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Bio:
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624968
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46
this story was too special not to follow..ty for keeping it going, I would have been devistated if you stopped like another of my favorites did.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48
whew! that last chapter scared me, deep down I knew he would not do it tho.
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
this wonderful story has had an incredible journey. So glad I got to read it hate that I had to follow it all over (not your fault) but worth it!!! thanks for sharing it
Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
Date: 28 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
well Jeez Renee, You could have asked, darnit. A little girl needs her mom. I am sorry for what she went through. I feel more for Charlie though dangit. I love that man lol. Now who has come yelling??
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
aagghhhh the tension is killing me. Charlie knows too great chapter by the way, I can feel the emotion running through the crowd.
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
ohhh but she will be powerful and that will cause some problems down the road I am thinking. Looking forward to it!
Author's Response:
Her gift is certainly unique
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
as much joy as you have given me in the last few years I wish I could do more than send positive thoughts your way. Good Luck with the surgery and the wedding and if your senior year is anything like my daughters your wallet is going to be thin. grrr. Best of luck to you and yours.
This chapter was adorable. I love that the purr is individualized.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
is it okay for a 44 yr old to go "SQUEEEE" lol Never ever lost faith in you and your abilities to make it right lol, have read your other stories lol. Now a quick question for you if you have a moment. I was about to order your book and decided I might as well order some of the others while I was at it, do you know a place on this sight where we can equate the authors with their ff? I know I want to get yours cause I love your writing, would like to do so with other writes I have enjoyed but don't know who they are exactly. Am I missing something somewhere that would let me know who is who? Thanks for your time. Vic
Author's Response:
Well I'm almost 47 (next month **tear**) and I'm writing it, so no feel free to "SQUEEE" then I know I'm not alone. lol
I'll try to get you a list of pennames - author names (I want it also). Mine is Blind Faith by Michael Schneider in case you needed it.
Take care! Mic
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
hmmmm and the mystery continues. Now I am anxious for next chapter....really lol. All those growly males around too ... mmmm, thats gotta be good.
Author's Response:
Carlisle will have to make a full disclosure next chapter.
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
oh wow ... thats a heck or a twist there lol. I wish my hubby could do the growly thing too!
Author's Response:
Mine does, but it's not sexy...just annoying as hell. I think it would help if he looked like a vampire. Maybe I should buy him a cape and fangs. lol
Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
oooohhh ok I know I am 45 years old and should know better, but just the thought of the beautiful Edward "hunting" me makes me all tingly inside lol. Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm 47 and I wrote it! LMAO! I'm looking forward to writing the hunt!
Date: 28 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
oh wow I really want to change places with Bella Swan right now!!! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas and New year.
Author's Response:
I live out my fantasies vicariously through Bella. lol!
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
whoa, and the questions just keep on coming lol!
Author's Response:
Answers will start coming in the next chapter...
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
aw jeez what is going to happen now? Will poor Bella and Edward ever have an easy time of it?
Author's Response:
They'll catch some "downtime" again soon.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33
oh dear...oh wow, things are about to get nasty. Edward will not let his girl go, Bella will not want to go, and Felix seems like a nasty piece of work. Aro, is delusional isn't he?
Author's Response:
Aro is full of his own inflated ego. Felix is on the edge of insanity, but in a small way I feel sorry for him...he wanted to be more than he was and didn't think about the consequences of that decision. He lost his wife in the process and has missed her every day since.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
gosh I hope you guys all feel better. Sounds rough hun and I wish the best for you and yours.
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Soooo Sorry it took so long to review. I love this chapter, how she is all inside her brain but still lets him in. Hopefully soon she will realize that no matter what had happened that she and Edward are ment to be.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it!
Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.
Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story
Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55121
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue
great ending thank you for sharing that story with us
Author's Response:
Your so welcome, thanks for reading and reviewing.
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
hmmm wonder if Edward is gonna get a beatdown for knocking up Emmy bears baby sis. Just dont hit him in the face Em. lol I was shocked by the way, thought my eyebrows were going to fall off my face when that little shocker popped up.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
really thought Ed was going to freak out on her
“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.
Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...
Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?
Or are they both to stubborn?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108986
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin
ss for you break up hope you find something wonderful to comfort you through these times. This story is on alert so whenever you feel up to it I will be right there reading it. Feel better soon.
**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**
Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.
A dark journey of love, power and death.
All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD
Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.
A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose
awww he is a sweet romantic killer lol. looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response:
Lol he is. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay
ho boy that was an emotional one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995707
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
someone is going to have a very sore bottom in the morning (kinda wish it were me lol)
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Happy Birthday, and thanks for the present you gave to us. Love when you update. Looks like Riley might bring some trouble soon, hope not too much.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
great chapter as usual..looks like Bella is getting better at holding her tongue but still has some work to do. As for the world cup, I love the sport ,but you are right the icing on the cake is at the end at the jersey exchange. Did you see Beckam in his suit yummmm.
