Membership status: Member
Bio:
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254961
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
Hurricanes suck dick! Not as well as Bella though (see where I went there lol) Been through three of those puppies and had some major damage and 3 weeks of no electricity to be followed by another hurricane right after we got it back. I feel your pain!
Story was great glad you are back and in fighting form! Douglas is such a wonderful character love him. Edward with blue balls is hysterical, and Bella in her tub makes me jealous!
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102
Someone aged themselves with the Nestea Plunge reference...Course your reviewer aged herself knowing it too! Someone needs to arrest that man...sick bastard. Looking forward to next chapter...Friends faces when they actually see what is happening at the club, I think there might be some giggling coming from my pc the next update.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103
omg the poor girl, its never quite her fault when the bad chit goes down and she is just in the way, yet the way she reacts is what really gets her in trouble. Poor Bella I think Claire and Quil might like this lifestyle and may need some mentors...hmmmm?
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
omg louise please don't listen to the "story is too long" dipsticks! I love this story and it has one of the most true to life D/s couples around. I really learn things and see new toys and think its just wonderful. I know it has to end but don't think everyone is ready for it too, 'cause I am not!
Author's Response:
Ahhhh...your a sweetly. And actually I only put in the comment about the length because the people or person who complained said it in anonymous reviews, so I had no other way to reply to them. They or the person (because I think it's only one person who just likes to make her point known so she sends out several unsigned reviews so that I think lots of people are saying the same thing...lol...sneaky right?....LOL....) anyway she says she doesn't care about all the stuff that is happening with E&B in their life, she doesn't care about their love story or their playtime or anything else,,,, she's just tired of waiting for the story to get finished so she knows who, what, and why people are after Bella...lol...in other words, she's becoming impatient and wants me to get to the point and skip around...that's not going to happen....soooo, I had no other way to say it, then to put it in an A/N....anyway...thanks for your kind words, and really I can't just skip around....the voices in my head wouldn't let me....lol...thanks again, until next time, be well...louise
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
omg the mystery just keeps getting deeper and deeper lol. Still gotta say your Edward is the strongest Master I have ever read...he takes no shit at all!!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106
I love this chapter, it is so nice seeing a group of women (and Dougie) being together and just relaxing and enjoying what they are there to enjoy! Looking forward to Edwards reactions to the photos.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
Honey all your chapters are jam packed...and I love them. I always figured that was why the wait between chapters and had no problems with it. Sorry to hear your are getting grumbling about it. Looking forward to his birthday and what he found out about phil and lessons!
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108
I am not even going to guess, I don't have that kind of imagination and you ladies of the fandom always surprise me! Love how light hearted this chapter was (except at the end) even when he was being alpha it still had an undertone of fun. He really pays attention to her and her moods I love that. As for the m-i-l situation...mine has gone bat shit crazy and is no longer welcome around me (hubby agrees) so if she does happen to show up she is not getting the your the queen treatment. Not worth it! Great chapter and as always looking forward to the next!
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109
never say or think that last phrase Bella, because karma will figure something out. Loved the rant though, I rarely use that word too, but sometimes, some woman just deserve it.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
lot of info in this chapter, and I cannot understand Alice, unless her pregnancy has made her bat shit crazy! Wonder if Bella is asking for a punishment to help her calm down?
When something happens at Steph's apartment, who gets the blame? Babe story.
Categories: Stephanie Plum
Characters: Stephanie Plum/Ranger
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9459 Read Count: 1268
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
That was a great little Steph story, wish there were more out there.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I'll be posting more of my stuff here soon. I have a ton of Steph stories! :D
He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC
For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
she is going to be very skittish now, I hope she finds peace soon. I can't believe I am saying this, but I hope Emmett dies a painful death ... soon.
Author's Response:
Emmett will get his...eventually. In the meantime Bella needs to do some healing...preferrably with a hot cowboy.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
oh you throw me for a loop on the good guy/bad guy situation from the very beginning, and I was still hoping Edward would come out of hiding lol. Ok, though, Jasper standing tall in the saddle w/ the sun shining behind him has all the makings of a really good hero. Then he blows it by being a dick to her lmao. Lets see how this works out for them...
Thanks for good read
Vicki
Author's Response:
most men stick their foot in their mouth on a regular basis and screw things up. I figured I'd let Jasper get his idiocy on the table right off so he can spend the rest of the story making up for it and proving he's a hero. ;)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I read so many stories with so much love for Emmett and this one just blows him outta the love zone lol. I had no idea this was going to j/b I thought Edward had lived and was biding his time until he could get back to her, like he was in therapy or something lol, so you got me...love this and can't wait for next chappie!
Author's Response:
Sorry, Edward is dead and won't be coming back. I hated killing him off, but Emmett broke his neck and would have been certain he was dead. I hated doing it, but since this was originally a o/s for Beyond the Pale contest it had to happen.
I love Emmett to pieces, but everyone portrays him as the village idiot. I wanted to show something completely different with his character in hopes it would inspire more love for Emmett with other writers.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I am so sorry you are having to go through these personal crisis. No worries on updates. I will always be ready to open mail from you whenever it arrives! Love this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being patient with me. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm having fun writing this Jasper.
Mic
Author's Response:
Thanks for being patient with me. I'm glad you liked the chapter. I'm having fun writing this Jasper.
Mic
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
you are the first person to ever make me wish for Emmett to have a nasty accident and die! I hope some happy comes soon poor Bella.
Author's Response:
I love doing the unexpected with the characters. Then you can never assume you know how it will end. LOL!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Welcome back, and congrats on the weddings and college girl! My youngest started his senior yr of high school today and I am both excited and sad lol.
I loved this chapter, its nice seeing JPOV and to see the kind of man he is. Good things to come with him I think. Now to kill off Emmett (Never thought I would say that about Emmy bear sigh)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. Nobody's perfect but when that imperfection comes in Wranglers, boots and a cowboy hat I don't mind so much. Yummy! Don't worry, Emmett will get his in the end...I really owe him a "hero" story after this.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
this is going to be a slooooow burn isn't it. She is going to be so skittish and he has a little chip on his shoulder.
Author's Response:
Well if he'd pull his head out of his ass and not make her feel like he hates her, he might stand a better chance. What would you think if every time you walked into a room someone left? It's not so much a chip on his shoulder as it is that he's just to stubborn and blind to see beyond his own nose. I promise not to drag out their song & dance.
