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Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
OK, I started reading this on FFn and I got behind and then it was removed. I just found it here and reread the whole thing and finished it. Why, oh why did it take me so long to read the whole thing? This was amazing. I love that Bella has come so far in her recovery taht she wants to play like that again...especially when that wasn't what she wanted in the first place. I'm amazed that James thought he was above recieving any of the treatment that he was dishing out to Bella and Victoria.
thanks for sharing this :)
~Susan
A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108595
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
How is she gone? I bet it's Charlotte...the little hussy couldn't stay away from Bella LOL
Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.
What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89859
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella
I had a feeling she was pregnant when I read the summary. What happened to the baby? And why on earth would Edward cheat on her? Edwad cheating on Bella just makes me furious! LOL
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reunion
Wow. I cried reading the end of this chapter. My heart is breaking for Bella. It's obvious she still loves Edward. Will we hear from him at all during this story?
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: How To Make An Entrance
Yep, I definitely dying with Bella. You are doing a great job with this.
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Turbulent Affair
Woah. More tears. How many more chapters will you have me sobbing?
~Susan
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions and Consequences
No tears this time. But I'm not sure about the Edward and Tanya thing. Did Tanya hear Bella come home and hurry to get in their room so she'd see her and then leave before Edward got out of the shower? And why didn't Edward try to contact her after she left and why was he seen with her in a magazine? Sooo many questions.
Now, Im going to ff to read what else you have posted cause I'm hooked LOL
~Susan
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies
How could you end it there??? When I started typing this, I could feel the tension in my body LOL I am going to be pacing and in full on panic mode til the next chapter is up.
So, I'm still not convinced about Tanya. And there is something definitely going on with Victoria. Did he marry her in Vegas? he couldn't have cause he and Bella are still married, right? Did he sleep with her and she ended up preggo? I think I'm going to go insane until I find out what happened.
I am sick at what Jacob and Leah did to Bella. Just sick.
You are amazing that you can stress me like this. Good writing skills, chicka :) Thanks for the chapter and you know I'm waiting ;0)
~Susan
Author's Response:
As always you are awesome with your reviews... really. It helps to know i have made a connection with ppl when i write... I will post a teaser on the forum on twilighted forums sooon. you are awesome. xoxo---FunkyD.
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tale of the Broken Hearted
Funky D! Holy crap. I can not imagine having to write that chapter. it nearly killed me reading it. That was super emotional. I am really glad to know that Edward didn't cheat on Bella. maybe they can move on together now. I still want to know what the deal is with Tanya. And the deal with James and Victoria, still seems a little fishy ;0) maybe I'm just suspicious LOL
Thanks for the chapter. I hope the carpal tunnel gets better and you won't need surgery. My MIL had to have surgery for hers...she's better now. If only it would have fixed her personality as well ROFLOL
~Susan
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Tale of the Broken Hearted part 2
FunkyD! I'm glad to see you :)
I can only imagine how hard this was to write. It was hard to read. Bella broke my heart at the end. Thank goodness she finally decided to open up to Carlisle and Esme. I know they will love her and reassure her that everything will be alright.
~Susan
Author's Response:
Susan!
I am so happy to hear from you! how are you? how is everything? I think i was more afraid fo the smexy stuff than anything else! lol. Yes she is turning to the right people finally... but still she has a lil bit to go before she is 100%....
I hope you have an awesome 4th of july! email me soon!
xoxo-FunkyD.
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373477
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess
So, I decided to read this one here rather than at FF. THought I'd try out the new site ;0)
Is Tony the scandalous Prince Edward? You know, Edward Anthony.... I really think I'm going to love this one. I'm a history fanatic and pairing it with Twlight. *sigh* That just made my day :)
~Susan
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
The more I read, the more I am loving this! Lady Lauren is serving Princess Isabella...that put a smile on my face :) And I'm still thinking that Edward is Tony. I think that even more after reading this chapter.
~Susan
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince
The salutation Edward gave, is that something Bella says also? I am so looking forward to them seeing each other! I like how Jacob told Edward to respect his little sister. I know, I'm rambling LOL That happens when I've suffered from a headache in my classroom all day with whiny students ;0)
~Susan
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles
Gah! You're breaking my heart with Bella this chapter. I had tears right along with her. I can not imagine her joy to find out that Tony is Edward. but I'm a little worried. If he's been the manwhore he's been made out to be, Bella may be a tad bit upset with him.
thanks for the chapter.
~Susan
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation
OOOHHH! We're getting closer to them meeting. I'm so glad Edward witnessed what has been going on in the Spanish court. Now he may change his ways permanently. I have a feeling that when he sees his bride, his womanizing ways will be gone for good :)
~Susan
Date: 08 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles
YIPPEE!!! if you could see the stupid grin on my face from reading this chapter, you would die laughing. I am beyond thrilled at their reaction to one another. What is stuck up King Charles' butt? I mean, shouldn't he be happy that Bella and Edward are happy together? That means that Spain and England will have a good relationship. Who cares how they met. All that matters is that it's all good now.
