Then again she is free to move about the house with no responsibility on her part.  Can't help but be surprised that she has not banished Bella and the kids to a wing of their own so they do not untidy the main living areas.  Bella continues her classes and saving her money, which is good.  But.  Will Tanya want her out of the house all together once little man is able to tolerate other foods.  Then again if pumped breast milk can provide his nutrition Tanya may thing they may not need Bella in the house.  From the outside looking in it appears Tanya has not had a bonding experience with her son and we all know how important that is for a child and his mama.

LOVE that Jasper is spending more time at the house hanging with Alice. 

This story really pulls at my heartstrings.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 10 May 2015 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 11 Part 3

She can hardly stand to be around her own child, how will she ever handle being around Bella's little one?  Tantrum Tanya meet Mama Bear Bella.  There is no questioning who will win this war.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 14 part 3

Bella's pov of the award ceremony was fun.  With a few words of  acceptance we can see a pivotal change in the E/B dynamic.  Big changes are on the horizon at home ...

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 13 Part 6

It comes as no surprise that he would win.  :)  His thank you to Charlie and "Bella" was very heartfelt.  I'm sure that mother of the year basked in that glory.  Speaking of her, too bad she didn't win *cue sarcasm*.  One can imagine the excitement Alice felt going to the parties.  That would have been fun to watch.  Wonder how many orders she will have for her designs now.  Love how Edward got up and checked on the little ones the following morning.  He is a good man..... 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Taanya can't be bother with breast feeding .... she doesn't want to take a chance that her breasts might melt.  Some women were never meant to be mom's and Tanya appears to be one of them. 

Looking forward to meeting Bella.  :)



Author's Response:

LMAO... funny!

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (part 1)

Jake is an ass.  Not a one woman kind of guy?!!! Friggin A$$ho is what he is.  She may need help finacially but she does not need him.  Hopefully Edward will arrive on his white horse soon.  IT is going to be so much fun to watch these two grow together.   <3

 

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 (part 2)

The future was looking pretty dismal for Bella.  And as in all things in life when we truly need something it will manifest.  Giggle if they will this may be just what she needs.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

I am soooo behind on all the stories I am following.  Catching up on Milk Money has been a true treat.  I really like how Bella has stepped in and up to help little Charlie to thrive.  The whole esprit de corp among the characters makes me smile.  Well except for Tanya .... she does not make me smile at all.  I want to sit that girl down and have a looooong talk with her about being a mama but I have a feeling Bella is going to take care of that by SHOWING her how it is done.  Edward is beginning to see Bella in a different light.  Can you imagine how he can hold back once he sees her in a swim suit.  If Tanya has any prayer of holding on to her man I suggest she get her hiney home pronto. 

Have I told you how much I am enjoying this?!!  lol.



Author's Response:

I'm sooo glad you are :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

Like how the girls are settling in.  We just know they are going to become a comfortable family.  Well Tanya may not think so when she realizes what she stands to loose.  ;)

Good thing the door was locked! lol.  May have been a good idea that it was Jasper rather than Tanya that was trying to get in too.  I don't imagine she will like that her man is calling Bella's name in his sleep with or w/o his pants on. 

Boy, am I glad I came back to this story.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Luckily Jasper heard Edward rather than Bella.  Can't help but feel life will not be any better once Tanya does return home and what then?  Will she make life difficult for him when she sees how he is around Bella and little Charlie?   Looking forward to what is in store for this trio.  And Alice and Jasper .... they make me smile.  Ya, just know he is smitten and looks forward to any challenge she might present.  He wins, even if he loses.  The gif is perfect!  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

Jasper is in as much trouble as Edward when it comes to these girls. Can't help but read the character interactions and inner thoughts w/o a smirk.  The guys just don't stand a chance.  Which reminds me I keep forgetting to tell you how much I like the name "Bumble Bee" for Alice.  It describes her perfectly and Jasper has already been stung .... but in a good way.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

He has it bad!  I sure hope he askes BB to be his date for the Oscar's.  It could be the start of something very beautiful for them.  With E/T in attendance it would give Alice an opportunity to get a feel for that relationship.  Like sisters do, Alice could take the info to Bella and the chips would continue to fall into place on that front.  hmmmmm .....

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

From the outside looking in, IF we didn't know any better, we'd think this was a very happy family.  I both look forward to and dread Tanya's introduction into this family dynamic.  Such a good story.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

I can so picture "our" Edward embarassed and discombobulted by walking in.  Such an endearing site and another moment of E/B bonding.  It is heartwarming.  At the same time I wonder if Tanya will see this right off the bat and do something rash.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

I swear my heart stopped the moment Edward tossed the ball into Bella's court.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 10 Part 3

Uh Oh.  Edward will leave and Tanya will be home?  This could get very interesting.  I hate the thought that Tanya could have the power to ask Bella to leave.  On the other hand I know better than to cross that bridge before all the information is in. lol.  I really like the moments that Edward and Bella spent together as Bella fed the little one.  There is an ease with them that is calming and exciting at the same time.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

When is the last time that man has seen a boob so up close and personal?  lol.  Little by little these 2 little families are bonding.  I don't want that to see that end but .... As my mama used to say, "It's gotta get worse before it can get better.".