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Goodness, Emmett just keeps getting worse and worse. Stay safe Peter, it looks like Emmett will do anything to keep Bella. Bella stay strong, and do everything in your power to become the woman you want to be.
Author's Response:
Yes he does. Bella is surrounded by good people now who will help her heal...but don't count Emmett out just yet.
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!
Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards. See banners below.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows
mmmm I love weddings, and wedding nights. very romantic, very funny, very sweet. No angst for a chapter is a good thing too
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Dinner Cruises & Love Letters
the anticipation is killing me lol nice
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389612
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1
mmmm, need a shower now lol. 'Course Tanyas screechring voice sent chills through me there at the end lol. I love your chapters they are well written full of fun. Went to check out the blog before I rec'd. Whew woman that was hot.
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...
omg....wow I am so glad you are back...and the pics on the blog were stunning. Loved the one with Marley in his shorts so cute. The naughty ones were stunning and really enhanced the pleasure of reading this chapter. I tried to tell you how glad I was to see them in your blog, but being the computer ignoramus that I am I couldn't get it to go through and I wasn't about to ask my more tech savy 17 yr old son to look at it for me lol. I love that I have read or am reading everyone of your recs. In fact I am in the middle of catching up to His Cemmerian View when your chapter came in. So I had to stop to read this and now will go back lol. Thanks dear for your wonderful word skills, see ya next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'd like to see you explain that one to your son! Lol! Glad you liked it! Yeah, WeeKittyAndTat are amazing! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!
Krazi
xoxo
FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!
Hope to see you soon!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...
nicely done...as usual. I love that Jake gets a face punch here. He is such a dick lol. If Leah weren't preggers she would need one too. Sorry bout the pictures thing. If those women were smart instead of reading your story at work they should wait for private time. I have learned I can't read yours when the household is awake lol so always read when the kids are in bed lol. I love the pics they add a little extra breath hitch to the story. Oh well I just went to the blog first got my eyeful (and what an eyeful I must say) then imagined them while reading. Looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol! I know it really sux, but such is life! I´ll always figure out a way to give you a bit of an eyefull!!
Glad you´re still with me and enjoying the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Settling In...
ok gotta say that was wellworth the wait. I had to wait to read today cause I cannot read without your pics lol and the whole family was home when this popped up last night. Hubs would not of minded but I think the kids would have been freaked out a little lol. It is amazing how much he loves her. He is so patient and so careful, while still being a dominating master. Love this. Ohhh he is going to talk to Charlie (I know what for don't I) Looking forward to party and what creative thing you do with them (and pics of course lol) Does it squick Edward out when he sees his sister and brother being dominated at these get togethers?
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
oh my...Mistress Rose can just talk you into an orgasm, how good is that?! LOL great chapter and I almost feel sorry for T, almost.
Author's Response:
What would a story be with a little deranged Tanya Denali thrown in the mix! Lol! And yeah, Mistress Rose is fuck hawt! Lol! Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
This chapter makes me wish I had not starting reading this yet! Because I really want to read the next chapter now lol. This is going to be one of those stories that make me squeal when the updates come in. So not appropriate for an over 40 woman to squeal. Fantastic phone call, Edward is going to have his hands full and am going to look forward to when they meet. Till then can't wait to see what he is going to have Rose do to his pet.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for! Laterzzzz:) Krazi and Mojo xoxo www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...
oh man, just the right amount of plot and sexiness to get me through the day. Plus I subscribed to your blog last chapter lol so the pics were in my head while I read the story lol those were awesome by the way, expecially in the office.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
awww poor mojo...Emmett is a dirty pool player for doing that to him. Still love Em tho. REALLY looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
oh my word..little breathless here. that was just..........yummy thanks
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
Holy Chit...what an end to a great SuperBowl Sunday! Bella will prob sleep the day away the next day but what dreams she will have. That, dear author, was a nummy lil chapter.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
oh my, oh my. Just communicate please so they can get back to the playroom lol
Author's Response:
Lol! There will definitely be some dialogue and we´ll get a little more insight in the next chapter! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi & Mojo
xoxo
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
what a yummy chapter, love it. Glad to see some secrets revealed. Wonder how Sir is going to deal with that little cherry on top. Thanks for the recs...lol am reading all but one of them so will go check that one out cause those other stories have me wound around their little finger (aahhh Fifty)
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
Whoa nelly... tried to get to this fic three times today and was interupted everytime. So now its midnight the whole house is sleeping and I am finally getting me some good Dr. Good thing too 'cause the pics were hot hot hot and hubby would accuse me of reading smutty porn lol. I really try to tell him that all my porn has plot. He doesn't believe me. Fantastic chappie, and am looking forward to next.
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...
awesome chapter...and I can see some epic battles between Master and pooch coming that will be quite amusing.
Date: 19 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...
Leah needed a good slap unfortunatly it prob did not knock any sense in her at all. Training is going to be fun looking forward to more lol
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
OMG I have missed you so much!!!! Dr. Sexy Edward has me shaking this chapter, he is up to something very very fun I am thinking. Stalker dude is kinda scary he makes me nervous. So glad you are back and hope you had a wonderful birthday full of birthday spanks from the Dom lol
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination
oh how I have missed this lol, but I was worried for Bella, it was all too much. She should have told him, but damn he was so busy all the time too. I hope the fall out is not too bad for them both.
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...
oh how i missed these two! Edward feels like he let her down and called Rose didn't he?
Author's Response:
First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:
Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”
My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.
Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!
He was right there!
Right fucking there!
Suddenly, I felt overdressed.
My clothes felt too tight, constricting.
All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.
I blame that bitch, Eve!
Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.
What?
No!
Give it to me!
Don’t tease me!
Pleaseeeeeee!
At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.
One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.
He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.
Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.
Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.
Right?
Wrong...
Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.
Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”
Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.
Hey, don’t judge me...
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...
hmmmm, I think they are getting the swing of this new relationship. They have so many irons on the fire it has to be hard to balance it all. They are finding their rhythm as a couple and as a dom and sub. good for them. Pics are wonderful! and that jewelry is awesome, bet my hubs would love that (not happening...lol)
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay, but I took a much needed vacation, and my parents wouldn't allow me to write any smut while I was visiting them! Lol... Here's a peek at the next chapter! See you Tuesday!
