Reviews by romance4me2
Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 92177
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Thanks for the update. Hope you feel better!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Good to have you back. Loved the end of the chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Good chapter. Maybe a few rays of sunshine for this tortured couple.

Summary:

"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6609 Read Count: 1145
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2013 Updated: 25 May 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 25 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the out take. Just a little confused about Isa's physical appearance. here you say she was a skinny teenager with anorexic tendencies and even now has to be reminded to eat and not just drink coffee. However, in the very first chapter, she is described as "not skinny", maybe even considered "full figured" and definitely "soft and voluptuous". That's the way I have been imagining her and loving the way Edward worships her body. Now, I am confused.



Author's Response:

I never said she was skinny, I said that things were hard for in high school because she wasn't skinny like the rest of her classmates. Yes, she had an eating disorder when she was younger, which I've mentioned a time or two, but her parents sussed it out before it went too far. As for not always eating properly even now, well, we've all been there. I spend a lot of time at home, yet I'm known to skip meals. That doesn't make my weight change all that much. Isa has always been full-figured, her body type is hourglass, which means that she's always going to be soft and round unless she diets drastically. I hope I cleared that up for you

Summary: Past Featured Story

I couldn't believe I was doing this. But I had stayed quiet for too long. There was no one in the world for me except for him. It's time to stop a wedding. AH/Edward&Bella


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59051 Read Count: 37693
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 28 Oct 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted

Killing me...you are killing me.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! Please don't die :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue: Never Grow Up

Cute ending! Never let him forget it, girl!Thanks for the great read.

Looking forward to the next story.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Last Kiss

I can't believe Bella would go out and get wasted in a strange town in a stanger's car put herself in the position to be taken home by another stanger. Stranger danger, Bella. Thank goodness it's fiction because she was TSTL in that chpater. Same with Edward inviting a perfect stanger to move in with him.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). Thank goodness it is fiction, because those thoughts never even crossed my mind. Luckily all these strangers are great people haha

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two: Mine

I could feel their happiness! Can't wait for the epilogue. What a story they have to tell their grandchildren.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten: If This Was A Movie

Pick upi the phone and talk to each other for goodness sake.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). If only I had fixed it that easily haha

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: The Way I Loved You

Well, we knew it was coming, but that doesn't mean we have to like Edward and Tanya. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). You definitely don't have to like it but definitely hope you can hang in there til the end :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: Cold As You

Heavy chapter.



Author's Response:

I know, but thank you for reviewing :)

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Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile

Wow, that was intense. Poor Edward must feel devastated to feel unwanted by his family. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, I do agree with you, it was a very tough day for him

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World

Aww, jeez. He's so in love and Tanya seems nice. How in the heck are you going to make this story work??? More, soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). Don't worry, you'll see

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent

OK, Alice is right: Edward is an asshole. he didn't even ask what happened to Bella or how seriously she was hurt! He should know that it must be serious if his family flew all the way to Arizona to be with her. As far as marrying Tanya, WTH? He left Bella because she tried to tell him what to do but he's going to marry Tayna so she can tell him what to do. Huh?



Author's Response:

He most definitely makes no sense right now. Lets hope he gets his head on straight. Thanks for your review :)

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Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable

I am not understanding Edward right now. Anyway, don't stress about a posting schedule. As long as you don't leave me hanging, it's all good.



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding and for your review :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now

Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen: Mean

Sweet! More, more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: I'm Only Me When I'm With You

Happy, happy chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :)

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

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Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130015
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Thanks for the updates. I can't wait to see how Edward handles this physically and professionally.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Aww, that was sweet.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I voted boyfriend! Yes.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

My first guess was Charlie, but I would not have been shocked if it had been Emmett or Bella.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Boyfriend...I vote for boyfriend!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Good chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 111: Chapter 111

That was hot!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

Argh....more!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Can't wait to see her reaction to the rats.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 181: Chapter 181

Awwww.

