Reviews by MissKingAtYourService
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OOO this looks good :) amazing start to a story xx

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

ok carlisle is starting to creep me out a little bit x

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Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm really loving your jasper xx

Seducing Revenge by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 10912
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmmmm, i am very intrigued by your story :) xx



Author's Response:

Thanks!

The Affair by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Thanks to M81170 for the great banner.

Bella is married to her favorite Cullen but what happens when his past changes her future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57358 Read Count: 17032
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

haha emmett is hilarious haha and i loved the enlarging my manhood haha xx



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad you are enjoying. I appreciate the review.

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

aww i want to be examined by carlisle hehe i love your story :) xx



Author's Response:

Thank you. I know. Don't we all! : )

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen

hehe ok im in love with your carlisle :) mm xx

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

well i definitly want more :) hav i mentioned that i love dr cullen :) xx

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bliss

it is extremely hot in here, i need a cold shower haha i love him too :) you are an amazing writer :) xx



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Damaged Man

aww thats sweet :) xx

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking

wow, i absolutly loved that chapter, it was great, i loved how you said his words were wrapped in velvet tones, it was lovely :) xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much - glad you're enjoying it so far!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Obsession

Well, I am hooked, I love your writing style.

On to the next chapter :)

xx



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear that....I got off to a slow start grammar wise-but I'm working on it. Thanks for the coffee, you will find that I love those cups...lol. Diane XXX

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Bantering with Carlisle

it was funny, i was actually rather surprised, you made lil bella all fiesty xx



Author's Response:

I'm glad you got a laugh at of it, I like Bella a little fiesty, don't you? Thanks for the coffee Miss King....Diane XX

Summary:

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 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15389
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Simple

well I love it already :) xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74031
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Exodus

Oh I love your story so much, and it is not a bummer, its such amazing writing, you should feel so proud :) xx



Author's Response:

You are too sweet.  Thank you so much for the lovely review and rating.  I am hoping to have the next chapter up later today.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three

Well another great chapter, I almost cried! lol xx



Author's Response:

It's funny cause I cry at other stories, but not my own.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Choices

wow another great chapter, it almost had me, however i didn't need the tissues xx



Author's Response:

Ahh shucks, better luck next time. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

wow I almost cried again, this story should come with a unlimited supply of tissues :] I love your writing, and hope your husband is alright, and that you are :] rest it up lady! xx



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and well wishes.  Thankfully I am finally on the mend.  The hubster is also healing nicely.  Now if I could just find the time to write all would be right with the world. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

Aww I didn't survive, you had me crying like a baby!

I was hooked to every word, Bella's Back!!! and I looove Carlisle, he is so sweet xx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  This chapter really tugged on my heart too.

Till next time

Nickeu

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

Aww I really do love your carlisle, he is just such a little cutie! And again I hate hate hate the denali's,I dont know why but ever since reading twilight, they just piss me off lol

Love your writing as always sweetie :]

xXx



Author's Response:

LOL.  Yeah, those three are easy to hate. Thanks so much for the review and rating.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

What I really think little lady is that you are truly amazing!! The way you write EVERYTHING is just so fluid and beautiful, everything just seems to flow nicely :]

And I really hope Carlisle makes a move or something, cos Bella wont! Or will she? hehe

I really do hate those sisters, now we just need to get kate to fuck off! hehe But I'm sure you have an amazing plan!

 

Love you xx



Author's Response:

There is always a plan...though I am not sure how amazing it is.  I will let you all decide as it unfolds.  Thanks for the R&R sweetie!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

Well I knew you would come through :] Never doubted you (ok, ok, So I was a little worried, I admit it hehe)

Loved this and shame on Carlisle for taking so god damn long! hehe

 

Xx



Author's Response:

Carlisle was a bit slow on expressing himself, but you have to cut the poor guy some slack.  He really was trying to do the best thing for Bella.

Thanks for the R&R!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Well I think we should defo kill Kate! I mean why the hell do we need her anyway?

You are awefully cruel for blocking poor Carlisle :/ tut tut, but I'll forgive you because I know you will have something extremely juicy in that dirty little mid of yours :D *knicker explosions* come to mind hehe

XxX



Author's Response:

LOL.  I know, I know, I'm evil.  Carlisle was refusing to speak to me all week over this and Bella is nagging at me like no tomorrow.  Thankfully the next chapter is off to my beta so they can both get off my ass.  Well, not Carlisle...he can stay there if he wants. ;)

Thanks for the R&R!

Till next time

Nickey

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26669
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Cullen and Cullen

wow, that was intense :] I am a huge carlisle lover lol so I loved it!!!! and I think I may make a banner for you cause this has inspired me :] xx

Summary:

 

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 7789
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

Well I defo need a cold shower now! haha that was intense! I loved it :] (this is the first threesome I have ever really enjoyed reading :])

You my friend are amazing! xx



Author's Response:

A picture says a thousand words.  So your banner makes my story that much better.  Thank you!!!

XOXO

Nickey

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: MissKingAtYourService Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Oh My!! I am totally still with you! I love it! onto the next chapter :]