Anxiuosly awaiting the next chapter ;0)
~Susan
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss
LIke there isn't enough pressure to have sex for the first time, there has to be a whole slew of men watching? LOL I like that he told them it would be a while. How is she ever going to get past calling him Tony?
Thank you so much for updating this. I'm loving this story. And yes, I realize that I'm being random in where I review. I'll explain...whichever link I click first in my inbox is where I read and review...story favorite here at the Coffee Shop and your on my author alert at FF ;0)
~Susan
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans
I have a strange feeling that Jessica will cause some type of problems. Don't know why, but just the way she was acting makes me creep out LOL
~Susan
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage
OK, you have me a little worried. maybe I'm just reading more into this statement than I should...There would never, ever be another woman that would ever compare to Bella...does that mean he is going to try to find another one? or does that mean that he's found the best and there isn't a point in looking for another one? I'm really hoping it's the latter of those two ;0)
~Susan
Author's Response:
It's definitely that there's no point in looking for another one. It's his way of saying that his womanizing ways are over :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore
I like Carlisle's idea for protecting both Spain and Italy. He's a bright guy ;0)
~Susan
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment
awwww, how sweet. And you're right. What kind of readers would we be to skip this chapter just because of it's lemony goodness? Isn't that why we all read fanfiction? LOL
~Susan
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen
Well, I'm shocked by Edward having to get rid of soooo many ladies in the court and in service. His comment about Lady Tanya wanting to be queen baffled me. Did she really think he wouldn't uphold his betrothal to the princess of Spain and would marry outside of the arrangement? there just doesn't seem to be anyway that could have been done.
thank you for the chapter. I'm thankful that you will be posting weekly :) I hope the kiddos feel better soon.
~Susan
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty
I'm concerned for Edward, Jasper and Emmett in their travels to France. King Louis is not stable ;0) Thank you for the chapter. I am loving this story :)
~Susan
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful
Gah. My heart broke for Bella this chapter. I can not imagine what she must feel knowing all these women hate her and her husband isn't there to comfort her and reassure her. I hope Rosalie turns out to be a good friend to Bella.
~Susan
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
GO Alice! I am so glad she reacted that way. And I can't wait for Rose to meet Emmett :) thanks for the update :)
~Susan
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
Poor Bella. She's going to think he spent the night with Tanya. Her heart will be broken.
~Susan
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment
Holy cow! I was not expecting James LOL I don't know why he didn't come to mind when I was trying to figure it out, but he didn't. Will Carlisle grant the land to Emmett permanently? Then, he and Rose could marry and be together.
I hope you enjoy your time with hubby around...even if you get no writing done :)
~Susan
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown
YAY!! Alice is having her baby! I'm thinking they need a William in the Cullen family. How about Peter, he was a great Russian ruler. I just read a trilogy by Susan Wiggs called the Tudor Rose trilogy and there was a Juliana in it...she was the Russian princess. Juliana's granddaughter was Philippa, that would be a possiblity also. I also like Sebastian for a boy, or Oliver...both would work in the time period and not be too far out there.
Thanks for the update :)
~Susan
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice
Sophia Isabella is a beautiful name! I'm anxious for Bella to have her baby(babies?). Edward will be a great dad.
~Susan
After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 61003
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
noooo. He doesn't know her? How did she get there? How on earth will she get him to fall in love with her? I know, you're thinking, you have to read some more ;0)
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s
I like your Bella. She's a little sassy and really funny. Please tell me though, that her finding Edward in the past is not just a hallucination.
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion
Ok, I thought I loved Bella in this story. I did (and still do). However, I love Maggie even more...with her "wishful thinking" That was great. I've wished that before too ;0)
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces
YAY! She met Carlisle. I see a wonderful friendship there. I'm thinking she will eventually tell him what she knows and that Carlisle can change her too and then she and Edward can be together with no problems :)
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan
So Carlisle and Bella are working together now. I like that. He's got a great personality. The hunting comments were funny.
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down
She's there!!!! Will she be able to convince him to leave town with her? I don't think he's going to be that easily swayed.
Can I tell you how much I am loving this story? You're doing a great job with it.
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations
Oh. My. God. That was hilarious...the sack race...
It was like the coordination gods looked down and said, “She can’t do anything else, but the sack race… okay, we’ll give her that.”
