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Wishes Christian Grey really existed as does virtually 50% of the population in the free world.
My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant
My story has language throughout and some sexual content.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49123
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.
Awww, I think I'm going to like your writing. I found your penname from someone else's favorites.
Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Book III
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*
Thank You.
This story continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and accepting his past have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger? This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
Date: 31 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
Sooooo, so happy to see another chapter posted. I love the comic relief. That Grace is a little terror and Teddy is a little worry wort, bless his heart. Ana is right. Grace would have settled for a dollar or even an ice cream cone for that matter!!! Moms are always the voice of reason against daddies hasty decisions LOL!! Dun dun-dun dun....curious about how the story develops about Lorna and Tommy. I love how Grace and Ana have such a special relationship. It is beautiful. Great job, well done as always. Love, Carol
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
Yeah, yeah, yeah, Christian. You miss Ana's long hair so much!! LOL!! I am glad that Ms. Collins wasn't a biotch, she seemed to have Tommy's best interest at heart. I am so glad that Christian is meeting up with Virginia and is acknowledging her as "grandmother". I love, love, love this story. I jump for joy when I see a new chapter post. Thank you so much for continuing the story. Please my darling keep it going. You are so smart and talented, and you obviously do your research. You also obviously write with your heart if that makes any sense. So wonderful!!! Beautiful A/N too, by the way. I am a very loyal fan and reading newly installed chapters makes my day. I look so forward to it. Love, Carol xxoo
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
Mmm hmmm, she's Mrs. Grey and don't forget it!!! I hope Lorna is compliant with Mancuso and Ana and doesn't give them a hard time. That little blondie better keep her eyes and hands to herself where Mr. Grey is concerned. LOL!!! I love this story! Tommy is such a little sweetie. Christian seems to be a role model for him. He wants to read the paper like a man. Looking forward to the next chapter, dear. Carol xo
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
I am enjoying this story so much. I actually plan my day according to when I want to read the newest chapter. I have to read all alone without distraction from my family, LOL!! It is great to hear that email notification on my phone for when a new chapter is posted. The Grey family dynamic is awesome. Tommy is fitting in so well and the children are so accepting of him just like they were for Jack. Poor Christian! I'm just going to have to hop a plane to Seattle, wrap my arms around him and comfort him!! LOL! Problem solved. If it was only that easy. Christian definitely needs a session with John, to help him sort this out. Meeting with his grandmother should be beneficial. BTW, Teddy probably woke up with his first woody.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
You're the mamaist person I know. You take care of everybody. Here I thought I was marrying an insatiable sex kitten who could cook. Who knew you had this side to you."E, you always write the most cleverist lines, that was sooo sweet of Christian to say. But your'e killin' me here....
"If you live to be 100, I hope I live to be 100 minus 1 day, so I never have to live without you." I am in tears with what Ana said. That just about sums up their love for eachother because Christian feels the same. I think Tommy and Grace are too precious and sweet, but you can tell that Ana has a special relationship with Teddy. Being her "first little baby", he is mature for his age and very insightful. I believe that Gamma Ginia stares at Teddy because he looks so much like his daddy. Brava, as usual! Looking forward to 97. kiss kiss, hug hug
Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
Oh my. I think Christian may need an antibiotic at this point! Listen, E, you take care of yourself and let your wrist heal. I've had wrist injuries before as well and the only thing that heals it is rest. I hope that the keyboard you ordered is one that reduces hand stress. I had one of those and it was very helpful. I am enjoying your story immensely. You are such a good writer and your story flows so easily and beautifully. I don't know how you are able to sprinkle in such details. I could never do that! I am so happy that Christian and Ana and the children are doing so well. Wait till Tommy finds out he has yet another grandma. The story is in a good place now and adore being a fly on the wall in their home. Take it easy and be well. :)
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
So happy to read a new chapter. I'm a llittle worried that you are wrapping up the story with the presentation of evidence of Ana's equal partnership. NOOOO! I hope there are several more new chapters. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
Awesome! I love this little family. Naked Christian muscular and sexy in the pool. That is some image to behold. That helicopter invading their privacy is something else for them to worry about. But drama is all part of being a power couple. Thanks for the update. Love the story. xo
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
Now that was a delicious lemon!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Thanks you for posting another chapter. I wonder what Christian and Tommy spoke about in the bedroom? Whatever it was, Tommy seems calmer. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love, love.
Date: 02 May 2013 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Oh no, poor Fifty is reliving his childhood. The scene he is witnessing is exactly what he used to do when he first lived with the Greys. Only, Christian wouldn't verbalize it. He was agonizing it all in his sweet little head. What a tearful chapter, but I am loving every minute of it. When they get back to the house, Christian is either going to need a stiff drink, a stiff you know what, or a session with Flynn or Bastille. Thank you for keeping the story going. You are an amazing writer. Love ya!
