Poor Sookie she almost ahd a normal chapter but then again normal isn't very interesting. Anton says he's not a hero but he really is setting himself up as her saviour. Okay now this isn't a critizism by any means but I wish we knew what was going on in Eric & Alcide's head, Anton is pretty forth coming with his fucked up ness. I read this story earlier but I had to get back to work (damn you life getting in the way-*she shakes her fist in anger*). As always looking forward to the next chapter.

XoXo

I've read many of your stories (on fanfiction.com) and even though this one has only just begun I have to say it maybe my favorite. I'm soory to read you chose to leave fanfiction but I understand your reasons, it's very unfortunate. I have read so many stories and I have gone back to re-read them and they are gone because they were too mature, well duh, that's why there is a rating system. It's a bit maddening! If their intention is to keep kids away from the nasty bits they have to realize that if these kids have a computer they mostlikely have access to on like porn (not that I am comaparing the two but they do). So keep up the good work. And may the muse Gods be kind to you and you in return are kind to us. XoXo

Did you remove the story or did they? Just curious. This is one of the most intreging stories I've read and is my favorite of yours & I'm pretty sure I've read them all. Keep up the good & dilligent work. XoXo

I know you've mentioned their beauty before but does seem worse when monster are beautiful. I banked 2 more chapters but I didn't not (I know a double negitive) want to leave a review. 

This was such a sad chapter even more than when she's being physically or sexually abused because now shes becoming accustom to them and resigned to her fate. I am very interested in this mentor. Well read ya later. XoXo

Before I reached the end of the Ch. I already had Googled the lyics and found the song. And I must  confession I have The Distant Blue playlist on my iPhone (okay I know it makes me a weird fanboy err girl but i'm fine with that). As for reviewers maybe some people are afraid to comment I know it took me awhile to post comments when I first started reading fanfic I always felt like other reviewers would be critizing my review but you know what I say fuck'em.

I wonder if Alcides's addmition will be the death of her. Is it naive of me to look forward to Sookie going to Disney? 1) Who knows if she'll really get to go. 2) if she goes will it be worse to have a few moments of normalcy in the sun. I'm glad she has found someone she is found of even if it is Anton the rapist cousin/drug addict/spoiled rich kid. See you next chapter (you know I have no will power when it comes this story & after your PM how could I stay away? "Just when I think I'm out they pull me back in").

Anton signing w/ Sookie nice touch another way to make her feel more connected to him but I have a feeling he won't last long if he keeps up his adoration. Anton seeking out someone to kill is eerie after his softness w/ Sookie. Maybe he's more like Alcide than I thought. 

I don't know if she has Stocholm Syndrom she doesn't agree w/ them she is just surviving and becoming accustom to there presents it natural to want to find comfort even if it's from monsters. I thought quietness of this chapter was kind of refreshing but it also shed more light on Sookie's feeling for her tormentors. 

Hell woman how many chapters did you load?! You spoil us. I am never going to finish reading my book. I hope you're proud of yourself. I love Sookie is asking more question 1) because I like her bold 2) because I so want to know more about her captors. 

I hate that you feel like you have to defend yourself your work is fiction it maybe inspired by people you've known but at the end of the day it's fiction. People are reading a story about 2 no 3 no 4 rapists and they're fine with that but a black guy selling crack is crossing the line? I love that people have opinions but I just find it funny what bothers them ex: hearing swear words or god forbid a woman's breast is bad but seeing people commit violence is okay. Alright it time for me to get off my soap box and read a new chapter. 

How sad is it when being tided to a bed for days is a good week. Thank you, thank you, thank you, you're the best, more back story (I'm a whore for that). We can never condone what Alcide or Eric have done but the more information we get about the makes you realize they didn't start out evil. When Charles Dickens was 12 he was sent to a Blacking Factory where he spent 12-hrs a day working hard w/ other innocent children. We all have a blacking factory (of some sort) in our past, when we surrender our childish hearts. The outcome can never be known, some end up like Dickens, some like Jeffrey Dahmer.

