Reviews by kmfroggi
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

omg, that telegram had me freakin!!!! Cherie is so sweet, i could totally picture her.  glad that bella is getting back into the work groove!! great chapter

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

wow, lil cherie is a year old already! poor edward missed all the milestones.  i hope he makes it home asap!!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

i was hoping it was gonna be e's pov!!! yay!! he's home, bought time, now we just need to get the other 2 home.  loved how you protrayed him 1st seeing cherie, so wonderful and powerful!!!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

YES!!! that was some wash up!! lol.  and cherie, what a sweetie, she just made it all better.  great chapter. its gonna be sad to see this end, but cant wait for the rest of the chapters!!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

YAY!!! all the flyboys are home!! great chapter, looking forward to the epi

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

i am so happy that you continued this o/s, i really enjoyed it, great job.  and i loved the epi, it was a perfect ending for them!!! cant wait for the new story, will it be here and ff?



Author's Response:

Yeah...I'll post it both places, although down the line I may need to edit for FFN

Summary:

This is an AU/AH one shot. Bella is a thirty year old stay at home mom of two young children. She’s happily married to Edward and her life is happy and complete…but when a certain song begins to play on the radio while she cleans her happy home, the memories of her painful childhood come back to haunt her. Based on the song THE RED by Chevelle. 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4868 Read Count: 2808
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Red

i love this song, so i had to check this out.  this was really well written, great job.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373213
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

nice!!!  i am so happy their dreams came true, to find each other and to be intimate with each other! great chapter!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

oh no, the previous harem are not gonna make bella's life easy at all. dang.  i hope bxe stay strong.  great chapter, i hope your child feels better fast!! poor thing

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

great chapter!! i fear that in edwards departure, all his is gonna break loose with the chicks in the court! lol.  not good.

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

oh, the drama is coming, can only imgaine what its gonna be.  great chapter

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

dum,dum,dum......lady denali is bad bad girl!! lol.  im glad rosalie softened alittle bit, i've been waiting to see when she gets introduced. oh boy, bella is feeling sick, maybe thats a good sign!!!!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

oh, how i adore alice, priceless, that the only word i have for what she did to tanya! love it.  and rosalie, she is gonna be fun, and perfect for emmett, just like bella said.  i am sure edward is gonna be furious when he gets back, should be interesting to see what he says and does to tanya!!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

i do think bella is gonna have some news to share soon!! i hope its good news.  poor thing, she is having all these insecutities about him and tanya, and everything is standing in their way.  loved the chapter!

Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

oh no, what is gonna happen to threaten what they hold dear?  great chapter, i kinda hoped she was with child, good news!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Written for the For The Sport Of Love Challenge.  Love begins to grow at the 2006 Olympics in Torino Italy between American figure skater, Rose Hathaway, and the Russian Golden Child, Demitri Belikov.  Four years later they are looking forward to reconnecting in Vancouver.  Will they be ready to ignore the rules and give in to the feelings that have grown between them?

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Categories: Vampire Academy, All Human
Characters: Dimitri Belikov/Rose Hathaway
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Twilight
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8637 Read Count: 1070
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2010 Updated: 21 Mar 2010
Reviewer: kmfroggi Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: International Relations

this was really good! i adore VA and cannot wait for the next book to come out!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Me too.  I'm dying to see if she can find a way to save Demitri!  I feel bad for Adrian though.  Poor guy!