Reviews by Wendyg63
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254911
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I like Edward's punishments.  Very fitting. 

 

Liking your story.  Beta is doing a great job. 

Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You give us such long, full chapters. Thank you.  Can't wait for more. 

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Date: 12 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Getting hot now....awesome

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Date: 12 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the different pov's.  Your first chapter was very good. I can't wait to read more. 

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Date: 21 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved Jane and her wisdom and friendship. 

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Date: 16 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I love the tattoo shop name.  Good choice to use it.  May even bring them business. Lol.

 

bravo to you and your beta foe such fine work. 



Author's Response:

I debated about using a Real Live Shop, and then I spoke with a friend who is a business owner and he said the same thing you did ... Maybe it will bring them some more business and Hey who would turn down FREE advertising ...anyway, thanks for reading and I am hoping to get the last few chapters done to put this story to rest, soon ...

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow...tough crowd.  And these are Edward's friends?

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Date: 15 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Lots of fun with the Cullen's.  I enjoyed their day together. 

 

As for Bella's emotions.... A bit of an anomaly.  It's hard to figure out.  She seems so strong and confident and then weepy and scared.  

 

Van outside of Bella's -- is it James or just a red herring?  

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Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love it.  Bravo

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Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love the intensity that you bring to Edward's character.  Love the lemons.  

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Date: 13 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow...he really left her in a bad way.  Smug bastard. ;)

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672918
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

Hot, hot, hot

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Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Great writing

 

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Date: 18 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Bella

I love your writing style.  I read your outtake from the SU for K, it lured me in. 

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Part Two

They just belong together. The electricity that you create is amazing.

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

I loved, loved this chapter

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Decision/Draw

I love how you spoil us readers with long chapters. I enjoyed this one and getting to know more about Esmeralda and Carlisle.

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: TKO

Wow...a chapter with a lot of punch  Amazing

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Lousy Day at the Slots

Wow...great writing. Love/hate cliffes  

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bad Taffy

Great chapter

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: The Trouble in Little Odessa

I love the attention to detail and the richness of your writing.  The a/n's are also. Helpful 

The word "bopped" didn't fit well for me.  I would have preferred "clubbed" or something tougher for those few lines. Otherwise....fantastic!

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Wrapped Around my Finger

Always great reading.  Great story. 

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Bella Cullen and the Mafia Prince

It is never great when they fight or argue (not the writing, just the characters).  The make up sex is worth it!

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Boxed In

Exciting chapter-lots going on. 

 

I love the authenticity of your story, so using slang is necessary   Love it. 

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Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Olde E

Your writing is great. Your beta is top notch. 

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Something in the Water

Awesome!  I love reading your story. 

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Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Prove It

Thank you for sharing your talent. I am enjoying your writing very much. 

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Par for the Course

Fantastic chapter. I love Bella when she's hardcore 

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Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Checks and Balances

Awesome!  Every chapter gets better and better!

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Helluva Day

Why do readers have to attack stories?  Why don't they just stop reading?  The warnings are there. The rating is clear. And if is about young people reading them, they are curious, and will find stories in other places.  Many stories portray couples in loving, committed relationships-and enjoying sex.

if it is the violence than I wish they'd take their energy to the video gaming world.  There is lots that they can rage about there.

 

i love your writing, the passion and the lemons.  Please don't let the naysayers get to you.  I've seen too many amazing writers leave ff because of a few.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Parts of life

Glad to see Jacob go. He was always around, being a goof.  Lol

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Under Pressure

Yeah for Santino!

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Icing on the Cake

Awe...what a sweet family. 

 

I'm so glad for the extra parts.

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Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing your collective talents.  Loved it all!

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Coming Home An Edward Outtake

Good chapter.  Glad to know what happened then. 

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Everything Edward and Bella Outtake

I love your out takes. Every one of them is interesting and they add real value to the whole story 

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter One in Edward's POV

Edward seemed so set in his ways. It's a surprise that they ever got past the first meeting.

