Reviews by romance4me2
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30188 Read Count: 106938
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 12 Jun 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, what a fantasy!

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OMG. Poor Edward.

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This is too funny. I have had weeks when everything goes wrong, but this is too much!

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bless his heart.

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Maybe iof they hold hand they can share the good luck. Edward needs some.

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Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love the daily chapters!

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Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

For a guy who has had a charmed life, Edward is taking his bad luck very well. Love it!

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Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, a smart Emmett. I like it.

Summary:

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Bella is a twenty two year old mother of three and a widow. Her husband Emmett gunned down in a shootout with the DEA during an undercover raid. She vows to take her children away from the life, to let them grow up normal but then she meets the new Underboss Edward Cullen who falls for her and her children but refuses to play second to Emmet's ghost. Can she let go of her past?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30219 Read Count: 11772
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2013 Updated: 02 Jan 2018
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Aftermath

Interesting. Looking fowrard to more.

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 -Girl Talk

I love a bad ass Bella.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What happens when dysfunction meets dysfunction? Neither Edward nor Bella are prepared when fate brings them together. Will they be able to overcome the odds and find happiness? Or will the ghosts of their past keep them apart? Canon coupling, but non-canon families. Dark themes, high emotion, and standing tissue alert. AH

 

silent wishes


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed, to read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142814 Read Count: 100082
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2013 Updated: 04 May 2015
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Great chapter!

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Date: 20 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Another trauma for these sad people. Poor Edward.

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Date: 09 May 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Yep, they need to get married now. These folks need something to be happy about.

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Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh the lack of communication!

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Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Please let this family catch a break!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm in. It is interesting so far.

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Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is so sad, but I love it!

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Date: 04 May 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

One chapter left?? Say what??



Author's Response:

Yerp, BUT there is going to be a sequel.

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Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Aww, it's so sad!

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Date: 15 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is such a sad one so far. HEA for everyone, I hope.

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Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh, my. These people need a break.

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Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh, these poor anguished people. I still in pulling for  things to turn around for these characters.

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Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The emotions are definitely coming through. It is hard to comprehend a doctor who is a cutter, but since he is,for me it makes sense that he wouldn't seek help.

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Date: 21 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Another good chapter.

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Date: 22 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Holy cow. How do you live with that? I figured the transplant part, but not the donor part until I was into this chapter.

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Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, didn't see that coming. Poor Bella. Well, OK. Now we know the back story, I hope all these people can get together and heal each other!

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Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Jasper the Jerk and Miss Sensitivity Alice have a lot to overcome. Love the kiss!

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Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

This is so sad. Poor Bella.

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Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Evil and cruel do not even begin to cover it! Seriously?? These people all need a break. 

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter!!

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Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aww, that was so sweet.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am so glad to see that all these hurt people can help each other.

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Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Sweet chapter!

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Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Heart wrenching chapter.

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Date: 28 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Didn't see that coming!

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Date: 04 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aww, so sad. Sweet ending. You do write HEA's, right? These people need some happy!



Author's Response:

I do write HEA...most of the time at least. 

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

This story is so sad, but I love it!

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Date: 22 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Bless her heart.

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Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

My eyes are full of tears but I am fighting to keep them from falling because I am out of tissues here and have to go into another room to get them!

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Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Sweet chapter!

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Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I hope Esme gets a HUGE settlement from the school district! It might make their lives a little, tiny bit easier. 

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Date: 19 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Bless their hearts.

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Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I knew she needed to visit Charlie after the dream. Good chapter!

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Bitter sweet chapter. Bella's gain but Edward's loss. 

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Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

This one had my eyes watering.

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Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Yes, and I got a wee bit emotional reading it. Lovely chapter.

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Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Awww.

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Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Thank you for the new chapter to one of my favorite stories. Bella is such a fighter. This chapter was especially dear to me today as thirty three years ago on this day, I lost my dad. Hoping Bella doesn't lose hers.

Prayers going up for your health.

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Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Praying for your continued recovery and good health in the New Year! This was a great chapter!

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Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Lord have mercy on this family. Every time I think it might be getting better, there is another set back.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

At this point, I don't even care if it is the same old Charlie. As long as he is awake and Bella has a chance to talk to him again. Whew. What a ride.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

aboaf

 

Bella's life changed all because of a fire and some hot firemen!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18487 Read Count: 13054
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2013 Updated: 15 Oct 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Sigh, three hot guys interested...you know it's fiction!

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Date: 31 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Happy Birthday!

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

lol.

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
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Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: The Untainted

Oh, Lord. Poor Bella.

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Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: Freed.

Thanks for the awesome update! I am really looking forward to more. We want to know what has happened to Bella, what's happened to Edward's wife and what is Edward going to do about both of them now that he is out.

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Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ah, Elizabeth. What a peach!

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He is one cool SOB. Can't wait until he meets Bella again.

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Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What a family!

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Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I feel like I have missed something. He goes to the apartment every night? Need more.

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Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

6'7" Edward is a freaking hulk! Not to worry though: he just wants to prove to Bella that she does want to live.