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99
Oh no! Poor Teddy. I am glad that Virginia is expressing her feelings to Ana like that. I am also glad the she takes some responsibility too.
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
Sooo touching. Christian is struggling with this arrangement since it really hits home with him. Tommy seems to be such a little angel. Thank goodness the children are receptive to his presence. I look forward to your next chapter. xo
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Too funny!! I thought they were going to fight, but then they ended up bantering. I was worried about you ending it that way. I'm having anxiety about you wrapping the story up. Please don't!! 0:) xxoo
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Oh my Lord!!!! Too funny!!! I could relate. LOL!! Nice lemon though. This Terry prick could use an ass kicking. That sweet little Tommy who never hurt a fly doesn't deserve that poor treatment. I'd like to teach Lorna a lesson too. I was so glad to hear the email alert of another chapter. Thank you, dear. Please, please keep the story going. I think I speak on behalf of your loyal followers that we love, love, love your writing. Happy St. Patrick's Day. Love, Carol xo
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
Verrrry interesting... I was so happy to see another chapter posted. Thank You for that. I feel so sorry for Tommy and for Lorna. She was probably rushing back to her pimp. Unfortunately, people like this do exist in the real world. Too bad there weren't more Ana and Christians to help those less fortunate. Love the storyline!!<3<3
Date: 14 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
One delicious lemon coming right up!
Date: 26 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115
Thank God Mia is okay. I like that Gail and Jason are more like family. They are a tremendous help to Ana and Christian. Nice ending, by the way! Thank you for the update. xoxo
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
Yes, if Christian is that jealous, it just shows the intense love he has for Ana. I really like how you incorporate such detail in your storytelling. Good thing Christian remembered his manners and apologized to his sister-in-law. I doubt any of her family and friends forgot her birthday. I think it's the big 30! I am enjoying this sooo very much. Love, Carol
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
Sweet lemon!!!!! It was so touching when Ana told Christian that she wants to take care of him the way he looks out for her. Working hard and conducting business actually energizes Christian!! I am glad that his tummy is okay. I'd be happy to rub it for him! LOL!! If only!!! ;) Love,love
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
Ohhhhh too funny!!! That child is going to be able to teach a biology class after having parents like that!!! Love the humor, love the lemons. Thank you for this story. xo
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
What a sweet story, I have to tell you that I am very attached to this story, like I almost need to read it to satisfy my craving. You are absolutely amazing and I love how you develop the story and the characters in it. I feel involved in their lives and all the goings on. I don't know how you do it. Loved the lemony goodness in the beginning. Rosa is clueless...Gail would never have knocked on the door to announce dinner!! I love Rosa though, she is so loving and motherly!! I am so happy for Christian that he is connecting with Ella's family and learning his roots. I enjoy how Christian wants Ana to share in everything too because he loves her so much. It is wonderful and will be very moving when Virginia meets the little rugrats. Brava!! Love, Carol
Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
Hey, it seems Christian isn't the only one who is not feeling well. I hope your wrist is healing okay. It takes a while, I know. Thank you for posting another chapter, I cherish each one. Since reading FF, today was the first time I invited my eldest son to read a chapter since it involved drumming. Of course he turned me down, LOL! But I thought he would find it interesting since he is has been a drummer since the age of 7 too. Boy, Jason rocks, who knew? It was awesome how Ana kissed all three of her children. It won't be long till Tommy becomes a Grey. So lovely!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMG. First of all,thank you so much for providing these stories for your loyal readers! I was referred to this blog from a reader of another FSoG blog. Don't worry about typos or using a wrong name or word. We will figure it out. Your writing is perfect. I truly feel like I am right there in the house with the Ana, Christian and the kids. Please, please keep writing. You are a natural. BTW, I visited Neiman Marcus' site and saw the outfit Ana bought. NIIIIIIICE! Love, love, love ya!! Carol
Author's Response:
Wasn't that just the cutest dress? I wish there was a way to insert pictures because there is just no way to really describe it. Thanks for following and your support. I really appreciate it.
E
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
Like I commented previously, unfortunately this kind of stuff happens every day in real life. Ana and Christian have hearts of gold. Even if they did not have the means to help Lorna and Tommy, they would still do everything they could to make sure that little Tommy wouldn't fall through the cracks. Carol
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I was sooo pleased to see another chapter posted. Thank you sooo much for continuing the story!! xxoo I am glad that you wrote Christian having a teenager type experience. It was important for him since he was deprived of that thanks to some biotch troll that we all know and loathe. Ana is stronger than we think, and can really hold her own professionally with Maggi. They were bffs by the end of the afternoon. You write C and A as such good loving parents too, trying to run businesses and a raise a family at the same time....no easy feat!! Love, Carol
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
Happy Valentine's Day to you and to all of your loyal followers!! Thank you so much for posting a chapter today and especially for continuing the story!! I am thoroughly enjoying your ideas and your imagination for story plots. Hearts and Flowers for you!! <3<3 **
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
Oh yeah, Christian is going to love the competition for his princess!! lol!! As usual, another chapter packed with interesting content. I love it. Please,please keep writing. Yours is my favorite blog by far. I love your C and A.