Oh God I feel nauseous. I know Eric & Alcide are sick and dangerous but there is a sense of safty w/ them, I know that sounds fucked up because they have done unspeakalbe things to Sookie but Miguel has no goodness and no limits.

I think I can only handle Miguel in small doses so a short chapter is okay w/ me. Please please let her week be over quickly she deserves a stay of exicution. As always you are crazy/beautiful. XoXo

Saddness, that's what I feel. I so thought Sookie was going to be "safe" w/ Anton I'm not so delusional that I thought they would make love but I did not expect for him to want no need to hurt her. When I  read gun shots I became so hopefully Stellan had somehow shot Miguel in his psychotic head. Am I demented that I'm looking forward to her going "home"?

Maybe no the most exciting but for Gods sake we needed the fucking rest, lol. You know how much I love this story you are so giving maybe even too much. Now go get some rest chances are you've been up all night. Sweet dreams, sticky dreams. XoXo

WWWWHHHHHYYYYYY! I feel like Superman when Lois lane dies I want to fly around the earth to make her live again. This is truly the most involved I've ever been w/ a story. Thank you for sharing your darkness, thank you for always making me & many other reviewers feel so special. You should feel nothing except PRIDE when it comes to this journey you took w/ all of us. Personally I don't mind ending not being all tied up pretty in a bow. Life has loose ends plus we can always imagine what we want like Miguel be ripped apart my one of his slaves. The one good thing I can say about this story ending is you can go back to your other stories and them take a breather and out do yourself I know you can you have greatness in you. Please keep writing the world is far more interesting w/ stories like yours in it. 

Sweet Baby Jesus that chapter ended with a BANG! Anborn trying to date Sookie, Eric showing up, the mist, what can I say except you really know how to pack a punch! My favorite line: "Whatever Anborn, it's par for the course when you're a sex slave", I can't decide if she said it in a self-depricating way or to make him feel better but not too better. Again the mist, how he is violating he is litterly inside her completly, where did that come from?!

I told you STOP doubting yourself, this was a good chapter! Hearing the hurt (alright really reading) in Eric's voice when he retorts to Sookie about her not caring about his feelings was painful. Gabriel being comforting well as comforting as he can be when your the scary Angel of Death (LOL). Keep up Anborn and his honesty its really working and knowing more about his past and his true feeling is key. I would have reviewed earlier but I was chatting w/ this very lovely girl in a coffee shop. XoXo

Sookie's taking this all in stride. I like them all just talking learning more about their  empire lore. 

“We hurt them before they can want us", that is all sorts of scary creepy as well as insiteful. I was thinking maybe they don't want to give her their blood because they don't want her fall in love with them? Thanks for the new chapter & I hope your Thankgiving was good! 

Eric is in a "relationship" with Thomas well isn't that unexpected now in my humble opion I think Jason is jealous of Thomas not because of the sex but the perceived intamicay Eric may share with Thomas , am I right, am I right? Oh never mind don't tell me I'll like surprises. I like like your sex scenes, they are very easy to visaulize, I don't know how you write them at all, I can imagine a sex scene all day every day but to puy it on paper (so to speak) is a talent I don't not posses. The last bit with Sookie hear the ocean speaking to her so eerie spot on, it gave me goose flesh. Better go now I have three more chapters to read.

So there just weren't enough sick fucks for ya, LOL. Imagining Sookie in the kitchen read and eating while listening to her captors fucking was both sad and funny (but I am a bit mental).

Oh, and I don't find Sookie bitchy, I think she coping in this new world the best she can, I'd be a massive cunt rag if I was kidnapped and rapped constantly. And never, ever, ever apologise for "over" updating there is no such thing! And agin with the cliffy, you're lucky I love you...

