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Well, um, HI!
My RL name is Amy, but my penname is FLQ (Fates-Love-Queen). I actually had no idea what to make my name as, so I put a bunch of words in a hat and pulled them out!
Um, I curse like a sailor (I have the dirtiest mouth and mind, lol) I am slightly eccentric and writing is my emotional and creative outlet.
I write fanfiction and original fiction.
I am addicted to all things Twilight, especially the hunk of man meat, also known as Mr Rob Pattinson : )
That man's sexy singing voice turns me to a pile of goo. Seriously, I didn't know it was possible to 'combust' just from a man's voice... Apparently, I am wrong ; P
Love talking to people and making new friends! <3
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self
Ok, is it really bad that when she said that she was convinced that she was 'the spawn of satan' that I actually full on laughed out loud...?
I didn't mean it, it just slipped out... lol.
I'm getting the impression that it's getting just as hard for Felix to watch this as it is for Bella going through it?
This is shocking, and I can't believe what they are doing to her!
Don't forget fuckhot Charlie Bella! <3
Brilliant chapter as always hunnies! Can't wait for the next one! <3
Date: 05 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow
Um, wow... I'm totally speechless...
Renee broke a lot quicker than Bella did. But, his comment about wanting Bella as his daughter? Totally confused.
God, I HATE Phil; with all of the fire in hell I want him to burn... What a disgusting excuse for a man, makes me sick!
It's a toss up who I hate more... Phil or James from TTSS! : (
Can't wait for next chapter! <3
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name
NO! Bella, no! Your name is BELLA!
God, i'm getting so fustrated! lol.
Holy shit, she has been there five fucking WEEKS?!
Although Felix has been a downright arsehole, at least he had the decency to give a little, seeing that she wasn't going to make it. Even if he did give her the wrong name, he finally helped her a little.
My eyes were watering at that small, and I mean very small act of kindness.
I know this story is only going to get worse, but fuck me if I can't stop reading! lol.
Brilliant chapter as always lovelies! <3
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation
I KNEW he was trying to be kind to her... Although he is still a piece of shit for being paid to mentally 'break' people, he at least has compassion for Bella.
I REFUSE to call Bella - Elizabeth, do you hear me ladies?! Refuse! lol.
Can't wait for the next chapter! <3
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth
Wow, I think this is the most mad I have ever been! lol. I do not consider myself an extreme feminist, but to hear those words being fed to BELLA via the headphones?
"The woman is never in control, and must submit to the man in every way."
That makes me soooo mad, as there are men out there that feel this way.
I'm starting to lose hope; has Bella honestly been completely brainwashed...?
God, I hope we hear from Charlie soon... *sobs*
Difficult but brilliant chapter ladies, I honestly do love this story. Can't wait for the next update : )
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
What a sick mother f*cker!
Argh! He makes my blood boil! Dirty perv... lol.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own
"You are beneath them. They are your superiors." I hate Aro so much for what he is teaching these women! It's disgusting!
Yet I am still so seduced by this story! : )
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace
Wow, is it wrong that i'm slightly giddy? : )
And, YAY for Bella having a 'normal' memory!
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
Oh my god... no, no, NO!
How can he hurt Edward for embracing the mate he has chosen...?
I'm feeling a very sick and twisted love story coming here between Edward, Bella and Aro. We already know that Aro has 'punished' himself for having sexual feelings for Bella, and I fear that will only get worse once he sleeps with her... *shudder*
Oh god Edward, please don't let that happen... : (
Amazing chapter, as always ladies. Can't wait for the next one! <3
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment
*wince* I'll admit, this was hard to read... I know that Edward knows no other way, but this is ridiculous, how much Aro has brainwashed these people! : (
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others
Ugh, he is such a fucking dirty perv! Checking out her boobs! God, he gives me chills, and not of the good kind... : (
I LOVE Carlisle and Esme in this story, especially Esme.
And the mice with the cookie? Just the type of kindness she needed.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession
That's because he is a very dirty, old man!
Shit, if she's struggling with the bath, imagine the wedding night... *violent shudder*
All I can say, is thank-fucking-god for Esme. She is an angel!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser
Oh...My...God...
I am absolutely speechless! Aro is the most... Disgusting man on the planet. Esme was what, 15? And he started touching her like that?
He neeeds to be fucking arrested! He's molesting these girls!
I've said it once and i'll say it again, I love Esme so much! She is a light in the dark of this story.
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
What...The...Fuck...
Um, that's all I can really say on that one - i'm utterly speechless...
Did I read that right? Is he going to cut off her hand?!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation
No, no, NO! Felix, you are supposed to be the good guy that helped Bella!
God, I hope he grows a pair and actually tells Charlie where she is...
As you know, Charlie is one of my fav characters, and to see him in such pain... *sob*
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
What the fuck... The smashed her hand? Oh wow, I feel sick...
So, I'm guessing that they killed Tanya? *shudders*
I hope to god that that wasn't Aro who was watching them... I couldn't bear it if something happened to Alice... *sob*
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple
Oh...My...fucking...god...
I literally cringed when he took Alice's virginity like that. BUT, it was better than what I thought was going to happen... *shudder*
And Aro lingering on Bella during baths? I felt so sick to my stomach, he needs to be arrested! *violent shudder*
You two ladies are pure evil... And, I love you both for it! So, does that make me evil also? *wink* xoxox
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
"One way or another, Elizabeth will lay beneath me as I push into her frail body."
I may have just vomitted in my mouth a little... Haha. Seriously though, what a sick fucker! I hope Bella knees him in the balls and runs like the wind out of there. Either that, or Charlie comes in guns blazing before the ceremony! : (
Author's Response:
We will all hold hands and sign songs... We will make it through it.. Thanks so much for you review.. I love all the passionate responses we get with each chapter.. It makes me smile.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514132
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23
Wow, I can't believe Carlisle is closing the school! : (
Aww, she finally said those three magic words! : )
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23
Led astray? Wow, what the fuck is going on? Did James lie to both Aro and Carlisle? Maybe telling Aro that Carlisle was his master and vice versa?
That pic is amazing by the way, as was this chapter, as always : )
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23
I'm sorry, but I HAVE to do this...
"THIS IS MADNESS!"
"Madness? THIS IS SPARTA!!!"
HAHA, omg, i'm sorry but I couldn't help myself... *giggles*
Holy shit! Laurant is the mastermid behind all this? No fucking way! I never saw that one coming! And he did the very same thing to Leah...? I wonder who her master was... James?
Loves it as always ladies <3
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24
Oh no, no, no, NO!
Who the fuck is that?!
Laurant... James. James... Laurant?
*whimpers*
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
"I watched in ecstasy as she used the restroom and then moved back to wash her hands" dirty fucker!
Ok, my mouth is literally hanging agape here! He killed Laurant...?
Please, please let Edward find her before James can hurt her? : (
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24
No WAY! I had no idea that Heidi was involved!
Oh, Edward... *sigh*
Loved this chapter, as always! : )
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24
Haha, James is such an idiot! *grin*
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
Haha, suck it James, you sadistic mother fucker! Ugh, I HATE him!
Good ridance! : )
Please, can we let Em and Rose play with him, one last humiliation for shits and giggles...? *wink*
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella
Haha! OMG, I hope Aro gives him HELL! : )