Reviews by Banshee69
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU/AH OOC Bad girl Bella Swan takes on a challenging bet to turn Edward, resident golden boy, to the dark side. Can one bet turn into a life time of love? Lemons and adult situations. Better Summary inside. Collab w/Luvrofink and Chartwilightmom


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64046 Read Count: 38007
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Good Boy Edward: This Is Where the War Begins

Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks! chartwilightmom =0 J

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked this. I think you should continue it.  For this being your first attempt at BSDM. You did exceptionally well.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your support. Thinking hard about continuing. =0 J

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

Excellent epi.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Thank-you ever so much for reading, reviewing, and leaving such fun content for us in return!  <3

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Charge of the Cavalry

Emmett and Alice save the day.

Sherry



Author's Response:

*ringing bugle*  :D 

<3

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Outtake

Hilarious.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Tee hee. THANKS!

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Alice and Emmett teaming up together is gonna be interesting.

Sherry

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

I wanna kick Edward's ass.

Sherry



Author's Response:

You weren't alone. Boys are so often dumb. Gotta "love" them.  :D

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

With everything they've done, yeah, it might be a bit overdue, but it's needed.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Pretty much what we thought, too.

Better late than never, eh?  ;D

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

These two have a beautiful connection. 

Sherry



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

*lights cigarette*

Sherry



Author's Response:

*Cheshire Cat grin*  <3

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

Damn, that didn't go as planned.

Sherry



Author's Response:

LOL  Nope. Drat that Murphy.  ;D

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances

How ironic it was they both harbored feelings in school for each other.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Isn't it, though? Wonder how many people make it to their 40th year reunion before they take the chance to say anything.  That thought was there for us.

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

I'm anxious for them to finally meet.

Sherry



Author's Response:

<3

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Date: 27 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

I like Bella held some interest in high school Edward. She's about to discover what she could have had then. 

Sherry



Author's Response:

Exactly. Fear IS the "killer" of so much potential, right?  :D

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Date: 26 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

I've had this one on my TBR list for a while, and after reading the first chapter. I'm not disappointed. Looking forward to reading on.

Sherry



Author's Response:

So sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you. You totally made our days when you first read, and are again today as we resond! Thanks ever so much!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183993
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: The trap

Jacob is about stupid, thinking he could get away and trust a complete stranger for nourishment. And Bella... she's either very brave or very dimwitted to make the move she did. I bet Edward is gonna tear her ass up.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Second day in Volterra

Ahh... Bella's gonna learn the hard way.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

Sounds intriguing.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Pleasing Bella.

I'm glad her first wasn't Jacob. Though, Bella is very naive.



Author's Response:

Yes, she's very naïve at first.

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 7: The journey to Volterra

Bella's gonna have a rough time being trained to comply.

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Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Emmett Cullen, comte de Morvalle

Emmett is quite entertaining with his spying.

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Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges

Oh Rose is a she-devil leaving Emmett tied up. How embarrassing is that gonna be for him? lol

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Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

I quite like this Carlisle's outlook on the Volturi brothers and their rules.

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Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request

I'm sure Bella will be punished severly for that stunt. I almost feel sorry for Aro. Maybe he'll be out of commission for a few days, lol.



Author's Response:

Don't feel sorry for the bastard...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cross Aro

I no longer 'almost' feel sorry for Aro getting bit. Bella should have biten it completely off. Bet she wishes she had now. Aro's brutal. Good thing Edward intervened when he did.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell

I'm glad Edward and Bella are making headway now.

 

Damn Emmett and his interruption.

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Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock

Poor Jasper had a terrible childhood. Though, he seems to have turned into his father any way.

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Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi

It's about time the Volturi brothers get a dose of their own medicine. Rosalie is hardcore.

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Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Freedom

Oh hell, I shoulda known James and Laurent would pop-up somewhere to halt their plans.

 

Edward to the rescue again...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

I enjoyed this story very much. Loved how it ended.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed this story. A lot of people did :0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 134974
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Just completed reading this story, and I have to say I'm a hard person to make shed a tear, but this story had my heart wrenched. Even though it's a tragic story, it's written perfectly.

Wild as the West by lfcpam Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and James Swan move out west after their parents death. Moving to Wyoming, they both come to work on the ranch of Edward Cullen. See what happens when your life and love are as wild as the west.

Banner by:Ange de l'aube

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132021 Read Count: 48540
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 May 2012
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Looking forward to see where their adventure takes them.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I can't imgaine the strenght it would take mentally to decide to travel into the unknown.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yikes, Edward isn't gonna be as welcoming as his siblings.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He's gonna be fighting a losing battle. Isabella is already getting under his skin.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

lol, Edward isn't gonna like Bella getting attention from the ranch workers.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Edward, he's a ball of mess.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I don't think Mike is gonna take the hint to quickly. Alice, warning Bella about him speaks volumes for his character. Edward and Bella may be on a roller coaster for a while.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Edward. He can't be strong for everyone, he should've taken time to grieve. 

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Sweet chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Just when they are making progress, damn Newton ruins it. I don't think this will end well, especially when James finds out. 

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I had to smile at Mike Newton getting his ass handed to him. I was surprised James was so alert of Edward's interest in Bella, and vice versa.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

They are meshing together quite well.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella is gonna keep him on his toes.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well played Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good for Emmett.