Krazi
xoxo
Before knocking on the door, I took a moment to get in the right headspace. Once I walked through that door, I would no longer be the confident Dom I professed to be, my submission would belong to my mentor and former Master. Resigned and ready, I wrapped the heavy wooden door three times. “Come in,” Master Peter’s deep voice called from inside the room.
As if walking before a firing squad, all three of us entered the room with our heads tucked to our chests, and our hands clasped behind our backs. At first glance, one would think that we were three naughty students summoned to the headmaster’s office.
“Edward,” Master Peter said solemnly. “As good as it is to see you again; I am by no means pleased at the circumstances. Do you have anything to say for yourself?” Master Peter and I had already had this conversation, but he was still following protocol for the sake of the others that were present.
“Master Peter,” I started, swallowing around the sudden lump in my throat. “This one has failed to remember his teachings, and in doing so, has failed his collared submissive. This one comes before you fully aware of the ramifications of such an offense, ready to receive whatever punishment Master sees fit to dole out upon him.”
Try as she might, Isabella could not help but to react to my revelation. Her sharp intake of air came as no surprise, and did not go unnoticed by Master Peter. “Isabella,” Master Peter asked, addressing my submissive for the first time. “Is there something you’d like to say?” Just like I knew she would, Isabella remained as quiet as a church mouse. Peter, who had yet to get up from his chair, hummed in appreciation of her obedience before saying, “Well, Edward, you haven’t failed her too bad, she’s quite the respectful little one.” He then returned his attention to my girl. “Thank you for your obedience and respect for this Dom Isabella. Now, little one, you may look at me and speak. Having heard your Master’s declaration, do you have anything you’d like to to say?”
“Yes, Sir, Master Peter,” Isabella said in a quiet yet respectful tone. “This girl would simply like to say that she trusts her Master blindly, and if Master has chosen to bring this girl here with him tonight, for this purpose, then so be it. Master knows best, and would never knowingly or purposely put his girl in harm’s way. Master knows what is needed for me to become a better submissive, and this is it.”
“After hearing that, Edward, there should be no doubt in your mind that this little one is meant for you.” My heart clenched at his words, I couldn’t have said it better myself. “Come; let us not waste any more time.” With that, Master Peter led us all downstairs to his dungeon.
No stranger to Master Peter’s playroom, I made my way to the large ensuite bathroom to change. A modest black leather thong that would leave my ass bare was lying on the counter, and I wasted no time shedding my clothes and encasing my now deflated dick in the less than comfortable black pouch. As I made my way to the whipping bench, I could see Isabella and Charlotte kneeling on each side of the room.
Master Peter didn’t speak a word as he tended to the cuffs that would hold my wrists and ankles. Since we previously discussed what my punishment would be, Master Peter’s explanation was for his audience’s ears only. “First, I will warm up the flesh with my leather paddle, and then the real punishment will commence. Edward has already chosen a rattan cane for his punishment, so once the skin is warmed and ready, I will administer ten licks which Edward will count out loud.” Returning his attention to Isabella, Master Peter gave her a command. “Isabella, for no reason are you to take your eyes off of this whipping bench. If at any point and time you feel unable to continue, you are to use your safe words. And they are…”
“Red, yellow, and green, Sir,” was Isabella’s quiet response.
“And what color are you now, Isabella?”
Silence hung thick in the air and for a moment, I thought she was going to say red.
Trust me, Isabella!
You need this!
I need this!
We need this!
I was having a mini meltdown when a sudden calm washed over me, almost as if I could feel Isabella touching me from the other side of the room. But it was her strong and steady voice that sealed the deal. “Green. I’m green, Sir. My Master knows exactly what we need.”
My girl was fucking awesome, and would rival any seasoned submissive with the way she carried herself. There was nothing left to do, but take our punishment and put this whole unfortunate ordeal behind us; if nothing else, Isabella and I had definitely grown in our relationship, both vanilla and D/s.
“Very well,” Master Peter said matter-of-factly. “Shall we get on with it?”
Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.
Banner by busymommy
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204639
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
awww dang so teary I can't see to type lol
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
whoa nelly...what is it about Edward and a wall that makes a girl weak in the knees?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
![stories/38123/images/Kristen-Stewart-GQ8-1[1].jpg](stories/38123/images/Kristen-Stewart-GQ8-1[1].jpg "stories/38123/images/Kristen-Stewart-GQ8-1[1].jpg")
Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.
Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.
Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?
*Rated for strong language and lemons* Banner made by: Kiwibeme
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Thank you for such a great story loved reading it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! Glad you like it. :)
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.
Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.
L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie
Tkegl...Thank you!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129742
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit
oooohhhh super bad ass arrogant Edward (I will admit still hot! lol). Poor Bella things are not going to be easy for her for awhile are they?
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah as bad ass and arrogant he is, I do find him hot still. lol Poor Bella. She's in for some tough times =(
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Prepare to be Pissed
good luck with your tests and classes, will be here when you get darn good and ready
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for understanding =)
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
30 days for him to make her prom queen. 30 days for her to turn his world upside-down. AU/AH. OCC. Canon pairing.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24840 Read Count: 39107
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Day 13
I would have melted on the spot if he whispered that (or even his grocery list) in my ear.
Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives. But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl. Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family. Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124860
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
okay this was a fantastic chapter Carlisle is absolutly wonderful here. Edward is wonderful too. I am having a hard time with Charlie being the bad guy though. He is my favorite character in the books and movie. The story is so good tho really like reading it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! You know, I chatted a little with another author, Newmoonaholic from ff.net, who's also writing an evil-Charlie story. (Hers is called THe Mocking Moon and it's AMAZING!) It sounds crazy, but we both agreed that we actually adore the character of Charlie. My absolute favorite scene in the Eclipse movie is when he steps between an angry Jacob and Edward and tells them to take it down a notch. I make everyone in the house shut up for that scene when we watch it! IDK why there are so many evil-Charlie stories floating around since he's really a sweet character. I guess the setup is just really easy.
I just finished reading an evil-Carlisle story the other day. Now THERE was a mind-trip!