Author's Response:
thanks and YES I did!!! Oh my...
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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29
“P-pardon?” Bella felt faint. This is bad! This is really, really bad!
Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’
Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.
Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you. It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.
Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.
She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents. Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.
My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life?
Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.
What had she done?
Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.
“y-yes?” she whispered.
“Bella?”
“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
wow that was intense, think I need a cigarrette
Author's Response:
thank you
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45
that seems like it was a hard chapter but it was a wonderful read.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
grrr just grrr...Edward lives in a BDSM lifestyle and gets upset over bruises and ruins honeymoon grrrrrrrr. You know I never wondered about Victoria after the Jacob/James damage. How stupid of me to forget that bitch. lol
Author's Response:
hey Vickic, thanks so much for your review and comments - yeah he'd better make it up to her! xoxo
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
one of the best chapters too me ever. It just showed what a wonderful family dynamic these ppl have. Hope your aggravation does not bother you any more and that you have a more peaceful time. Now for some whining. YOUR PICTURES DID NOT COME THROUGH. Waaahhh, most I could handle not seeing (well no not really) but the pic of Daddy C I really wanted to see it lol. And the one that said "yes please" well that was just a tease grrrr. PS Emmett looking for Easter Eggs kinda made me hot, is that wrong?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - I don't know why the pics didn't come thru they show on my preview!!!! - if you know what the hell i did wrong let me know ok?
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Oh Lordy what a chapter, and a range of emotions. WTF so who is her mom and how did this happen? That is a hell of a twist woman! Thanks for the recs...isn't Wild a slow burn that is flaming up hot now? As always looking forward to next chapter!
Author's Response:
hey there V - thanks for the review and comments - yeah those stories are owning me right now - along with others!
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Damnit...wrote this long, well thought out, nice review and twcs said I was not authorized and had to login grrrr. Anyway, was trying to tell you how much I enjoy this story and how much it is appreciated that you put so much time and thought into these chapters this one had my emotions from end to the other. I would also like to put in my play party suggestion (TMI its my personal favorite). How about some wax play with different colors make it kinda artistic looking. Hope you get a million suggestions so you can keep writing this forever lol (eighty year old Edward Cullen still using a paddle, still hot)
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
damnit... some of my favs have updated today all with babies and weddings you talented ladies have my tears flowing and my nose all red today lol. Am really amazed at how emotionally invested I get in these characters y'all put so much effort into. thank you for the wonderful chapter and am really looking forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Hey Sweetie, I hear you, I have tissues next to my laptop - I never know when I will need them! Thank you so much for your review xoxo
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
I don't know what to say. What do you tell an author when she gives you so much of a story. You give us their fun, their not so fun, their stress and their laughter. You gave us daddys that we would love to have and moms that make the world go around. Friends and siblings that make all the annoying things they do seem worthy of all the special things they do. AND then you cut if off errrr...no wedding no dress (the other pics are beautiful tho.) I suppose I will have to wait. LOL thank you for this chapter it was so full of life. I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response:
Aaaw Don't be upset, pleeeease! I'm about half way through the next update, it won't be two weeks - and there are LOTS of pictures for the next one, too many in fact! Thanks so much for reviewing xoxo
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
oh wow, the Renee story was right out of the blue. Awesome little twist there and a wonderful thing for Bella I think.
Author's Response: thanks for the review!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
no matter how strong and solid a relationship is it will always takes work as it changes and grows. Thats what they have to learn and it seems that is what they are finally learning. Congrats Alice and Jasper, Kate and Garrett and Bells and Edward, its a baby boom!!
Author's Response:
thank you for your insightful comments! Thanks for reviewing xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
oooohhhh the foreshadowing on this one is scaring me to death. The professor and student scene meanwhile made me wish hubs was home from work lol. So I am now conflicted in my emotions and my tummy is rolling in fear and then in general lust lmao. You are killing me woman or at least giving me an ulcer.
Author's Response:
Relax, Darling and take some pepto Bismal or something. And take a deep breath. You know me - NOTHING WILL HURT OUR COUPLE - and you know by now that anyone who tries to stand in their way will get TAKEN OUT!!! But of course there will be drama xoxo
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
loved the movie, loved this chapter, love my hubby (its his birthday, had to through that in there) loved the soundtrack to the movie, etc. etc. Its just a loving kinda day lol. Course it took me 3 times to read this chapter cause I kept getting interupted for birthday stuff. So here it is latish Sunday evening and I finally can relax with Master Edward sigh. Thanks for sharing him!