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Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake

Beautiful   Thank u!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1533186
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive

Child sex abuse is an important topic to raise.  Hopefully other victims will realize that they are not alone and hopefully let the authorities know...even anonymously--so that others may be saved from the same fate.  Mothers--believe your children and support them!

 

glad you shared Alice's story. 

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Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced

Fun and funny chapter.  Loved it!

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Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One

Glad for the kid time

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324434
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

Glad to see these too get their HEA. 

 

Hollywood of high school boys are very aggressive and some belong in jail-not principal mommy's office

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Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

Great story. Writing is stellar. Bets, if there is one, is going her job - well 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Our Binding Reunion

Wow. Bring on the kink

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

Too many chefs in the kitchen.  And jasper and Emmett were over the top handsy.  I'm afraid that if I was Bella, I'd run for the hills. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Our Family

What an ass.  Carlisle should have been thrown out of the house.  Edward should have done more to protect his new family. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

Foot in mouth --a family trait. Funny. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Our Predicament

Yeah.  Go for it

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Our First Night

I'm glad they found their way...together.  Edwards exuberance matches your v lemon.  Both are top notch. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Our First Date

oh my God. How awesome and crazy

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Our Mess

Awe....sad to see it end so quickly. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Interesting start

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our First Outing

Exciting.  Yeah Bella. 

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Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

It's sad to read how bad things have gotten.  She's a brave girl, but I think I'd be going home. 

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Date: 02 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

Great holiday chapter.  Loved it. 

 

Maggie--she's got to go.  Edward needs to grow a pair and deal with her. 

Reviewer: Wendyg63 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Our New Beginning

Glad to read the dynamic duo are back on track

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Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

I'm surprised that Edward let Bella get injured. A flaw in their plan. Interesting cat fight. 

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Date: 05 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - His Parents

Yeah Carlisle!   He stood up for Bella. Sounds like mom misses her son. 

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806559
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Damion Part Two

Loved this chapter!  Damion is complex and very intriguing. 

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Date: 28 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Actions Speak Louder

Wow...what a chapter!  Awesome

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
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Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 3 (part 2)

Very cute family

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Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 2 (part 6)

Million dollar smile and stare.  Yummy

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Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 (part 2)

Loving this story

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

You have me hooked!!!

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 12 Part 3

You have me hooked!!!

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 12 Part 4

Thank you for keeping Edward out of Tanya’s room. 

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 13 part 2

First and foremost - my condolences for your loss.  A very sad time I’m sure. 

 

Second - Wow - I was not expecting Edwards words. Swoon 

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 13 Part 4

Great pictures.  Lol at your note. 

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 13 Part 5

Love Edwards speech. Perfect. 

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Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

Hilarious!!!  Love it

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Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 14 part 4

Love that you’ve given Bella a great friendship and Edward and Charlie (all of them) a good life.  But as great storylines go....I’m expecting drama. 

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Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 15 part 5

Still loving your story.  Glad you’ve continued to write.  And thank you. 

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Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 16 Part 8

Loving the drama

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Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 17 Part 7

Love that Edward randomly signed the girls magazine.  Love that he took the train to the hospital.  Good stuff NE

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Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 18 Part 9

Smokin

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Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 123: Chapter 18 Part 10

Very Happy for them both!

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Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 19 Part 15

Chapter 19 - in reader view - repeats for several pages.  FYI only. 

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Date: 28 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16

Hot

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Date: 21 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting beginning 

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Date: 21 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 (part 1)

Love the story!

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Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 3 (Part 7)

Emmett always has great lines.  You’ve done him proud

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Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 3 (part 6)

I’m finding humour in this situation.  Good stuff

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Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 4 (Part 5)

I’m loving it

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Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 5 (part 6)

Jasper is another great addition. Love your characters 

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Date: 25 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Got to love Alice.  What spunk!

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Date: 25 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Calm before the storm.  Great dream NE