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I hear the song "I fought the law and the law won" playing in my head right now.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Congrats on being able to hit complete. Will be sad to see this story go but happy to have been on this journey with you.
AU vampire twoshot. Edward finds himself trapped, caged like an animal by the proprietors of the Midnight Carnival. They're starving him and he needs to find a way out. A mysterious, quiet girl, also kept captive, may just hold the key to his salvation.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39244 Read Count: 4405
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
awww damn Jacob, but at least he made it so the wolves couldn't deny it was life or death...I really wish there were more to the story tho, I would love to see her as a vampire. Thank you for this story enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the sweet review! I'm in talks with someone right now who is interested in writing a sequel for this story. If it happens, I'll let you know!
When thirteen year old Edward Cullen met sixteen year old Isabella Swan she became his "Older-Woman-Secret-Crush." Over the next ten years their lives drifted apart only to have Fate bring them back together again and again. Now at ages 26 and 23 they are reunited in Forks. Bella is preparing to marry the wrong man...in Edward's eyes. Bella is headed to the altar, and Edward is running out of time... Can he convince her that there is another choice? Maybe Fate will intervene just one more time.
Told through flashbacks from both BPOV and EPOV. Lemons later because it would just be sooooo inapropriate at their beginning! Humor, romance, angst and suspense...because I love it all!
Lovely banner by the even lovelier Coleen561!
Thank you to Twi-Ho...Twi-Holoic for the awesome banner below!
![stories/43371/images/one-stupid-thing-Banner[1].jpg](stories/43371/images/one-stupid-thing-Banner[1].jpg "stories/43371/images/one-stupid-thing-Banner[1].jpg")
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 65635 Read Count: 3514
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Old Friends
Banner...Emmett could never be a nightmare (oops snorted some cokezero outta my nose at that statement) but he is a great big brother. Loved this chapter, to bad the Cullens didn't have a pool. Could you imagine the little pervs reaction if she wore a bikini running around his house with Alice and Ang...hee hee.
Teeth are holding up looks like losing the back ones grrrr. English mom, you know the rep they have for their teeth over there so I guess I got those genes grrr.
Author's Response:
Hi vickic!
Sorry this is a few days late, but after so many chapters with me you should probably be used to it by now. :)
Emmett...even when he's bad he's good, you know? And of course when he is good, that doesn't last very long. lol In the next chapter Emmett isn't even necessary, Little Pervward does it aaaaaallll to himself. ;)
I know...the Cullen's with a pool---but there is going to be a community pool, I think. not quite sure.
Sorry about your continuing teeth-dilemma...my own have always been pretty darn bad and it looks like my daughter has inherited the worst of my teeth's qualities. She'll just need to marry some rich dentist. :)
Thanks for the review of chapter 5. Hope you like 6. And Happy Water for Elephants Day! This is my birthday weekend, so I'm going to think of the movie as a gift from Rob to me.
-bannerday
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Cornerstone
New Story from Bannerday and I just found it...rrrr 3 chapters in already I have got some catching up to do lol looking forward to this see ya next chapter
Author's Response:
Hi vickic!
Are you one of the vics from fanfic or Twilighted? It's confusing coming to another site and sometimes people have a different penname or else it's just out of context to me. Sorry for my confusion. I'm old.
I'm glad you are looking forward to this. I think it will be a fun ride and I already love this little Edward of mine. He's such a trash-mouthed hothead...and that comes to a complete stop around Bella. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Earliest Impressions
oh boy a firm handshake that leads to a young boy molesting himself lol the things that boys do amaze me (scares me too since my son is 16 and who knows what bad business he has got himself into lol)
Author's Response:
Hi vic!
Thanks for following me! I have a 23 year old son. It's probably best if I don't know what the hell he does in his spare time. Little Edward...all those raging hormones and the need to molest himself...lol
Hope you like the update. I got a new banner too. Check it out!
Thanks for the review. Let me know what you think.
-bannerday
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Conversation Hearts
awww he defended her what a man (at 13 too) I am so curious to where this is going and happy to have a new story from you sorry it took me so long to find it.
Author's Response:
Hi again, bb!
Yeah...even at the young age of 13 Edward is feeling the need to protect what is "his." I think this story will be a fun ride. At least I hope so. I know what the crazy ending is..so I think it will be really awesome. :)
Glad to see you...er...read you again.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Upside to a Beatdown
well the only positive thing about waking up at 4am with a toothache and having to wait for pain med to kick (with an ice pack too lol) is the fact that you posted YEAH for toothache lol. I love his little pervy 13 year old soul. and when did they kiss that was a nice little clue of background to come. Love this story, sorry I am ramblin think the meds are kicking in wooo hooo banner looks great by the way!
Author's Response:
Hi fanficsicktoothVicvickic!
I hope that put a smile on your booboo mouth. I've had tooth problems a little lately myself. But...glad I was able to help out at 4am when you were up and miserable and medicating.
I'm glad I'm not the only woman loving pervy little 13 year old Edward's soul. I think it's just knowing the potential there. And when did they kiss??? Well...you'll have to wait and see. And keep your fingers crossed that it will happen again. (Oh, come on...you know I write the HEA...have faith. But yes...it's a background tidbit.)
Thanks for the storylove. Hope your tooth is better soon. Glad you like the banner. I'm really happy with it. Just you wait...the gazebo is an important location. ;)
Thanks once again.
-bannerday
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Guys Do Keep Keepsakes
Oh Lordy Bella my husband is 3 and 1/2 yrs younger than me and we have been together 21 years go get that boy....agghh You authors that like to make problems and UST and make me come back chapter after chapter to see if its time yet lol. Soooo what happened on his 21rst bday? (know you won't answer, but it doesn't hurt to ask right?) Looking forward to next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Hi vickic!
Holy crap! Two weeks behind on the review reply. surely you must think that I don't love you. But it's just not true, Fanficvic! I'll always love youo!
I was just incredibly bogged down and feeling unable to write. I guess that's writer's block. Pretty severe when you can't even bring yourself to write review replies to your loyal reders. :( So sorry, bb!
But I picked my little fingers up finally and applied them to the computer keyboard and eventually produced a chapter 8 that I'm happy with. So now I can go on with my life!