It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64140
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
ok I laughed, I cried, I got a little worked up ;o) then I laughed some more. Thank you for giving us this story to read,it was wonderful. I read so much ff so it takes something really special to stand out and boy this one did. Plus, the fact that I get to laugh some instead of all the angst is such a wonderful change. Good luck with your future endeavors, will be looking forward to it.
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Super Bowl XLVI
awww damn its coming to an end...so sad. I have loved this story from beginning to end and am looking forward to Emmett outtakes very much. Heres hoping we see some real football this season ...GO BUCS...and if not we will have to argue Gators vs. Noles some more lol.
Author's Response:
It is but we'll have plenty of outtakes and I'm with you. NFL needs to get this thing done pronto! Gators v Noles...we shall see ;) HEHE Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you've been with me for so long!
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Leaping
having an absolutly shitty day and along comes your chapter 39 and I feel infinatly better ♥ Thank you dear author. Have a feeling next chapter when the "rents and Emmett meet up that I will need a depends for the pants piddling I will be doing.
Author's Response:
So sorry to hear about your day but I'm glad I could help! I hope next week lives up to your expectations! I'm scared to write it but I'll do my best for you guys :) Thank you!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Second Down
you have the funniest Emmett ever! I lurve him. How did you make a hallway picnic in front of the neighbors so damn hot I will never know but dang girl, it was.
Tampa Bay Buccaneers are my team of choice, Dolphins for hubby and son, Jaguars for my daughter (we are from Florida can u tell). So Sunday is a lot of arguing about who is watching whos team.
Author's Response:
Yay! I've found 2 fellow Bucs fans now, I'm so excited. Going to the season opener on Sept 12th, can't wait. :) Are you on twitter? I tend to tweet and rant and rave during games so if you're on there, we should hook up. I'm @nolebucgrl there as well as everywhere. I'm in FL too, by the way, Tampa.
I'm so glad you love my Emmett. I have the best time writing him and he's totally the character I'd most want to hang out with so that's how I write him. hehe
I'm glad you found the hallway picnic hot...I love those two together ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flag On The Play
LOL better be glad I love this story so much...and we have the Bucs in commen lol,(cheifs are going down on the 21rst) 'cause it hit me what the Nole ment in your name...I guess we will have to disagree on college ball. Great chapter I would be spazzin if I were Bella, plus just thinking bout those fingers (did you notice em in Eclipse when they were on the bed they are huge). Looking forward to when he gets back from Seattle. Vicki a future GATOR momma (hopefully)
Author's Response:
Haha Hey at least we have the Bucs we share. I'll try to forgive the Gator love hehe. Only cause you seem nice and have good taste in stories. hehe I kid, I kid!!! :)
Poor Bella. She's trying to be calm and then Terry Bradshaw of all people is discussing Edward's fingers on national TV. What is a girl to do?
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 First Down
stupid computer deleted my review before it sent grrr. I was saying that the UST here is killing me, and I need to borrow Emmett from you to watch some football this weekend. Hubby won't scream and yell at the refs and players and coaches and bad plays like I do. Think he would be fun lol. Thanks for great chapter..your fan (but mostly the Gators fan hee hee) Vicki
Author's Response:
Ha! I dunno, I might have to charge for an Emmett loan. I think he'd be epically awesome to watch a game with :) Nah..I can share! Screaming and yelling at the refs is half the fun dammit! Now I tweet my rage too. *giggles* Gotta love the internet! Em would definitely make things even better tho!
Glad you liked it (shows you have some taste, unlike your football allegiance. HEHE I KID!!!)
Love ya!
Amy
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery
yeah Screw You Cam Newton!!! Draft looked pretty good a lotta players from Florida teams got drafted. Looks like Tampa wanted to get some new blood on the defence. Great chapter, nice job pissing off the defence Cullen! Congrats to Esme and really, Bella is not going to have a Cardinal red back and azz, really would love for Emmett to see that (the red not the act lol) Thanks for great chapter Bucgirl (notice the absence of Noles hee hee) see ya next chappie. Vicki
Author's Response:
Haha I thought that was fun to include right after the draft.
Tampa did a great job of working on their D. Very excited they got a top 5 player with the 51st pick. Hopefully his knee is fine and we'll get a lot of production.
Haha I am sure Em's gonna find out about it. I'm always gonna be a Nole, thank you :)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Illegal Contact
oh that was fun, I love your Alice. The Bucs won this weekend (barely) and so sorry bout the Noles (giggle,snort). How bout tho Gators tho hee hee. Great Chapter looking forward to next.
Author's Response:
Haha really? You're bragging about the Gators? They look terrible so far. They're lucky they haven't played anybody yet because I honestly think they're going to drop 3 or 4 games this season. Rebuilding is never fun, as I well know. The Noles were abysmal and I haven't much to say about them.
