Reviews by amymorgan
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625325
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: amymorgan Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

Lovely! Exciting changes in Edward & Bella. Glad I found you here!

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

Forgiveness. Isn't that a lesson we all need to learn?  Thank you for a great chapter.

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

Mmm. Citrusy. Eff Carlisle! Thank you for the chapter.

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Very perverse Carlisle; great addition to the story. I am picturing some generic character actor as Carlisle, because I've met Peter Facinelli...he is such a masculine gentle man! Thank you for the chapter! ;}

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Ooh, scary! I am worried now for Bella and "Esme's Edward".  Thank you.

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

Poor Esme! Good story arc.  And I love his proposal. Done RIGHT! Thank you for your hard work!

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

Oh, mercy me, that was beautiful ! 

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Oh, Edward, do not underestimate your wicked, wicked father! Nice backstory. Thank you!

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Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

We know who the guests probably are!  Nicely done! Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174121
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: amymorgan Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Zoom In (by Nikteche)

Cuter than hell hath no fury than a woman feeling violated!

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Out of Focus (by Nikteche)

Uh-oh. If I were Bella, I'd dump the pixie and live alone! Amusing attraction, despite herself.

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Blurry (by Nikteche)

Jealousy! Tanya, always a great foil.

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Backlighting (Collaboration)

Great EPOV. Provocative.

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Focal Point

Interesting, well-written and very entertaining. Thank you!

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Composition

Writer's block! Don't we ALL know something about that?  I liked the bodywash "armory". I like her doubts. Nice chapter.

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Overexposure

"Danger!" Very funny but realistic. Two exes in as many dates? Could they be each other's muses...hmm.  Thank you for a readable, entertaining chapter.

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Definitive Beauty

Ah, so romantic.  Love the EPOV! Thanks!



Author's Response:

LOL...I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  I hope you like the rest.  I took an editing break to write some new stuff on a story I'm working up to post before long.  I needed a break from editing.  :)  thanks for the reviews!

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Observational Distortion

Nice progression of the relationship. The handshake angst was funny as hell.  She could have kissed him on the cheek  !

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Illumination

Alice IS funny - sometimes!  Proud of Bella for calling him.  Good chapter!

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Shadows

"Lovesick lunatic".  Brilliant description. But who else has had a burst of creativity? Fine chapter, love that EPOV !

 



Author's Response:

LOl...I really enjoyed writing that chapter!  Thanks!

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Latent Image

Yeah, if I'd heard it that way, I'd have run screaming to the nearest police station to begin the process of stalking charges! Don't blame her a bit for bolting. Very nicely written.

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: More Latent Images

*lightbulb over Bella's head*   Finally!

Thanks for another superb chapter.

 

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Shutter Lag

Liquor is quicker....and then he "hallucinates".  Poor Photogward and Musebella! Another satisfying chapter.

 

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Complimentary Colors

Enchanting, beautifully written awareness of their mutual import. And, from an art minor, it's "complementary colors". 

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Flash Fill

Loved her description of the kissing.  Alice on Red Bull, what an apt description of kids on a sugar binge!  Thank you! 

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Additive Color

Cute outing . Funny Emmett has all girls!  You must be a parent!!  Good chapter.

 

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Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Vignetting

So very poignant, her feelings of inadequacy versus his painful childhood losses. Very lovely chapter. Thank you.