So...Bella and her younger man phobia...She's going to hear some interesting thoughts from Angela, who used to have a phobia herself. Maybe Bella will take those words to heart... Nah...who am I kidding? lol Seriously, there are other factors iinvolved in keeping her from seeing Edward as a potential love interest. You're going to get that in chapter 8 as well. And you're still wondering about Edward's 21st birthday??? More on that in chapter 8 as well. I'm actually pretty pleased with the things I accomplished in the new chapter. I hope you're going to like it when you get the chance to read. It will answer some of your questions but it will leave you with others. Because I'm evil. ;)
Hope to hear from you soon. thank you for the last review. I promise to answer in a more timely fashion this next time around. I think I'm feeling "funk-free" now.
Take care, bb!
-bannerday
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Girls Keep Keepsakes Too
fantastic chapter as usual. It makes me wonder how this is going to turn around and become a Bella/Edward romance. So many obsticles, and Jake sounds like a really decent guy (though busy). Answer questions and leave me with more, thats why I keep coming back lol. Sorry you were having some writers block issues. Just remember you are doing this for free and to express your artistic nature (wish I had some talent in the writing department, so not going to happen tho lol) don't let getting these chapters out on time and replying to reviews become a chore and just have fun. I (and I am sure many others) will be here wether you respond or not and wether your next chapter comes tomorrow or in three months, and I will be happy when it comes because your stories are just that good. I have laughed because of you, cried because of you, and sighed at the fluffy romance because of you, thank you for sharing your talent! Now go write the next chapter...J/K lol. Take care of you my author friend and as always looking forward to next chapter. Vicki
Author's Response:
Hi vickic!
Sorry it has taken me FOREVER to reply to this review. GAH! I spent quite a while on an update for The Transfer and finally got that posted, but then I fell behind with One Stupid Thing. And for some reason I can't get myself to review much while I am trying to write a chapter and update something.
Glad you liked chapter 8 of OST. This will turn around and become a B & E romance. There are indeed obstacles and Jake isn't a bad guy, so this will take a bit of time to get where we're going. And yes, I know I answer questions and then leave you hanging with new ones. I'm just plain evil like that.
Thanks for the pep talk regarding writer's block. I tend to get bogged down. I don't know if it's because I've got two stories going at once or because this one is so convoluted. :) I appreciate your kind words, though. I'm glad to know I have loyal readers that will not give up on me.
I'm hoping to have a new chapter up by about mid-week. *keeps fingers crossed*
Thanks for the love, vicki!
-bannerday
Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Two Rites, Same Night
loved this chapter poor Edward and his first time with Jessica (bleh) lol. hmmm the view must be some girls in the apartment complex.
Author's Response:
Hi vicki!
I know, right? First time with Jessica...well, a boy's got to get a little practice in. And all that peer pressure...from Jasper touting experiences one could enjoy like a smorgasbord and Jessica wanting to jump Edward's bones. And anyways...Edward didn't have much of a shot of bagging the Spanish teacher that night. LOL
And the view...well that's in chapter 10. So I'll respond to that elsewhere. :) But you were on the right track. :)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Room With a View
I think we see Edward and Bellas future home lol. And some fun at the pool, and sauna and the washing machines lol
Author's Response:
Hi vicki!
So you're kicking poor old Edward and Elizabeth to the curb, are you? LOL I love the comment about the activities at The Bellvue...pool, sauna...(you forgot the spa...you know how I love to make Edward play in the Jacuzzi...;) and then you had to mention the washing machine! I was ROFLMAO.
Possible scene for a future chapter:
*Bella's cell phone rings while she is otherwise engaged*
"Unf...um...oh...yes?...hello?" *pant, pant*
"Bella? Are you okay? What are you doing? Your voice sounds funny. You sound out of breath. What's all that banging?"
"Oh, exactly, Jake. Unh...oh...OH...oh God...Ohmigod...yes, yesss, YES! YES! *gasp, gasp* *pant, pant* "Yes, Jake, I'm fine. I'm just...hoo boy!...doing it with a neighbor. The laundry, I mean...doing...holy shit...the laundry with a neighbor. The washing machine is bumping against the wall."
"Okay, Bells. That's cool. Hey listen, I'm going to go brush my teeth and floss. Call me when you're done."
"Sure Jake. It may be a while. I think Edward needs my help. He's got a few more loads. This could take a few hours."
"Oh...well, okay...I'll brush and floss twice then."
;)
-okay- that was my little gift to you, vicki!
Thanks for the review and for the wanton thoughts about washing machine sex with Bigward...and I think you know what I mean by that. *wink*
-bannerday
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Knock-Knock, No Joke
ahhh no grinding but the Grind...nice! Jasper and I could be twins, well okay not in looks but easily distra....ooh look a shiny cup of coffee!!! lol Okay off to buy a new body board for the hubbys fathers day gift, as always looking forward to next chapter. Hope Bella doesn't break her leg and that Edward doesn't break his...well anything vital lol. Thanks for a wonder chapter Lisa!!!
-thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-
There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?
Lemon? Yes please!
-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84272
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - The Present
ok everythings out in the open now. thank goodness. Lets see where they are heading now that they both are being honest
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two
I love Bellas response to Jacob "we can't be friends cause I don't respect you" Kinda irks me when everybody forgives the cheater and they are all besties again. He will be happy in his life but he will always know that he ruined a special friendship and it will always be his fault and no one elses. Nice chapter loved it
Isabella and Edward Cullen have been married a little over four years, and been together as a couple since they were seventeen.
When Bella stumbles across some devastating evidence of Edward's infidelity on the night she is to announce her pregnancy hearts are broken,will the couple be able to move on and repair?
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 60066 Read Count: 30231
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 -Lemon Alert-
It was lemony hot and I fell for it hook line and sinker lol. Glad to see them on the beginning to mend.
'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
Date: 09 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
OMG ok can I just say how sorry I am that I didn't look for you. I never realised that you got bumped from ff. Just thought like so many other wonderful stories that you abandoned it. I am so sorry! Just my luck late last night after being caught up on my reading I decided to find a new story here on twcs and saw this updated. I thought to myself ok maybe this is a new update over here and ff will come later but I will check it out, needless to say I was many many chapters behind and confused. Then I read your authors notes about being dropped (bastards) and it all came clear. So sorry again, but very happy to find this story alive and well here. Looking forward to where this is going it is a wonderful story!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
oh goodness, I am so glad you are back. Have missed this very much. Looking forward to more chapters!
