An amazing, unique story. I've never read a fanfic like this one, and that's saying something: I've been reading fanfictions for years. It's nearly the same story every time, but the different pairing alongside the distinct plotline within your story kept me reading. I'm glad to have found a story that I can return to - it'll definitely be on my list of favorites. I'm additionally pleased at having to have found your story upon its completion - I usually go nuts waiting for stories to get finished. I actually read the entirety of the story within two days; I was just that addicted to it. 

Honestly and truly, this is a phenomenal piece and you should be proud of it. You have a special writing story and a gift for prose, as well as humor. I found myself loving these characters and unable to keep myself from reading about their lives. 

I have nothing critical to say about this entire piece - highly unusual for a person like me. I hope your talents are not wasted and that you perhaps look into a career into writing novels of your own. I know I would definitely buy them. 

Thanks for reading the long review, but I know authors (like me) enjoy them every once in a while, especially when they praise the work - always enjoyable istn't it? Haha, well I'll leave you to your work as I must return to mine.

I hope you continue to write as I hope to read more of your works in the future.

Best wishes and constant congragulations,

Darkangel913