If by some miracle Bella aka Elizabeth gets out there can we leave that idiot Renee? Pretty please??

Enjoyed this bit from Felix, it was great to see things through his eyes.

Utterly agree with his assessment of Renee...

Oh man..It's getting nuts!!

Lesson for her wonder how that will go...

This was a really good look into what Edward is thinking..

Now if only I could get him to break the virgin pact crap Aro came up with, and take her first and I'll be set.

I'm glad he's so enthralled with her. This makes even more exciting for me to read...

Catch u girlies on the next chap!!

"We shall adjourn to the bath" Ewwww!!

Esme needs reflection?! Oh please! He needs a fuckin' mental institution...Sick Bastard..Pervert..

The greatest part of this chapter was Carlisle and Esme in a relaxed form. They made so comfortable, I hope this mannerism extends to Edward also.

That is if he's already an escaped patient..I like thinking that..

Let's how far down the rabbit hole we'll go..

Thanks for chap!

Holy Shit! Is that Rebecca, Renee?

And cast aside her hand does that mean chop it off ?!

Lustiful? Wicked? Evil-doer? why won't he stop talking about himself so much? We all know how much he loves him.

Great crazy ass chapter..Loved it!

Damn..what happened to Carlisle was horrific indeed..

My God! to watch the bastards walk..that would drive anyone over the edge.

I have to admit that I'm still suspicion of how that happened to his family. I was thinking he was targeted and planned for somehow. It just seemed off..Especially the ways the killings were done..hmmm..

And in comes Devil Aro to mislead and deceive in Carlisle's moments of stress and confusion...how perfect for the bastard..

Now my questions, Where is Elizabeth(Bella)? What has been done to her because of that asshole Phil the devil's spawn? Why is Edward withdrawn and jumpy? What happened on his trip? Why exactly are they being targeted?

So much to learn....

Loved it! Loved hearing from Carlisle..

Fantastic chapter! I'll definitely be seeking a therapist first thing Monday..I help with this, man..!

I agree with Elizabeth/Bella though, it is unfair and downright fucked up that Jasper wasn't the one to take Alice's virtue, it should have be her gift to give to him..

But shoulda, coulda, woulda doesn't fly in this demented world you girlies have created, does it?! And oh shit! Liz/Bella is having an epiphany, she better do her best to keep it hidden for now...

I get what that demon just did to Alice but what did he mean she's now ready for his seed? Not what I'm thinking, right?!!

Damn you're good! Da Bomb!!

Thanks for the update on the originals, If and whenever I can get my hands on the original to TTS then I know I'll be as hooked as I was reading it here...

Have a good one...

Great chapter!

I wonder what will be delivered to Charlie?...

I'm glad Bella had that impact on him..

Jesus!...I'm edge for what happens to her next..

I am on board for this crazy ride til it ends..

Where is Edward though and became f his day out?...hmmm..

Great job..

Holy Shit! Holy Shit! Holy Shit!

*bites nails*

Omg! What happens next?!!!...

Ugh! riveting!..at least Edward got to say that to him...

What the hell is with Felix?! Where does he stand?...

Can't wait to know whst happens next..!

Good luck with Publishing House I fully expect it to be great!..:D

Oh man..My heart is breaking for them and at the same time I am glad their together in this even if it's hell..

I am nervously wondering now who is standing there??

We shall see anyways..

Keep up the good work, you girlies are fantastic!

Have a prosperous New Year...

Very intriguing..

I really feel for your Edward.. he seems so lost and makes you just wanna bring some light to his dark world. While reading chap 1 I was surprised when I got to it his reason for breaking into the pawn shop.

Chief Swan is a life saver right now..

I'm glad Bells caught him in the bathroom...

I'm glad he's open up a little. one step at a time seems to be the right approach with Edward.

Yay! Eddie got kissed...

Damn that was close..I felt like holding my breath right through it...

Awwww...I loved this so much..

Thanks a  million for it!!!

Really missed TodayWard...

Incredible chap..

That little fucker James! Look what he caused, now the school has to close.. So sad and angry for that fact!..

She said she loved him, finally she said it out loud. I'm for 'em...

So the cabin is safe for now right?!..

Well Jake's here, let's see how it goes down....

Wow! an undercover operation..this has so deep. just how far down the rabbit hole does it go?

I'm glad Bella could get out some stuff to Jake.

I wonder how that call went between Carlisle and Aro?

Really good chap!

Gripping chapter..So sorry that asshole got a hold of them again but I hope what is planned for this fucker will ease the anger and sadness I feel for the fact that he has won this round. Can't wait to the others' reaction to the girls' disappearance from under their noses and Bella's reaction at this capture.

Mad Props to you gals for this....

Damn... is this a blessing in disguise?..God I hope so..

Hang in there Edward...

This was fantastic! Finally!...that bastard James..I can't express how happy I am about his recapture. Poor Carlisle though, I am so sorry about the school.

It was really uplifting to see Bella not fear him and even taking action against him.

Relieved that Edward and the gang found them also..

What will happen with Aro?

I'll just wait and see..

You're goddesses!!

An amamzing ans sensational journey! One I thoroughly enjoyed... Thanks so much to you girlies for this work of art......

It has maybe eliminated some for me including, this is just a guess..Edward and Carlisle, Emmett and Rosalie, Henderson, Lauren and Bella. The jury is still out the others..

One thing I'd love now is maybe POV from either Edward, Jasper or Carlisle. This could get me in depth with Tanya and the Cullen men...

Great chap..