I was at the Bucs game and it was HOT. Dear Lord, I nearly died. So glad it started raining. It was fun though. Freeman got his stuff together in the second half. Really like that Mike Williams kid. A win's a win, even if it's ugly. Better than they've been doing!
I heart this Alice so much! She's a fabulous friend!
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Team Meeting
fantastic chapter, wish I had Emmett as a neighbor. sorry this has taken so long to reply to, my computer is dead and having to sneak updates on my daughters laptop. Getting her pc away from her is very hard. Go Bucs, hope they are well rested after the by=week and come back from that loss.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Em as a neighbor would be a riot, though you never know what he'd want to borrow. hehe I'd be on the lookout every day for some prank :) Awesome.
Sorry about your comp! Sharing is not fun!
Yes the Bucs needs a bounce back! We'll see!
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Touchdown
oh my...humor and sex what could be better!!! GO BUCS...can't believe they won, I had to change channels (sunday ticket, means my daughter gets to watch her jags, or my son his Colts, or my hubby the Dolphins) and didn't even know they won till this morning when I was watching the NFL network. They were losing when I changed it rrrr. Congrats on beating the "Canes, looks like y'all might beat my beloved Gators this year (young team give us a few years we will be back lol)
Author's Response:
Haha they had to have a little humor with their sex, it was required!
I actually turned it off in disgust but got some texts that let me know I needed to tune back in so I did see us win! It was awesome. The Noles kicked Cane ass, it was awesome. And UF lost, sorry, but that was awesome for me. About time ! Sucks replacing a legend. I know all too well. Good luck :)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion
Yummy chapter, very nice. Zeus seems like a good name hee hee. Your Alice is the bees knees, I adore her. How bout those Bucs pulling it off in the last minute. It was the only part of the game I got to see after watching the Dolphins and the Jags lose. I of course gloated the rest of the day.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think it's pretty kickass and can't until the day it's unleashed on Emmett. Not for awhile though. hehe
I love that you guys are loving Alice. I really, really wanted to write one that didn't piss people off. Sometimes that can be very hard to do.
The Bucs...I don't know how they're winning those games, but I like that they don't quit and Freeman has that special spark I guess. I don't think they're the best team in the NFC, unlike our delusional coach, but they're way beyond what I expected. hehe Glad you got to gloat! Hopefully we'll get to this week!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Huddle Up
Hey to my favorite writer/Bucs fan, sorry it took so long to review, pc is down and have to steal reading time on my daughters laptop so am slogging through 300 emails rrrr. Great chapter, am reading while I have the bucs game on (halftime right now) they look good. Great chapter as usual, so glad to see Edward has friends that are willing to pull his head outta his arse. P.S. would love a bathtub like that!!! Game is back on so will leave you with the thought that Edwards point of view would be just fine to hear about lol. See ya next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Ha, at least you get to see them. I was writing my next chapter of First (yay) and the game isn't on here. Gonna pull the second half up on my comp and try not to jinx them this time! Glad they're playing well though!
So happy you liked the chapter! Edward needed a little prodding and they're just the ones to do it! The bathtub is my dream. The whole bathroom really. hehe Some day, maybe...hehe
EPOV is going to happen :) Thanks for the review and enjoy the game!
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Taking The Field
this was a great chapter!!! That boy is as hot as fire too. Looking forward to when she finally does meet the parentals(cant wait to see what comes outta that mouth of hers lol) and so glad she and Alice are making friends with Rose. They will be a leathel combination on those boys. My football weekend was interupted by soccer games (high school football is done, but high school soccer is starting+club) and Harry Potter Movie opening so did not get to see the Bucs but glad they won.
Author's Response:
I barely watched the Bucs since Indy/NE was on at the same time. I adore watching Manning vs. Brady. They're epic going head to head. hehe But I saw all the Bucs TDs and some good defense. They continue to surprise!
She'll meet the parents pretty soon, right after EPOV chapter. We're not far off now!
I really wanted to give them some time to spend with Rose, they'll all be in one another's lives and it's important that the girls start bonding too. haha And yeah, the boys will be in trouble with them teaming up :)
I'll probably see HP with my dad this week. Mom doesn't do those sorts of movies so I waited! I hope you enjoyed it and the soccer :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding
thanks for the football, wish season was back on. fun times sexy times and then heartfail. Please let Esme be okay...please
Author's Response:
I wish it was too. Lots of football ahead, I promise. Yeah, fun and then not so fun. I promise a swift resolution. I love that you're worried about her :) That means a lot to me. *hugs* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. You'll have an answer next chapter!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan
oh I have been waiting and waiting for your update...thought there might be a little aside in there about FSU beating Florida lol...Wait till next year! Great chapter, hot as hell in the beginning and then a wonderful insight into what an athlete has to put up with being famous. Loved the 'rents too. Thought the bucs were going to beat the falcons this weekend, but they were just too much for em, I miss Warren Sapp and Mike Alstott.