Author's Response:

Oh aint that the truth!!!!

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 10 Part 5

As much as I could feel E's momentary panic I cannot seem to contain my laughter as he rips off his shirt to cover Bella.  Didn't take long for the laughter to become a sigh at the sight of Bella's view. ;)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 10 Part 6

Did Tanya come home early?

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

The "family" moment was so cute.  Edward may have gaped a bit longer than necessary but it was all good.  Good thing Tanya was downstairs during the big reveal.  Unfortunately life as they have come to know it must come to an end.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 11 Part 1

Such an ease and  harmony around the house.  Enter, Stage Left, Tanya.  Damn Bitch.  Then again I love having a character that I can dislike with a passion while rooting for the others.  lol.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

Such an innocent gesture elicits such thughts.  Canb't blame the guy.  We do not know a whole lot about Tanya yet but what we do know we don't like.  Bella is so real and so good.  Tanya is so fake and so superficial.  Bella also has a love for children and is so much more of a mama to Charlie than Tanya can be. 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 19 Part 2

I am loving this "family" sized bubble you have created where each of the couples can be together as couples away from photographers and fan where they can simply be.  Each one brings so much to the storyline. 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 17 Part 5

Excellent!!!  You nipped that in the bud with no problem.  Loved how Edward treated the situation and is off to the hospital.  You have set this up to be one of the best E/B scenes within our community.  Cue my tears already.  *lesigh*

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 17 Part 6

“And I’m Queen Elizabeth,”  ROTFLMFAO!  That was too f'n funny.

Like how he took off like a man on a mission to get to his son.  The call to Jasper had to set his mind at ease just a bit in knowing that Bella is with Charlie.  It will be interesting to see the outcome.  Bella may not be his mama but Charlie doesn't know that and I'm certain there is no one he'd rather be with than her (other than his daddy of course).

So sweet that he autographed the magazine for the girl.  She could have squeed but she kept her cool ... seems all fangirls could learn a thing or two from her.

As always I cannot help but wonder what will come next.  Will the paps get word that Edward is at the hospital?  Will they be there trying to get pics and see Edward?  How will they react if they should see Bella?  Talk about a can on worms.  And no matter how the story spins the morning photo shoot will be a bust.  Tanya may be a good actress but I don't know how she can walk away from this without egg on her face (not to be confused with  the egg white facial thingy). 

Darlin', every chapter gets better and better.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 17 Part 4

A knock at the door?  This cannot bode well.  Charlie must have taken a turn for the worse and with no other way to reach the parents this will have to do.  That damn Tanya.  Odd thing is that there is a part of me that actually feels bad for her.  Hell, she has to know she is losing the "men" in her life.  I just hope she will keep Charlie's best interest at heart when the final break is made.  That being said, I sure hope Edward left for the hospital immediatiately and is there as I type.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 15 part 4

Hmmmm.  Tanya, Tanya, Tanya what exactly runs amok within the recesses of your mind?  She does not wear motherhood well nor does she know how to play the part.  I suppose I could be angry with her but that would be wrong for not all women are cut out for the job.  I find a bit of sadness that this beautiful child could and should inite their family unit does not.  There is that part of me that thinks she would like to fulfill the roll but she simply cannot feel it.  Shoot, she even tried to "practice" for the upcoming photo shoot. 

Certainly she sees the way Edward interacts with their child and the love he feels for him.  On closer observation she may even see the way he looks at Bella and the ease between them.  Can't fault the girl for taking Edward out of their home environment (one that is changing more and more everyday) in an effort to renew the spark. 

No telling what wrath may lie ahead.  The tide has begun to turn and I trust you to tell us the rest of their story.  <3

~*~

If I may be so bold, I'd really like to throw my two cents in.  I am enjoying Milk Money immensely.  I think of it as a drabble that reads like a full blown fic.  The chapters may be short but they leave no stone unturned.  There is very little filler to process yet the information is rich amd gives me more than enough to ponder in a single sitting.   And with that I am off to read the next chapter .....

 

 

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

Ooooooh.  The plot thickens.  Perhaps Emmett would be willing to a little behind the scenes work for Rosalie.  I'd hate to think what evil might lurk behind her fears and discombobulation.  :-[

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 15 Part 6

The tingles are nice and better yet Rosalie will get a chance to talk to Emmett and show him the note.  I have  to say,  I really like the way you introduce your characters to us as well to one another.  :)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 15 part 7

As always, Elizabeth and Edward are cute together.  Her total trust in him speaks volumes in that he is a really good guy.  Carlisle's offer to Alice about interning there had me fangirling more than a little.  I could actually feel her heart flutter with the recognition in general.  Her path to bigger and better things has begun.

Emmett is about to get to know Rosalie,  Woo, Hoo, hoohoo.  <<<< another big smile at this computer, let me tell ya.  Everything is falling into place and I am looking forward to this developing story.