Banner by: the amazing and talented ivoryhairbela... you rock!
Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past. Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty. She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist. After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter. Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?
Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?
Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza! A million and one thank you´s!!
DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS. NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
Date: 18 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...
ah krazi love this chapter. Thank goodness she and Parker are fine, but emotionally she has a long way to go. So does Edward and he better be working on it. Visuals were awesome as usual and am looking forward to next chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Yeah, Edward is making strides, and I assure that Bella may be being a bit stubborn now, but she will get the help that she needs! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Krazi xoxo Here´s a little sneak peek at the next chapter: “Hey there, buddy,” I cooed softly while I swayed Parker back-and-forth in my arms. “Daddy sure did miss you. Did you miss me too, P?” I asked, sitting down in the glider that was in the corner of his hospital room. I´d stripped, and took a quick shower in the on-call room, donning a pair of dark blue scrubs and a yellow disposable hospital gown before I entered Parker´s room. You could never be too careful, and I didn´t want to expose my little guy to any unnecessary germs that could possibly prolong his stay. I knew that Bella was anxious to our little guy home, but for me, Parker´s release would be bittersweet. Parker going home meant that I wouldn´t be able to see him everyday. I hadn´t realized that I was crying until a tear splashed against his little blue cap-covered head separating into what seemed like a thousand individual molecules. Feeling the need to explain to my son why I wouldn´t continue to see him every day, I slipped my finger in his tiny hand, relishing the way his little fingers wrapped around my large one, and started to speak. “Well, P,” I paused, fighting with the lump that was clogging my throat. “You´re getting so big, daddy´s so proud of you, sweet boy, proud that after everything he did to your mommy that you´re healthy, growing big and strong, and soon you´ll get to go home.” I bit the inside of my cheek, trying in vain to hold back my sob. Unsuccessful in attempt, “I´m so sorry, son” fell from my lips in a broken cry. “It´s all my fault that you´re in here; I will never be able make it up to you, but by God, I plan to die trying.” Parker´s eyes fluttered open, staring up at me as if he was offering me a tiny piece of absolution. Though some may not agree, and argue that it was gas, I´ll swear to my dying day that he looked up at me and smiled. Beaming up at me with rose-colored cheeks, and a twinkle in his eye, in me, my son saw no wrong. I was his hero! Just the mere thought of that made my heart pump wildly in my chest. Not that it was even remotely possible, but in that moment, my love for this tiny innocent creature in my arms seemed to quadruple in its intensity. Clutching his delicate little body to mine, I held him as tight to me as could without causing him harm. All too soon, my phone was vibrating. Without even looking at the screen, I knew that our time was up for today. Once Bella returned, she and Mac would be here for the rest of the night. Bella was such a good mother, making time for both of our children. Even though it was against hospital policy, she insisted that Mac be allowed spend the night in her brother´s room; having me for a father and Carlisle Cullen as your grandfather came with many perks that we had no problem using. Parker´s suite was state of the art, and if not for the obvious knowledge that this was a hospital, you would think that you were staying in a suite at the Fairmont Olympic Hotel. Being a children´s hospital, we had several rooms that were setup for long-term care, making families feel like they were at a home-away-from-home when their child was hospitalized long-term for chronic illnesses. Bella and Mac were able to sleep in a comfortable queen-sized bed and the room even had a small kitchenette complete with a microwave and nice-sized refrigerator. That way, Bella had plenty of liquids at her disposal to keep her hydrated for breastfeeding, and Mac could have juice and snacks to tide her over during the day. Like I said, it was the perfect set-up! Reluctantly, I stood to my feet, trying not to jostle the sleeping infant in my arms. Taking care with his wires and IV, I placed a lingering kiss atop Parker´s head and gently laid back in his bassinette. The door opened, and I didn´t even have to turn around to know who it was. I knew that when I didn’t immediately respond to my mother´s text, she would send my father looking for me. A strong hand gripped my shoulder, giving it a light squeeze. “I´m sorry son, but it´s time,” he whispered solemnly. Even though he didn´t agree with my actions, he was still my father. And when I hurt, simply put, he hurt too! Leaning down one last time, I brushed my lips against his cheek. “I love you son, be a good boy for mommy and sissy tonight. I´ll see you soon,” I promised, praying that it was one I could keep. “I hope...” Unable to stomach the look of pity that was sure to be in my father´s eyes, I turned and walked out of the room without so much as sparing him a backward glance.
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Somethings... You Can´t Take Back...
Welcome Back Krazi...missed you and your stories a whole bunch. You did bring this one back with a bang too, looking forward to next chappie see ya soon.
Author's Response:
Sorry my response is so late, but I just wanted to personally take time out to thank you for reading and reviewing my story! Hope you will continue to read!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: The First Step to Getting Help...Is Admitting That There´s a Problem…
wow those memories are hard to hear. Poor Edward. I hate that something so aweful was what it took to wake him up tho. He could have lost it all then.
good luck dear boy I think you are going to need it.
New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
HaHa, already caught this on ff and reviewed lol...looking forward to where it goes can't remember if i favorited it or not. It was late so was sleepy so will favorite it here just to be safe. Good Luck with this new story.
Author's Response:
Hi vickic.
God I sure hope you don't take any offense to the Vicki-convo with Edward! LOL Please tell me none of those have been nicknames of yours. ;) Then again...if you want to pretend that was you there waking up in Edward's bed, you go right ahead, bb!
Check out my new banner!
Catch you later on one site or another. haha
-bannerday
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
HA yes one of those was a nickname of mine that my lovely (harumph) sister used to call me grrrr. Best friend in high school saw it used to upset me and changed it to IV or later just ivy to be pretty lol so it became a good nickname. So it ended badly but I will take my one night with Edward if I remember right it was wonderful!!!! PS I am redhead (by bottle and fiery temper) LMAO this was ri..dick..ulous. Thinking that hat might be passed back and forth until the UST becomes too much. So excited about this story love it. Thanks for sharing and the warning of nicknames hee hee loved it. Told my daughter that I got to share a night with Edgar...Edmund...Elliot...Ewan..oh Edward, I got an eyeroll for that statement but my inner 18 yr old is squealing like a fangirl, Vicki
Author's Response:
Hi Ivy!