I am one sick bitch, on the one hand I feel terribly bad for Sookie and her situation but on the other hand I kind of laughed at her second suicide attempt how did she not know she was going to be discovered. And a "thank you" from Jason not expected at all. The dream (or vision) of Sookie's mother nice addition. When I was reading the begining I could so clearly see these events happening I felt like I was watching a movie, Bravo.

This is the most heartbreaking chapter so far even more than Sookie's rapes & beatings (I know I'm fucked in the head). Everyone here just wants to love and be loved but no seems to be loved by who they love. I can see how Sookie is gaining sympathy for Colm, Jason & Eric, Anborn not so much but the story's not over yet.

Author's Response:

I found this chapter incredbialy sad too. Much sadder than the rape chapters, it may sound strange but I don't enjoy writing about her being raped, I know people probably think I do, it's just that I'm incapable of writing regular love scenes for the most part due to my abuse as a child. This review is one of your best yet, it's so percective. I love that you got right to the heart of what this story is really about, people sometimes think that my stories are empty and filled with nothing but rape and abuse but my real readers know better, like you. I haven't figured out Anborn yet and I don't know if I even like him yet. Love this review, you rock.

Congratulations this is the first time I felt anything besides loathing toward Anborn. My demented heart was breaking for Jason and I'm not even that fond if him I'm more of a Team Eric person. I think if Eric leaves Jason for Thomas Jason will die of a broken heart. And again NEVER apologize for rapid updates!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I really didn't like Anborn either at first, in fact I couldn't stand him. I feel bad for Jason too. I don't know who I prefer. I'm sick to death of writing Erics so probably Jason. You're probably right about that, thanks again for all your reviews.

Seriously you are campaigning hard for me to fall for Anborn hearing he tragic childhood and then being found by Jason I would not object to more back story on that (I know I'm greedy-you made me that way).

Author's Response:

Yay! I knew I could get you to like him, but first I had to make myself care about him, that is always the turning point for me when I get invested in a charcter. You are often in my thoughts while I write this. Thanks for your support.

Stupid, stupid Sookie I know her heart was in the right place giving the note to Thomas or was it really her being devious (I don't know). I re-read the previous chapter and I can see your side about Anborn he's kinda like an angry child who pulls a girls hair but more extreme because he is more extreme. I'm leaving now I see there is another chapter waiting for you. TtFn

I wanted to cry for Eric he is the beautiful monster that wants to be loved but is incapable of being loving (at least to Sookie, no sure how he treats Thomas). I am angry for being so cold to Eric then I have to remember how insanely cruel he & Jason & Anborn have been to her. This is one of those perfectly done chapters I love. Keep up the soul wrenching work. ***** And here are your stars sorry they're not shiny. A had a huge grin on my face when I read the name of the palace. Your such my Geek Princess !

Author's Response:

Well it's offical I think I have a crush on you, lol. I actually almost teared up when I was writing this chapter. I felt pissed at her too but I liked that she didn't let a few earth shattering orgasms blow her mind to the point where she deluded herself. Thank you, I was proud of it. Thanks for the stars Moonchild. Greek Princess? Interesting, much love to you.

This I think was the most amusing and funny chapter I've ever read by you. Sookie being so bold either because she doesn't care or knowing Eric won't let Anborn hurt her. I guess some people would say Sookie is being a bitch but I don't think so she's making the best out of a bad situation and torturing a spoiled, childish vampire is fun! Again love your humour! Can't wait for the next chapter in this tale.

First my review: Shit I don't know where to start, Daddy is a creepy fuck, Jason being asked to move out, imaginig Anborn turnig into a wolf while fucking Sookie (shivers), Sookie coming even closer to falling in love w/ Eric! Awesomesauce! Secondly: Personally I don't ready your work and think it's filthy, a floor is flithy, hands are filthy, stories w/ no real passion or characters w/ gratuitous sex and gratuitous violence is filthy. You are working out your issues by putting them out for others to read. You could do a lot worse like countinue the cycle of violence you have experinced. "Our parents, they want the best stuff for us.  But right now, they go to do what's right for them. Because it's their time... but [now] it's our time". And I love when you share, wheter is just thru your story telling or your notes. Be well, be safe and be loved.