Author's Response:
Ha! Had I updated last week when we won, I might have. After the fail vs. Va Tech I wasn't loving them near as much. But that UF game made me extremely happy for the first time in a long time ;) We'll see what next year holds. haha
So glad you liked it! I wanted to show that he's not all football, to be sure. And the wall sex was a just a must. hehe Mom and Dad were fun to bring in finally :)
Bucs should have beaten the Falcons. I love how they're claiming "Matt Ryan" did it again. Um, no, that kick return is what did it. Such is life. They're better than I expected and have something to build off next year I guess. I miss the team too, but I miss Derrick the most. Love him so!
Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass
woohoo computers fixed and am able to catch up on my "stories" good chapter and looking forward to the next which I am sure is somewhere in the gazillion bits of mail I have to catch up on.
Author's Response:
Glad the comp is fixed! A new chapter is going to post shortly, so you'll have that in the pile at least. Good luck!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Dang sorry I missed this on Christmas, wouldve made the day a little better (in-laws hanging around all day tend to make me cranky) So our Bucs are out darn it...you rooting for anyone else? My Georgia roots are coming through so going for the Falcons.
Author's Response:
Haha that's what I was going for :) Sorry you missed it but glad you found it now anyway!
I'm happy with most of the teams in the playoffs. Not really a Packer or Bear fan so I'd like them to get ousted. Oh and the Seahawks because Tampa had a better record. hehe. Not fond of the Jets either, but that's about it. Just having fun watching ;)
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
oh god I did miss a bunch while I was offline didn't I?! What a great dinner with the folks, and goodness if I were meeting Carlise there is no telling what would come out of my mouth. That man is beautiful. Almost wish Emmett were there tho Him and Esme together would be a hoot.
Author's Response:
Haha I guess, but it was all here waiting for you when you came back! He is indeed beautiful and you can't blame Bella for loving the fingers. Emmett and Esme will unite at some point, I promise ;)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
snort...lol Oh I am so going to be like Renee when my daughter brings home the "One" that was a fantastic chapter and as usual Emmett should move next door to me, I need a neighbor like him .
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm glad you want to be like Renee. She's nutty but so much fun! Emmett would be a fantastic neighbor, so long as you didn't mind the occasional good-hearted prank :)
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible
oh gosh Love all the football talk, really makes me wish it was already season again. Oh well just watch some rugby on BBC and wait patiently. Great chapter, already looking forward to next.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you love it! I love writing it and it fills a little of the football hole. Need the season to return!
I'll have more for you soon, including that lemon Bella aluded to! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
big happy smiley face when I saw you updated!!! Fun chapter would have loved to have been a fly on the wall during that interview. Em as usual is genius, can't wait to see how Bella gets him back. Looking forward to next chapter, have a feeling there might be some trouble with the bidding hmmm?
Going for GB just 'cause have never liked the steelers. Don't really care this superbowl, at the beginning of the season never had these two teams on my radar for SB. Guess I will watch for the commercials and the chicken wings this year lol no beer tho grrr
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it! The interview was fun and Em, well, he just may finally be in trouble! hehe We'll see how that goes!
Ahhh well it'll be fun to see who comes out on top. I'm rooting for the Steelers, but I don't really care that much eitehr way! Commercials are always fun and the food is a must! :) Enjoy!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long
aww thats just sweet. That boys got it bad, real bad! Looking forward to next chappie...miss Emmett really bad lol.
Author's Response:
Haha that he does! I'm glad you enjoyed it! He loves his girl.
Emmett's coming! Never far away :) Love that you want him!
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
I actually started cursing under my breath that I had to get up in the middle of the chapter and cook dinner for my family. They could eat PBJ for one night right. Emmett is as usual hysterical, and Rose is my hero. going with GB just cause I don't like the terrible towels lol. Will be watching for the commercials this year, course the fams will insist on wings, fried cheese, spinach dip, and those little sausage thingies inthe bbq sauce and pizza. When did the superbowl become as much work as Thanksgiving dinner.
Author's Response:
Hahah I love that you didn't want to interrupt your reading. PB&J is always win in my book!
Em was his usual self and I had fun turning Rose loose on people finally.