OMG...love it! Damn that sister of yours...well, I guess having a sister call you Ivy is better than having a guy think your nickname might be "Sticky Vicki." Love the fact that you go red. I no longer have any idea what my natural haircolor really might look like.
Glad you found this chapter ri-dick-ulous. It's not me, it's Edward...he just has a knack for it at the moment. The hat...it might return from time to time, you never can tell.
And that night you spent with Edward...must have been something else if you short-circuited so badly you don't remember it very clearly. ;)
Thanks for the review, as always!
-bannerday
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
Gah! want some more interaction lol, these two are going to burn each others biscuits for a while and its going to be good! I was so excited. Was reading on Update to "Secrets and Lies" by BellaScotia and she recc'd your story. I love when stories I love start to get the word spread about them!!! Hope you had a good holiday weekend.
So this chapter was so funny, the fact that the man actually counted and said things like "eleveny" and said her ladder was an asset. Almost don't want to see him start showing his redeaming qualities cause he is so wonderfully douchy. See ya next chappie...as always love this.
Author's Response:
Hi vickic!
More interaction coming in chapter 6! It will be a threeway with Jacob there. :) Bound to be entertaining! I'm glad BellaScotia rec'd my story. That's pretty cool. I think there are a few others out there passing me around. Gosh...now I feel like such a hoor!
Edward and his list...including the ladder. He really needs to go back over his list and take note of a few things buried in there. She has piqued his interest and his...manly appendage. LOL Edward will still be a little douchey. Reflexively douchey.
Thanks for the review, bb!
-bannerday
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Moving Right Along
Ok amazing review in 3..2..1..or maybe not lol. I did realize after you sent me over to the other place that I now have you on alert for this story in 3 different sites. Never done that before, but if any story deserves to be read and reviewed 3 different times its this one.
Its just after 3 am now and we just got home from Harry Potter (amazing if you are interested) and I realized I didn't get the story finished and reviewed earlier (hubs wanted to go to gym quicker than expected grrr) and since I am all hyped up on sugar free twizzlers and coke zero I was going to finish so my review, which was supposed to be amazing, is now convoluted and rambling lol.
Loved this chapter, cant believe Jake went for a ride, thought he would try to scare our boy a little (guess I will wait on E the arseholes point of view) but I am glad we did see that little crack in his armor. Edward has a different side. Yeah.
Well, I am going to bed now. Talk to ya next chapter.
Ilive2readfanficfanVickic
Author's Response:
Hi Ilive2readfanficfanVickic"I.V.=Ivy"fishwife (did I get them all??? Shit you've got so many aliases, or aliai, or fake names!) I'm catching up on this site.
I can't remember if you posted this same review elsewhere. I never know where you're going to crop up next. Hey...wait...Is that you outside my kitchen window??? Don't be bashful, come on in and you can sit on my lap while I type. I'll tell you a story. LOL
I love how you have me on alert at all three locations. I just might start posting on a fourth site, just to keep you on your toes!
I can't remember if you've already read chapter7 elsewhere..probably...but you mentioned twizzlers and coke zero and I had to laugh. just like movie night for B & JB in chapter 7 ;)
Thanks for the multi-site, manifold-alert, multiple-reviews! That's just aaaaalllll kinds of good!
xoxo
-bannerday
Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 82071
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
oh boy, she is never going to have a moments peace until those babies are born. Rightly so.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
oh shit! He is going to go ballistic.
In the year 2029, bio-mechanical engineer, Bella Swan, has created the perfect machine for Whitlock Robotics. Masen can be anyone or anything you desire... but who does Bella want her Masen to be?
This is a O/S
B/E M for Lemons/Language
Banner made by the fabulous Time_Lights
Special Thanks to Carsen Choi!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9105 Read Count: 4482
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Machine
where do I sign up to buy one. Is there a long waiting list...can I get 2? If only sigh
Don't you think Bella was too fast in accepting Edward back in her life? After all he made the decision to leave her. He has to now face the consequences of that decision.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73782 Read Count: 19840
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 The list
Edward ... naked... in my closet. Excuse me Charlie, gotta go to my room!!!Ok she is seeing that there is an issue now she can start letting it go ...not with Jake tho lol let him find someone else
Author's Response:
Yeah! A naked Edward in the closet... well that sure got Bella's attention:) Thank you so much vickic for your review:)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Awareness
Oh you still love him sweet girl, as well as lust for him! Still very sweet of you to try to help him hide the "evidence" of his passion. LOL love love love this
Author's Response:
Thank you Vickic for your review:) She is sweet isn't she to be helping him in this way?
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Aftermath
give him hell Charlie! it still kills me how closed off Bella is tho, I am all for her being stronger, just hate that she has to be emotionless. I know something is going to break through to her soon tho. Alice you are the shiznit, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Yeah!! Way to go Charlie!!! I'll try to explore Charlie's and Edwards relationship a little bit more some time later. I really like Charlie. Our girl Bella will have some great fun in the coming chapters...I promise you that. And Alice too... Thank you so much for reviewing vickic!! As soon as I load a chapter I eagerly wait to hear from you. I know you have loads of stuff to say:)
Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Argument
Hah...now I see, she is going to blossom in her new strength but Edward is going to have to go through a transformation if he wants to be with her. As it should have been.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Vickic.:) It is going to be fun:) But I won't tell you exactly what happens....:)
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
LMAO...ok Edward that is also a good way to get her attention. Just the vision of this 107 yr old vamp finally having wet dreams (or motorcycle rides)has me rolling on the floor. Poor Edward what his conservitive self must be going through. Ed Jr. on the other hand (snort) must finally be having the time of his life.
Author's Response:
I simply loved writing this chapter! I'm so glad you enjoyed it as well. I was actually laughing alone while proof reading. Thank you so much for reviewing!! You make me so happy. I love hearing from you.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Embarrassment
snort...oh the humiliation this boy is enduring. I wish Bella could see how he is faring, maybe she would feel better!
Author's Response:
Yes. Poor Edward. Thank you Vickic for the review.:)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Perception
awww poor Bella, she won't be able to live so cold for long. It does seem like Edward is going to have to work extra hard to break that shell. It might have worked to tell her the "stain" truth maybe if she starts laughing she will crack a little. I loved last chapter! and this one too.