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
OMG, the plot thickens!!! Soooo good!!! I thought it was Maggie on the phone saying that Harold suffered a heart attack and died!! I wonder how Tommy is.??? BTW, awesome love scene. Woo Hoo! Love you!!
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
Whoaaa! Looks like Lorna finally came to her senses, or her money is running out. I hope she and Tommy can get on track. Funny chapter though. I could just see gorgeous Christian and his princess partner in crime getting batter all over the place with chunks of Cheerios in it. I could picture sweet darling Teddy standing back, observing as the only sensible one in the group. My husband would also be capable of that type of cooking, come to think of it!! Love your work, E., keep it coming. xo
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
Hahahahaha!! You gotta love it. Drunk Christian is a funny shade of grey!! Publically proper Christian describing the head bobbing up and down. OMG! Great job adding that comic relief from the Lorna and Tommy content. Keep it going, please. Love, Carol
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
OMG what an intense chapter. I cried while reading about Tommy's reaction to the children and how comfortable he is with Ana. Very well done. Please, please keep this story going. I love it.
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
Definitely a sad chapter. My eyes were welled with tears I could barely read!! So, so sad. I feel sad for Christian and Ana having had their unborn son murdered, and so sad for Tommy. Poor little thing is so confused and behind in intellectual development and probably physically too. I know this is just a story, but unfortunately these Lorna and Tommy's situation happens more times than we know in real life. Christian does not seem to be struggling as much with Tommy's presence. I love hearing the email alert on my phone that another chapter's been posted. Thank You!! <3
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
Good girl, Ana!! She should definitely tell Christian what Mancuso told her. Mancuso was downright insubordinate. I like Andrea's character very much. She is so loyal, but knows her place. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
Good God!! I gotta try me some a dat!!
Date: 08 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
OMG, I hope they are alright!! I very much like that Gail and Ana have such a good relationship and that Gail loves the children too. Ana probably feels so comforted by this, since she doesn't see her mother much. I noticed the common interests that Tommy and Christian share, cars, art and a Teddy bear just like Christian clung to as a toddler. I am enjoying your story so much you have no idea. Or, maybe you do, I comment every time!! Thank you for this escape. Love, Carol xo <3
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
Aaaaaahh!! What the heck happened?? Sabatoge? Boat malfunction? So nice to see the family pull together in this time of need. I include Gail in that. Tommy is so sweet to pat "Cwisten's" knee. Grace is adorable, a real little girlygirl. Love the story, so interesting. Looking forward to more. Love, Carol xo
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
Nice.... I was worried just now about them arguing, but making up is so nice!! Teddy is so cute but wants to be treated like a young man instead of a baby. It is hard for mom's to accept their children growing up. I feel like that with my sons too. Tommy is slowly but surely fitting in so well. Thank you for the update, and I look forward to the next one. Love, Carol xxoo
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Now matter how much their lives change, Ana and Christian's love and adoration for each other always remain the same. I love every bit of it. Tommy has recovered, thank goodness, and has a heart of gold. Teddy is a combination of his mom and dad, but Grace is all Christian. Beautiful chapter. Happy Mother's Day! Love, Carol xxoo
[Delete]Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
Ooooo!! The plot thickens and it sounds like bad news. Will these two people ever be rid of that Elena demon spawn?? Thank God you wrote that they are okay with it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Are you kidding?? Of course we will stick with you. Thank you for continuing to write for us!!! What a sweet chapter. I just love that family more and more. Tommy is slowly but surely making his way into their hearts if he hasn't already. Lorna is a loony.
Date: 26 May 2013 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Beautiful, just beautiful. I love this man. I am so happy Christian is on board with adopting Tommy. That Lorna is some piece of work and so way out there. It seemed like Ana was putting some closure on Sam's death, as best she could, but that necklace just pulled that all of that sorrow and tears right out of her......and me!! Thank you for the update. Love, Carol
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
What a beautiful chapter, so beautiful. You are an awesome writer. I love every bit of it. Please, please continue. Love, love.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
Have I told you lately that I love these two crazy kids???? If only...... Should be interesting with GG Virginia coming on the scene. I hope all fares well. Finish this story when you feel you should. Write twenty more chapters, I don't care, just please keep writing for us. It makes my day to see that another chapter has been installed. Love and hugs to you. PS, Ana is going to knock them on their asses when they see her in that black Lanvin cocktail dress.