Hahaha sounds like quite the spread at your house! I love it! I'm just picking up a sub to munch on all day. hehe Lame! Maybe some chocolate...hehe
Enjoy the commercials and hopefully the game a little :)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
i LOVE EMMETT, LOVE HIM LOVE HIM LOVE HIM
Author's Response:
Heheh I love that you do! He loves you all too, just like I do! ;)
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
hee hee I knew she would kick his arse! Sometimes I wish it was okay for men to kick ass still. Dan needed it and Edward would look lovely doing it. Those three coming to the rescue was awesome tho (another day where I wish I was Bella Swan lol)
Watching any of the combines some nice rookies coming the NFLs way
Author's Response:
Hahah She did indeed. Yes, it would have been hot for Edward to pound on him but sadly it would have created way too many problems! At least they came over to save her, that's something :)
I didn't get to see much of the combine, but what I did see and read sounds great ;)
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
awww that was an awesome chapter. He is so whipped love that. Superbowl was a fantastic game, love when one team does not dominate the game. My daughter saw the defensive player Matthews (one who gave Big Ben fits all night) and promptly fell in love. LOL even got his pic on her facebook page (stalker much) I miss football too, except my son goes to conditioning every day after school.
Author's Response:
Thank you! He is definitely whipped, but so is she so it's all good.
I was really glad the Steelers came back a little, because I was bored in the first half. Don't tell your daughter that I kept yelling at Matthews to cut his girl hair. hehe I used to like long haired guys though. hehe
Well at least you have a football link still :) I'm floundering already! Thanks for the review!
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum
what a great Valentines/Anniversary gift. Thank you lol, hate what they had to go through at the grocery store, but love how they are when they are with friends. Love these two.
Author's Response:
Well Happy Valentine's & Anniversary! Very sweet!
The store wasn't fun but there are good and bad with his fame and I tried to show both aspects. Friends definitely will help get them through. So happy you love them :)
Thanks for the review and have a great night with your hubs!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
Emmett is the absolute shit!!! Love that boy lol. Dan seems to want to get his arse seriously mauled by an entire football team. Dumb Dumb Dumb man. Course I have a feeling is going to teach him a thing or two before Edward can even think to put his shoes on lol That girls got brass ones. Thanks for the cliffie will now be waiting on pins and needles waiting.
Author's Response:
Haha he is, isn't he? I love writing my Em. He's so loyal to those he loves.
Dan's not overly bright, is he? Moron. I think Bella handles him pretty well, you have that right :)
More soon, I promise! So glad you're anxious for more!
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass
Have I ever said that I love your Esme almost as much as your Emmett! I take it you don't like Farve very much lol!!! Poor guy will never live that stuff down. See ya next chapter looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Haha no, I've hated Favre for a long time for all his retirement/non-retirement holding the NFL hostage stuff. He annoys the hell out of me.
So glad you love Esme! :) She's a lot of fun! Thanks so much for the review!
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields
wish I had friends like that when I moved lol
Author's Response:
Right? Moving is so much more fun with someone like Emmett around. And hot QBs and funny friends. hehe
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 23 Outtake, The Second String
oh thank you thank you thank you...you know how much I love Emmett and a peak into his life just makes my day bright and complete lol
Author's Response:
Haha I'm so glad you liked it! I had a blast writing about Rose turning the tables on him. That's why he doesn't mess with his girl :)
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground
whoa nelly! I wanna go to the movies with Edward. We used to have a theatre here in PSL that had tables and couches and recliners and you could get pizza and hot dogs or burgers and fries and pitchers of beer. Run down joint but the best place to "dinner and a movie". Sadly it closed down, this chapter reminds me how much I miss cuddling with the hubs on a couch there. Thanks for great memories and great chapter
Author's Response:
Haha right? I would enjoy going with him as well! That sounds like a cool theater! The iPic place is real and I watched their tour video to get an idea of what it involved. I wanna go :) I bet you enjoyed it, even if it was run down! Glad I could bring back a good memory! THanks so much for the review!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag
oh wow....I love mushy family Thanksgivings...not happening here. We fight over if we get to watch the parade or not (males no, females yes) I never get help in the kitchen and then everyone eats for about a minute and goes watch football lol. Grrrr I wanna be a Cullen.
Author's Response:
Nothing wrong with mushy Thanksgivings! haha But yeah, mine are never like that. I'd be with your males on the parade thing though! I loved em when I was young but you know me, football pregame please. hehe You can be an honorary Cullen! ;)
Thanks for the review!
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF
damnit my computer failed when I sent the review for this chapter. It was epic, the best review I ever made, it would have brought tears to your eyes, but, sigh...I cannot remember what I wrote lol. Something about the typo about only 5 chapters left. I think you mean 50 more chapters of all Emmett all the time ... right? I think I also said how sorry I was for Charlie (well except the Long arm of the Law, thats good to know) LOL Got a spring high school game to go to this week...Yeah, so will get my football fix in person this week. See ya next chapter and will stalk you on facebook and at ff now (you are the first author I ever friended on facebook, didn't want all my real world friends to know what a pervy little habit I had lol ) Vicki
Author's Response:
Oooh not cool! This site doesn't usually do stuff like that!