Now let's talk about the elephant in the room.  I hope Edward is not too hard on his cowardly self * ;) *.  It is understandable he wants to give his son the best possible chance with two parents that are committed to making a family for him.  A natural parent is not always the best parent.  When it is all said and done he will find his own path on the yellow brick road that will lead him home.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 16 Part 1

Seeing this playful side of R/Em is very lightening.  For knowing one another for such a short time, they sure are cute together.  Add to that the light and easy convo between the women we can see they will become good friends.  Bella's mention of Alice and her speech made me laugh but, hey, this is your story and by golly you can make it happen (please do)!  lol.

ps ~ much as I hate for the rain to fall, it is inevitable.  Doesn't sound like it will last for long though.  Besides there are many angsth00rs among us.  We can take that shit!  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 17 part 1

It's sad that the little one has taken another turn for the worse.  Tanya's motherly instinct and skills need some serious work.  Edward is not going to be happy when he finds out Charlie is at the hospital.  (I have a feeling he will show up soon.) 

The pictorial moments with E/B and the children was very tender and heartwarming.  Can't help but wonder if those pics won't surface.  Which brings up another thought about paps lurking in the shadows watching Bella with Charlie and going to the back with him at the hospital.  I sit a little taller in my seat, blow out a huge breath and get lost in the what ifs that could be....

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

 

Kinda sux to have your private life exposed to the masses as you play a role both onscreen and off.  Tanya eats it up as Edward cringes.  He is such a good guy and trying to do the right thing.  One cannot help but wonder if Tanya loves Edward the man or the image they make the world believe.  You know, the photographer holds their future in hands and the truth could set them free.  <3

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 17 Part 3

Oh Tanya, what have you done?  Your actions are about to hit the fan and everyone needs to duck.  NJ, get the white horse ready for the ride to the hospital.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 17 Part 13

WoW!  Love it or hate it, the truth's been told.  The readers have had the advantage of seeing more than one facet of what is going on through the eyes and actions of the characters.  Although I have not participated on facebook I have engaged in an occasional peek of others through reviews.  In doing so, readers in general, have shared many thoughts.  Unfortunately Edward has not had this luxury.  The blindside is palpable and, when you think of what is at stake, it is downright painful.  

So what is at stake here?  Tanya has much to lose.  For starters the title of America's sweetheart.  Anyone that has watched this fall from fame knows that the fans that put you on top can tear you down.  And it is not just Tanya's career that stands to suffer.  James, too, could lose clients and favor as being percieved as the man that would break up the family of an infant son ... not to mention an infant child with an illness (so to speak).

My heart goes out to Edward though in that he stands to lose the son that he has come to love so much.  Would the courts be so cruel as to take a child from a man that tyruly loves him as a son.  Anyway it is spun Charlie stands to lose the most.

And then there is Bella.  I believe she will stand by Edward.  But what happens if Charlie needs her in order to survive and thrive.  Perhaps T/J would find another wet nurse but what if they cannot find another "match".  (I obviously know nothing on this subject sp I don't know if mother's milk is "universal" to all babies.)  And what if they rip Bella away and her milk is the only answer and while dragging their feet she dries up? 

NJ, oh honey, what have you done?  I simply must find the time to get onto facebook this weekend.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 18 Part 1

Despite how happy I am that everything is out in the open my heart hurts for Edward with all the complications that arise with Tanya's infidelity.  It is, however, pretty cool how all the characters have come together and rallied around him.  Rosalie took charge with the children.  Alice was quick to defend Charlie's paternity, then again she did backpedal.  Bella was there for Edward as Edward fell apart.  And yet, despite everything, we just know everything will come out in the wash.  Question is how many wash cycles will it take to get there?  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 18 Part 2

First reaction - Let the Games Begin.  Of course the game already started. 

Bella's brief admission of how she loves Charlie was pretty much what Edward needed to hear in or to set his dissolve into motion.  It's kinda neat, really.  Together they make a united unit in fighting for the little one.  What does Tanya have other than a few feeble attempts to exploit her son for her gain.  I have no idea what Bella will hear but I certainly look forward to reading about it.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 18 Part 4

That went smoothly .... now I hope Tanya and James can abide by the agreement and let Edward and Bella be the parents that Charlie deserves.  (That aspect of the story makes my heart happy.)  Looking forward to the relationship that will blossom for E/B and the family unit they will make.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 18 Part 5

Be.Still.My.Heart.  He is a free man and he is wasting no time jumping from the frying pan and into the fire. However,  this is no ordinary fire.  Nope.  This is the fire of desire.

Also did you notice the lighter atmosphere of "HOME".  Alice and Jasper in their musical moment created quite an image.  Rosalie and Emmett rounded out the group as they ate with conversation and laughter ... a memory in the making.

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 18 Part 6

  Stolen kisses behind fortress walls.  Luckily everything they need can be found there.  It is hard to imagine living in a bubble like this but all things come to pass and when they do they will have the happiness they deserve.  :)

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 19 Part 3

Won't be long now .... ;)

 

Reviewer: RubyDee Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 19 Part 6

She is right, he is perfect.  Really like how they have found a way to date and be together.  Bella is excited too!