Reviews by nails233
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303329
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

very nice!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

nicely done!

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Unleashing the Monster

nice job! well done! :)



Author's Response:

thank you very much :) xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Fighting the Monster Within

i am hoping he's a baddie but wouldn't stop reading either way.. nice job thanks michele

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic

nice and cliffy! just the way i like it! great job



Author's Response:

hehe i love cliffys too :) xxxx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts

thanks for the warning i do have issues visualizing certain things, but have no fesr i am not going anywhere, i'll just wait it out and pick it up when it wont give me nightmares, thanks great job.



Author's Response:

aww bless you, there shall be warnings on any chapters that i deam graphic, so dont worry. but thank you very much for sticking it out anyway :) xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

No abuse from me. Nice chapter I can deal with the pain parts but please include a warning if any rape is involved. I cant stomach that. I hope you update soon. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

Oh thank you, i was worried that everyone would hate me, and i do have the other chapter, but it hasnt gone through my beta yet, but it should be up soon, thank you very much for reading, and nope my story wont have rape, i just cant do that. xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two

just graphic enough! you're doing fabulous.



Author's Response:

aww thank you very much, sorry for the delay with chapters, i have a lot on at the moment :/ xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

I did have enough room when I returned this. So let me tell you, it's a grest chapter! I can't wqit to see what the monster does! Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

oh thank you huni, you did a great job, sorry I was about to email you but lost track :/ Thank you so much for helping me out :) and the monster is completely in control, as you have seen Edward has fully handed the reigns over to the monster :) hehe xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri

Awesome Chapter! Love this story! Thank you for a fabulous update!



Author's Response:

thank you :) Its all thanks to you :) thank you so much, and i love the mugs xx

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

I never called it any such thing. I infact said it was good to see you moving it along. it is appearent you are having serious issues else where and placing them on my review which is unjust. as for you not wanting me to continue reading your story than so be it. i will immediately remove it from fave list. Best wishes in the future.



Author's Response:

I was unbelievably hot headed, however I have already sent an email. I was a bitch, thats it and I do apologise.

Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

It's good to see you are moving forward. honestly i almost didn't read this chapter dreading it would be the same as the last few. But i'll be even more honest and say it has been dragging so i hope you have more planned for the future chapters. I'll try to hold on and hope it moves forward quickly. i would like to see it to the end.



Author's Response:

Well thanks for the honesty, but if I'm going to be honest, you have just seriously made it difficult for me to even consider writing any more for this story, I am so fed up of reviews like this, if its so shit, then that's it I'm just going to scrap it, I seriously can't be bothered anymore. I can't please anyone, I was so fucking happy to post this chapter, but now, just fuck it, don't bother reading anymore I can't be arsed.

Love at 1st Bite by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is instantly drawn to the new girl, Bella Swan. From their first meeting he is overtaken by a desire for her body as well as her blood. After a week in Denali he returns to Forks and visits the object of his obsession. What happens in her room that night will change both of their lives forever. First chapter was written for the "In the Dark" Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50865 Read Count: 17341
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2017
Reviewer: nails233 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Missteps

Nicely done, cliffie's are nice sometimes. listen to your brother, less talkie more typie works for laryngitis!

Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Out of Sight

sweet loved the ending!

 



Author's Response:

thank you for the review.  This was a lot of fun to write and I'm so happy with the response it got.

A Family Affair by nickeyd26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married.  He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi.  Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her.  Now, they want her to join in on the fun.

 

This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell.  It is a damned sexual buffet.  If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones.  This story is NOT for you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13850
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 Nov 2010
Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair

LOL, this was my brain bleach. i needed to wash away another story and found this. thank you, it was just what i needed to clear away the other one. nice job for you first vamp story, i should know i write vamp 99 % of the time.



Author's Response:

Ahhh thanks!  I am so glad this story hit the spot for you.  Thanks for the lovely compliment and the rating!

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

A fluffly one shot about vampire Edward worrying about what to do for human Bella for Valentines Day.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2186 Read Count: 290
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2011 Updated: 15 Feb 2011
Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Spectacular job keep up the good work!!! hope to see more from you!!!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143205
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Glad to see a new chapter. as always waiting to see what new twist you'll throw at us. great job.

Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

thank you! great chapter.

Summary:

One moment was all it took to tear them apart. Now, in a single heartbeat, they'll find their way back together one last time. My Halloween One-shot for Twilight Fanfic Advocacy Compliation. MA/NC-17

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1549 Read Count: 1283
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: nails233 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wonderful BBC! beautiful! Great job!