Haha 50 more chapters of all Emmett would likely kill me dead :) You crack me up!
Awww Charlie loves his Renee even if she drives me batty!
Enjoy the football! I'm jealous!
So sweet that you made me a friend without any other FF people! Thank you! What a compliment!
Love ya, Vicki! Thanks for the review!
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
Emmie is going to get it. LOL somehow or another that boy will spin it in his favor
Author's Response:
Haha so true. He always manages to land on his feet! :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
noooooooooo...not 2 more chapters . waah! some good football tho lol, I can almost picture Brees in his black and gold now and his face when he gets pic'd. LOL at Emmett too.
Author's Response:
Haha Thank you! I'm sure there will be lots of outtakes ahead though! Still plenty left for these guys. Glad you could see it happening and of course, Emmett ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
Hoist by your own petard Edward! Emmett got you too lololol. Good football description. was actually fist pumping there at the end.
Author's Response:
Hahah yep! Of course Em turned it around on him!
I'm glad you were into the game! Thanks so much for the review ;)
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue
waaah noooo...I don't want to let this story go. Fine be that way. Grrr! Okay am done pouting now. Love the nod to our Bucs..hope they won that superbowl hee hee Divine Justice that Emmett has beautiful girls like his Rose. Looking forward to any and all new stuff from you...Hope to see ya at a Bucs game someday lol
Author's Response:
Haha I am glad you don't want to let it go! There are definitely outtakes to come, so don't have to say bye yet!
Of course the Bucs won that Super Bowl! hehe I had to let it be so!
Emmett definitely has gorgeous daughters!
Lots of stuff ahead and I'd love to see you at a game :) Thanks so much for all your kind words!
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 Dancing with the Emmett
Would Rose and Em consider becoming a poly couple...cause I really want to marry that man! Have a feeling that even if he hadn't have know it was coming he still would have spun it in his favor. Still, I hope the others keep trying. Love this story love it love it love it!!!
Author's Response:
Hahaha I dunno, Rose is pretty scary! But I'm glad you liked it! He definitely would have had a sense of humor about it either way, but I liked him ferretting it out and one-upping them!
Thank you so much! More to come :)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Mile High
lol, can I sign up for flying lessons!! What a fun chapter, we should all be so lucky to be able to fly private with a bed and our own Edwards.
Seeing some pics coming outta Bucs training camp Yeah!! Signing my son up for his first combine to let the colleges come have a look see. Going to be down in Miami in December looking forward to that. Go football and Emmett!
Author's Response:
Haha right? Who doesn't want a private plane and private time with the QB?
yes, thrilled to have football back!
Congrats on the combine! That's awesome! Good luck to him!
So glad you liked it! Thank you :)
Edward is a pornstar. Bella is a fluffer. One shot. Slightly crack, slightly hot, mostly fun. M for immature words and dirty body parts. Handcuff me for being a dirty bird.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5317 Read Count: 1988
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
lmao...yep that was hysterically dirty...loved it
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
oh my that boy is romantic! Jack will be so happy to see him too, is he there for good or is it just a birthday surprise...I hope for good.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue
what a satisfying ending. Not all sweetness and light (just to prove nobody lives all happy all the time, Jack has typical boy behavior). thank you for such a wonderful story. Enjoyed it very much and looking forward to your next efforts
Author's Response:
Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!
The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:
The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.
She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.
"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.
The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.
"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"
"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254869
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
I really kept wishing this chapter wouldn't end. I love that she keeps seeing things she would like to try and can't wait to see creative ways Edward grants her wishes.
Author's Response:
Edward knows what she would like to try and he is introdusing those things to her one at a time and seeing if she truely does enjoy them and what happens to her when she views or pertisapates in them ... so far ... he's doing a-ok ...thanks for reading ...louise
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
I really love this story and cannot wait to see Emmetts reaction to the tickets. Go Bella (shouldve punched him in the dick, but a good slap works too)
Author's Response:
lol... and Emmett...ummm...that should be interesting
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
oh my goodness that was a long juicy lemon. much appreciated I must say. no questions for jane and aro but will be thinking of one to send. thank you giving us this monster of a chapter, kept me occupied allll day hee hee
Author's Response:
Let me know if you come up with any questions...
Thanks for reading ... I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.
“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”
He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”
“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”
Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”
I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
loved this chapter and am curious about the leaving w/Demetri. Dougie is a hoot but I see the potential of him getting Bella in trouble through no fault of her own lol. Alice is going to have to let go of her uppity ways, she is just as kinky just not it the same way lol. Thanks for the wonderfully long chapter and cant wait for next. You were a topic of conversation the other day in a FB thread at BornonHalloweens pumpking patch. They were talking about forced orgasms, so I had to bring up your last chapter. I love this world of ff lol
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
omg...Paul is such a dick, a funny dick, but a dick none the less. I had one of the zealots give me one of those tracks because I am overweight. I wish I had as much dignity as Bells did because she just got a f*ck off from my hubby. I don't know why ppl think they can just get in your business like it is their right. Makes me angry.
ok enough angry great chapter looking forward to the next!