I nearly choked laughing so hard. And now I'm sad cause I have to go teach. Maybe I can find some time during the day to sneak back here LOL
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch
I'm home. I've thought about this all day long LOL I do like Samantha and I'm glad she's going to help Bella and Edward get together. How funny that Samantha would pick up on the fact that Edward can't read Bella. I bet Bella was dying there LOL
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties
So, I've been thinking. Alice keeps telling her she needs to come back. Is that cause she's messing up the future by being there and Edward falling in love with her then? He won't turn into a vamp and won't join the Cullen family and blah blah blah? Please tell me you do HEAs. I'm kinda freaking out right now LOL
~Susan
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends
Boohoo. I'm at the last chapter you have posted. I like the realization that Bella had in this chapter...that she was seeing an Edward she's never seen...young and carefree. She fell in love with the old soul originally. Now, she's falling in love with the young boy. Question is, which does she want more? I'm still curious about Alice ;0)
I can't wait to see where this goes. Thanks for writing this.
~Susan
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and all of your wonderful reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying the characters and what's happened so far. Your questions are good ones, but I can't really answer them at the moment without ruining the story! :-) I will offer you this... don't freak out! ;-) Lol!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
Yay! An update! I told my BFF all about this story Wednesday night at church :)
I'm thinking Carlisle is developing feelings for Bella and that is changing the outcome of the future. And if she saves the Edward from 1918, the future is definitely changed and then Carlisle might not change anyone else. That is why the dreams are telling her she must choose. Am I right? :)
~Susan
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for spreading the word! :-)
I think you're right about Carlisle... as far as the impact on the future... who knows?
You don't really want me to tell you, do you? LoL!
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration
Another great chapter. I love that she was looking all over for pads and wants to invent tampons :) Where did women get pads and a belt if not at the drug store? So, Edwrad keeps his distance because he doesn't think he'd be able to control himself? I love taht. Let's get to testing that self control :)
~Susan
Author's Response:
Well, what I found was they often ordered them out of catalogs (like Sears & Roebuck). You could probably buy them at the drug store as well... but whether they'd be out in the open I don't know, since they're kind of "sensitive items"... and Bella didn't want to ask the pharmacist.
Oh, and Bella's on a mission to test that self-control! ;-)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents
ROFLOL at Edward not playing the piano well and her thinking he'd be great at it in about 100 years :) I also loved that she was a little cocky with Ed Sr. and that he played with her.
I absolutely love this story. Thanks for the chapter :)
~Susan
Author's Response:
Yes, it appears Edward has quite a bit in common with his dad - both are strong-willed, but appreciate a woman who will stand up to them. :-)
Glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R!
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors
So, when I clicked the link for this chapter, it occurred to me that I hadn't read the chapter before this one. I know, I didn't comment, but , Carlisle showed up at the march....I'm thinking like Edward and Eleanor...he likes her. And now Alice is there! With a damn bow in her hair?!? I can't wait for her to meet Edward! But what about the Alice of 1918? I know she's in Mississippi somewhere, but won't her being there mess up the space time continum? LOL I love that Edward is jealous and he does love her. I love possessive Edward who claims Bella as his :)
~Susan
Author's Response:
Oh, it seems like the space time continuum is getting messed up all over the place! LoL!
Glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R! :-)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper
I am thrilled that he won't go back to the way he was. It is such a big step for him to make that decision. I'm not sure what is going to happen with Carlisle...he surely suspects something after the elk blood story....and Alice saying her big brother is Emmett made me smile :)
Thanks for the update
~Susan
Author's Response:
Yes, Edward has turned a corner... Finally! :-) Carlisle is suspecting something, and I think Bella will have to deal with that soon...
Thanks for reading!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls
JAMES?!?!? How can he be human here? Wasn't Alice turned around the same time as Edward? Maybe this is where he meets ALice. I don't think this is going to be good.
Thank you so much for the chapter. It was sweet of Edward to give her the handkerchief.
~Susan
Author's Response:
Alice was turned in the 1920s, according to Twilight... but a specific date is not given. So it's POSSIBLE that James could be human in 1918 and still have time to be changed, go through his year of newborn-craziness, and become the tracker we hate who goes after Alice. Canon is silent when it comes to how/when James is changed.
Thanks for R&R!
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons
Let me tell you how I cried when Alice left. I wept right along with Bella. I am so glad she's going to Carlisle for help. She'll have to tell him about the future, won't she? And will we find out what happened to James? I mean, I know he gets changed, but will we find out by who and how he ends up with Alice? maybe he found Alice and remembers her from this and that's why he wants her, as revenge for this and then when he sees Bella in the future it's just double payback :)
~Susan
Author's Response: Oh... I'm sorry you cried! :( Your other questions should be addressed, at least in part, in the next chapter... Thanks for reading!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks
YIPPEE!!!!! She said yes!
~Susan
Author's Response:
Yes she did - FINALLY! LoL!