Your are beautiful. I wanted to just leave that but your words move me to type. The fabric of this story is wonderous, this may sound dumb but it makes me think of historical fiction. Reading this was also like a palet cleanser it was so refreshing that someone seemed to interested in what is best for Sookie, yes he could have saved her but hasn't because he feels there is meaning to her suffering. Personally I never once hit the impression you enjoyed Sookie being raped I think in this story it was a neccesary evil. You keep writing how you feel and we'll keep reading. And you thank your reader but the readers are only as inspired by whom they read. XoXo

I loved Colm he was different from the rest and I think he could be a good friend to Sookie but I don't think the Trio wants her to have a friend. The third person would be interesting but I love knowing what's going on in Sookie's head. 

Hello there, I know I usually post my review on FF but I felt so bad that this story only has 2 reviews! That’s just not right so I must change that post haste!

 You really have me wondering if Alcide ate pain chips as a kid or is just dumb founded that this is all happening in front of him (I’d like to believe the latter). Some might interpret Eric being secure that his skills are intact as cocky but I think it more that he’s being honest (with us), and I think his and Pam relationship has moved from being in-love to loving each other (but that’s just my thoughts).

 Loved the revel of Sookie & Eric’s back story, I’m not surprised Eric cheated he was a young horny man and they do stupid stuff now that’s not an excuse more of an explanation and he now realizes that a blow job wasn’t worth losing Sookie. It’s so surreal that they are doing this spur of the moment couple switch but they take the time to have rules, perhaps because it’s been in their minds for a while, having an ongoing joke for a while some times tells the truth (does that make any sense?).

 Ah okay Pam telling the room that “I’m not planning to breed anytime soon”, but convincing Eric to have a baby in private is so important to me it says she senses that there is something missing in the relationship and it needs fixing and a baby will do that (I have never, ever, ever understood that logic but that’s me).

 Funniest line “I’m not a cat person”, the line solo not that interesting but in context to say he prefers pussy i.e. woman too brilliant!

No, no, never, never, nah, nah, Pam & Alcide! That's why he was so hesitant screwing her; he didn't want either of them to inadvertently give anything away! And how awesome was it that Sookie & Eric both heard the comment but decided to fuck instead of deal w/ it and who can blame them? No me! Eric is going to need an internal note book to keep all this topics straight that he needs to bring up to Pam. So the check list looks something like         

                Do you or do you not want to have a baby with me now?

                What’s with the ‘miss you” comment from Alcide?

                Are you into all girls or just Sookie?

And now they both know they can’t be w/ their (in)significant others and are still in love! I’m rooting for E&S but I really, really want to know what’s up w/ Pam and not just w/ Alcide????

Eww gross “have I mentioned that you’re adorable when you’re all flustered”! And Pam w/ the nick names needs to stop it’s too creepy for words and did I mention she is totally fucked in the head because she is! Okay Sookie is hot when she’s all feisty (Oh no am I turning into Pam?).  

Pam is one cold bitch, I’m actually feeling bad for Alcide. Yeah half way through this riveting argument it dawned on me they’re all naked! And the girls being naked is one thing but naked flaccid (such a good word) men is just kinda sad, whenever Eric fisted his hand around his Viking sword you so had me.

I was wondering if Fido oh I mean Alcide being fixed was going to come back up the way Pam made it sound it wasn’t know but the fuck did she know!? And that was almost a bigger betrayal than cheating.

Sookie rebounded awful quick!

So excited to get a new chapter of this dirty little ditty! And A Thousand Years coming soon, I girl could get used to this. The trust and connection Sookie is by itself comforting but the fact that Eric talks and explains things to her makes them stronger unlike Bill I I always thought treated Sookie as a burden and or retard. And if you have to argue w/ a big scary vampire why not do it while he's balls deep inside you? Who needs punctuational when you have thrusts!?!