Author's Response:
i know a lot of zealots who think it is their place to improve the world ...lol...
Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml
Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.
“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.
Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”
“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”
“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
poor Bella better start checking to see if anyone else is in the room before she makes her way outta the bedroom. Looking forward to the revenge on Emmett. Edward did a great job, never in my life would I have equated BDsM with Civil War reinactments, but that really worked.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
the way that man takes care of her amazes me. And to your detractors...why can't you just not read. Why do you all always try to bring stupid drama to wonderful well written stories that we as adults choose to read. Because isn't that the important thing here, that we are adults that make desicions that are right for us (kinda like this story) I am a 45 yr old that has raised 2 children who are active members of the community 1 in college and the other about to recieve a scholarship to college. We volunteer have friends play sports etc etc. I don't think in the grand scheme of things that reading or writing things makes a person sick. So stay the eff outta it don't read it and don't upset one of my fav. authors so much that she gives up or pulls her story (like so many have done). You judgemental ppl are the ones who leave a bad taste.
Author's Response:
oh i wouldn't pull the story at least not here. i have been thinking about pulling it from FF, and just posting it on my blog.....but i haven;t decided yet. And yes you are right ... Edward does take very good care of Bella and i would think that after 85 chapters it would be clear how much he loves her and wants only the best for her... yet ...people still doubt him...anyway thanks for reading ...louise
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
I am thinking you should send me to a corner for being so late with a review. PC probs galore!!! 200 emails (down to 102) and lots of you know, real life stuff in between. LOL
Thank you for this chapter it is absolutley lovely how well he treats her. Exactly the way she wants to be wether she knows it or not. There have been times while reading this that I have said to myself "Isn't Edward being to serious, isn't this supposed to be more fun?" but I see now what he is doing and applaud him for it. I know he must be really disiplined, for as much as he loves her he sometimes prob. just wants to hold and cuddle and coddle her. Good job, L. You make me look forward to see what else I can learn
Date: 19 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
oh wow...I wish I were a writer so I could put into words how very good this chapter is. I just love when its just the two of them w/little drama to interrupt. Edwards pov is always so grounding to me, I forget sometimes that he is as much hers as she is his. This just reminds me how much he loves her and how strong he has to be to be the man/dom she needs. Good job Louise thank you for my first non crying update I have read today lol.
Vic
Author's Response:
No tears ... not in this chapter and not in the next ...but hold on, they are coming .... thanks for reading ..louise
Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
Just when I think they are becoming a perfect couple, you jump in with something else that makes me realise they still have so much to learn. How to be together as just a couple and to mesh it w/ the D/s relationship also. I forget that even after 20 years, hubs and I still learn new things about each other and it is a never ending process.
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
Hes yelling cause he is in love...its different when you are in love! Poor Edward, and really, poor Bella. Its not her fault but she is being punished by all the important men in her life lol. Have fun on the beach and drinking. I will be on the beach sunday (no drinking tho sigh)and then eating some steak...Yay
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
oh gosh this just keeps getting more and more nerve wracking lol, keep up the good work Louise
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
I think this chapter was awesome. It just shows how much these two love and respect and know each other.
Good one
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
I hope she hasn't bitten off more than she can chew...hee hee, snort! I know Officer Hawk wants the truth but man is he mean about getting it. Looking forward to next chapter as usual.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
oh B should win...nobody should HAVE to eat Fiber one!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
getting back to real world, and Alice needs to go volunteer at the shelter for a bit. Just to see how lucky she is and thankful for Edward and Bellas happiness.
Author's Response:
Yeah... I could just see Alice doing that...LOL
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Alice...what the hell is her problem, she seemed so nice but now, where the hell did this attitude suddenly come from. Knew she wasn't thrilled with the lifestyle, yet she caters to it. My thoughts are that either someone is whispering in her ear some not so nice things and she is believing it, or that she is just jealous of all the attention that Bella is recieving. Makes me sad for her and for Edward, especially when he realized that their relationship would never be the same.
Emmett is a doll I love him so. Glad Edward was able to talk him down tho.
The scene was intense, very very intense. She is starting to show signs of wanting some daddy/little girl play (which is hot by the way lol). He is so in control its not even funny. Gosh what a man. Lucky lucky Bella.
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough
Living in Florida I know your Hurricane pain, hope you don't have to fight with the insurance co.s like we did. Good Luck and best thoughts for the recovery