Reviews by lauz23
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254878
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

absolutely adore this story!! ive been reading it everyday for the last few weeks. but now im so sad that im up to date as i cant read anymore so PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

edward and bella are so perfect and u have developed them so well. love the changing between POV's cos some stories with a dom edward are quite mean but u give us his perspective which turns out to be full of love, care and pride.

I NEED TO KNOW WHOS BEHIND ALL THIS MYSTERY! so many possibilities!

i hope there is a future show down between james and edward. they had a brief talk in forks but would love a scene with edward being all protective and getting some things off his chest. 

this story is beautifully written and its been a pleaure to read! keep going please.

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Diamond in the Rough

aww poor bella nothing is going her way at the moment...i hope edward isnt too hard on her.

thanks for updating and please update again soon. i adore this story and love ur writing! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532880
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

Hi there!

I just wanted to say that I absolutely adore your writing. I’ve loved reading quiet storm and now weather the storm. I’m actually so sad I’ve nearly finished this story, as then there is only one sequel left to read then that’s it.

The relationship between Bella and Edward is so beautifully written, it’s been a joy to read and see them develop and stay so committed to each other…also is it silly that I kind of have a crush on this Edward haha?

Quiet storm and weather the storm are the best stories I have ever read on this site! You have easily become my favourite author and I can’t wait to read more.

It really has been a pleasure to read these stories and I’ve loved everything you’ve done to the characters. Your writing is believable in the context of the story so please ignore all the negative Nancy’s out there :P

You are brilliant and I will miss this story so much when I’ve finished it. Thank you so much for continuing this amazing story and I look forward to what you come up with in the future!

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100868
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

LOVE THIS STORY!!!

please update soon! i need to know what happens next!

 

 

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Reality bites

another awesome chapter! thank you

cant wait to read more :) 



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Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Collisions

please update soon! i need to know what happens next!!

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Swinging cocktail

thanks for updating!!

it has to be edward! i cant wait for the showdown :)

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Thunderstorm

awesome as usual! thanks for the update :)

cant wait for the rest. whats edward gonna do?? she doesnt work for him anymore....ohhhh this is exciting!!

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Trapped

perfect!! can't wait for next chapter :)

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: On the wire

new update soon??

I love this story!




Author's Response:

Hi there, I finished translating chapter 20 over a month ago, but my beta was very busy and it took her 3 weeks to edit it and send it back to me, and when she did I had to send it to Drinou, the author, for her approval, and Drinou is currently on vacations so I don't know when she will read it and tell me it's good for posting.

I'm really sorry for the delay, but right now I can't even start the next chapter because I just moved to a new city and I'm still unpaking my stuff and repainting all the rooms in my new house...

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 142014
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 17: NYC

i adore this story and i adore your writing. 

i love everything about this story, the drama, bits of comedy, the halarious family moments, edward and bella's relationship that is so loving and passionate its beauitful to read. i also love marie! i think she is adorable and i am so glad that she is thriving now she has the help she needs. 

im so sad that ive caught up for now ill have to wait for updates. but thank you for continuing to write the story eventhough u have having some toruble with momentum. for me this story gets better and better so please dont get to upset with yourself.

update when u can :)

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Babies and Beef

great chapter! thanks for the update :) cant wait for more 

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Lies and Deceit

thank you for continuing this story! 

i love ur writing so much :)

cant wait for the next update!

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 24: The Straw

great chapter. can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Reunion and Distresses

another great chapter!! please update soon!!! i need to see bella and edward reunite!!

 

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Revenge, Redemption and Reunions

another great chapter!

thank you so much :) merry christmas 

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

they have to work it out!! come on christian stop being so silly and forgive ur loving wife gees!

please update soon!

i love this story so much. u are such an amazing writer!

 

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

you are killing me here! please update soon. i need to know they are going to make it through this.

christian come on man! go home and forgive ana. she knows shes done wrong. also shes never shut down on christian and just ignored him. its so cruel!

if he doesnt make it back for their anniversary i think i might cry. 

you are too good at this! love this story so much!

Summary:

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A ruthless criminal detached from all emotions brought to Las Vegas on a job. A young woman trying to move on after escaping an abusive relationship.

 

One drunken night brings them together. Can they survive in a world filled with lies and deception? Mobward/Mafia.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 136341 Read Count: 126173
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2014 Updated: 04 Feb 2016
Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holding my breath for the next chapter! 

Reviewer: lauz23 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great story! Can't wait for next chapter!!