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 154

WOO HOO!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Cute chapters.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Very hot build up to the kiss! You aced it. Worth the wait.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Excellent first kiss! You nailed it. I am singing Mary Chapin Carpenter's Passionate Kisses.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I seriously cannot imagine a father and daughter having this conversation! lol Ewww.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Edward: saved by the police! He is really progressing with being touched!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Very cute!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

OK, that was hot. I loved it.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Oh, Lord. How will he answer that one?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Hmm...I will have to side with Edward in this fight. Bella knew he was talking to Emmett and Charlie: she had to figure he was upset about business. In their 'business', most of the time ignorance is bliss.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Well, first of all, I can't believe that Charlie would own a house that didn't already have a security system. Second, Bella should understand that Edward couldn't come out of his abusive childhood without a lot of rage. Hello, killed his father! Not that the SOB didn't deserve it. Also, as far as Bella knows, He's a violent mobster. Kuddos to Edward for expressing himself verbally, acknowledging he was losing control and removing himself from the situation. His adrenaline was already pumping because he didn't know where she was. He did the best thing he could do which was to physically burn off his anger-even though he left her without protection from an outside threat. Charlie might have his ass for that.  On the other hand, having suffered from migraines, I know that Bella is irritable and not thinking clearly. And here I am discussing these people as if it's a case study and not a work of fiction! I think that's a compliment to you: you gave the characters real emotions in this chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Bella does need a female role model. It sucks to lose your mother before you have a chance to relate to her as an adult. I'm sad for her.

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Date: 14 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Excellent.

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Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

LOVE Limoncello!

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Date: 20 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Poor Bella. This mob thing has to break soon so poor Edward can be himself with Bella. He is going to go nuts with all this pressure.

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Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Very good chapter!

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Date: 28 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Crying like a baby here.

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Date: 13 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Agh! Soon?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

Liked the action in the chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

That's what I've been thinking!

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Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Finally, the L word!

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Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 130

 Edward would have had his ID in his safe, though, really. But, moving along....next chapter!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

Ahh, interesting turn bringing Carlisle and the FBI in now. Can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 138: Chapter 138

Can't wait for the action!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 139

Agh! More!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 140

More!!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

I love that subconsciously she knows that Edward is coming for her.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 142

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 143

I think Bella should probably be dead from internal injuries from all those beatings.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

She is going to have such physical scars and internal trauma. Can't wait until Edward finds her.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

So why is Aro killing his own child?

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Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Bella ought to be dead after all that.

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Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 149: Chapter 149

I really hope that nothing happens to Charlie in prison because Bella couldn't handle that. I also hope that Charlie gets to explain what he did to Bella

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

Good chapter to move the story forward.

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 153

Oh, so sad for Edward. I wish Charlie could have told her what happened. She might have taken it better.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 159

I am still hoping Aro lied. Please?

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

I was ready for Edward to pull out his gun, too!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 161: Chapter 161

So, Charlie doesn't need to know. If it is indeed true, which I am still hoping it is not.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 162: Chapter 162

Boo.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 163: Chapter 163

Thank God Charlie has some sense.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 166: Chapter 166

I KNEW it was a lie!! I knew it. Thank you.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

Edward was a great distraction!

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Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 187: Chapter 187

sweet chapter.

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Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

Thanks for ride!

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsmm

Banner by DeeBell1

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30188 Read Count: 106938
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 12 Jun 2013
Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Poor Edward. He was so hot for Bella he didn't even see his own necklace!

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww, heck. Bad luck rules. More!!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I love it! I love them. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Yes, very hot first kiss. Yum! Very cute couple. Bella needs to think about the necklace and have a lightbulb moment.

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Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Bella is too cute! Loved it!

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 46: EPILOGUE

Great story! I cried when the kids came to the game on the buses and during the proposal. Loved the story! Thanks.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

LOVED it. I would have voted for it! It was a very sweet story and I really cannot wait to read the epilogue and see how our cute couple is doing. I hate to see it end.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Hmm, he just told her she was his soul mate and she leans away instead of pouncing on him. Poor Bella.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Ahh, Edward, you didn't think it was going ot be that easy, did you?

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Way to go, Charlie! I love how you write these misunderstandings but clear them up fairly quickly.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

That's perfect! I love this story!

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Date: 10 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Go for it, Edward. Yep, I like this Emmett.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

What on earth could Bella see in the test results that experts didn't see? But, yeah!

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh wow! Didn't see that coming. Can't wait until Edward grovels.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awww. That's sweet.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Bless her heart. She just tries to give it back and her luck turns to crap again.

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Date: 12 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

WTH?

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Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I hope this guy can catch a break soon! They need each other. The medallion is meant for both of them.

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Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Some days it's just not worth getting out of bed! lol

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Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Looking forward to reading more about jinxed Bella.

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Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am loving it. Ican't wait for Edward to meet his true love. Hopefully, his good luck will then extend to her!

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Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved it! Need more!

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Date: 05 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow, Edward really doesn't seem to be questioning this sudden avalanche of bad luck.

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Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well, since she is wearing the medallion, alarms ringing when she walks into a store can only mean she has won something! However, bad luck or not, I'd be happier about winning 10K at the ballpark!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This Bella is too sweet.