Mike really creeps me out.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella keeps surprising Edward with her talents.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your kind reviews. Glad you are enjoying the story.

 

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The last part gave me chills. Things were going so well for eveyrone, then Mike shows up.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*shivers* Someone needs to rescue her from Mike's plans.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

What an adrenlin rush chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Glad James made it.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Apparently love is in the air. Everyone is pairing off.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Life seems to be good for them all now.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Love is in the air, lol.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Boy, what a misunderstanding.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

The perfect proposal and location.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It seems their lives are coming together. 

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ahh... the bliss.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

A double wedding. Wow, yet it makes sense. 

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Their fear of their wedding night kinda cracked me up.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

The first day of the rest of their lives together.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Very sweet.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What has come over Edward?

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Carlisle gave good advice, 'Never go to bed angry.'

Sherry

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

YAY!!! A baby!!

Sherry

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Life is good for them all.

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

What an evil cliffy. 

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

And to think I thought the last chapter had an evil cliffy. The hurt and anguish Bella must be feeling. 

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Glad you didn't drag it out more, the suspense of wanting him to remember everythingwas killing me, lol.

Sherry  

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Looks like they are on to their HEA after all. 

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great chapter.

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it. 

Sherry 

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389497
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

Oh no! You can't stop there. LOL.

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Lacking

Only one chapter in and a lot has transpired. King Edward seemed especially cruel for something Queen Tanya had no control over, but alas I understand his need for a wife that can bore him an heir to the throne.

I don't think I've ever read a historical story where Bella was Tanya's lady in waiting.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Flaunting

Though I'm not surprised by King Edward's forwardness and attraction to Lady Bella. I am surprised that Queen Tanya has excepted and encouraged Lady Bella in the situation.

I have a feeling the Stanley's will be a pain the royal derriere.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Departing

I don't like Sir James. He seems to enjoy seeing others grief stricken and/or in pain. Advising Edward to pass judgement on someone close to Lady Bella will cause her to hate him. Hopefully King Edward will soften as the story proceeds.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Resolving

Lady Bella didn't seem to opposed to King Edward's attention. I enjoyed Sir Jasper calling Lady Lauren his whore's daugher. I'm hoping he refrains from his affairs after he and Bella marry.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Coercing

It's official. I don't care for Lady Bella's parents. Renee and Charles are pitiful human beings. Her brothers seem to be the only ones that truly care for her.

Maybe the abuse and cruelty she has endured from her parents should be let known to King Edward.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding

Edward could have been a little more caring of Bella's needs since it was her first time. Can't see her wanting a repeat of that.

Renee is the worst mother. Maybe Edward will overhear how she speaks to his new Queen, and deal with her accordingly.

Don't see Lady Stanley like be rebuffed by Edward.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Apologising

Charles is not worthy of Bella calling him father. Threatening a child to get her to do his bidding, pathetic. I only wished Jasper and James had overheard his threats and reported back to Edward.

Edward needs to get a grip on his behavior.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Crying

Glad Jasper did notice the disagreement between Bella and Charlie. Hopefully Edward will address it soon.

Glad to see Edward being caring and tender with Bella.

Bella's a lot smarter than Edward is giving her credit.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Failing

After Edward found out why Bella had written Tanya, why didn't he take action against the Stanley's for opening 'royal' mail? He also needs to address Renee since he saw her strike the queen.

Edward didn't seem to happy about having a girl. Poor Bella. Hope she gets to raise her daughter as she wants.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Dying

Such a heart-wrenching chapter.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Punishing

Good riddance to all of those that caused Bella harm.

I knew James wasn't to be trusted.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Learning

King Edward is becoming a man his queen can be proud of.

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Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Declaring

I like that plot twist. Leave it to Bella to get to the bottom of things.

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Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Visiting

I'm amazed at how much Bella has influenced such a change in Edward. He's came a long way. Looking forward to finish reading and finding out who is behind the destruction. I have a suspicion as to who it may be.

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Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Birthing

This chapter was full of amazing happenings.

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Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Living

As much as I enjoyed Esme and Carlisle finding their feeling returned by the other and explored their physical side of it. I don't think the timing was right, with Bella being in such an ill state.

Glad Bella has recovered and she and Edward, with their children are moving forward to their happy ever after.

I'm wondering why the culprits wasn't dealt with as soon as they returned to court. I thought Victoria would be behind the transgression of the King and Queen, since James made an attemted to kill Bella while she was with child.

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Date: 29 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Ruling

My goodness. This last chapter left me a bit choked up.

You've written a fantastic story. Thank you.

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 69586
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
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Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now that progressed quickly.

Sherry

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Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Looks like they are off to a good start, lol.

Sherry

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Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Out of the mouths of babes.

Sherry

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Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Edward; he's a sucker for one and an idiot for the other. 

Sherry

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Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like Emmett's lightheartedness about the situation.

Sherry

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Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward has a lot of catching up to do.

Sherry

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Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Seriously, Edward is a doctor, but he isn't acting like one.

Sherry

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Date: 14 May 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Renee has struck.

Sherry

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Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The joys of dealing with family.

Sherry

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Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love Esme's persistance.

Sherry