Reviews by Majo-23
Summary: Past Featured Story

poison

Bella Swan's intrigued by vampires. Edward Cullen's bored and alone. What happens when they meet? AU, vampire. Inspired by Katy Perry's ET.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72381 Read Count: 14583
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love the story!!! I hope you update soon, I can wait to see how Charlie will react and what will happen next..

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hope you update soon!! love the story... can't believe her mom is a vampire



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you wanted more, sorry it's taken so long but it's all written and more to come!

Summary: Past Featured Story

aboaf

 

Bella's life changed all because of a fire and some hot firemen!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18487 Read Count: 13054
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2013 Updated: 15 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope you update soon... Love the story!!

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Shit i want to know what happens next.. I hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG this chapter was so good... I super interested to see what happens next.. Hope you update soon!! Love the story

 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285474
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 ~ make hay while the sun shines

omg please update soon, i want to know if jasper really wants to take elizabeth or if the law firm was the one to send the agreesive lletter... love the story very much.. are jane and alex going to get together in the story since they are not bother and sister? 



Author's Response:

thanks for your note.  I plan to post the next chapter tonight - i hope it answers some of your questions at least -   here's a little teaser of chapter 30 : 

Leah was firing on all cylinders and it was a magnificent sight. I had doubted her when she said her nickname when she was younger was ‘Queen Bitch’, but now I could easily believe it as I watched her in full flight protecting her loved ones.  Way to go Leah. I almost felt sorry for Whitlock… almost.

He stared at my Bella as Leah poked him in the chest.  “They have no family except the loving friends you see around this room whose lives have all been enriched and blessed by knowing her.  So finding family should’ve been a moment of joy for her and for Elizabeth but what do you do when you finally show up?  Huh?”

 

He stepped back from the force of her chest pokes but Leah isn’t letting him get away that easy.

“You threaten to take her daughter from her, by the way something your idiot lawyer should know you can’t do.  She is Lil Bit’s sister and now officially her mother through a completely legal and finalised adoption.  

“We are not going to stand idly by while you and your idiot lawyer try to bully a nineteen year old into giving up her child.  We are their family and we will protect them.”

 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

love the story and love the chapter very much!! i knew jasper  couldn't be that bad, i hope jane destroys the law firm...  i want to see what edward says to esme about the pregnancy news :-D i hope you update soon 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

i love the chapter and the story, hope you update soon!! 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

love the story 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334478
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

omg i love the story very much!! i loved the proposal and the baby news.. not so much that paul and jacob got bail but i knew it will happen... with the meeting and showdown between charlie and bella, i hope that he realises all the damage he has done to her, but i hope she doesn't forgive him or at lease make him work for the forgiveness for some other day.... i can't wait for the next chapter, i hope you update sooner :-D



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Broken Immortal by Sephrenia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Edward leaves Bella she gets changed when she visits the meadow. when she wakes she hides in the Cullen mansion. Will she be reunited with her mate? 1st story ... constructive criticism welcome

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Featured Story September 2013


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55208 Read Count: 60603
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I hope you update soon!! love the story



Author's Response:

thank you for the kind word ... I am glad  you are enjoying the story ... update tomorrow

Seph

Entwined by Justabitoftime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

A bond, centuries old, has finally completed, and the Volturi Kings have found their mate at last. But when the Spirits unite old enemies, what new dangers could be lurking on the horizon? *B/A/M/C. Wolf-pack, vampires. Lemons. Poly, no slash.*


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Aro, Bella/Caius, Bella/Marcus
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99815 Read Count: 39091
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2014 Updated: 07 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Love the story, hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

I love the story!! hope you update soon.. 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

Love it!! update soon, can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20

Please update soon!! Love the story

Summary: Past Featured Story

The One and Only

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134467
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

I hope you update soon, can't wait to see what happens next

Summary: Past Featured Story

BTTF

A Mafia/BDSM story.  A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body.  Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man. 

top ten

Bound To The Family was awarded one of the Top Ten Favourite Completed Fics for the month of August

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601744
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2015 Updated: 08 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Omg, please update again soon.. I cannot wait to read what happens next 

Summary:

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Things go differently for Bella when Edward leaves, and after college, she leaves to travel through the mountains.  Imagine when she wakens to a whole new world that only had been hinted at in a book that is regarded as fantasy.

 Thanks to Carb0408, she is the one who made the banner on the front page for current chapters, as well as the slider banner for this story.

Many thanks to for her work betaing:Lorelei-beta-1


Categories: Lord of the Rings, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16965 Read Count: 3180
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Sky is Going to Break

I like the start of the story, hope you update soon, can't wait what happens next

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229369
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG!! Please update soon... Canno wait for the new story

Summary: Past Featured Story

Dragon Heart

 

Not all dragons were bad, not all were simply just dragons either and those who held the dragon’s heart was a blessing indeed.

 

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Categories: Lord of the Rings, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Fili
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Changing of Tales
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116164 Read Count: 19665
[Report This] Published: 28 Sep 2015 Updated: 24 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: ... Where I Cannot Follow

Please update soon!! I am so sad she died, please there must be a way to bring her back.. Don't pay attention to complaining people, they just don't have anything better to do than complaint about anything they don't like.. 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Interlude to Erebor

I love the story and I check everyday for a new update.. Cannot wait for the next chapter!! 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Love the story. Please update soon, i cannot wait to see what happens next.

Summary:

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A chance meeting in Las Vegas changes everything.  Suddenly a future that had been a brief glimpse of, is possible, and there is nothing the Blood Line will not do to make it happen.


anner credit goes to:


Gyllene Minion to 4Padfoot

Gyllene Minion to 4Padfoot



Beta for this story is the most wonderfully patient:


jessica-alex


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Eric Northman
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37815 Read Count: 20772
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2015 Updated: 10 Sep 2016
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 I Came in the Ring

I love the story, cannot wait for a new chapter!! Update soon 

Summary:

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Bella Swan is living a shadow of a life. On the run from a bloodthirsty nomad craving revenge, she begins to see vampires differently, through the eyes of their prey. After a chance encounter with Hawkeye, her world collides with the shadowy world of SHIELD. She’s faced with a difficult choice, keep the vampire secret or step out of the shadows with Clint to help SHIELD fight Loki.


Categories: Crossover, Avengers, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Clint
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 82447 Read Count: 5374
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2017 Updated: 15 Apr 2021
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Guardian

Oohh love the chapter, cannot wait to see what happens next, hope you update soon 

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hope you update soon

It Takes a Village by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 221]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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created by the wonderful heartfortwilight

 

 

Summary: Nowadays, families come in all shades and forms. When 32-year-old pediatrician Edward meets the woman of his dreams, he gets more than he bargained for. She’s captivating, but complicated, with her unconventional variation of family dynamic. Does she come with more baggage—or people—than he can handle? Will he be able to keep his distance? Maybe things aren’t quite as they seem. Sometimes, it takes a village...

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73244 Read Count: 29299
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2017 Updated: 30 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Come on you have to update sooner, that’s a very cliffhanger right there!! I love the story by the way



Author's Response:

Hi,

Thank you very much for leaving and leaving a review. I'm sorry for the cliffhanger, but you'll have to be patient until Tuesday to get the answers.

See you then.