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Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am glad I went to read the other reviews before I wrote one because I am glad to know that I am not the only one baffled by this chapter. Your time jump may make sense in the long run, but right now it sounds like babble. Waiting for more...

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Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thanks for the new chapter. Good one! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285535
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
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Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

Single guy to almost-husband and father of THREE within in weeks. Wow! I love it when a plan comes together.

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Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 ~ definitely time for a beer

Still loving this sweet couple and their story.

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Date: 04 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Seriously? No tissue warning? Because I cried while reading it and now I am crying again writing this. Sooo sweet!

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Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 ~ hush puppies and key lime pie

Thank you for the update. Best wishes and prayers for your family.

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Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

I am enjoying a nice Victoria.

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Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You brought tears to my eyes again. Loving this sweet family.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~ surprise breakfast

Too stinking cute! I didn't have tissues handy and had to blot my tears on the hem of my dress!

Author's Response:

best review of the day!  I am glad you enjoyed it.  i loved writing it.  there is some fun ahead for our little family.

thank you so much for your note and for supporting my story.

cheers,

LB

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 fresh homemade pasta

I had insomnia around 3:30am and read this story until 6:30. Then I slept for a few hours and finished the rest. It's very cute and sweet.



Author's Response:

ooh, i have nights like that sometimes.  I am glad you found my little story to read.  

i hope you continue to enjoy it. 

cheers, 

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - sour and bitter

They are all too cute, Tyler included. Hmmm, makes me wonder when Alice will meet her man.

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Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 homemade cookies and a hug

So cute!

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: cherry surprise

Yes, Edward...go really slowly with Bella.

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Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: pour ma douce

*sigh* How sweet Edward is. No pun intended. And I am thrilled that I remembered enough of my college French to read the line without the translation.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 fresh warm and buttery

Great first chapter!

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - interesting and complex flavours

Ohh, I can't wait to see what he has to say to Tanya!

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Petit Fours

This chapter made me hungry!

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Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 a baker's dozen

Edward should have just told Jacob to go ahead and plan the wedding! I love Elizabeth and Seth! Too cute. My grandson is actually just in the third grade and has had his own Lil Bit since Kindergarten. He says, "she's a keeper".



Author's Response:

Aren't Elizabeth and Seth adorable... :)  I love your story about your grandson... my daughter at this age had her own little Seth too.   they are still very close friends.

thanks for reading.

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Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Liked it. How could Edward get mad about the background check? It only makes sense for the ultra wealthy. Maybe if he had done a better one on Tanya, he wouldn't have gotten mixed up with her.

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Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish

We know it will work out. Nothing to panic about. When's the wedding?

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Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

Yes, I want Jasper to be a good guy who just wants to be near his family!!!

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Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 ~ brioche to die for

Tears in my eyes reading this sweet chapter. I love fiction!

Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day!

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Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - small bite of cherry pie

I thought the chapter was great. The whole scene was perfect for Thanksgiving week. I cannot wait for the wedding.

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Bella is right: men are strange. Happy New Year!

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Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

I love that Edward was so nervouse in the doctor's office. That was cute. Kate? Let's get her chapter over with and forget her.

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ but he was still hungry

No, I'm not okay: I am crying my eyes out and getting a sinus headache! That was beautiful. Simply sweet and beautiful. I think Bob and Carol need to move closer to Edward and Bella.

I just cannot help myself so, where's Ted? Bob and Carol and Ted and Alice. Sorry, just couldn't resist.

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Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies

Thanks for the great chapter about this sweet family.

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Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 ~ first a funeral ...

Well, there had to be something for Jacob to talk to them about!

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Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - chicken soup & toasted cheese sandwiches

Very sweet!!

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Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 ~ just like his old man

I saw that double wedding coming! I like it! What a happy story!

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Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 ~ yummy cakes and sand-wishes

I love these characters and their story. Thanks for writing such an up beat, happy story.

 

 

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Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 ~ dream a little dream

One of Cass Elliot's best songs. Her voice was amazing. I had to sing the lyrics, not read them. I love 1 Corinthians as well. It was read at my wedding and I have read it at two other weddings. Loved the wedding. I love this story and the characters. However, I just hate calling Anthony, "Ant". Sorry.

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Date: 25 May 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 a bun in the oven

Oops! Bella better not have been drinking "...a rich Bordeaux..." She's pregnant!!! But sweet chapter otherwise!

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Date: 17 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 ~ bag-et wif chockit haze nuts

I always enjoy reading abou this sweet family.

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Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

I loved the chapter! The tasteful Elvis themed wedding was perfect!

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Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 peanut butter sandwich and a large glass of milk

Oh,my! Anthony can just break your heart. That was sweet.

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Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 brave brave beautiful girl

I am incredibly sad for your Bella. That is just too much for one so young.

Summary:

Edward arrives a week late to Whitlock University to find his new roommate is not what he expected. At all. ALL Human. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7619 Read Count: 3457
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2013 Updated: 08 Oct 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yes, Ewdard, you do love her. Thanks for the great chapter.