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
I have to get my husband to read these with me so he can pick up some pointers. Spicy lemon, by the way. I love that Ana wanted to keep the beautiful "Christian's" choker on. I like that Rosa acknowledges Christian's love and need for his wife. He just loves to love her. So sweet for him to play Rainbow Connection to Tommy over the phone, it brought tears to my eyes. Ana should go down to the South Street Sea Port or to the Museum of Natural History. Thank you for the update. xxoo
Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
Very clever, Christian's birthday as the elevator code! I was surprised that Christian's PA is a brunette and how ironic that her name is Elaine (shivers). However, I am glad that Ana feels secure in her marriage especially when those girls were discussing the Boss's sex appeal. Some things will never change. She is still a curious little thing and headstrong wanting to do what she wants like wandering the building aimlessly. Classic Ana!! I think she did it as a regular person so she could check out the female employees. I noticed that none of the men popped up to offer assistance which probably would normally be the case with a woman as stunning as Ana. It is so hot that the men scamper and jump to attention when Mr. Grey is in the room. Thank you for the update. I just love this story. xxoo
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
Love the dialogue in the car! Rosa was so nice to Ana validating her feelings and offering kind words. Ana needs these mother figures around her like Grace, Gail and Rosa. Being married to Christian the Greek god cannot be easy. I'm pretty pissed off at that brunette myself. Biotch!! I hope she is not at this party LOL!! Ana in heavy make-up, red mani-pedi and almost spray tanned!! Frankie and Joanie are trying to get Ana to join the NYC jet setters. Great story, so interesting. Thanks again.
Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
Ahh, lovely lemon, as usual. I knew that biotch was going to be at that party. Shame on her. I am surprised Christian is tolerating such insubordination like she displayed in the elevator. How dumb was that Pimberton biotch for speaking so vulgarly to her co-workers with a visitor in the elevator. I know girls and guys talk, but that is a Human Resource issue. I hope Christian still demands decorum and professionalism for every one associate with GEH. She is a manager too!!! Hopefully Christian addresses this. Ana has been put through the mill during her marriage to him. I know that he loves her insanely, and she him, but it can't help but bother her at some point as I read in the previous chapter. I love those little kiddies there in Seattle. So cute and I love Nana and Papa Gail and Jason. I enjoyed watching the links you provided. Those kids are so talented. The boy reminds me of my son when he was that age playing the drums. xxoo
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
Whew!! Hot chapter and Ana is making a little lemonade of her own. Good for her. I am curious about how things will go with Grandma Virginia. Thank you for posting another the chapter. Love , love.
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
How cute, Gamma Ginia. So far, so good. I am sure Grace is going to ask her again about her little "gurl" that moved away. That is going to be an emotional explanation. Thank you for the update.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
What a nice birthday gift to me, a posted chapter!! I couldn't wait for one. Thank you. Poor snoddy nose Kwisten!! I will make him some nice chicken soup and feed it to him (if only LOL!) Those children are so sweet, they love their daddy so much that includes Tommy. I could just see Gracie with her bed hair and struggling to pull a brush through it. Teddy is so intelligent, just like his parents. Tommy is so cute and doing so well. Gramma Ginia is so happy and proud of her new found family. I hope that things go well when they discuss Ella and Christian's life before the Greys. I am curious as to how Grace and Carrick are going to receive Virginia. Well done as always, your writing is so natural. I look forward to chapter 95. x
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
You're killin me here!!! I can't even type this correctly with the tears in my eyes!! What a precious, beautiful ending. You. Are. An. Amazing. Writer. Thank you so much for this chapter and for writing this endearing story. I need one of Christian's tissues!!! xxoo
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Welcome back. I am so glad that you have posted. I missed my favorite story. Poor Ana, so much to ponder. I thought maybe the small aircraft would run into a problem. I think Ana and Christian should just give in and adopt that little girl. If so, they should name her 'Hope'. Thank you for the update. I can't wait till the next chapter. xoxo
Two people in need of change happen to meet. But what happens when they realize that their instant connection stems from their childhood? This is a story about love, fate and destiny.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 81131 Read Count: 10417
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I just found your story. I think I'm going to like it!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This story is so sweet! I like the way you have written Ana and Christian. So different from all the others. I really look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you are enjoying my version of the A&C romance.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I am reallhy enjoying this precious story. Please continue it. Thank you for the update!
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I am so happy your have updated! I really am enjoying this sweet story. Christian and Ana are destined to be together. They can help each other heal. Seems there is a lot of pain going around. Love ya.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Seems these two have worked their way into each other's heart. I am looking forward to see how their relationship progresses. Thank you for the update. xo
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! You are very welcome!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I love these two crazy kids and I am enjoying this story very much.