Reviews by missie12
The Hunger by camp30 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 72]
Summary:

Eric Northman and His Twin Jason kidnap Sookie. Vampire Fic, which most of you who are familair with my work know that is rare for me.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74040 Read Count: 15075
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2012 Updated: 07 Dec 2012
Reviewer: missie12 Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: His Face Like An Eclipse

I would like more detail in the love/rape scenes they just seem choppy and rushed sometimes.  Also if they broke all those bones she should be feeling more pain.  That being said I am a big fan and love your writing, please don't take offence.

Reviewer: missie12 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: The Graffitied Stone

I like that she wants to die to escape them it's more realistic than falling in love with them.