Oh...That was amazing.. Finally, I was worried that maybe if they waited Carlisle's plan would have ruined the perfection of this chapter so I'm ecstatic basically that Edward got there first.

It was perfect and such them just fine..

It was a beautiful moment..

Loved it..Glad I'm not moving again..

Now as for Edward, I think she should still be a bit cautious with him and Carlisle's Edward because I still think he's in there somewhere and just by pushing the wrong buttons he could possibly reimerge. And this I definitely do not want. But I think Carlisle's brainwashing is embedded in him the most. Be careful especially with upcoming guests. That bastard Carlisle! Will we ever be rid of him?

Is wrong of me to be hopeful that she may be knocked up? Not that I care because I deeply hope she is.

Hey, just trying to buy her some time away from Big Bad Wolf's path.

But something worries me a bit, due to the tramuatic so-called "training" can she have babies?

I really hope so. I would hate to they have stolen that from her..

This worry extends to Alice also..

Catch u on the next one...

Heart pounding action.. I swear I was ready to want him castrated if he put that hell again.

You're remarkable with the twist and turns.

Now are they gonna do this? and can't wait to learn about Esme's garden...

Wow...wow..It brought tears to my eyes for what Esme had to endured by the hands of that bastard. But what a beautiful secret that is her garden...

This chapter was the climax of what I've been waiting for. I can't explain, I'm happy, I'm sad, I'm shocked, I'm amazed, I'm just..ugh! The bastard is dead, I had to read and re-read those lines just to believe it. So simple. What did she mean though in the ending?..

I guess I just hoped for them to be together, but then again there is another and epi to see.

Can't wait to see how it all ends.

So thankfully though that they are free.

You were masterfully at this and had me hooked!

Thanks for that!

Absolutely fantastic! There couldn't been a better ending for them all..

Thank you again for this magnificent journey...

Looking forward to more from you....

Finally..Good to see him and apparently we know what's be keeping him occupied.

Not that I don't get the overprotective parent rant Charlie is on but seriously dude 's a pain in the ass for me right now. Totally cockblock some potential growth between these two that could have been going on. I'm fuckin' pissed off at him.

First he hardly acknowledge her and sends her to be babysits and acts like it's the best thing in the fuckin' world for her to date Jake. What is she five?! A five yrs. old is no way capable of the decisions she made. Which could have been a hell of a lot worse than Edward.

I hope it'll die down and I wnat him to go after her.

 As for Jake, don't really got anything against the kid(key word"kid") but I see him as a cockblock right now and in the immediate future.

Wonder what her reaction would be if she heard from Edward?..nonchalant with a bit of frazzle or blow him off..

He's gonna have to get rid of his fiancial backing because he definitely doesn' t want to give Charlie that kind of ammunition against him.

I'm glad he felt remorseful about the lack of contact between him and her.

May I dear say our rude boy is feeling?..

 Looking forward to more..

Gripping...It was good to from Alice. Trying to get out of there showed a bit of fight in her and I was happy to see it.

The torement and torture she had to sustain has destroyed her but not beyond repair, that I'm glad for.

I can't tell you how I love this story, the glimpse at what they were like before Bella"s addition to the bunch.

I can't say I love Jas right now because I see him as Carlisle's Jasper maybe just a bit gentler, but then again I don't know what you have planned for this but I'm with ya.

I definitely like him in TPW, as he and Alice are my breath of fresh air from the madness.

I hope the next chapter will be soon. I can't wait to read their progession...

This is such an incredible read! I just re-read it and is even more fascinated this time around... Terrific job!

I pray you could find the time and patience to enter back the TPW  universe and continue or better yet complete this...

I love Alice and Jasper's part of this so very much!

In this state of all the people that she'd rather see it had to be him.

Really good start.. from the little I've gathered her daily life and thoughts seem so stressed.

Looking forward to see what occurs next...

Read and loved..

Can't wait to see how it'll turn out for 'em,

I need to refresh my memory on this out.

So good.. I laughed like crazy..I just couldn't look away..

Thanks so much for writing this. It was superb!

My God, Loved this the first time around on FF and still lovin' it now!!!

So glad to hear that! Let us know how it goes, will look out for it..

Awesome chap..I gotta say I can't help but to re-reading this as I followed it on FF but damn if it's not twice the fun to do this again.

I gotta say this is a Bella that never seems to annoy me and I've got you girlies to thank for that..

Awww...damn this chapter was just amazing..

I didn't find that offensive at all..Just new parents trying to come up with best plan possible and airing out all the options..

As for Rose, this great explained her attitude but still some thoughts toward Bella were harsh and undeserving..

It still that insult she threw at Bella the first time at the party...

A fantastic chapter with Charli...

And you're so right in ur AN....

A very good start...Can't wait for more..

This was a great preview of a possibly fantastic story..

Really good!

Thanks for peek and sorry to hear about BTP's wait..love it so much and it'll  have a positive outcome..

*shakes head* Oh Lord, poor girl..

She's all the way in now..

I missed this so much!!!!

I am intrigued a lot by Charlotte, she seems to know a little something about McCarty Security. I think that was incredibly rude to let Bella feel guilty about perfectly normal weight gain.

What? is she now ruining his fantasy body that he has in mind?

Thnx for this! I am ecstatic to see it and I hope one day to see something more from BTP..

Getting B pregnant to draw her in. It was a great plan to him and can you think of anything that will get her to say yes faster? Fucking prick!

I want Jasper pronto! I'm hoping that Charlotte could be connected to B's freedom.

I don't know, I'm just deseparate to get her out and sometimes want you truly need in right under your nose or in a place where you least expect it.

Loved this!

~Kim