Author's Response:
Vickic Thank you so much for your review!!:) So glad you liked both chapters!! I wait eagerly to hear what you think of this new chapter. Hope it makes you laugh too:)
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Surprise
Oh God Edward ... really! That boy has got it baaad and he can't figure out what to do to get in her good graces. Man up Edward....grab her and give her a big kiss (ala Jake) you might get slapped but at least it would wake her up some! Looking forward to next chptr
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for the review:) Hope you like the next chapter. I've just uploaded it right after I got your review. Would love to hear what you think of this new chapter (Chapter 7) if you thought he'd got it bad from what you read in chapter 6:)
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Consequences
This was one of the things that pissed me off in the books...Edward never saw how effing much he hurt her. You are giving that pov very well, hope he gets over his cluelessness soon and starts work toward a solution.
Author's Response:
Yes I also hated the way Bella just fell back to the way things were and let him back in her life. He needs to understand how much he hurt her. Thank you very much for reviewiing. Hope to hear from you again.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The confrontation
wow that was kind of a mature conversation for Jake, with just a little of that manipulativeness that he is in the books. Still think Edward is clueless about how easy its going to be to get back in her good graces. Stay strong Bella make that boy work for it.
Author's Response:
I'll explore how our girl Bella is going to be coping with Edward trying to'dazel' her. Well going to have a bit of fun with Edward in the next chapter. Would love to hear what you think of it. :)
Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The hard truth
this story is fast becoming one that makes me squeal when it updates. It is so much fun seeing Edwards puberty hit! Alice helping him cope with constant woodies, and Bella being a little clueless. LOL love it Can't wait to see more Charlie!
Author's Response:
Hey that's great!! I'm so glad!! I love these two and of course I love having a bit of fun with them. I know the first few chapters were a bit angsty but I couldn't help it. I'm usually a very happy go lucky person loving a bit of humour and of course a lot of lemons. Thanks for reviewing!! Like I said I wait to read what you think every time I load a chapter vickic:)
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Trouble with unmentionables
Alice and Edward are real siblings, no matter if its by blood relation or not. Those two are the real deal and they are hilarious together. Pick on each other like crazy yet bond together to hide things from Emmett who would make the problem so much more difficult with his teasing lol. Bella and Jake I hope they don't run off Edward, I hope he doesn't start thinking he doesn't have a chance. AAgghh so much happening in this story lol
Author's Response:
So good to hear from you!!:) I can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter. I was laughing by myself at the end of it. I'll post hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Cover up
omg you love to humiliate that boy don't you lololol. Bella noticed tho and that chipped away some of her reserve. Poor Charlie, if he had caught Edward there in a sheet. He prob would have had a heart attack.
Author's Response:
So happy to read your review!! Thanks Vickic!! I was waiting to hear from you. Hope it was not too embarrasing for Edward:) Had to have Bella notice him:) If Charlie caught him in a bedsheet!! (Shudder!) I'm sure he would shoot Edward. Hey may be I should write an outtake or something on an alternate chapter Lol with him getting caught! Well may be later. Once again thank you!!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Mudbath
I would have loved to have been in the parking lot to see that. Unfortunate that Alices dress was ruined, but I think those two are going to be closer than ever when all is said and done.
Author's Response:
It's great to have siblings who care about you isn't it? It truly means a lot. Thank you vickic for reviewing. As always I love to hear from you!:)
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Interrogation
so glad that he can laugh at himself...its good to see he is taking that stick outta his arse. And I don't care how long they have been a family, I still don't think I couldve talked to Esme and Carlisle so openly lol. Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella are going to act around each other now.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing Vikic!!:) It was difficult writing Carlisle's point of view. It was so good to hear from you.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
he is so trying to be a good friend and he is just helping his cause when he is half naked around her all the time isn't he. We females cannot resist these sweet boys and their unknowing sexiness. lol
Author's Response:
Defintely!! Edward in a towel.. sigh... Thanks for reviewing vickic
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Indecency
stick outta ass Edward its 2011 not 1907. Get with the times. lol
Author's Response:
He sure is behind times!! Thanks a lot for reviewing Vickic:)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Irresistable
yeah now they both know that they are attracted to each other and now they are going to flirt like hell with each other. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Yep that's a done deal!! Thanks for reviewing vickic:)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Ravishing
annnndddd he slides back into that victorian mentality. Damnit Edward!!! lol you have me frustrated with a fictional character good job
Author's Response:
Oh the Victorian when will he ever learn??:) At least he's trying to flirt like a modern man:) Well he just didn't know how to handle the response he got for flirting:)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The kiss
Ha! That boy is just going to have to step it up to get her to admit she still loves him. She is staying strong and holding on to her convictions, good for her. They will get it right...one day
Author's Response:
Yes. He mustn't give up hope:) Thanks for the review Vickic:)
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Making out
ooohhh that icy exterior is cracking...you keep it up Bella my dear. Annnndddd Hello Jasper mmmmm. LOL
Author's Response:
Yes. Bella sure is opening up! Poor Jasper gets dragged into all this. Now Edward has to figure out on his own how to win his girl:)
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Unleashed desire
oh wow its almost if as they switched thought processes lol. I personally would love for EC to give me a drive-by kiss. Sigh and don't complain about size Bella my dear, some woman aren't so lucky snort!!!!
Author's Response:
I know!! I would love a drive-by kiss too!!! Thanks for reviewing:)
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Analysis
omg...these two really need to talk and then smack each other on the back of each others heads a la Rose. LOL I wish I were a writer so I could rec this and get it out to more readers, Its so good and should have lots more reviews than it does!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review vickic!! You made my day!! I'm so glad you like the story so much. I'm still trying to get a banner done for the sequel. I dont' have photoshop and I have no idea how to get a good one done. The one I did for this story was really horrid. As soon as I get the banner done I'll upload. Thank you once again for your lovely review.
Three days before Thanksgiving newly engaged Bella gets some surprises from her fiance Edward. What is his secret and will their relationship make it? And what happens on Thanksgiving day with his ganja loving brother meets her chief of Police Dad?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12410 Read Count: 14263
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
snort...oh Edward you just keep digging that whole deeper and deeper. Bella is going to hold this meeting over your head for the rest of your natural born life and prob. beyond too.